12676:"According to Billboard writer Monica Herrera, the clip is opposite to the music video for Bionic lead single 'Not Myself Tonight'". These and many others are sentences that need to be rewritten to sound better and pass the first featured article criterion, which I quote asks for prose that is "engaging, even brilliant, and of a professional standard". From here on, I'd recommend that you work with an experienced editor, possibly someone who commonly works with pop music topics, and ask them to run an eye and help you tidy things up. And while this next suggestion is no obligation, I highly recommend you take this article to GAN after the copy editing is finished. This is a stepping stone to seeing how far your article has come. If you ping me on my talk page, I may be able to review this if it
16303:, "I wonder if this might be an instance of comprehensiveness trumping reliability... However, this is a specialized and obscure topic, and there may not be the kind of sources you request available. IOW, they may be the most reliable sources out there. I've come to the conclusion that resorting to using industry webpages is necessary for some articles in order to maintain comprehensiveness, even in FAs--as long as the prose is high-quality." She made a very good point about comprehensiveness trumping reliability. I'm not trying to be a pain, I've just followed this article from day one. I wrote this article with all the sources available and I don't see the issue in the few YouTube or PointBuzz links that are used.--
14324:"Overseas operations often flourished while ignoring or even defying orders from Louisville headquarters: management attempted to force KFC Japan to switch from corn and cottonseed oil to cheaper palm or soybean, but local management refused to compromise the quality of their product with a lesser quality oil". I'm worried that a POV has been 'swallowed' by the source and then reproduced here. what evidence is there that the cheaper oil was lower quality? It was used in other countries without any problems? Perhaps "local management stated that they would not compromise the quality of their product with a lesser quality oil" at least attributes the argument to managers without elevating it to objective fact.
11059:. I have read the article twice, and support on prose. Suggestion: "Madgwick" appears more than 100 times in the article, at one place four times in three sentences. Can that be varied? I may have more suggestions but as a whole the article meets the standards for FA. In reply to the comments just above: the handling of explanatory notes and cites is a matter of personal preference, not FA criteria (and I don't read Dr. Blofeld to state otherwise), and I agree there is no need for accessdates on convenience weblinks to works in print. I would eliminate those links unless the website in use reproduces all relevant parts of the book, but that too is personal preference. Please review
13472:). A reader who has not seen the film will not learn much from "Relatives: The King (father); The Queen (mother); Mother Gothel (adoptive mother)". Since there are no articles on her royal parents, what does it add to include the king and queen (and I think most readers will be sufficiently familiar with biology to know the king is her father and the queen is her mother). Since "Mother Gothel" kidnaps Rapunzel and holds her captive, I think calling her an "adoptive mother" is very problematic (since adoption is a legal process and kidnapping is not). I am not against an infobox here in general, but the current box detracts from the article it should add to (if included).
12385:. Tone and style issues are pervasive; many sections are simply not written to an encyclopedic standard, much less the brilliant prose expected of FAC. There are a number of problems with linking as well, from massive overlinking (I lost count of how many times Palermo is linked) to at least one self-referential link (violent succession). There are referencing issues as well, including a bare URL link to Youtube as Reference 125, but given the state of the article, I didn't do a comprehensive reference review. To meet the FAC standards, this article would require a sufficiently thorough rewrite that I would then oppose on the stability criterion.
4031:"Owing to the scale of the atrocities, Archer Blood, the US Consul General in Dhaka, sent what became known as the Blood telegram, in which the signatories denounced American "complicity in Genocide"". This requires some unpacking - first, a concul would normally send his/her own telegrams, so the idea that it had multiple signatories seems strange. Second, I don't understand the relevance / meaning, in this particular sentence, of "Owing to the scale of the atrocities". Is this meant to explain the actions of Blood, or the fact that there were all the signatories... i just don't follow the argument here.
11928:—As Awardgive mentions above, I reviewed this article earlier in the year, and I've been asked me to look it over again. I believe the article is carefully written and does an exemplary job of writing in detail about an issue for which sources are limited due to reasons of era, and it has improved since my last read. That said, I do have a number of recommendations and questions which should be addressed before I think this is ready, and I should add that my FAC experience is relatively limited, so I'll ultimately defer to others on whether this one should pass. For the record, I hope it does!
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3187:? In that case, you are still left with the problem of not having explained why you are first citing that outside estimate that is so exorbitantly higher. Has that estimate some special authority that would justify us giving it pride of place? Why then have the authors of the other estimates ignored it? – As for the "lebensborn" thing, I'm not going to discuss that with you further, having experienced your inaccessibility to logical argument too many times. It's absurd and has to go, and the article will not be featured while it's there.
2117:; he states as much in his prose. Of course many other papers and books – including that by Scarboro and Luck, which you cite – discuss the religion of Wicca (from historical, anthropological, and sociological angles), but none discuss the word's etymology. In fact I think that the Scarboro and Luck article would be of very little use here, because it does not focus on the etymology or terminology, instead offering a sociological analysis of a Wiccan coven in Atlanta, Georgia. Interesting stuff, but not particularly pertinent here.
14293:"Whereas KFC management had previously allowed franchisees to serve any soft drink they wished, PepsiCo stated that it hoped it would be able to convince franchisees to stock Pepsi products". The sentence seeks to contrast two things, but they are actually the same: previous management had "allowed" franchisees to serve anything, while Pepsi said "it hoped it would be able to convince franchisees" to do something - implying that it remained a choice - they weren't changing the franchise contracts. So why "whereas"?
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for various types of hollow metal tube also being 'waveguide') and that this article will only deal with filters of one type. I think a better approach would be to start with a very general definition of a waveguide filter that is always true, then mention the caveat and say that the rest of this article will only deal with the case of filters in hollow metal tubes. I think the best approach would be to rename this article or make this article cover other types as well (eg
Coplanar waveguide filters).
13461:- if all someone saw was the infbox (as can happen on some smart phones), it would not tell them this article is about a Disney character (as opposed to the fairy tale or even the version in Shrek films), and it makes it appear that the general character of Rapunzel first appeared in the world in 2010, sprung full-formed from the mind of Glen Keane. For an example of an FA infobox that does a much better job of making clear this is a character in a specific fictional universe, see
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Australian doctor felt while working with them, and nobody cares about what that doctor mistakenly thought the rapes in
Bangladesh were comparable with. The only reason to have this bit (and in a literal block quote, no less) is to gain the extra emotional power of having that comparison with the nazis; why would we throw that comparison at the reader when we are forced in the next moment to retract it and explain to them that these two things weren't comparable after all?
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to a burger - which one would hope was boneless! So it cannot be being rolled out for the first time at any rate. Third, the
Sanburn quote is classic 'nothing text': is describes the innovation as "modest" and then says it "may not" (and therefore by implication "may") be the latest in a long line blah blah. It is of no consequence and shouldn't be included. Then we have this concept store - a single store in a chain that has nearly 10000. See
2124:, a relatively influential journal in the British Pagan scene, albeit one that is not peer-reviewed or academic. Seims herself subsequently uploaded the article online so that it could gain a wider readership, but originally it did appear in print, and therefore fits with Knowledge's reliable source policy. If its of any relevance here, Doyle White actually quotes Seims's arguments in his academic paper, in order to support or critique them.
3572:. He has partly cleaned it up, but there are other incidences of the same error further in the article). This is a problem that goes well beyond the one I noted above, about chapter titles not being named properly, because in this instance authorial opinions have been explicitly misattributed. All ref entries involving collected volumes need to be checked thoroughly to make sure editorial and authorial roles are correctly documented.
8764:"His brother was in California the night Bruce died and yet Roderick knew from a dream exactly how it happened. The night of the drowning Roderick awoke screaming and rushed to tell his grandmother about his nightmare." Maybe "His brother, Roderick, was in California the night Bruce died, yet claimed to know from a dream exactly what had happened. Roderick awoke screaming and rushed to tell his grandmother about his nightmare."
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ref=harv parameter needs to be added for proper working of the style. I have illustrated a few examples in the article. However, for cite web templates, and in some other instances where author name is not available, there are some other methods of parameter. Please see an article that uses the style to understand that. Yes it does need some work, but the end result is aesthetically more soothing. Regards.--
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the whole article is for the
Bengalis. The lead can be brought on the lines of: "During the Bangladesh Liberation War of 1971, hundreds of thousands of women were raped by members of the Pakistani military and the militias supporting them and the Bengali militants." Both of the major communities of Biharis and Bengalis were equally affected." I hope my rationale is understood. Severe need of improvement.
15427:. This article was originally a draft in my user space months before it was announced and I have been contributing to it ever since. The roller coaster is very new so there are many sources available for the ride and most have been added. For only being open about 3 months, the article has just as much information that any other roller coaster article has. This is also my second FAC, my first being
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score). It would be 30 years until Navy came back to bowl games, while
Washington returned to the Rose Bowl in just two years. There are currently just 10 bowl games at featured article status, none of which are at least 15 years old. This article is on the short side compared to them, but since its been nearly 90 years since this occurred, info is pretty scarce. All comments appreciated.
5137:. The NYT article uses the term: Western. Southwest is an imperfect substitute; however, Western U.S. is already used in this same sentence. It would be redundant to state this same geographical reference again, so deleting from the Southwest seems like the best option. I've checked again and I don't see other issues, but point out anything you believe we may have missed. Thanks.
6259:", in 1893, Burnham took his family to southern Africa where his background proved useful" This is awkwardly worded and I don't think the last bit really adds anything (we say in the next paragraph he was useful). Perhaps make clear why he went. Maybe something like "Feeling the Old West was becoming too tame, Burnham took his family to southern Africa in 1893, perceiving
13483:; the lead is supposed to be a summary of the content of the article. My rule of thumb is to include each section / subsection in the lead in some way (even if it is just a sentence or phrase). The current lead does not mention the following sections (as far as I can see): Hair and technology, Walt Disney Parks and Resorts, Accolades and recognition (at least no awards).
2524:"After the conflict the victims went through a second ordeal: widespread sexual infections and feelings of intense shame and humiliation." Unnecessary use of a colon, simply "Many of the victims suffered from sexual infections and feelings of intense shame and humiliation, and a number were ostracised by their families and communities or committed suicide." will do.
