204:
I would change "54 players, 8 goaltenders and 46 skaters (forwards and defenseman), have worn a
Firebirds jersey in at least one regular season game" to "54 players have worn a Firebirds jersey in at least one regular season game, comprising 8 goaltenders and 46 skaters (forwards and defenseman)," to
311:
Tables need row scopes on the "primary" column for each row, which in combination with column scopes lets screen reader software accurately determine and read out the headers for each cell of a data table. Row scopes can be added by adding
661:– All of the references are reliable and well-formatted. The link-checker tool indicated that a few of the links might have been dead, but I checked a couple of them manually and found no issues. Must have been some false positives there.
291:
Tables need column scopes for all column header cells, which in combination with row scopes lets screen reader software accurately determine and read out the headers for each cell of a data table. Column scopes can be added by adding
128:
335:
for example table code if this isn't clear. I don't return to these reviews until the nomination is ready to close, so ping me if you have any questions. This is not a full review, and does not result in a support vote.
400:: I have made the changes. I do feel that keeping the notes column is necessary, because as the Firebirds play more games, there will be more award winners, captains, and (hopefully) Calder Cup winners on the team.
453:
193:
280:
Tables need captions, which allow screen reader software to jump straight to named tables without having to read out all of the text before it each time. Visual captions can be added by putting
176:
68:
391:
349:
674:
242:
759:
738:
695:
511:
490:
472:
443:
416:
649:
621:
595:
99:
94:
103:
813:
784:
720:
367:
768:: So far there have been three normal reviews and your source review. Does this mean the review is over? This is my fourth FL nom and I still don't get how it works lol.
86:
261:
224:
184:
Keeping up with my trend of getting ice hockey lists to FL, this time, I'm doing
Coachella Valley Firebirds players. I think this list meets all the criteria. Thanks.
270:
578:
All in all, I think the lede is a bit short and says nothing about statistics, other than how many players have worn the jersey. Could something be added?
65:
478:
149:
90:
725:
No, it's just my check of the sources. I'd be conflicted out of closing the FLC down the line if I support, so I'll refrain from a full review.
74:
527:
284:
as the first line of the table code; if that caption would duplicate a nearby section header, you can make it screen-reader-only by putting
144:
108:
82:
75:
120:
40:
423:
I assume that the source for the tables is hockeydb.com. You can make it clearer by adding a citation to each table's caption.
116:
382:
There is only one note across both tables. You can make it into a normal footnote and eliminate the column completely. -
823:
30:
17:
838:
112:
198:
376:
Except for Name, Nat, Seasons and Notes, the other column headers don't need rowspans at all. Please remove them
257:
220:
800:
It's over whenever a delegate gets to it and thinks it's ready... which is now: promoting! --
732:
668:
8:
486:
439:
387:
540:
For someone (like myself) who knows nothing about how these leagues work, the fact that
209:"The Firebirds have yet to win the Calder Cup, the trophy awarded to the AHL champions."
645:
591:
253:
230:
216:
831:
61:
807:
778:
765:
753:
726:
714:
701:
689:
662:
615:
505:
466:
410:
363:
343:
238:
189:
172:
575:
There are no notes in the first table, so you can get rid of that empty column.
482:
449:
435:
397:
383:
302:!scope=col style="background-color:#FF670C; color:#000000;" rowspan="2"|Skatery
641:
630:
602:
587:
566:
129:
Featured list candidates/List of
Coachella Valley Firebirds players/archive1
542:
they have affiliated with the
National Hockey League (NHL)'s Seattle Kraken
477:
Since that FLC has two prose supports and seems old enough, I added it to
845:
57:
830:, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see
802:
769:
744:
705:
680:
606:
583:
496:
457:
401:
359:
355:
338:
234:
185:
168:
53:
205:
remove any potential confusion that it's 54+8+46 rather than 54=8+46
39:
Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in
332:
298:!style="background-color:#FF670C; color:#000000;"rowspan="2"|Skater
272:
481:. Somebody should come along to get that done in a few days. -
452:: I have made the changes. If you are able, could you look at
304:. If the cell spans multiple columns with a colspan, then use
324:. If the cell spans multiple rows with a rowspan, then use
212:"who is "the only team members" - not grammatically correct
379:
Each row has a bgcolor set to white, which can be removed.
