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2218: 412:.) His basic point is that the article is overall too long and too detailed, about which I don't entirely disagree. I've let him know that I'm interested in pursuing a rewrite of this sort in the future, although immediate problems with the article persists: lacking citations, small inaccuracies, etc. My revisions do not expand these sections significantly, they're simply intended to refine what is there now. I'd like to address these issues before considering another rewrite effort, and perhaps my updated sections could form the basis for a fork on these sub-topics. As he says on the Talk page, he won't object if someone else approves and moves them. Would you be willing to help me with this? Cheers, 7766:: Thus far we have reduced the number of May/June 2012 articles to just 124 articles, so we're on the right track. Unfortunately, for the first time in GOCE history, the number of articles in the backlog has actually gone up during this drive. While all participants are currently doing a fine job, we just don't have as many of them as we have had in the past. We have over 500 editors on our mailing list, but only 18 editors who have done a copy edit for the drive. If you're receiving this newsletter, it's because you have an interest in copy editing. Join the drive! Even if you only copy edit one article, it helps. Imagine how much progress we could make if everyone chipped in just one article. 5214: 4482: 1468:. It is already a subsection, currently a few tight (however unverified) paragraphs, like the ones around it. Meanwhile, an editor recently involved here had removed some bullets from a previously-approved subsection, so the general direction of this page has been more about streamlining what's already a lengthy, complex article, rather than adding more detail. I understand your interest in checking the facts, which is good, but how do you feel about reducing the complexity a bit? And going back to just 2-3 paragraphs? I think that would fit better for the article. I could edit again and see what you think. 6382: 2009: 1955: 5513: 2896: 6554: 7566: 5263: 2592: 36: 6133: 5348: 4738: 3779: 7392: 6609: 5823: 5022: 4248: 2984: 2068: 7575: 4200:? You don't need to know anything about Allie; I'm contacting you because you've worked on matters pertaining to photography. I tried contacting lots of editors who work on comics-related articles, but every time I do so, we wind up with the sentiments split down the middle, and no clear consensus. I'm thinking perhaps that people who work on matters dealing with photography might be able to offer viewpoints that yield a consensus. Thank you. 3711: 300: 6079: 7756: 2270: 5652: 4428: 4010: 3172: 3157: 3339: 2657: 1173:

limited partnership fund and may have unlimited personal liability for debts of the partnership unless a limited liability entity acts as the general partner. A limited partnership also usually has limited partners which provide much of the invested funds and are not personally liable for debts of the partnership." Add the Nicolas ref to the list of refs for these sentences.

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In deleting the architectural drawing and changing the caption to a simple description of the building itself (as per alt caption) you have missed the point entirely. The statement made concerning the role of Brunelleschi made is of a degree of significance that ought to have alerted you to the fact

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a partnership. The "Business Knowledge for IT in Hedge Funds" source does a nice job of explaining this, which is why we used it as a source. In addition, the "alternative" wording you suggest would be slightly misleading in that each of these structures would reflect the interests of different sorts

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Replace "A hedge fund structured as a limited partnership must have a general partner, which usually manages the limited partnership, while the limited partners provide the invested funds." with "A hedge fund structured as a limited partnership must have a general partner, which is the manager of the

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I'm guessing with the July 4 holiday weekend (I assume you're in the U.S. just because of the photo of Nevada on your user page...) you were otherwise occupied this last week; if you still can share your views on the Hedge fund article, that would be swell. However, if you don't manage, I'm probably

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Hello, again! Well, I'm afraid there still hasn't been any follow-up discussion on the page since you last commented. You mentioned you had some concerns with the wording yourself; I'd certainly be interested to hear your specifici thoughts. If you can find the time soon, that would be awesome. I'll

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Thanks very much! Really glad we made that work out. As you know, I do have two more sections prepared, and I'd be happy to work with you on one or both of them, but I also realize this might have taken more of your time than you had in mind. If you're game to look at another one in the near future,

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Cool. I think best to post a new thread, since there are a lot of commenters on the article recently, and I'd be surprised if they did not have unique viewpoints on the content. As noted before: financial topics seem to draw a lot of very careful and differing viewpoints, and I appreciate your close