13844:, nominators must consult with the principal contributors if they wish to nominate an article they have not edited. Nominators are expected to be intimately familiar with the article's content and sources, so that they can respond to queries and make any necessary improvements to the article; this is not possible if you have never edited the article and
4118:"Abul Kalam Azad was the first person to be sentenced for crimes during the war." Slightly confusing, since we have already been told of the first person to be indicted and also sentenced (I realise there is a difference) but also, we have no context as to why we are being told about Azad, since we know nothing of what the crimes, or the sentence, were.
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criticisms together -- namely the battery life, the arrangement of the buttons, the lack of battery or storage flexibility, and the camera software features. I would also talk about the bloatware in this particular paragraph. At the moment "Reception" is just a collection of reviews sourced from different publications without any seamless integration.
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document included within Chalk. The second citation is highly problematic. Bisvasa 2005 appears not to be a scholarly secondary source, but publication of primary documents from the
Mujibnagar Government for reference purposes. If I have understood that correctly, then it is not a sufficient source for the claim, because we need a high-quality
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a few more weeks in the spotlight. Compared with Walt
Mossberg's review, the one written by Pogue has got a lot of coverage. You need to cut a lot of the wording and synthesize the praise into several paragraphs, and maybe bring the criticisms under one. At the moment there is a lot of duplication. You could also get rid of the review scores.
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seesm incorrect. Moreover, it is not available online, so not able to cross-check. Either give actual details of teh full citation (such as, page number, actual authors), or replace that. Also, the bibliographic entry Mannan, Abdul (December 2009). "People in people's war". Daily Star. has not been used as a reference. So, it can be removed.
374:"On April 23, 2007, during a formal session of the Fairfax County Board of Supervisors, Juskalian was recognized for his heroism and honorable service to the United States" vs "The Fairfax County Board of Supervisors recognized Juskalian for his heroism and honorable service to the United States during a formal session on April 23, 2007"
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of software and sales, and could benefit from a third-party copy-edit, with a particular focus on "Reception", which I think could be synthesized to remove simply superfluous statements and duplication. For now my job here has come to an end. I would be happy to participate in a future FAC if this article is renominated. Regards, --
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from 25,000 to the
Bangladeshi government's figure of 70,000". These two statements are blatantly contradictory (the estimate cited in the previous sentence is almost three times higher than even the highest estimate cited in the next). These statements need to be put into proper context and related to each other, or be left out.
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present because, in the case of this book, Biśvāsa is assembling primary documents, not writing a scholarly analysis. Regarding the first claim, (Khan saying 'I will reduce this majority to a minority') can we get a second source supporting this (or alternatively, a source indicating that Khan does not dispute that he said it)?
13823:. I agree with Sasata in urging withdrawal. This is not referenced in a way that meets current FA expectations. The prose needs work throughout. And there's a further reading section that includes more sources than are even cited! This is a big, complex, core topic, and I would love to see it reach FA level. This isn't it.
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It is problematic to determine who did exactly what as nothing was published during the war. Fano & Lawson published the technical results of the work after the war, but I don't know if they throw any light on who did what either. I would be cool with removing the statement if you think it does not add to the article.
6110:"known for his service to the British Army in colonial Africa" He was initially in the service of the British South Africa Company, not the British Army. The two are not the same thing. My understanding is that he only actually joined the British Army in 1900, when Roberts took him on and gave him the formal rank of captain.
9215:; there are no red links but I see some terms that should have them, i.e. Northern Territories (BSA) Exploration Company, Wa Syndicate or Mlimo. Please consider adding more to encourage creation of new articles. 4) "Assassination of Mlimo" section mentions a sacred cave and a village, can we add their respective names? --
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Burnham and Harris
Hammond were included on the board, and Fred Burnham served as president. Roderick Burnham was by profession a geologist and an executive at Union Oil at the time the Burnham Exploration Company was incorporated; however, this relationship is probably too detailed and unnecessary for the lead.
6612:"Once the Sioux had been driven away the mother returned to find the house burned down. Her young son was safe, fast asleep in the basket and protected only by the corn husks." I think we can merge these two sentences; "... burned down, but her young son was safe, fast asleep in the basket with the corn husks."
2527:"The list included members of the Bangladesh Nationalist Party, a political group founded in 1978." Seems unusual for you to mention just one party, and one which formed 7 years after the ordeal. I'd feel more comfortable if you mentioned some of the other alleged perpetrators (groups) for neutrality purposes.
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1942, Juskalian boarded the RMS Queen Mary, and along with the other 15,000 soldiers of the 1st
Infantry Division, was shipped to Europe" where the source says "In August, the whole division — some 20,000 soldiers — boarded the Queen Mary and headed overseas." I agree that thorough checks are needed here.
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needed, for background, so the readers get an idea of what caused this. Your point on the number of pregnancies shows you know little of the subject matter, 25000 is the number of estimate war babies, which I shall now make clear. Given your personal dislike of me you should not even be commenting here.
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honestly say Keane "created" the character. Finally, the Brothers Grimm collected the fairy tales and edited them, but were not strictly speaking the authors of them (though they did make editorial changes and chose which version(s) to print). So perhaps this sentence would be better as something like
11005:- caption could be trimmed, especially for an infobox image: "Colonel Robert Madgwick as Director of Army Education, Melbourne, 1944" contains all necessary information (Toorak is not mentioned in the article, the exact day of year makes no difference for the image, Australia is clear from the intro).
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e.g., 1st para: "with Roane and Aguilera serviced as co-producers" (very unusual verb choice); "Following the release of Stripped in her next record" (unclear if Stripped was the album before ANOM); "The song was inspired by Aguilera's marriage with Jordan Bratman in 2005" (is "the song" the same as
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reliable sources". Inherent in that difference is evaluating the reputation of the publisher, not just the interview subject. You've used four videos on YouTube as sources, one of which produced by Cedar Point and three not. The reputation, quality and reliability of those other three creators are at
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First off, no one person does all the animation on a modern feature-length animated film. Second, since much of the character's story is taken from the fairy tale (long hair, held in a tower, falls in love with a man who climbs her hair into the tower, even being naïve), I am not sure the article can
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I am nominating this article for featured article status because, after spending several months proofreading, referencing and completing it, I now believe that it is of substantial quality. I strongly believe that it is the most sophisticated Disney-related fictional character article on Knowledge.
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is referring to, since the subject (Aguilera) is missing from the previous sentence. In that case I suggest you rephrase "On June 22, 2010, "You Lost Me" was announced to be released as the third single in the" to "On June 22, 2010, Aguilera announced that "You Lost Me" would be released as the third
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The sentence about how a Navy fleet was called to service the day before the game seems to me like it might work a bit better as a clause separated by semi-colon from the previous sentence. This would join the cause-and-effect that the two sentences produce, and would solve the small problem that the
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paragraph: "The band elected not to utilize the considerable marketing tools that a major label act has at their disposal early on." Says who? Not all bands signed to a major label have "considerable marketing tools" etc. This is more conjecture, and another thing which isn't supported by a citation.
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I am nominating this for featured article because after leaving the article alone for a few years, I had found the time to perform much needed suggested pruning and general cleaning up. Also, the article has just completed a copyedit from the guild. It's ready for the final march... the final funeral
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This article has not been adequately prepared for the FAC process. While the article has been expanded, the references cleaned up, and the prose improved, there exist several issues that I believe cannot be adequately addressed in a reasonable amount of time. The article still lacks coverage in terms
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article, I can identify several similarities between that particular article and this. It takes a lot of effort in researching about a topic like phones and following up by writing and polishing an article such as this one. I wish you all best in your effort to get this to FA -- let's hope this would
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A list of sources is useful to the reader, so I've added a new ref for Britt to the article even though it is a bit redundant. I've moved Montgomery to its alpha location, and I've spelled out the states. I've been through the hyphens several times, as have other editors, but I can't locate any new
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I presented this source "A consensus has formed among scholars that genocides in the 20th century encompassed (although were not limited to) the following cases: Herero in 1904–1907, the Armenian genocide in the Ottoman Empire in 1915–1923, the Holodomor in the former Soviet Ukraine in 1932–1933, the
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The paragraph that begins "Between the middle of May and September 1971,..." needs some work. It appears to me that most of this para is intended to present an argument, that there was a racist motive behind rape as a tactic of war. If so, the first sentence is irrelevant and should be deleted. Then,
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nominating for FAC. If you simply cannot come to some form of an agreement with the others over it then I don't think this ever has a chance of passing. The conditions need to be completely calm and amicable between editors over the article to pass FA. Sorry to see, as a I genuinely thought that this
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input, however irritating and you've been nothing but insulting in return. I'm just waiting for Ian or Graham to archive this as you've overstepped the mark with at least two editors now to continue with this. I strongly suggest you take a look at how you've reacted here and try to respect the input.
3490:. Currently she is not mentioned in the article at all. Now, it may very well be the case that her views are a minority position (and undoubtedly a highly unpopular one in many quarters), and it may well be the case that most of the reactions to them have been critical, but still, she appears to be a
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Overall structure of the prose: much of the presentation is repetitive and poorly structured, with statements being stacked onto each other seemingly more with a view towards maximising the rhetorical effect of the repeated accusatory statements than with a view to their precise logical relationships
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Hmm, couple of points. First, the text as it stands is heavily ungrammatical, including bits that are presumably literal quotes. I can't find the "classical a pose..." bit in either of the two cited sources, and there seems to be a closing quotation mark missing; can you check that again? Second, are
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I am nominating this for featured article because it gained its GA status back in May 2013 and has since gone through a peer review that ironed out any of the cracks. It's a comprehensive article on a relatively small topic, making use of all the academic studies on the subject, and I believe that it
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Don't really know the answer to that. My principle source for the history is Levy & Cohn and those are the names they mention in this connection (ie right in amongst the discussion of Rad Lab's development of microwave cavity filters). However, the only specific work mentioned is that of Bethe.