154:
456:? It's been like 23 days since someone commented on it.
434:
in advance since I trust that you'll get these done. -
208:"The Firebirds have yet to win the Calder Cup." =: -->
854:The above discussion is preserved as an archive.
544:doesn't mean much if it isn't explained. I think.
479:Knowledge:Featured list candidates/backlog/items
43:. No further edits should be made to this page.
860:No further edits should be made to this page.
844:template in place on the talk page until the
29:The following is an archived discussion of a
83:List of Coachella Valley Firebirds players
76:List of Coachella Valley Firebirds players
41:Knowledge talk:Featured list candidates
14:
322:!scope=row | {{sortname|Max|Andreev}}*
533:Two consecutive sentences begin with
23:
704:hold up is this a support or not?
24:
18:Knowledge:Featured list candidates
872:
636:as previously stated, but I will
562:. Besides, please consider using
814:22:11, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
785:00:47, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
760:00:33, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
739:21:34, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
721:03:24, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
696:22:20, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
675:21:24, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
572:for those and also the others.
426:Every note will require a ref.
66:00:26, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
13:
1:
650:07:07, 4 September 2024 (UTC)
622:16:46, 2 September 2024 (UTC)
596:09:25, 2 September 2024 (UTC)
7:
605:: I have made the changes.
512:22:03, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
491:10:07, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
473:02:22, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
444:05:38, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
417:16:32, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
392:08:07, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
358:: I have made the changes.
318:! {{sortname|Max|Andreev}}*
316:to each primary cell, e.g.
233:: I have made the changes.
10:
877:
296:to each header cell, e.g.
286:|+ {{sronly|caption_text}}
368:04:59, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
350:22:11, 30 July 2024 (UTC)
262:07:30, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
243:23:26, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
225:22:29, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
194:16:31, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
177:16:31, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
857:Please do not modify it.
839:featured list candidates
537:, which reads a bit odd.
36:Please do not modify it.
31:featured list nomination
271:Accessibility review (
215:That's it, I think --
535:Since their creation
528:Comments by Alavense
582:That's what I saw,
180:
162:
161:
868:
859:
843:
837:
834:, and leave the
810:
805:
781:
775:
772:
756:
750:
747:
735:
729:
717:
711:
708:
692:
686:
683:
671:
665:
635:
629:
618:
612:
609:
586:. Kind regards,
571:
565:
561:
557:
553:
549:
543:
536:
508:
502:
499:
469:
463:
460:
413:
407:
404:
346:
341:
323:
319:
303:
299:
165:
134:
133:
124:
106:
38:
876:
875:
871:
870:
869:
867:
866:
865:
864:
855:
841:
835:
808:
803:
779:
773:
770:
754:
748:
745:
733:
727:
715:
709:
706:
690:
684:
681:
669:
663:
633:
627:
616:
610:
607:
569:
563:
559:
555:
551:
547:
541:
534:
530:
506:
500:
497:
467:
461:
458:
454:my other FL nom
411:
405:
402:
344:
339:
326:!scope=rowgroup
321:
317:
306:!scope=colgroup
301:
297:
282:|+ caption_text
277:
201:
97:
81:
79:
34:
22:
21:
20:
12:
11:
5:
874:
863:
862:
850:
849:
798:
797:
796:
795:
794:
793:
792:
791:
790:
789:
788:
787:
655:
654:
653:
652:
580:
579:
576:
573:
545:
538:
529:
526:
525:
524:
523:
522:
521:
520:
519:
518:
517:
516:
515:
514:
429:
428:
427:
424:
380:
377:
373:
372:
371:
370:
329:
309:
289:
276:
269:
267:
265:
264:
247:
246:
245:
213:
210:
206:
200:
197:
182:
181:
167:Nominator(s):
160:
159:
158:
157:
155:External links
152:
147:
139:
138:
132:
131:
78:
73:
72:
46:
45:
25:
15:
9:
6:
4:
3:
2:
873:
861:
858:
852:
851:
848:goes through.