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Right on, I have no more changes! Shall we move this back to the section that I had started before? It might instead be worth starting a new thread, because my original one is now not the most recent section (discussion has focused on other issues since). Either way, if you prefer to take it to Talk

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Again, I know that the Nicholas books identifies "trusts" as the third common form, but it's not clear to me what he means by this—is he referring to the offshore unit trust or some of domestic structure? If it’s the former, than the grouping I propose seems appropriate. If it’s the latter, we would

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The Lhabitant and Nicholas sources both highlight the limited partnership and limited liability company legal structures as the main form of domestic arrangements, so I've made those the focus of the introductory text and bullet points. I moved the unit trust info down to the bottom with the rest of

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Hi Pine, I don't think I've ever thanked you for the excellent work you've been doing with "Featured content", so ... thank you! I've also asked Armburst to help finish this week's report per Hahc's request, as he's working on a story about the Spanish Knowledge's one millionth article for NAN. :-)

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into three paragraphs. I cut out some of the introductory elements, they didn't seem necessary without the bullet points. And I added back in content about the board of directors for offshore funds, and board members' perceived lack of expertise. The existing subsection currently covers this, and I

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That makes complete sense. If you want to get another editor's eyes on it, by all means do, although as you know I'd been having trouble finding someone to review it. Financial topics: a real challenge, I've found. And I'm actually going to be traveling starting tomorrow through early next week, so

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The length of this subsection is becoming a concern. There is certainly plenty of additional information we could add; the "Business Knowledge for IT in Hedge Funds" source, for example, spends four pages outlining different business and legal structures. But several different editors on the "Hedge

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Some of your suggested changes were already included in the most recent draft. For example, the information noting that a limited partnership may have a corporation as the general partner, though the draft already states a "hedge fund structured as a limited partnership must have a general partner.

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For the offshore passage, how about "Offshore corporate funds are generally used for non-US investors. Because they are domiciled in tax havens, investors may be exempt from entity-level tax." I don't think we need to refer to them as "so-called" offshore funds as they are well-defined elsewhere in

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Nichols does identify "trust" as a third way of structuring a hedge fund. But I believe he is simply referring to the "unit trust" arrangement for offshore funds already discussed. If he's referring to a strictly domestic arrangement, it's not one I'm familiar with, nor one I could find additional

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Change "Offshore corporate funds are used for non-US investors, and because they are domiciled in a tax haven, no entity-level tax is imposed" to "Offshore corporate funds are usually used for non-US investors, and when they are domiciled in an applicable offshore tax haven, no entity-level tax is

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occupies a unique position in the history of architecture. The statement, "Brunelleschi ....transformed the role of the architect" is the key to its significance. Not to mention that it was the supreme example of architectural design and construction for a thousand years, and was to remain so for

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In the first paragraph, I think the Lhabitant reference also supports the sentence that's currently supported by the Anson reference, but I can't easily see how the Anson reference is supporting the sentence to which it's currently tagged. I suggest moving the Lhabitant reference to the location

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Source two (the Anson book) does support the third sentence in paragraph one. (See Exhibit 2.1 on page 23, and text on page 22.) I originally had a different source for the next two sentences, but I must have cut it off while editing. In any case, I think it reads better without, so I've simply

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The Knowledge article still seems promotional to me. Among other things, it fails to mention Teece's firing from LEGC, his tax problems with the IRS, the bankruptcy of his "New Zealand-based clothing company", and his association with "controversial" bankruptcy trustee R. Todd Neilson. See the

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Regarding your comment on this entry from last August: "The article sounds much more promotional than what I usually see in Knowledge BLP articles so I've tagged the article with the autobiography template. The article needs to work on NPOV. BLP policy says "BLPs should be written responsibly,

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Change the sentence "Offshore corporate funds are used for non-US investors, and because they are domiciled in a tax haven, no entity-level tax is imposed." to read "So-called "offshore" corporate funds, i.e. corporate funds domiciled outside of the United States, are generally used for non-US