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After a cursory check I noticed this close paraphrasing: "constructed from British biscuit cans and their handles made from the wooden slats of their beds" vs. "fashioned out of British biscuit cans with handles created from their wooden bed slats". And this inconsistency with the source, " In August
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I fixed all issues mentioned above, with an exception to the last. I can't seem to have it reverted to the original graphic design which would free the photo from all 3D object issues. I uploaded a new graphic picture but it seems like it seems to go back to the 3D artwork. Quite strange. Can we have
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Suggest deleting the whole para that begins "In April 2013, KFC announced the roll out of boneless Original Recipe across all of its United States outlets". First, the article should not be a platform for every single product announcement from KFC. Second, the first reference to "Original Recipe" is
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Although I agree with you, I will wait until the actual review process begins to further discuss the "title"/"occupation" infobox issue. And no, Rapunzel is NOT German; she is from a fictional kingdom from Corona. I have removed it from the infobox several times. However, an anonymous user (as in
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A completely ignorant question, but is Rapunzel really depicted as "German" in the Disney franchise? Or is she merely a fantasy princess in a fairy-tale country? "Nationality" as infobox parameter looks strange here, it would be far more useful to note, that her "Origin" is Germany and the character
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I wouldn't relist this at the guild. If you want this to pass FAC, it will probably take too long for an interested editor to finish work, and you don't know if the copy-editing will be up to par. If you know a talented writer, I'd recommend asking them directly for copy-editing help. If no one else
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I think the reviews are quite lengthy. For example, "considered the HTC One to be a device that would "give HTC at least a few more weeks in the spotlight" in relation to the company's past success and recent struggles" is not significant, since any high-end phone like the One would give any company
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The completed sentence is: "Burnham distinguished himself in several battles in Rhodesia and South Africa and became Chief of Scouts". I don't see where this sentence limits the use of his Chief of Scouts title to the Boer War, but I do agree that becoming Chief of Scouts under Roberts was a bigger
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You have it right and I've updated accordingly. It gets a little more complicated because The Bulawayo Field Force militia reported to Gen. Carrington / Maj. Baden-Powell once the regular army arrived in Rhodesia in 1896, but technically Burnham was never in the British army until he joined Robert's
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Hello Ctatkinson. The problem with this review is that you address the specific examples I point out very promptly, but have not addressed the issues they exemplify. I can return time and again to give you more examples, but "The article has X problem as shown by Y instance" is not adequately solved
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The reviewer's opposed statement is now more than a month old. I have promptly addressed all of the actionable objections raised by the reviewer; however, this reviewer does not return regularly to check whether their objection has been addressed. Without clarifying and actionable feedback, I don't
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Further query re aftermath. It refers at one point to some figures "...before the state programme had even started". Re-reading the paragraph, i am not sure what the term "state programme" is referring to, as Davis's program appears to be international organisation, not Bangladeshi. Can you clarify?
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If 2010a is the first of the two in the reference list, then my reading of it suggests it is not strong enough to substantiate the text "...but human rights advocates are of the opinion that the mass rapes and killings of women may not be addressed". The article quotes only two lawyers, one hopeful,
3672:, this means that it should describe the rape committed on all communities. But I regret, the current form of the article blames "Pakistani military" everywhere. Or more simply, the article is only for "Rapes of Bengalis during the Bangladesh Liberation War". The rapes and atrocities on Biharis, the
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Bose id a joke, her book does not mention the rape victims so is of no use to us, I looked at one of the sources given on the talk page, Bose estimates a few thousand rapes in it. She also says there were only 30,000 Pakistani troops in theatre, it was 90,000, she is not just fringe, she is both way
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academic researcher on the issue, and in light of the amount of reactions she has elicited even in the non-academic media her views are certainly notable. I don't see that simply ignoring her or treating her as pseudo-academic "fringe" is in line with NPOV requirements. Somebody will have to take up
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It would be good if you could find a photograph from 1971 of women in captivity or soldiers. I'd accept the upload of a fair use image from 1971 to illustrate something important in the article and I think you could claim it for encyclopedic purposes. Obviously a photo of an actual rape if it exists
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I have a question - you've put a citation needed on the claim that HTTT is Radiohead's longest album. I'm never sure how to go about citing this sort of thing. I presume it isn't enough to just state it as a self-evident truth that readers can verify by comparing running times? Is there such a thing
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I'm afraid that this falls well short of the FA criteria. Substantial amounts of text are not referenced, and the article has a rather unfinished feel (for instance, the significance of the "Ten Commandments" section is unclear, the "Vote buying" section is amateurish and sexist and the "Protection
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In fact, throughout this section, every construction describing the number of yards in a play uses an en-dash, though it should be a hyphen. Note, of course, this does not apply to the score by the end of the half, which should be an en-dash as it currently is. Also, "23–yards" should not include a
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A short background: The 1924 Rose Bowl was the first time either of the participants, Washington and Navy, ever participated in a postseason game. It was a first for many things, including radio broadcasting. Washington was predicted to come out on top, but Navy led in nearly everything (except the
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This candidate has been here for a long time, but problems still remain and I will be archiving this in a few minutes. I see a mixture of dashes in the references, a template error with DeGroot, E. B. (July 1944), this odd looking citation Los Angeles Times 1900, p. I15 and inconsistencies in page
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branch or whomever. Second always capitalize Native American. "big N" Native is acceptable; sometimes "small n" native is viewed as condescending by some Native people today (no uniformity on this, but the ones who care are the ones who will comment, the ones who don't care won't get upset either
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Estimates of numbers of people raped should not be in "aftermath", they go to the core of the article's subject, and should be included there. The estimates should be discussed in a bit more detail, and notwithstanding the fact that Davis was 'on the ground', his particular views are given far more
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Ok, I have tried to go over the technical aspect of the citations, and corrected quite a lot. Most of them appear ok to me now. Exception: Hadden 1971 citation, which ideally should have connected to Hadden, Briton; Henry Robinson Luce (1971). "Time Volume 98". Time. However, that detailed citation
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Rising from the Ashes women's narratives of 1971 The first translation to English of the oral testimonies given by women who were not just abused, but women such as Taramon Bibi who fought in the war and was awarded the Bir Protik(Symbol of Valour)." Please rewrite this with appropriate punctuation
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I think it would have to be a copyright-free image uploaded to Commons. I don't think fair use comes into play unless we are using a copyrighted full illustrated book cover associated with a specific book, and such an image would normally only be used in an article about that book. Single words and
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I tend to agree with that, but articles of this sort have repeatedly been requested at peer review and FA that the history section be moved nearer the front. The thinking seems to be that the history is easier to understand and may be of more interest to the general reader than technical details.
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Article scope: I'm not really happy with how you've approached this, first of all you say that waveguides are hollow metal tubes but then later have to clarify this and say that actually the term is used more broadly (personally I regard the broader definition as being correct with the common term
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I don't think I have much further to add here. We're going to have to agree to disagree on the reliability or suitability of videos and let the delegates make that final determination. FAs have to use "high quality reliable sources", but personally, I can't support some of the sources used here as
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Perhaps you could merge the third paragraph under "Release delays" into the first ie "Sprint and AT&T (who had exclusive selling rights to the 64 GB version) released the One in the United States on April 19, 2013; Verizon Wireless was the last major US carrier to offer the One, having finally
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I've modified the sentence by removing Roderick, but to answer your question, John Hammond Sr. considered Fred Burnham to be a member of his family (he says as much in personal correspondence). Burnham Exploration Company was a joint venture between the Burnham and Hammond families, sons Roderick
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We have addressed the far more challenging issues you raised in the earlier FAR, and I think it would be most unfortunate to withdraw this outstanding former FA based on the few examples you have raised in this FAC. With little delay and only minor edits I speedily addressed the concerns you have
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Thanks for clarifying. The change you made however doesn't really help, and "abortion programme" sounds nightmarish - like a form of genocide. I suggest you revert those words to "state program", and split the second sentence of the para in two, to read: "In the year following the war, there was a
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need to be described too. The lead should also mention it, and the article needs serious fixing over neutrality issues. It seems a Nationalist encyclopedia's article here in Knowledge to me. There is only one section of "Mukti Bahini actions" attribued to atrocities on Biharis, whereas the rest of
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With chapters in edited volumes, you cite the chapter names, not just the chapter numbers. You should also provide the page numbers (the one in the inline harvard ref is just the page reference to the specific passage you're citing; in the bibliography you give the first and last page of the whole
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I see a comment from an editor up above who does not have an axe to grind saying the article is pretty damn good, and that quote was there when he looked it over. You do not get to decide that one quote stops an article from being FA. No other estimates are ignored, they are all there. I am citing
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Also in the "Aftermath" section, there is a statement saying "A doctor at the rehabilitation center in Dhaka reported 170,000 abortions of pregnancies caused by the rapes, and the births of 30,000 war babies". However, the very next paragraph says that "Estimates of the number of pregnancies range
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File:Woman_raped_and_killed_in_the_Bangladesh_Liberation_War.jpg: can we be more expansive with the "not replaceable" rationale? Any more details on original photographer or publication? What steps have been taken to attempt to identify the original photographer? Have to be really careful with the
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scholarly sources. I would be very happy if the article were able to include another academic source or two that support a large portion of the article. Of course, I expect that Doyle White's "The Meaning of "Wicca"" will stay (by far) the leading source for this article. As Midnightblueowl, there
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I am nominating this for featured article because it has great encyclopedic value and contains considerable amount of information on a famous Armenian-American soldier. The article is at GA status and also contains a picture which is now at FP. Last nomination did not go through because it was not
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I'm a little bothered that the non-free image of the track layout says the purpose of use is "To show what the GateKeeper roller coaster at Cedar Point will look like once it is completed for 2013" when it is no longer uncompleted. Since it has been completed, other pictures could be taken, which
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I have seen that video, but like the source above, it's about the reputation of the publisher. Do they have a history of accuracy in their publications? Are they known for providing editorial oversight of the items they publish? We're naturally quite skeptical of videos published on YouTube for a