847:
840:
833:
829:
825:
821:
818:
817:
816:
815:
812:
811:
806:
786:
782:
776:
767:
763:
762:
761:
757:
751:
742:
741:
740:
736:
730:
724:
723:
722:
718:
712:
703:
699:
698:
697:
693:
687:
678:
677:
676:
672:
666:
660:
659:Source review
657:
656:
651:
647:
643:
639:
632:
625:
624:
623:
619:
613:
604:
600:
599:
598:
597:
593:
589:
585:
577:
574:
568:
546:
539:
532:
531:
513:
509:
503:
494:
493:
492:
488:
484:
480:
476:
475:
474:
470:
464:
455:
451:
447:
446:
445:
441:
437:
433:
430:
425:
422:
421:
420:
419:
418:
414:
408:
399:
395:
394:
393:
389:
385:
381:
378:
375:
374:
369:
365:
361:
357:
353:
352:
351:
348:
347:
342:
334:
330:
327:
315:
310:
307:
295:
290:
287:
283:
279:
278:
274:
268:
263:
259:
255:
251:
248:
244:
240:
236:
232:
228:
227:
226:
222:
218:
214:
211:
207:
203:
202:
196:
195:
191:
187:
179:
178:
174:
170:
164:
163:
156:
153:
151:
148:
146:
143:
142:
141:
140:
136:
135:
130:
127:
126:
125:
122:
118:
114:
110:
105:
101:
96:
92:
88:
84:
77:
71:
69:
67:
63:
59:
55:
51:
48:The list was
44:
42:
37:
32:
27:
26:
19:
856:
853:
827:
820:Closing note
819:
801:
799:
658:
637:
626:I would use
581:
431:
337:
325:
313:
305:
293:
285:
281:
266:
254:ChrisTheDude
249:
231:ChrisTheDude
217:ChrisTheDude
183:
166:
150:Citation bot
80:
49:
47:
35:
28:
331:Please see
766:Giants2008
728:Giants2008
702:Giants2008
664:Giants2008
558:should be
550:should be
314:!scope=row
294:!scope=col
832:WP:FLC/ar
826:has been
824:candidate
483:MPGuy2824
450:MPGuy2824
436:MPGuy2824
398:MPGuy2824
384:MPGuy2824
828:promoted
822:: This
679:Thanks.
642:Alavense
640:anyway.
603:Alavense
588:Alavense
495:Thanks.
333:MOS:DTAB
328:instead.
320:becomes
308:instead.
300:becomes
288:instead.
273:MOS:DTAB
199:Comments
145:Analysis
50:promoted
638:support
432:Support
250:Support
137:Toolbox
100:protect
95:history
104:delete
58:FACBot
584:XR228
360:XR228
356:PresN
235:XR228
186:XR228
169:XR228
121:views
113:watch
109:links
54:PresN
16:<
804:Pres
780:talk
755:talk
743:Ok.
734:Talk
716:talk
691:talk
670:Talk
646:talk
631:abbr
617:talk
592:talk
567:abbr
560:Pos.
554:and
552:Nat.
507:talk
487:talk
468:talk
440:talk
412:talk
388:talk
364:talk
340:Pres
258:talk
239:talk
221:talk
190:talk
173:talk
117:logs
91:talk
87:edit
62:talk
56:via
846:bot
774:228
749:228
710:228
685:228
611:228
556:Pos
548:Nat
501:228
462:228
406:228
252:--
52:by
842:}}
836:{{
783:)
771:XR
758:)
746:XR
737:)
719:)
707:XR
694:)
682:XR
673:)
648:)
634:}}
628:{{
620:)
608:XR
594:)
570:}}
564:{{
510:)
498:XR
489:)
471:)
459:XR
442:)
415:)
403:XR
390:)
366:)
336:--
260:)
241:)
223:)
192:)
175:)
119:|
115:|
111:|
107:|
102:|
98:|
93:|
89:|
70:.
64:)
33:.
809:N
777:(
764:@
752:(
731:(
713:(
700:@
688:(
667:(
644:(
614:(
601:@
590:(
504:(
485:(
465:(
448:@
438:(
409:(
396:@
386:(
362:(
354:@
345:N
275:)
256:(
237:(
229:@
219:(
188:(
171:(
123:)
85:(
60:(
Text is available under the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike License. Additional terms may apply.