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I agree with you about the length issue, I was starting to think about that too. The reason I'm viewing the proposed changes with a microscope is that if I'm going to have my name associated with this complicated set of changes I want to be pretty sure that someone won't snap at me later for

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I see how the first of three sentences that's attributed to Source 2 are supported by the source, but I don't see how the two following sentences are supported by the source. Can you point me more specifically to where those sentences are supported by source 2? I think that the source that's

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I added a sentence about board members' perceived lack of expertise: "The board's primary role is to provide a layer of oversight while representing the interests of the shareholders. However, in practice board members may lack sufficient expertise to be effective in performing those

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Your suggested wording about liability conflates two different legal structures. The limited partnership is a different arrangement than the limited liability company. I have, however, added additional text drawn from the Nichols book and one other source to make that distinction

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cautiously, and in a dispassionate tone..." Pine✉ 18:55, 6 August 2012 (UTC)." Have your concerns been addressed by the revisions since then? Is yes, can you advise on how to remove the tag for the autobiography template? If no, do you have suggestions on what else to do?

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Replace the sentence "The board's primary role is to provide a layer of oversight while representing the interests of the shareholders." with "Theoretically, the board has significant oversight responsibility, although board members may lack sufficient expertise to be

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eye through this. If there's more ahead, I hope you're game to keep going. Plus I have two more subsections afterward; I have no idea if they'll warrant the same close review, but I'm willing to talk it all through. No deadlines on Knowledge, after all! Cheers,

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OK, I think I'm more or less in agreement with you about the substance of your draft. I have boldly made some changes to your draft page mainly with the goal of making the information easier for the reader to understand. Please let me know what you think.

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Please check it out and see the difference that the caption makes. It doesn't matter how good a pic is, there has to be a reason for its inclusion, particularly in the intro of a generic article covering a huge topic, when there are so ver many

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information about. I did add further details about unit trusts in the offshore paragraph, however. And if you can direct me to a source providing further details about domestic (onshore) trust structures, I would be happy to add that information.

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Please move "Hedge funds may also be structured as limited liability companies, with members acting as corporate shareholders and enjoying protection from individual liability." to a separate paragraph, change "limited liability companies" to

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I'd prefer to add more context (for which I've offered suggested language) or remove it. Wildfowl doesn't think so, and would prefer to leave it. Alas, we've had trouble finding another viewpoint. Let me know if you think you can! Cheers,

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Yes -- they're part of the package we send to any Ambassador or professors who's interested in having an on-campus outreach event about Knowledge, and we also give them out at conferences. They say "Knowledge Contributor" on them. :) --

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Yeah, sorry, that was a note for you. I suppose "fewer than 35" may work, as the particular discussion is certainly way outside scope of this article. I'll update it if something is decided before/shortly after the issue goes out.

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think it's valuable information from a critical perspective. Otherwise, contentwise, it's the same as before. If this looks good, I think we're ready to move the conversation over to the Hedge fund Talk page. What do you think?

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article. I did also ping the other editor I mentioned, but it doesn't look like he's had a chance to take a look. Do you think you might have time to review my suggestions and consider them for inclusion in the article? Thanks!

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something I agreed to include or not include. The complexity of the subject is making this situation a challenge. I'll come back and look at this further when I have a larger block of time to review it again, hopefully soon. --

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Greetings Pine I'm again running an science image project for my AP Biology students. Any help or suggestions of life science images that need made are appreciated if you have some spare time. You can find this year's project

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Hi, I've posted some suggestions on the project talk page. I'm glad to see this project return for another year! Please encourage students to nominate any especially informative diagrams in SVG format for Featured status at

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This nomination is actually newly in the extension period, and will be for the next five days. =) Please feel free to vote on this and any other; indeed, more votes over the holiday period would be very helpful. Cheers!

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Cool, it's very appreciated. I've also reached out to a few other editors who have been involved with the page before, although they haven't responded yet. I'll either ping you in a week or let you know what happened!