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Just as publication locations are normally listed for newspapers that omit their location in the title, we normally would list the publication location for a TV station. Please add the missing locations, which allows others to help judge the reliability of the sources. (The location for a student
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Sorry, Simon, but this article needs work from top to bottom. English is indeed a difficult language, but nothing's unachievable. I have highlighted some examples from the lede, but there are issues elsewhere, like "Prior to the release two days, a sneak peek of the music video was revealed," and
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Thank you for your excellent input, Piotrus. I've now addressed items 2 & 3. For item 4, although none of my sources provide names for the sacred cave or the nearby village, I did come across some additional information on the location -- not many miles from the Mangwe district. I've added
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I have a couple of issues with the first para under that heading, regarding Tikka Khan. My view is that exceptional claims require exceptional sources, and we don't have this at present. The Chalk source for the first sentence is OK, provided that the WP article is not relying on a primary source
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As has yours, I mentioned above the issues between FPaS and myself, you said what about that exactly? So archive it and be done, so long as that guy is allowed to stalk and harass me then this article will never get to FA anyway, he will not have that cos he detests me, so ya, you have given them
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There's a lot of POV and conjecture in this article - original research technically. For example, one sentence says "Instead, they opted to use quiet web updates on their website while they worked on the record." Where does the source itself say Manson used "quiet" updates? Another from the same
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Since lot of the reviews praise the industrial design, display and camera features (Zoe), I would merge them in one paragraph. In another paragraph I would talk about the quality of the speakers, the benchmark tests, and one or two other praise-worthy features. In the third I would bring all the
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lived in southern Minnesota; however, I'm not sure if it is correct to say that either or both of these tribes are Sioux. Unfortunately, I don't yet know the exact location of Tivoli, Minnesota (a pioneer town, long gone), the 1860 reservation boundaries, or modern the tribal names adequately to
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I am nominating this well-researched article for FA. After considerable labor by Wikipedians over several months to address earlier issues, this former featured article was promoted to GA last month. After reviewing and incorporating recommended changes, I believe the article now satisfies the
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that Khan said something. But we cannot rely on them for that claim as they are neither neutral, nor a historian assessing the validity of the claim. We need a scholarly assessment by a neutral source that, having weighed up the evidence, accepts that Khan said this thing. We do not have that at
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I further edited a proposed revision, to reduce the emphasis on the Pakistani government figure (as it is not an independent source and lies so far outside other estimates. I also reorganised the paras to cluster together all the quantitative data, which strengthens the case for the 200K to 400K
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Question about your last point (regarding the last paragraph of Promotion and release): it seems to me that Com Lag, the b-sides collection, should at least be mentioned. Are you saying because there's nothing more to really expand on, other than to say it exists, it should be deleted? 08:53, 25
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References are occasionally incomplete and/or inconsistently formatted. There's a bare URL and I also see "NME, 3 May 2003, p.27." and "Q Magazine, June 2003" (author and article names?). I also see author's inconsistently listed as "Chuck Klosterman" and "Edwards, Gavin". I recommend a thorough
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I understand being skeptical of items published on YouTube but this is an interview with Rob Decker. The information is coming straight from him. If you have an issue with that particular video, we can remove it because he says the same thing in another video that is used in the article. As for
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As a side note, I'm not in favor of listing PR Newsire as a publisher, since they're republishing press releases, not initiating publication. Press releases are truly self-published sources, so unless there is a specific person or department of the organization to attribute authorship, author =
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in those cases, yet you're attributing them as if they were involved in creating the content. I don't advise that people list Google Books when using convenience links to books hosted on that website; in this case, these are convenience links to a website hosting content originally published by
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There are reference issues too, such as inconsistencies on how publishers are notated (parentheses vs no parentheses) for newspapers and magazines. Sorry, Simon/HD, but this needs a lot of cleaning up and polishing until it is ready. I know you've worked hard, but keep at it. You can get there.
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The Mason's are a club and I've seen his 32-degree certificate in the archives at Yale, but I didn't make a copy and I don't have the date it was issued. Each mason is joins and is promoted at a particular lodge; however, his lodge is probably not important to the article, so I've removed this
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Not sure what you are responding to with this comment. Assuming it is my comment in the last group - i am not trying to open up a debate about whether or not this was genocide, I am simply saying that, when a WP article says something is "widely viewed" as having a certain nature (in this case,
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Do you have a long history of disagreements with these editors? It is a very sensitive topic, and it doesn't surprise me it is disputed on here but if there are valid concerns with neutrality and prose then they need to be addressed respectfully.. And I haven't done anything Darkness, if Ian or
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Nope, the background is necessary to give readers a full understanding of what led up to this, and this has been discussed before and FPaS was wrong then just as he is wrong now, we cannot expect people to have to go read another article to try and figure out what happened when they are halfway
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Regarding background, then do you suggest to remove (or, maybe summarize in two sentences) the initial two paragraphs? And essentially start from December 1970? I had a feeling that background is probably long, but was not sure where to start really. I would suggest Darkness Shines to hear what
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The quote box that begins "Burnham is the sufficient and heroic figure, model and living example, who inspired and gave..." is "sandwiching" text between it and the topographic map on my browser. That's also a wiki-MOS "crime" you now need to fix. Maybe you don't need two quote boxes in that
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I am getting rather tired of your vendetta against me. I have restored the quote you removed, as it is very relevant to the article, what your personal beliefs on what the author knew is irrelevant, he most likely meant it in manner of the common belief of Lebensborn. The background section is
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Yes I have talked to members of the A1 Class review. They provided positive feedback. Only one user had a concerns of reliability with a source (#8 and #15) which I personally believe is not an issue. The source is paraphrased in accordance to first hand accounts of Juskalian and can easily be
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New issue introduced: I wouldn't link the locations in the footnotes. Judicious linking in footnotes steers readers to two things: the source itself (or an online convenience copy) or a wikipedia article to allow them to judge the credibility of the source. Linking to the name of a publisher,
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deal than the use of this title in the Matabele Wars -- the Boer War was Burnham's first regular army gig and the number of troops and planning involved was significantly greater. I'm open to further ideas, but to try and keep this simple for the reader I've left this sentence "as is" for now.
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Hehe. Fancy comment by Faizan. Give me a break! Yes, of course for the sake of neutrality, rapes committed by Mukti Bahini need to be mentioned, and those are mentioned, both in the lead and the body of the article. Indeed I was surprised to see the mention in the lead, because the atrocities
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Not worth it. It would be a sensible solution if the quotation was otherwise of some encyclopedic value, but it isn't. Such a discussion would only unnecessarily divert the reader's attention away from the main point, which is that people were raped in Bangladesh. Nobody cares about what some
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there is currently a technical problem. Wen you converted refs to use sfn style, the conversion was incorrectly done. First, you don't need to mention page numbers within the complete bibliography, since you are indicating page numbers in individual citations. Second, for cite book templates,
5488:: If you see continued problems, please keep listing the specific examples so they can be fixed. Either you'll run out of them and the article will be good, or they will remain not fixed and will be a valid reason to oppose. Just talking about generalities is not very helpful, I am afraid. --
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I think the second claim will have to be removed. I probably did not explain myself very well. The issue is not Biśvāsa himself. The issue is that the book is a compilation of primary source documents from the post-independence government, which was (understandably) hostile to Pakistan. That
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The other thing is, why are we discussing this image here? Right now, the text still seems a bit as if tacked on to the article as an afterthought – more like the text being there in order to deliver a pretext for showing the image, than the image being there in order to illustrate the text.
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For good or for ill, KFC is a global icon and thus is a worthy and interesting topic for Knowledge. I am nominating this for featured article because I believe I have addressed all complaints from previous nominations and that the article is now ready or very near to promotion to FA status.
11581:- I was excited to review this one because we haven't had a good bowl game article come through here in a while, and I have fond memories of reading strong articles in this category in my early days as an FAC reviewer. Unfortunately, I found too many problems early in the article to ignore.
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Basic question: what is this article about, botany or plants? After the History section, the article goes on extensively about plants—their importance, their internal chemistry, their genetics, how they interact with the environment and how they are classified. But all this belongs to the
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the footnotes/bibliography have duplications with the "Works/Biographies" sections. The layout is also a bit atypical. My recommendation is that the works actually WRITTEN by Burnham be moved above the references into the article text and specifically identified as such. All remaining
5233:. Furthermore, this was only an example of neutrality/tone issues - others, if it would help, include "he struck it rich" and "it was said that he could read the face of nature as easily as most could read their morning newspaper" (the latter could be made a direct quote if applicable).
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For the rewording of the Ultrapixel sensor: there's a big difference here - the rewording makes the sentence inaccurate as it implies that the sensors are 1.4 to 1.0 µm, when it's the pixels that are that size. And "the One's competition" is unnecessarily vague and an awkward choice of
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I guess I don't understand why it matters who creates the videos. How can a video of something happening or a higher executive saying something not be reliable? It happened or it didn't. He said it or he didn't. I don't get why it matters who posted it. The information is there, it is
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Since Drik is a commercial agency, this unfortunately puts it in the same class as images owned by other commercial agencies such as Reuters or AP: unuseable unless the image is itself the object (not just a vehicle) of encyclopedic coverage; otherwise subject to speedy deletion under
1593:"a years-long process of recording and editing drummer Phil Selway described as 'manufacturing music in the studio' " Funky wording here. Perhaps insert "which" after "editing", or change "drummer Phil Selway described" to "described by drummer Phil Selway", unless I'm misreading this.
1125:'The first use of these in a filter was by S. B. Cohn in 1965 using titanium dioxide as the dielectric material' - citation for this? There was widespread use dielectrics in coaxial cables and capacitors before this so it doesn't seem much of a stretch to put dielectric in a waveguide.
9664:"high-end Android smartphone produced by the Taiwanese company" Please define "produce". My understanding is that HTC, like Apple (through Foxconn), outsources the main manufacturing job to another company. If HTC is the designer and manufacturer of the One, please say so in the lead.
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True, but it is significant to the history. Waveguide filters started off as, and still frequently are, direct equivalents of lumped-element designs. It is unlikely that waveguide filter history would have taken the path it did without the precursor of lumped-element filter design.
