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Second paragraph, final sentence: Reference does not appear to support "Because the 1855 Treaty of Walla Walla grants rights to
Umatilla and Nez Perce subsistence fishing in the Grande Ronde River, chinook salmon tags are apportioned evenly between the sport and subsistence
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Second paragraph, final sentence: I am not comfortable with using the term "epicenter" to describe a geological formation (particularly in a "geology" section!). I suggest deleting "This area was the epicenter and namesake of", leaving the rest of the sentence
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Final paragraph, final sentence: Reference does not appear to support "This is now the largest tule wetland remaining in northeast Oregon", but the "Ladd Marsh
Wildlife Area Management Plan" pdf does, so I suggest changing the url to link direct to the
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That's all for the first pass. This is a very enjoyable and informative article. There's not much to address - just a handful of queries on a few references and some suggestions for additional links - everything else is very minor.
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First paragraph, first and second sentences: These two sentences are both quite long and have multiple clauses. I suggest splitting the first one in two, so it reads "The Grande Ronde River basin is founded on multiple
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Fourth paragraph, third sentence: Reference does not appear to support " with chukar, partridge and quail common along riverside and grassland areas, and turkey and grouse in the upland forested areas."
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First paragraph, first sentence: Reference does not appear to support "Irrigation is the largest consumer of Grande Ronde River water." (It would be useful to have a page number for this ref.)
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First paragraph, second sentence: Reference does not appear to say that Hunt was commissioned by the
Pacific Fur Company - I suggest adding reference here to cover this point.
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Second paragraph, first sentence: "only 341 square miles (880 km2), or 8 percent, are in
Washington" - I think this is page 16 of reference , not page 15 as currently indicated.
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Thank you for the detailed review! I'll attempt to address everything before I am out of town for about a week starting on
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First paragraph, fourth sentence: Reference does not appear to support "The Grande Ronde is also at the center of the largest contiguous gray wolf range in Oregon."
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Added page numbers to the indicated references, will look at the rest.
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I have not detected any copyright violations or plagiarism. A
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