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Hello, Pine. Not a problem at all. I woke up to the news of Aaron's passing on Saturday. He was a brilliant mind and astonishingly accomplished. Besides Knowledge and all else the media is covering now, he wrote the

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OK, I see your point about the level of detail in describing the history of one building for a lead image in that article. I've made a few tweaks to the caption but I am leaving the bulk of what you wrote as it is.

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I took a look at this today. Thank you for working on this difficult subject. I believe you are editing in good faith and I like the references that you're adding in your draft. I have a few requests for changes.

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In "The board may include both affiliated directors who are full-time employees of the fund and independent directors whose relationship to the fund is limited to the board and limited consulting duties", remove

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to help us better understand your experience participating in the IEG program and how we can improve for the future. You are being selected to participate in our survey because you served on the IEG Committee.

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fund" talk page have expressed concern about the article's length, and are involved in ongoing efforts to pare it down. I am reluctant to extend the word count in this subsection any longer than it already is.

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Hi, sorry for the delay- I'll be able to write a couple of paragraphs explaining what the WikiCup is and give a quick update on how things are going so far this year. I'll get it to you by this evening.

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Hi! I have been traveling extensively for two weeks, with extremely intermittent Internet connection. Although I would have liked to get interviewed, I guess the deadline is over, right? May be another

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It wouldn't quite make sense to say "corporations or limited liability companies" because limited liability companies are hybrid business entities having certain characteristics of both a corporation

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No problem. Meantime, I'll go ahead and try at least one other editor who has been helpful on this article in the past, but if progress is still slow, I'll definitely check in with you again. Thanks!

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Thanks, that will work. Would you mind if I changed "32 " to "32 or 33 (pending the result of a discussion)"? With that change I'd like to include your whole update in the FC report for this week. --

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I'd love to have your feedback on it, before I get started with the build. I would love it if you would leave any thoughts, tips, comments, recommendations, suggestions, ideas, or concerns, at

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Yep, so they did! Seems like Keithbob is fairly willing to implement these at the moment, so I'll just let you know if we run into an issue where another opinion could be helpful. Thanks again!

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Change the sentence "Unit trusts are sometimes used to market to Japanese investors." to "When marketing to Japanese investors, unit trusts based in the Cayman Islands are often preferred."

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To clarify, I'm not saying that every last negative detail needs to be included in the article, but the article surely needs a more neutral balance of information than it has at present. --

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A good answer is one that fits in with the Teahouse expectations of proper conduct: polite, patient, simple, relies on explanations not links, and leaves a talkback notification.

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For source 5, I think you linked to the wrong page in the source. The link is to the "Legal and Compliance" section which doesn't mention the board. Would you please fix this?

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It looks like the image has been cropped a bit, which explains the smaller size. That said, at full resolution, there's still a lot of damage, so I'll add it to the queue.

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OK, finally got updates for you here. Looks like we're getting closer. I changed the text to reflect your suggestions (with a few variations), and have once again updated

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I apologise for not getting the restoration done in time for the original nomination, but, as you nominated it, felt I should tell you about the new nomination. Cheers!

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Does this seem reasonable? If it looks good to you, I think it's ready to go, and surely worth a mention in the relevant section of the Hedge fund Talk page. Cheers,

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another 500 years. It is wider, more structurally stable and less complex than Michelangelo's equally famous dome on St Peter's built more than a century later.

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I changed the wording on the unit trusts passage to "Japanese investors prefer to invest in open ended unit trusts, such as those available in the Cayman Islands."

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I'm not comfortable with Reference 7 since I can't seem to see the relevant pages on Google Books, and I won't insert that into the article unless I can read it.

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OK, I understand your POV about the Architecture article, but I'm not understanding why the image would be a problem in the History of architecture article. --

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You're welcome. I learned a lot about the legal structure of hedge funds. And thanks, I would prefer that you ask other users to review your next sections. --

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OK, I did some chopping in the draft. Does that look better? Feel free to post an alternative version on the draft page if you have an alternative in mind. --

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Please see Nicholas page 40, second paragraph, regarding how a limited partnership may have a corporation as the general partner. Add this information.

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I changed the link on source six (is that the one you meant?) so that page 2-68 shows up as a preview. The full text is not available on Google Books.