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e.g., last para: are these really cover versions if they were just on TV?; "of the eight season British" ('eight-season' or 'eighth season of the'?); "chose the song to perform at the show" (the song performed?); "making three coaches turn their chairs" (what did that indicate?).
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on this one. Sources generally refer to hollow-metal waveguide simply as waveguide. It is the common name, ergo that should be the title of the article. It would usually only be specified to be "hollow-metal" where disambiguation is needed. Knowledge can do the same and create
266:). So I decided to bring it directly to FAC. I can expand on the lede a little bit. I agree, the second paragraph needs expansion. The sections I personally believe are suffice since he didn't spend much time in some of those places. I can always combine them with other sections.
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Not done. Further examples include: no citations to Britt; References section is misordered (it's mostly alphabetical, but then I see Montgomery before Hough?); inconsistent in whether states are spelled out or abbreviated; some hyphens rather than endashes in page ranges; etc.
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In this article, PointBuzz doesn't really cite any content. Most of the PB footnotes are used to cite posters or pictures. Also, one of them is a Press Release. That is not written by PointBuzz, it is released by Cedar Fair/Cedar Point. PointBuzz is just the one that published
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and recommend withdrawal. This has not been adequately prepared. There are basic grammatical issues in the lead, and it appears that there is at least one other major contributor to the article that has not been consulted. That editor should possibly be a co-nominator as well.
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Reference formalities: chapter titles in edited collections are frequently missing, e.g. in Mohsin 2005, Khondker 2006 etc. If you are going to cite an individually authored chapter in a collection, then the title of the chapter needs to be cited together with the name of the
10611:: It's not altogether the nominator's fault that he/she was misled by a premature GA grading into thinking this article was worthy of FAC nomination, but it's a terrible advert for the GA process. The article is a candidate for a swift GAR, but is seriously misplaced here.
4092:"...by John Tulloch to be as "classical a pose as any Madonna and Child, however the image is that of a woman, it is not possible to determine age who had been raped repeatedly" Something wrong here - there is no close quotation mark and it does not appear to be a sentence.
3644:, but there are certainly more.) Another (harmless but cosmetic) issue: capitalization in titles is not consistent yet. Use either title casing or normal text casing throughout (or, for a fancy option, use title casing for book titles and normal text casing for chapters).
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I am nominating this for featured article because the article is about one of the most important branch of mathematics. The article is complete, having good exemplary pictures, complete history of its development and the mathematical derivations on its major components.
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Not offended in the least, so don't worry about that. If you had limited your observations to fictional characters in the first place, I wouldn't have felt the need to comment. Anyway, on with the FAC and good luck. I'll hat this to avoid disturbing the FAC further.
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Well, you were obviously offended by my previous comment which, by the way, was not my intention. What I meant to say was that I have yet to come across a well-written FICTIONAL CHARACTER article that does not use a FICTIONAL CHARACTER infobox. Please note that there
8860:"Howard went to Africa and became a mining engineer in the gold mines of Johannesburg, South Africa and later wrote a text book on Modern Mine Valuation." → "Howard moved to Africa, became a mining engineer in the Johannesburg gold mines, and later wrote a text book on
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Now, another big task. The bibliographic entries should be sorted alphabetically. For determining alphabetic order, consider first author's (last) name. If no author present, you can use the title of the work (title of the book, or title of news report) for alphabetic
3033:" programme. The author of the quote clearly had no idea what the Lebensborn actually was. I'm irritated to find that the main author of the article recently clandestinely reintroduced this passage, after agreeing during a discussion last year that it was misleading
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Another FA criterion is that the article be complete - could a comparison between the Grimm fairy tale version of the character and this one be made? The fair tale character becomes pregnant by her suitor, her hair is not magical, but she does have magical healing
13137:: This is a nice article but the infobox—with its "Species: Human | Gender: Female | Title: Princess etc"—is, frankly, extremely silly. Those sections are better off for an animal's or an officeholder's infobox, not a cartoon character's. It also provides an overly
3029:, for two reasons: first, it is quite off-topic, talking about some author's personal feelings in dealing with the atrocities. Secondly, it quite unnecessarily diverts attention from the main topic through a rather misleading and confusing comparison with the Nazi "
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I'd like to see the lede bulked out a little more; it's a bit light. His military service is quite extensive and probably needs a better summary in the lead, WP:MOS wants a lead to not be too long, but I think three to four more solid paragraphs is easily doable
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cited to reliable sources, which this is not. If you are able to address the shortfalls, pls consider taking it to Peer Review before returning to FAC. In any case, per FAC instructions, pls do not nominate this or any article here for at least two weeks. Cheers,
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is relegated to the See also) what are the different approaches to studying it (for eg social sciences have a structuralist approach and a Marxist approach etc)? Are there any ongoing debates? What are the major prizes awarded for stellar work in botany? And so
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others. (And that re-publishing may or may not be a copyright violation.) If you are citing posters, cite the poster, not the website. For the others, you still have the issue of whether or not Point Buzz meets our requirements for sourcing at the FA level.
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The "team named desire" nickname should be explained somewhere, preferably in the body of the article. I just looked down there and saw nothing indicating why Navy was called that. I can imagine non-college football fans feeling completely lost right about
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I've withdrawn my suggestion for withdrawal, but I'm still finding more issues with this article. I haven't rechecked paraphrasing issues, but while reviewing I also found some prose issues, for example "always careful to keep a rifle within arms length".
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Your issues were addressed previously, the consensus is that the atrocities carried out by Pakistan and the militias far outweigh the revenge attacks, the weight was given accordingly. If you wish to suggest an addition please use the article talk page.
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About the same citation: I can't check the source online, but did the Dhaka doctor really "report" these figures, or did he just estimate? "Reporting" entails that he had the means of accurately counting based on direct observation. This would be quite
8511:"an old friend from Africa"; while most would realise what you are actually saying, some could misunderstand and think Hammond was actually from SA/Rhodesia, which of course he wasn't. maybe reword to "an old friend from his time in Africa", or similar
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4238:"Pakistani General Amir Abdullah Khan Niazi claimed that thousands of men and women had been killed or raped in Chittagong". Only use of the word "claim/ed" in the article - can you explain why this is the only place it is appropriate that it be used?
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of time and effort into this article. I got it up to Good status, and even after a peer review where literally nothing happened, a few more editors joined in to make further improvements to the article. But now, I think we're ready for the big time.
12381:, and urge withdrawal. Referencing is really not adequate, including the presence of tags in several places. The lead isn't an adequate summary of the article, and the several citations and large quote included there aren't really in the spirit of
9211:. 1) "Film and stage accounts" and "Tributes" are in an unnecessary and MoS-unrecommended bullet point list. Please rewrite to prose. 2) Add Queen's South Africa Medal and British South Africa Company Medal to infobox. 3) The article should respect
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I included it because it always comes up in discussion of the album's criticisms, particularly from the band and Godrich - "it's too long", "not enough editing" etc. With that in mind, it might make sense to move it to that area, or just delete it.
5646:: First off, when possible to use tribal affiliation, that is nearly always preferable to just saying "Indian" or "Native American." In the examples above, if "Sioux" is as good as you have, then use it, even if you can't narrow it down to the
3222:, that is); it also, by failing to correct or hedge this presupposition, carries the implication that it is indeed true. This is historically misleading – and quite unnecessarily so, because the whole comparison is extraneous to the topic anyway.
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6744:"He traveled in northern Mexico and the American Southwest, including Texas and Oklahoma Territory, earning a living as a buffalo hunter, cowboy, and prospector, and he continued working as a scout" Maybe "He traveled in northern Mexico and the
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Yes, but it would have to be sourced discussion of the image itself, i.e. as a notable photographic work (the history of how it was taken, its aesthetics, its impact on public opinion etc.), not just a discussion of the things the image shows.
1614:: This paragraph is very short, and discusses two ideas which are completely unrelated to one another, and neither is fully developed. If these snippets can't be expanded upon, I believe they should be deleted. Catch-all paragraphs are no good.
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I would suggest finding a picture of the most recent store design. I swapped out the KFC/Taco Bell pic for one showing the most modern store design, but if you can find a pic of a recent-build standalone KFC to complement it, that'd be nice.
4248:"Sheikh Mujibur Rahman called the victims birangona ("heroine"), but this only underscored the fact..." The expression "this only underscored the fact" in this context appears to me unencyclopedic and designed to emphasise the view expressed.
7622:"Returning from the Boer War on the RMS Dunottar Castle, July 1900." Dunottar Castle should be italicised. The image caption here is intrusive and large; if you like I can try to make something similar to what we have on the directors image
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I don't think the article is ready for the star. It failed to make it to GA status, and the PR I don't think has yielded much fruits. I suggest you ask somebody else, if you haven't already, to have a look at the article; I would recommend
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Also, there is a vast inconsistency between listing TV stations as "WKYC", but "WWJ-TV". Either they all are listed with the "-TV", or other appropriate, suffix, or they aren't. Honestly, they should have the appropriate suffix applied.
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Leaving aside the sourcing issues, both sentences need to specify who is claiming that Khan said these things. First sentence: "He reportedly said... " (ie. who reported?). Second sentence: "Khan is also reported to..." (ie. reported by
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the 25,000–70,000 estimate was only the estimate of births (comparable to the doctor's figure of 50,000, which would be within a logical range), but then you changed it again claiming it was "other estimates" of the total of pregnancies
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song, the Music section is too long and stubby-looking. Also when you have a lyrics section, what is the point of discussing it again? I suggest scrapping the songwise sectioning, and moving the best info to augment the music and lyrics
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At the moment I am slightly leaning towards oppose, as I think the article has got several more issues. I would like to hear a few comments from one or two other un-involved reviewers, and see my points addressed, before I can shift my
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and some instances of close paraphrasing (ex "His expeditions in Rhodesia were so important that the Royal Geographical Society elected him a Fellow" vs "His expedition was so important that the Royal Geographic Society elected him a
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as a periodical title, and had assumed incorrectly about that material's origins. I don't suppose there's any chance of a page number there, either? I do still have some questions about that Fields source, though. For starters, what
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in layout. I am not inclined to change it now that a format has been established by precedent - if I did it will end up being changed back and forth on every reviewers whim. If the community establishes a preferred layout, through a
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Again your thoughts on what the doctor thoughts being mistaken have no place here, it is obvious he meant it in the common perception of the word. I am happy removing the block quote and paraphrasing it if that would suit you better?
