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I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow folks to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns, and let me know one of those places when the issues have been addressed. If I may suggest that you strike out, check mark, or otherwise
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mark the items I've detailed, that will make it possible for me to see what's been addressed, and you can keep track of what's been done and what still needs to be worked on.
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Looks great! It was already a pretty spiffy article, but since I was going to make you do that one cite, figured I'd have you pick up a few other small spots I noticed.
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The last paragraph, the last sentence needs a citation, as it's opinion. (Granted, not very controversial, but still enough of one that it should be cited)
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I think I've addressed all the concerns above. Let me know if you notice any other areas for improvement.
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Should give the dates of the events in the very beginning of the lead, first sentence.
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Would not hurt to put a cite on the first paragraph (although I'll not require it).
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Just very minor little things, the only thing really needed is the one citation.
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A few spots where a bit of information would help comprehension
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Talk:Nashville sit-ins
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Ealdgyth
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14:20, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
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Ealdgyth
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