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I thought that the first picture was self explanatory, but I have expanded the caption, in order to balance it against the new caption on your photo.

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I kept the Anson citation for the second line (since I think the chart in that source is useful), but added the Lhabitant book as a second reference.

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that if you personally didn't know it, and wanted it verified, then the right course of action was to leave a tag, not delete what was obviously a

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Hello, Pine! It's been awhile, and I hope all is well. I wonder if you'd be willing to look at a discussion that's been ongoing a few weeks on the

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January was our most active month so far! 78 profiles were created, 46 active hosts answered 263 questions, and 11 new hosts joined the project.

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to share a cup of tea and enjoy a Birthday Cupcake! Happy Birthday to the Teahouse and thank you for a year's worth of interest and support :-)

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I think the current draft does a good job of summarizing the most pertinent details. What do you think, certainly better than what's there now?

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In "Japanese investors prefer to invest in open ended unit trusts, such as those available in the Cayman Islands", remove the words "open ended".

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Add a new paragraph, "A third way of structuring a hedge fund is as a trust." with the Nicholas ref. I'm not sure if Nicholas is referring to a

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Hi bot, I did intend that link to the disambiguation page while I was trying to find a better link. I've found it now. Thanks for your note. --

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that I can wait a bit longer. That said, if by the middle of next week you're still too busy, I may see who else is available to help. Cheers,

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To reduce the possibility of being accused of plagarism, put quote marks around "such as pensions plans, endowments and charitable trusts."

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You know what, I'm afraid this is moving in the wrong direction now. You might want to look again at the current section and its surrounds:

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I changed the wording slightly on the list of tax-exempt organizations (to "pension funds, institutional endowments and charitable trusts.")

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I tried a reorganization with subheadings. Does this look better? I think moving unit trusts to the end may be confusing for the reader. --

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Hi WWB, I had planned to work on this today but that got derailed by the untimely passing of a Wikipedian. You can read more about this at

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My list of comments and suggestions gets shorter each time I do a review, which is a good sign. This time I have two requests for changes.

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Let me put it to you that Brunelleschi led the way for every modern architectural practice. The many builders of Osaka castle did not.

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Hi Pine! Thanks for your awesome answer to a Teahouse guest's question about unified login on Outreach wiki. It was really helpful!

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All right, I really appreciate the close read and considered reply. I'll review, revise and respond by tomorrow at latest. Thanks,

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Hi Pine, I noticed you are (sometimes) active in the field of software engineering. I wonder if you could give your opinion about

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The large sums of money involved – globally, well over a trillion US dollars, and amplified by leverage – add to all these risks.

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the editor chose a painting which, in keeping with the article, illustrates numerous historic styles within a single picture.

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Completely unrelated: how do you do that cool glowing thing around your name? Not likely to use it myself, but I dig that.

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Responded on the talk page. Please ping me in a week if I haven't returned to that page and there's still no consensus. --

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Looks good! I just added a few words for additional clarity. I agree, I think it's ready for the Hedge fund Talk page. --

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Hi again, Pine. I'm in agreement with and have largely implemented your suggested changes, and have once again updated

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It's more that I'm swamped with things to do right now and people keep piling on more work. Please go to 3O. Sorry. --

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It's been a long time since we worked on The Knowledge Adventure together, but this spring I proposed the game for an

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article, the primary editor who was approving and implementing my suggestions changed his mind about participating. (

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I think it should. I think there's a bot that will go through and add the RfC to the templates and tech category. --

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Whether or not it is relevant and appropriate as a lead to the article is in part dependent on whether its caption

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Hello again, Pine. Funny thing, not long after I'd reached out to you about the section-by-section updates to the

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And responded again. No further responses for a few hours, though: I have a friend's mother's funeral to go to.

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Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Knowledge appreciates your help. We noticed though that when you edited

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Yes, it's a good picture, but please stop pushing it into the lead in articles where it is not appropriate.

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Pilot program for Mexican university students working with Knowledge to satisfy community service requirement

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Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Knowledge appreciates your help. We noticed though that when you edited

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investors, and because they are domiciled in tax havens, the investors may be exempt from entity-level tax."