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It's clear you've worked hard on this article, but there are errors—both minor and major. As you wrote on the article talkpage, you should get a fresh pair of eyes to look at the article (at peer review or the league of copyeditors):
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Uhh, don't sort stuff when you're in a state of insomnia. That list was still a complete mess. I fixed it some now, but I don't guarantee it's completely correct yet. Also, please don't forget those chapter titles I mentioned below.
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I have removed the species, gender and title from the infobox. However, I must disagree with your idea to remove the infobox completely because I have yet to come across a well-written (FA, GA or B-class) article that does not use
12609:"It was successful on the Hot Dance Club Play chart, where it reached number one."—why not just get to the point and say "It reached number one on the Hot Dance Club Play chart". From that, we can infer that it was successful there.
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Just some very quick comments: lede is awfully short for an article of this length, paragraphs are somewhat choppy (many are quite short too, as are sections). May need some extensive polishing. Have you tried the MilHist project's
4064:"Estimates of those raped vary from 200,000 to 400,000" - except that later, the article states that the 1974 commission supplementary report estimated "hundreds" - which should presumably therefore form the lower end of the range?
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While it is clear that a lot of work has been put into this article, I am leaning to a reluctant oppose as it does not meet the FA criteria and it seems as if too much work may be required to get it to FA standards while at FAC.
11680:"For his performance in the game, Navy quarterback Ira McKee was named the game's most valuable player." The double use of "game" is a prose redundancy, and I can't see any need to have two of them. It should be easy to chop one.
8573:"Burnham died when he was 86 on September 1, 1947 of heart failure at his home in Santa Barbara, California." maybe "Burnham died of heart failure at the age of 86, on September 1, 1947 at his home in Santa, Barbara, California."
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I am nominating this for featured article because this article covers the criteria for FA and a good article.The person is also one of the most influential personality in cricket history.I have also contributed significantly to
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Other material is not supported by the cited source. For example, "Burnham and Armstrong waited until Mlimo entered the cave and started his dance of immunity, at which point Burnham shot Mlimo just below the heart" is cited to
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Someone ran a bot on the article a couple of days ago and I see it introduced a few small errors in the references. Carr was one of those, and I've just fixed it. I'll have this corrected this weekend. Thanks for letting me
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Not sure the year is needed in "The auction ended on May 6, 2013." Based on the previous sentence, it's obvious to the reader that the auction had to end in 2013. I feel the same way about the year of the media day in the next
9990:"While most high-end smartphones used 8- or 13-megapixel cameras at the time of the One's release, the size of the pixels in their sensors have ranged from 1.4 to 1.0 µm, both of which are considerably smaller in size." --: -->
7207:"he left within the hour" Why not "he left immediately" or "he left within minutes"? Also, why "Although"? Considering the vast distance involved and the urgency of the appointment, one would surely expect him to leave quickly.
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scholarship. As such it contains much historically erroneous information. Placing it in "Further reading" might imply that it is a good source for readers to gain further, accurate information, but quite simply it isn't. Best,
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How does one go about getting permission? If I mail them to ask if they would be OK with a single usage for this article and they retain copyright, is there someone on Wiki they need to mail? Or a special form they need fill?
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works/biographies not used in the footnotes/bibliography should be consolidated into (in my opinion) a "further reading" section, though if you wish to break out the biographies from the scholarly papers, that would be fine.
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all estimates per NPOV, which kinda says we have to. Why not go and pick on someone else and leave this for uninvolved editors to review. And if you will not discuss the quote you can remove the pointy tag you added, cheers.
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react this way to any criticism of the article. "Get real, this was discussed before, and there is noway in hell" far exceeds the expected manner of candidates here. It's one of the main doctrines of FAC that you respect
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one who does not use an account) insists on re-adding it to the infobox despite the fact that I have explained to him/her why the information is incorrect several times. I will remove the information once again.--
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Get real, this was discussed before, and there is noway in hell that both communities were "equally affected" That is so wrong it actually defies belief. The MB atrocities are mentioned in the lede per due weight.
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Thank you for all of your review work and improvements. I need to take another look at the article tomorrow and see what I can do to work about a few small issues that we have introduced with these recent edits.
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The man's name is wikilinked to an article on an unrelated person. And, while we now have text on what his crimes were, which is good, we don't have text on who he was. A commander? A regular soldier? A general?
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I am nominating this for featured article because the article has greatly improved over the past few months.This article also passes all the criteria for FA.Also Sunil is one of the best footballer of India
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I have done some restructuring to attempt to group all text that related to description of actual events under the "Pakistani Army actions" heading, including the key line about estimates of number of rapes.
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History: "The memo also said the new coaster will have a 'Front Gate Statement'". Since the construction of the roller coaster is no longer a future event as "will" implies, that should be "would" instead.
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It is when putting anything like that in wartime radars would cause them to catch fire! The citation is in Nalwa, cited at the end of the paragraph. He references Cohn at
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John, many thanks for the detailed and helpful comments and the generous investment of your time in reviewing this article. I'll get to work on your questions right away.
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One of the quote boxes overlaps the article text on my computer. I noted the location in hidden text within the article. It's the only one that does this, not sure why.
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a new first sentence should state this argument in general, then allowing the following material to lay out the evidence and the points made by those who put this argument.
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article (I wouldn't consider a handwritten date on a newspaper clipping the pinnacle of reliability), but so long as others are willing to accept that these satisfy
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The paragraph about his grandson Russell is cited. I'll check the article elsewhere to see if I can uncover what you mean, or please provide more detail if you can.
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Personally I'd be a little hesitant about putting that particular book in "Further reading"; the work is by a Wiccan practitioner rather than an academic active in
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I guess I'll assume you didn't watch the video. The information that is cited in the video came directly from Rob Decker, the park's VP of Planning & Design.--
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Fine, but I think none of the in-universe stuff (i.e. under the "Information" header) should be here. It overemphasises fictional aspects, which is discouraged by
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Please fill out all your references. There are numerous references that are missing the author names and the dates of publication. Please stick to one date format.
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I am certainly open to the replacement of the image in question, however I am unsure as to whether images of text would be deemed fair use under Knowledge policy.
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Footnote 24: this appears to be to be photos from a roller coaster fan posted online, which doesn't support the information in the article about the arrival date.
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Agree with Indopug. The article covers aspects of botany and plants in depth while failing to give the reader the least idea of what the science of botany is. --(
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number of reasons as well. As for PointBuzz, it's not quite enough to state they're quoted in other media; an assertion like that comes with a tag for me.
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Thank you, but there are still inconsistencies: for example, whether page ranges are abbreviated, some missing info (ex date for Carr in Bibliography), etc
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I didn't give anybody what they want. If editors are concerned about neutrality I'd take that very seriously. Your behaviour here has really let you down.♦
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I have tracked down who took the photo, it was Naib Uddin Ahmed. He died December 14 2009. I am now trying to find out who now has the copyright ownership.
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Sorry about the delay, but I read through your changes and compared with the live article, and all of my concerns are now addressed. Great work. I would
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In restrospect, there are too many issues that would need to be addressed for me to even re-consider my stance. (edit) As the primary contributor of the
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Footnote 12: the publisher is linked here, but it's not the first mention of that publisher. If it's going to be linked, it should on the first mention.
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Get the article fixed, especially for neutrality. It needs restructuring. Issues cited by me stand unaddressed. Or I can aid with edits on the article.
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Then in that case, you have a bigger problem. I had looked at the first footnote to them that was an article published on their site. The posters, etc
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I've added brief reference to this in his early life. I could add more depth, but Geronimo was not a particularly significant part of Burnham's life.
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I'd just like to say thanks for the comments so far. They've been really helpful, and I really appreciate you going through an article of this size!
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Others may disagree, but the "title" parameter, or maybe better the "occupation" parameter, is useful here to summarize the character's general role.
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6139:"Born on an Indian reservation in Minnesota, Burnham learned the ways of Native Americans as a boy" They were Sioux, weren't they? Why not say so?
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I was yes, I have copyedited it and added the academic consensus to the article. I have also gotten to a few of the other points you have raised.
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I am nominating this for featured article because... I feel it meets all the criteria to be a Featured Article. It has received a copy edit from
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We mention the BSA, but we don't make clear what this is. (This is particularly confusing because to some eyes "BSA" is more associated with the
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Thank you for your comments, I will get on all of that ASAP, but RE the genocide, this was resolved a while ago at a RM on the genocide article,
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I stuck some hidden text into the article where I found some issues or had specific questions. Feel free to remove when fixed or addressed.
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Jewish Holocaust in 1938–1945, Bangladesh in 1971, Cambodia in 1975–1979, East Timor in 1975–1999, Bosnia in 1991–1995, and Rwanda in 1994."
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I have used a different cite template for the posters. What if we used Cite Interview for the videos with Rob Decker then didn't link it?--
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wrong and fringe. Her "work" has no place in an article on Knowledge. She has got to be the most minority view of minority views anywhere.
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I was working here on the principle that the lede should, in as far as possible, be understandable by an anyone and not be too technical.
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is met right now. I do hope that these issues are fixed and that the rest of the article is worked on because I'd like to see it succeed.
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when it was reviewed and promoted for GA. Due to the popularity of the player (I suppose) the article quickly unraveled. Needs a rewrite.
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That it with this section for now. I'll keep working on your comments about the other sections later today. Thanks again for your help.
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I haven't forgotten about this, don't worry, I will get back to it either later today or tomorrow. Well done on all the replies above!
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11375:. This goes for the sources that credit the Associated Press (footnotes 13, 15 & 19). Also, footnote 10 should include a location.
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Footnote 1: normal practice is that for newspapers that don't include their locations in their titles that the location is provided.
