1139:"It clearly held a ready appeal for Christian writers, since variants are supplied by authors as diverse as the Byzantine historian Georgios Pachymeres (d. c. 1310), the Armenian historian Grigor Aknertsāi (c. 1313), the expatriate Armenian prince Hayton of Gorighos (1307), the anonymous āTemplar of Tyreā (c. 1314), the Venetian adventurer Marco Polo (1298), the Dominican missionary Riccoldo da Montecroce (c. 1300) and St Louisā biographer Jean de Joinville (1309)."
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very extensive and focused article. I have not done a source review so AGF. I found it a challenge to follow what empires/political configurations of each city/country was at the time, but that's not German to the article which is about the siege. I have made some last nitpicks, but accepted or not,
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I would understand "assault" to be interchangeable with battle, but according to your explanation, the assault on 29/30 January is the beginning of the siege, while on 17 January was an unrelated battle. Infobox title refers to siege and includes a date range, without explicitly clarifying what this
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As you note, they are not required by the FA criteria. What the FA criteria do require are consistently formatted citations, which would not be present if those to certain books contain DOIs and those to other books do not. In any case, DOIs for books are created by adding the code of the publisher
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There's a lot of mention of what religion certain people or factions belong to, which is good for context, but it leaves me wondering about the religion of the
Mongols at this time, since one talked about "god", another had a Christian wife, etc. Perhaps it can be added somewhere whether they were
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Very hard to summarize in an article like this, because the
Mongols' concept of religion was very different from our own, and the modern world would consider them very religiously diverseāthe royal family contained shamanists, Christians, Buddhists, Muslims. Later, the religious differences would
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To be honest, I'm feeling a bit out of my depth in reviewing this article. I have a feeling that the "background" section is a bit too long, but don't have any concrete suggestions on what to cut. I also feel that some of the language used is not accessible to a wide audience. I'm giving a
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Similarly, the legacy section describes this as a blow to the
Islamic world, but it appears the Mongols didn't try to weaken the hold of the religion? Wasn't it rather just weakening of Arab dominance of it (as later rulers were still Muslims, just of non-Arab ethnicities)?
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The Siege of
Baghdad shook the world. The end of the Abbasid Caliphate, the zenith of the Mongol conquests, the foundation of a new empire in the Middle East. Legends sprang up around the siege, and it became a byword for wanton destructionābut was it?
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Ah I see why I didn't find 29 January, because there's 30 January possibility too. The infobox refers to Siege with date range, while body refers to assault. Either modify body or the infobox to make it clear they're referring to same thing. ~ š¦
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Yes, but it's always a good idea to give readers multiple options for accessing a source. DOIs are not required per FA criteria but it does not hurt to have them. You should get comments from other reviewers on this and see what they have to say.
195:"Hulegu's progress from Karakorum was extremely leisurely by Mongol standards." Suggest to change to "Hulegu's progress from Karakorum was slow by Mongol standards." Leisurely feels too imprecise. It wasn't literally leisurely was it?
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I think "delusional" is somwhat tameāal-Musta'sim has been described by sources as "pathologically avaricious", "in a state of mental imbecility", "extremely reckless", "weak, vain, incompetent and cowardly", and "utterly lumpen and
817:"As was normal practice and as was stipulated by the Mongolsā yasa, the caliph had been presented with the clear option of submitting peacefully to HĆ¼legĆ¼ and in return of receiving HĆ¼legĆ¼ās assurances of safety."
1382:"the Mongol army soon approached Baghdad, routing a sortie on 17 January 1258 by flooding their camp. They then invested Baghdad, which was left with around 30,000 troops. The assault began at the end of January.
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date range refers to. I do not have a specific solution in mind, but was and am still confused when reading it, so clarifying what is being referred to would help other readers. Perhaps I am not familiar with
1134:"This incident is likely the source of a folktale, reproduced in the writings of Christian writers such as Marco Polo" What is the significance of mentioning religion? Does it mean Western writers instead?
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I've struck though the comments that have been addressed. There is one left which I think you have missed. I would like to do a second read-through of the whole article before deciding to support.
521:"were still quite delusional": Is this per the sources? Otherwise, "delusional" seems too strong a word for Wiki since we have to be neutral. Atwood 2004 uses "unrealistic" which is quite better.
203:. There was feasting, hunting, diplomatic negotations, more banquets, etc. It took almost three years to travel from Mongolia to Persia, a journey which could have been made in a number of months.
550:"Baiju returned to the vanguard at Irbil": Our last mention of Baiju says he had rejoined Hulegu at Hamadan. Where was he in the interim between Hamadan and Irbil, was he not with the main army?
799:#8: Is p. 263 the right one for Atwood 2004? That page has details on the history of Japan and Mongolia/the Mongol Empire. Also need the quotation from May 2018, accessing it is tough.
804:"Thus in 1251 Mongke became Qaāan of the Mongol Empire and began the Toluid revolution. While the transition of the position of Qaāan from the house of Ogodei to the house of Tolui..."