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The general partner may be an individual or a corporation." The Nicholas source was used as a citation here.

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Hi WWB, I am willing to help but my plate is a bit full right now. Can you ping me again in about a week? --

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I cut out the Scharfman reference (previously number seven). The Lhabitant citation should be sufficient.

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Let me know if these changes are satisfactory, and if you have any other questions or feedback. Cheers,

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need additional information to describe how the domestic trust differs from the LP and LLC structures.

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We’ve redesigned the Grants:IdeaLab to make awesome collaborators and shiny new ideas easier to find.

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now's a good time to pause. I'll check back when I return, or let me know if you follow up! Cheers,

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I appreciate your bold changes! I've made just a few small modifications, which you can see on my

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No pressure, I know you're busy these days! Just wanted you to know you're always welcome :-)

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http://www.showbiz411.com/2011/06/06/billy-preston-estate-still-not-settled-of-the-fifth-beatle

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following news articles. One of Knowledge's "pillars" is that Knowledge articles should have a

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Hi again, Pine. I'll respond to your requests one-by-one, and you'll see that I have updated

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Hi WWB, I worked on this today while I was waiting for someone. Here are my latest comments.

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directly if you get more info. I'm crediting you for writing that section of the report. --

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I spent the last two months refining the script and getting ready to build the game using

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Hi how are you? I was wondering if the Featured content report for this week will include

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Hi. Can you offer your opinion on which photo is more appropriate for the Infobox in the

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You're welcome to start up the discussion on that talk page as you think best. Cheers, --

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on my user page to reflect the changes discussed below. I have a few notes and comments:

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I have dealt with this. I think the article is more of a stub than a disambiguation. --

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Editathon with the Digital Humanities Winter Institute and the University of Maryland

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on February 22, 2013. If you get a chance, you can check and improve the caption at

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the two lead pics have been carefully selected to illustrate the leading sentence:

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on June 22, 2013. If you get a chance, you can check and improve the caption at

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week. The Sarah Connor discography will be included in next week's FC report. --

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http://www.nzherald.co.nz/business/news/article.cfm?c_id=3&objectid=10604859

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School of Open to launch with a Knowledge course for open education enthusiasts

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but if you can figure that out I hope you can add a ref with that information.

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OK, I've added this to my agenda for sometime this week or early next week. --

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OK, I'll do a copypaste of your text and use "fewer than 35". You can update

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Could you close this? I've voted, and Armbrust seems to have disappeared. —

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Survey research and design in psychology - Example of a Wikiversity resource

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Sorry that we've already published this issue. Yes, maybe another time! --

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http://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Welcoming_committee/Welcome_to_Wikipedia

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there, go right ahead. Otherwise I'll do so in the next 24 hours. Cheers,

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Your second change is OK with me. I have a few comments about the first.

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File:Starburst in NGC 4449 (captured by the Hubble Space Telescope).jpg

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out of thousands of possible buildings gives it no relevance at all.

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During the six-day blitz, we removed over twenty articles from the

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I'll move the text tomorrow or later if there are no objections. --

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I have this on my list of things to do during the next few days. --

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Fall 2012 summary Tecnológico de Monterrey- Campus Ciudad de México

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http://www.berkeleydailyplanet.com/issue/2009-09-24/article/33796

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As the product of planning, design and construction, the dome of

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Some Statistics from the Czech program: explosion of new projects

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First ever medical school education program pilot begins at UCSF

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Knowledge:Featured picture candidates/Grey Heron in Thailand (1)

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Hi there, Pine. Last week I posted a detailed request about the

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The GOCE has wrapped up another successful year of operations!

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Knowledge:Featured picture candidates/Aurora Borealis painting

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Thanks for being so kind to the Wikimedia technical team :-]

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at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template.

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Hello again! We have some neat updates about the Teahouse:

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at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template.

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Hey there, Pine, this note just to follow up with you about

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That discussion seems to have WP:SNOWed. I've closed it. --

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ITESM-Campus Ciudad de México donates 100 photos to Commons

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Took slightly longer than I planned, but I've now posted a

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