11270:. It was listed as a good article back in February, and I have been working on it since. This is the first step in my attempt to get
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There you have, but that was only an example - the paragraph about Russell, for example, is still unsourced. Please check thoroughly.
4018:"The methodical planning behind the genocide drew comparisons with the Nazi Holocaust" - plural "comparisons", but only one citation.
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is how he describes Burnham. The term is synonymous with mercenary. Does this now make sense, or can you clarify your concern?
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I am not going to comment on everything else in detail, but I do have some other pretty major concerns. FAs have to follow the
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Thank you for your helpful review, Montanabw. I have worked on the issues you raised and I believe all are now done.
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Thank you for your insights, Coemgenus. I have worked on the issues you raised and I believe they are now addressed.
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is heavily discouraged unless the subject is not present. "Aguilera described the song as "the heart of the album"."
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I'd ask User:Jmabel if you could claim use of a fair use image. I think either image would really improve this.♦
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is also the name of a publication that is published by Bonnier Corporation. Please audit and correct these.
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Why is the wikilink to "Cape Town, South Africa" rather than just Cape Town? People know where Cape Town is.
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A lot of places throughout the article we use abbreviations ("Gen.", "Maj.", "Co."); try to get rid of these
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Work on cleaning up the deadlinks, the WayBack machine can sometimes unearth an archived version of a page.
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I've added the wikilinks in this section. The lead already has a wikilink from DSO (after Burnham's name).
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OK, I can do that tomorrow, I am off to bed it a little bit. And thank you BTW, you are teaching me a lot.
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I've addressed all of the issues noted above. If you have still have any concerns, let me know. Thanks.
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Hi, Here are my thoughts on the article. I enjoyed reading it and hope the comments below help.
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Way cool! It is much better than the long caption I had to include previously. Nicely done.
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Statistical summary: One word too many in "but missed the his only field goal attempt."
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I believe I have now addressed the issues you raised. Thanks again for your help.
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Bad oversight. His full name and wikilink are in the lead, but should be here too.
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I tried to give a short explanation of the nickname down in the aftermath section.
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I'll take a look at this later but can you separate notes from the citations like
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Shit man, I spent about three hours faffing about with that ( Will go fix it now.
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Do you think we can fix the weird parentheses issue on the "buried at" parameter?
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If there are long-standing issues with the article they really need to be sorted
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Combining would be better, particularly to keep the TOC a bit more manageable. —
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verified with other sources. All other people were willing to pass it, including
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calls into question whether the image is replaceable according to the rationale.
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Why did KFC initially only open locations in England and not the rest of the UK?
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a huge amount of content copied wholesale from other websites by the nominator,—
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7974:"and he called him a "wonderfully able scout"" Who called who? Make this clearer
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Charterhouse should have a wikilink. It is also not in London but in Surrey (it
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Why don't we give Carrington's full name? Why don't we wikilink him in the body?
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Native American issues fixed. I believe all the issues have now been addressed.
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After this expedition he was elected a fellow of the Royal Geographical Society.
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one "skeptical": certainly not something that substantiates the text as written.
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I've addressed all. I'm still fixing it. Please wait for me until it's done. —
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I had an image before but it was removed, license will I need if I upload one?
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Please collapse the "Rear camera" and "Connectivity" features in the infobox.
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17140:-- I'm afraid this nom has stalled so I'll be archiving it shortly. Cheers,
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the Seims article, on which you lean quite heavily. I don't see anything at
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I am nominating this for featured article because it is a sister article to
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Okay I combined/removed some section headers. Added a bit more to the lede.
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Misunderstanding, nothing to see, move along please ladies and gentlemen.
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this article for FA status as I believe it meets all requirements. Best,
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Have you pinged Nikki lately to see how she feels about the nom? Cheers,
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The URL to minernews went dead during the FAC. I'll need to substitute.
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Some have, but others have not: for example "3 year old ...12-year old",
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An initial wikignoming glance raised the following minor issues for me:
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But thanks to the wonderful world of echo we shall still ask as expert.
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Louisville, Kentucky, United States, which specializes in fried chicken
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I have replaced the old style KFC in the UK section to a new style one.
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Footnote 19: can you verify if the title of the paper at that time was
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Either include the publishers in all the references or, leave them out.
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oil man? Why not just oil man? American spy should probably be U.S. spy
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So that ought to resopve that issue. Should I add that to the article?
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and added the missing ISBNs. Thank you for your constructive comments!
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Writing to The New York Times a group of women -add comma after Times.
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16461:, I just want to make sure you haven't forgotten about this review.--
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when it got GA status. It has deteriorated significantly since then.—
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one is kinda brutal, but a good depiction of what they went through.
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Please italicise the names of technology publications, where needed.
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8019:"Mount Baden-Powell in California," put a comma after "Baden-Powell"
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know of any action I can take to address this reviewer's objection.
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I'll try to make a more thorough prose examination as time permits.
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16043:. In both cases, the decision was made that they were acceptable.--
15219:—in BE, it would be "innings" both times, is your version OK in AE?
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As I told you after your previous nomination of a different article
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Big goof on my part. I've added wikilinks and a bit of background.
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I supported earlier, so just reiterating that I support this FAC.
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1157:(1968). Nalwa is not the only source this claim can be found in.
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Fixed issues. Also, the quote is on the second page of the article
15129:—in BE it would be "protesting against", is your version OK in AE?
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Would it make sense to say, upon first reference to the stadium, "
11713:"with the Huskies winning three of the games." This is known as a
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Why not give Baden-Powell's full name? We don't even wikilink him?
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cleanup needed in the article: hyphens/dashes, repeated links, etc
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Yes, your suggestion is accurate so I have done the edit, thanks.
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It would not surprise me if this topic had also been addressed in
14723:—is hailing not informal in the US, and applied mostly to people?
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information; the cited section is right up top on the cited link.
11299:—focusing on citation formatting and sources at the moment only.
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Replaced "developed" with "designed, developed, and manufactured"
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Please add the subheading "Critical reception" under "Reception".
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section is a bit a of a cliffhanger. What worked and what didn't?
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gives a nice overview of vibrational modes and their numbering.
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I have removed it, I'll find a new image when I get some time.--
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Same issue with en-dashes where hyphens should be is found here.
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Records in the infobox should have en dashes instead of hyphens.
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Just for clarification for anyone else doing source checks: Per
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You shouldn't wikilink the names of modern countries like Kenya:
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Why is woodcraft italicised? Perhaps quotation marks are better.
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mielies, not mealies. perhaps "mealies" (i.e. mielies, or maize)
6372:"With the help of the BSA" Perhaps "With the support of the BSA"
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Construction: "an United States Senator from Ohio". "an" → "a".
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I have a lot of problems with the current infobox. It does not
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If I were you, I would replace AnandTech's review with that of
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14888:—in BE it would be "of the funding", is your version OK in AE?
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First off, avoid the passive voice where possible, so perhaps
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On another look, finding more problems, including a dead link
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without success, and don't think I'll have any better luck in
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All things which became important in waveguide filter design.
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I think the first paragraph of History belongs in the article
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Be consistent in how information is presented. The lead says
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I'm concerned what makes a couple of these sources reliable,
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list them as the publisher because they are not. They are a
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From the age of seven, his mother taught—she was very young!
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is linked thrice in the lead and five more times in Records.
12758:"via her official website." It is not immediately clear who
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up to a featured topic. This is also my first time at FAC.
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Off for now, I will come back for more, hope all this helps
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allow time for a thorough check and cleanup of the article.
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As per your request a thread has also been started at talk.
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out of Lorain, Ohio, yet you've forgotten to include that.
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Just a note that Red marquis hasn't edited since 3rd Sept.
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the phone's outstripped sales of that of HTC's 2012 devices
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Thank you for picking up on that; it has not been removed.
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I don't know how to fix this. It's displaying fine for me.
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Poor prose, MoS inconsistencies and grammatical mistakes:
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I withdraw myself from this FAC and request it be closed.
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Aftermath: Period needed at the end of the photo caption.
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Do we know why Wilson didn't want Roosevelt's volunteers?
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I've referenced and added her birth and immigration data.
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Pleasant Valley War is the modern name for the conflict.
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Sure. Any section. The most blatant is Personal Life. —
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Pleasant Valley War and Apache Wars should be wikilinked
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Where do we stand on this now? No comments for a while?
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An elegant solution, thank you, FPaS, you OK with that?
15073:—the adverbial clause should follow its subject, the US
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Knowledge:WikiProject College football/Reliable sources
10628:: Man. What happened with this one? The article was in
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be the first phone article to get that distinction. --
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ranges. These should have been fixed a long time ago.
7396:"British March on Pretoria" why is "March" capitalised?
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Nice editing and application of your subject expertise.
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a pile of books about Wicca and contemporary Witchcraft
15191:—"one of" or "the only"? Doesn't make sense as written
13985:"he currently hosts a Bengali show Dadagiri Unlimited"
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Originally planned to have been voiced by actresses...
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Changed to "times; the Huskies won three of the games"
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We don't need the semicolon after "The King of Scouts"
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I've substituted with: she always kept a rifle nearby.
2240:
would probably be the defunct UK newspaper founded by
2048:
Alexandrian, in Definitions, probably needs a link to
666:
some comments after reading the start of the article:
17122:
is desperately short of active reviewers at present.
16781:
Manufacturer: Space before the em dash needs removal.
16328:
See above for an idea about the Youtube interviews.--
15163:—Ampersand is informal (linked article has "and" too)
11640:
I changed the sentence, and tried to explain it more.
10559:
Can you please tell me which section you are meanin?
9676:
Again, "developed" is ambiguous. Is HTC the designer
7615:
I've also added more background and a couple of refs.
7551:"March to Pretoria" again why is "March" capitalised?
5196:
Doesn't fix the problem, and isn't the only instance.
2297:
than a piece of jewelery or other religious artefact.