1153:"Having granted the palace to Makkikha to be the Christians' church" A bit hard to understand. Why specific, and not "a church"? And doesn't "church" already imply it's "Christian"?
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285:"The assault on Baghdad's flood-weakened walls..." I think the flood-weakened walls should be mentioned in the above paragraph at "the walls were in disrepair".
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Alright with me. The sources that I can access, I will. For the ones I will need quotations for, I will ask. Planning to do the source review tomorrow. Cheers
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1180:"transported either to Mongke" Is this a place or Mƶngke Khan? Could be specified either way, and if the latter, needs an umlaut.
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Add 10.1163/9789004192119 as the DOI and 10.1163/j.ctt1w8h10n as the JSTOR ID for Baiļø aļø”rsaÄkhan 2011? The latter is open access.
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Hamadan, where they decided to attack Baghdad, and then he rode back to the
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Putting aside that this article is not about the decline of the
Islamic Golden Age, I'll just remove the calendar eras.
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No, 17 January was the date of a battle to the north of the city, not the start of the actual siege.
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813:#23: Jackson 2017 and Boyle 1968 ok. Need exact quotation for Lane 2003.
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1462:, just a courtesy check to see if there is any more to come from you.
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364:, the article should be ready for your second readthrough now.
245:"...and so he refused." Suggest changing to "...so he refused."
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Mostly ok just needs the above changes and quotations. Cheers
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Have you read this recent article by Brack, Biran and Amitai:
530:"Seljuk, Georgian, and Armenian vassals": link "Georgian" to
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856:#41: Jackson 2017 is ok, need quotation from Chambers 1979.
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This, chronologically, defines the 17 January battle as a
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Add 10.1163/9789004314726_008 as the DOI for Biran 2016?
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I'll be back soonish, had to wrap up some other things.
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Translate daruyachi as admin officers per NOFORCELINK?
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All sources are from reliable publishers and authors.
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Add 10.4324/9781315165172 as the DOI for Lane 2022?
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1220:- looks good to me, wasn't much to nitpick about.
1016:Marking my spot. In the meantime I see a bunch of
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129:I've also got an article at FAC that needs reviews
1681:The above discussion is preserved as an archive.
1125:I didn't realise it linked there, I've linked to
516:I disagree; I find the latter excessively wordy.
1525:Wiki link or explanation of Sacked is. Perhaps
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1036:Removed a couple; I think the others adhere to
209:19 November." Can a year be added to that date?
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1431:Recognised as rulerāsee modern usage e.g.
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740:from me for promotion to FA class. Cheers
41:Knowledge talk:Featured article candidates
100:This article passed a GA nomination from
668:Thanks for an excellent set of comments
201:done in a relaxed way, without hurrying
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328:Thanks for the comments,
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1666:Gog the Mild
1640:Closing note
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1038:MOS:DUPLINK
1018:WP:duplinks
598:MOS:DUPLINK
1555:(he/himĀ ā¢
1537:(he/himĀ ā¢
1421:(he/himĀ ā¢
1370:(he/himĀ ā¢
1364:WP:MILHIST
1329:(he/himĀ ā¢
1275:(he/himĀ ā¢
1251:early 1258
1183:Specified.
991:Matarisvan
954:Matarisvan
935:Matarisvan
920:Matarisvan
823:Matarisvan
742:Matarisvan
720:Matarisvan
702:Matarisvan
688:Matarisvan
670:Matarisvan
655:Matarisvan
618:the plague
481:Matarisvan
462:Nikkimaria
448:Nikkimaria
299:Good idea.
279:Rephrased.
189:Done both.
146:Background
1648:WP:FAC/ar
1644:candidate
1598:epidemics
1553:Shushugah
1535:Shushugah
1460:Shushugah
1419:Shushugah
1368:Shushugah
1345:Shushugah
1327:Shushugah
1273:Shushugah
1262:Shushugah
573:Provided.
492:Adjusted.
403:Steelkamp
380:Steelkamp
362:Steelkamp
348:Steelkamp
330:Steelkamp
315:Steelkamp
259:Adjusted.
133:Steelkamp
102:sawyer777
1642:: This
1577:SchroCat
1222:FunkMonk
1197:FunkMonk
1129:instead.
1094:FunkMonk
1064:FunkMonk
1024:FunkMonk
853:#38: ok.
810:#18: ok.
613:a plague
555:vanguard
269:Defined.
50:promoted
1573:Support
1548:Support
1527:looting
1258:MOS:BCE
1243:MOS:BCE
1218:Support
1040:enough.
796:#4: ok.
738:support
399:support
305:Legacy
106:WikiCup
1531:invest
1508:Caliph
1386:sortie
1343:means
1048:Done.
289:Moved.
213:Added.
58:FACBot
1614:Done
1188:Link
1117:Done.
589:Done.
581:Done.
565:Done.
537:Done.
460:Done
170:Done.
156:Done.
16:<
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1249:and
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987:here
983:pass
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500:Done
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56:via
1662:bot
1458:Hi
1062:Hi
378:Hi
52:by
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