38:
I adjusted a few lines of yours to make them more neutral-sounding. While it may be true that thong-wear attitudes are changing "for the better", this is called a Point of View (POV) in Wiki because some may think that and others may thing the opposite. In this instance, I changed it to read "toward
54:
will have its own article separate from the g-string article, as they are different (as you pointed out as well). I hope that you will make a point to go and add to that article as well in the future.
39:
more acceptance of" thong wear, which is what you were saying but has less of a "this is my view" sound to it. It's common and I have tended to do it a LOT before as well... (Read more at
58:
Again, very well done. Minor things that you will learn as you spend more time editing
Knowledge... some of it all took me long enough!
65:
16:
35:
First of all, great edits overall! I hope you'll continue to be around and edit, add, etc. this and other articles.
8:
62:
51:
47:
40:
50:-related and not G-string-related, and that's great for now. Soon,
28:
17:
27:I saw your series of edits to the article
43:- the official WikiPolicy on the matter.)
31:and wanted to offer some feedback:
13:
14:
76:
1:
46:A lot of what you added was
24:JM, Welcome to Knowledge!!!
7:
10:
81:
66:23:31, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
20:article & Welcome!
61:Have a great day!
72:
80:
79:
75:
74:
73:
71:
70:
69:
22:
12:
11:
5:
78:
63:VigilancePrime
56:
55:
44:
36:
21:
15:
9:
6:
4:
3:
2:
77:
68:
67:
64:
59:
53:
49:
45:
42:
37:
34:
33:
32:
30:
25:
19:
60:
57:
26:
23:
29:G-string
18:G-string
41:WP:NPOV
52:Thong
48:Thong
Text is available under the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike License. Additional terms may apply.