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I am sorry you feel that you have not been treated fairly by me but these are just some examples of information and sources that would have, in my opinion, improved your article so that it was not so devoid of content, context and references that it tended in fact to mislead, rather than inform, the
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Thank you for reviewing my article on AskNshare. Since AskNShare is a new paradigm for B2C marketing, there is no published article in any respected journal of marketing yet. However, in one of the references of my article (www.crunchbase.com/company/asknshare) there is a reference to a published
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Gerassi passed away in 2012, what was written about his life after he died would help inform your reader. There is a truly remarkable obituary/memorium by Michel Contat in Le Monde. Albeit in French, it is nevertheless infused with great insight into
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Gerassi as an activist in the New Left seemed to me to be a bit simplistic without referring to his long history, work, and association with various important groups and organizations on the left. I think most people would have found his open support of FARC leader Granda and
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Hi, i have added some references that you have mentioned, please take alook at new amendments. Also how do i change the article name from Jamie Reuben to James Reuben ? Many thanks for all your help. Prash2000.
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Actually, in my view, the article just wasn't thorough nor carefully researched. John "Tito" Gerassi is a fascinating subject and deserved quite a bit more effort than you expended on this submission.
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