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prohibition on experiments with blood magic is holding back scientific progress, and that further experiments will result in increased healthcare access for refugees. Firuz refuses to help Kofi with his experiments. Kofi infects Firuz with the blood bruising. Afsoneh and Firuz kill Kofi, use his laboratory to concoct a cure, and then burn down the clinic to hide the evidence.
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Kofi diffuses the situation and leads Firuz to a laboratory under the clinic. Despite having no training in blood magic, Kofi reveals that he was performing experiments in order to find a cure for plague victims. The blood bruising disease was the unintended result. Kofi believes that the
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