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As a note - after this was rewritten, there were some concerns about prose quality brought up (which seems to be a hallmark of most of my writing). The main Neal & Kremm source is on the
Internet Archive, and I own all of the other book sources except for Woods (which I have been looking for an
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This is perhaps a bit drastic step, but one I've been thinking about for several years now. When this was promoted in 2007, this was 22kb long. In early 2022, I rewrote this article after noting sourcing issues. The article is now 47kb long, and uses a number of sources not used in the original.
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excuse to buy off of eBay anyway if it becomes needed), so I should have the source access needed to resolve any concerns. It'll just be a matter of squeezing in any work on this around my job and household responsibilities.
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update here. I doubt that the new version will have factual or sourcing issues, given the nominator's form, but it would be good to do those checks after any prose issues (haven't properly looked) are largely dealt with.
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I have just taken a quick look at this. FWIW, I think Hog Farm and Mike
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