687:
should it ever be needed. 18:33, 18 August 2013 (UTC)
15588:
Honestly, I don't think the publisher is needed for
14987:
Zantigo stores were closed or converted to Taco Bell
13434:. About 41% (5/12) of these do not have an infobox:
8073:"and fought in World War I France" word missing here
7578:"Lovat Scouts" shouldn't this be "the Lovat Scouts"?
2329:
book titles are generally not subject to copyright.
2079:
Withdrawing my objections here. I've looked through
14989:—in BE it would be Bells, is your version OK in AE?
13614:I semi-protected the article. Sorry about the FAC.
7007:
I fixed the wikilink. 01:06, 8 September 2013 (UTC)
6997:
Why not give Frederick Courteney Selous' full name?
4589:Removed and added another ref for the first claim.
3525:
Even though a joke, she probably needs a mention.--
2190:Squeamish Ossifrage, thank you for bringing up the
14011:Lack of comprehensiveness and flow of information:
13501:. The character subsequently appears in the film's
13399:I will wait until the actual review process begins
7124:"paid him a great tribute in his book" Which book?
6690:I don't think we need to wikilink bandit to outlaw
6343:Was Hammond his son's business partner or his own?
3026:I removed this passage in the "Aftermath" section
17197:The above discussion is preserved as an archive.
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15781:If the original links still work, you should add
15330:The above discussion is preserved as an archive.
14844:OK, It will be a couple of days before I restart
14153:The above discussion is preserved as an archive.
13875:The above discussion is preserved as an archive.
13859:; this is not a productive use of anyone's time.
13700:The above discussion is preserved as an archive.
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12647:I am working on it again. Please bare with me. —
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11880:Note 1: Another en dash is needed for the record.
11525:Footnote 16 is a book from a reputable publisher.
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7750:"he fondly told people he "sucked him dry" Oh my.
7605:Maybe mention that he commanded the Lovat Scouts.
7441:"He had been scouting alone" → "He scouted alone"
7315:Say when the Battle of Paardeberg was (Feb 1900).
6853:http://archive.org/details/realsoldiersoffo00davi
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1090:This article is consistent with the previous FAs
553:The above discussion is preserved as an archive.
15157:—hyphenate all (not done consistently at present
14830:I was waiting for you to complete your copyedit.
13503:animated short sequel Tangled Ever After (2012).
13446:(which has a navbox in the upper right corner),
10771:Holy Wood (In the Shadow of the Valley of Death)
7917:"thusly" Is this a word? Shouldn't it be "thus"?
4045:I revised the article to reflect my point here.
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9091:Me too. I'm capping this and supporting above.
8283:Wasn't it Lake Rudolf rather than Lake Rudolph?
7723:hills? We've already made clear where they are.
7719:"in these African hills" Why do we need to say
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1825:I think that means it has now been removed. :)
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11688:Removed the latter occurrence in the sentence.
11555:I have addressed all concerns above, save the
6483:I presume this was a Sioux Indian reservation?
5112:Okay, again, only an example. Another is that
3790:Then you gave them what they want, well done.
3376:for the topic-ban that has been long overdue.
3043:is now edit-warring to reinsert this passage.
2599:if you have a moment could you advice please?
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14049:Tragically, this article seems to have been
12570:I've named the editor as the co-nominator —
11465:Footnotes 20 & 25: these should include
10260:Actually, we fixed just about all of those.
10052:"Taking advantage of this ability, " --: -->
9617:-- I would remove the former, and reinstate
6455:Do we know what denomination his family was?
5181:Have revised it to: As a soldier of fortune.
5073:Added more detailed reference from van wyk.
324:File:US-O6_insignia.svg: source link is dead
16035:This has come up in the past, most notably
16028:A few questions on reliability of sources:
15431:in which I learned a lot about the process.
11962:Added the word stadium after first mention.
11903:Fixed. Thanks for looking through again. -
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11101:Be consistent in how you deal with editions
8665:You don't need to say again who Roderick is
8537:"refused to make use of" → "refused to use"
6024:Maybe we should put years next to each wife
4451:International Planned Parenthood Federation
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15155:take out, dine in, sit down, drive through
14365:You're right. I've now removed the phrase.
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11987:be capitalized here? It is capitalized in
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6267:project as the next undeveloped frontier."
5806:Great, changed to support. Good luck! --
5203:Davis wrote a bio on Burnham for his book
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16425:I have completely removed the sentence.--
15592:, which is a pretty well-known magazine.
13846:are taking a wikibreak for the next month
11855:I still don't see any punctuation there.
11810:Navy: En dash needed in "Army-Navy Game".
9916:"Android 4.2.2 in select regions" --: -->
7984:I broke up the quotes into two sentences.
6847:did a biography of Burnham for his book,
4910:is linked twice in as many sentences, etc
4888:Inconsistencies have now been addressed.
3670:Rape during the Bangladesh Liberation War
3146:(see for instance the tweak I tried here
3079:Fut.Perfect has to say in this regard. --
2458:Rape during the Bangladesh Liberation War
2095:as they stand, I'll not press the point.
729:would be a useful addition to Knowledge.
495:I'll withdraw this and work on it later.
13560:and I think this could be tightened too
11084:Combine identical cites like FNs 6 and 7
8910:"His first cousin" Whose? Fred's, right?
8787:"As a teen" → "During his teenage years"
8741:"1897–Oct 3, 1905" space the endash here
8376:Note most of the pictures lack alt text
8237:"In 1902–1904" → "Between 1902 and 1904"
8179:Wasn't Ghana then called the Gold Coast?
4555:. I suppose we shall have to remove it.
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14542:two capitalisations of Kentucky colonel
13562:Rapunzel's personality was inspired by
13226:Geography and ecology of the Everglades
9929:"have been released in select regions."
9400:Me and several over editors have put a
8001:Someone got to this before me. Thanks!
6092:I too was bemused when I re-read this.
4942:, spaced emdashes and other issues wrt
1031:added "in the English speaking world."
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15854:) and the publisher (CNBC) backwards.
11504:All of the newspaper sources are good.
11500:Turning to the specific sources used:
10317:to revive HTC's overall sales numbers.
2765:Insomnia kicked in again so I did it.
1986:The Field source needs page number(s).
1893:Agreed. That shouldn't be placed in a
15245:three executives, that latter of whom
9218:Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus
8463:That below wasn't my comment. It was
5491:Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus
3845:Graham archive this is is because of
2587:Well I uploaded and added it already
700:Waveguide_(electromagnetism)#Analysis
321:Oflag caption shouldn't end in period
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15127:have been protesting KFC's treatment
13857:before making any future nominations
8814:to Africa! Perhaps "moved to Africa"
6428:Why not say what day he was born on?
3941:Then not going to proceed this way.
2588:
2293:, something more closely related to
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16363:Footnote 17: the website is called
14777:restaurants East of the Mississippi
14035:What does " ICC sport critic" mean?
13490:for most articles to achieve is 1a
13242:Premiership of John Edward Brownlee
9917:"Android 4.2.2 in selected regions"
9427:for now, pending the changes below.
8046:Why isn't Mount Burnham wikilinked?
4938:Not done. Further examples include
4507:Further comments from Hamiltonstone
3270:A Social History of The Third Reich
1469:Thanks very much for the feedback!
346:someone from commons check it out?
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15189:China is one of the only countries
13517:Not perfect, but you get the idea.
11317:Location added and OCLC corrected.
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9786:"80 regions and countries" --: -->
6717:why not wikilink Arizona Territory
846:'during the war years'- which war?
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10082:Please put "" around award names.
9565:Agreed to keep the infobox as is.
8959:Have copyedited a bit here myself
5644:Comment on Native American issues
685:Waveguide filter (disambiguation)
62:. The present address (URL) is a
15080:I think I've addressed this one.
13444:Characters of Final Fantasy VIII
12778:Single Ladies (Put a Ring on It)
9887:released it on August 22, 2013."
3626:I think I got the last of them.
2589:
2506:Can you wikilink Nazi Holocaust?
2176:in case anything's been missed.
2019:Journal of Contemporary Religion
1596:Regarding the last paragraph of
15254:think I've sorted this one out.
12741:"Aguilera wanted to collaborate
11266:and an extensive copyedit from
10340:Replaced black front shot with
9594:as the infobox photo, and move
7261:Why don't we link British Army?
6566:I've added clarifying language.
4275:Those are my initial thoughts.
2696:Right, I think I got them all.
2616:Template:Non-free use rationale
1973:Comments by Squeamish Ossifrage
698:but would be better linking to
423:I had missed that, now struck.
382:, which includes no such quote.
16488:meeting that standard, sorry.
15686:Footnotes 44 and 46 come from
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12123:Fixed all hyphen issues I saw.
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11483:Footnote 21: I would omit the
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10354:Fixed "select regions" wording
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12661:The lead section was fixed —
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1792:Your Buckland ref is unused.
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16299:person. Here's a quote from
15563:Well which ones need them?--
14517:two spellings of travel(l)er
11425:parameter and not the title.
7885:When did Baden-Powell write
6951:I've expanded on this a bit.
4256:Tweaked this further myself.
3766:Darkness Shines, you simply
753:Waveguide (electromagnetism)
706:or even to a new article on
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10309:for the One, the fact that
9753:" its next flagship device
9680:manufacturer of the One? --
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7097:Wikilink Theodore Roosevelt
6465:Added background plus ref.
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15850:Footnote 59 has the work (
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15161:research & development
14959:until his qualms were met.
14303:Edited to improve clarity.
14256:03:47, 9 August 2013 (UTC)
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14224:14:46, 8 August 2013 (UTC)
13571:Another problem sentence:
13486:The most difficult of the
12104:Corrected all cases I saw.
12070:Combined with a semicolon.
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9787:"80 countries and regions"
7052:I think I got all of them.
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3561:False/misleading citations
3220:known historical falsehood
2129:at the article's prior FAC
1586:The last paragraph of the
1236:Distributed element filter
1101:WP:WikiProject Electronics
1096:distributed element filter
641:Distributed element filter
15043:takeover weak franchises,
14949:contract with Sanders...
14045:". Probably more as well.
13742:13:48, 11 September 2013
13520:Another problem sentence
13238:Social history of viruses
12038:Team_selection#Washington
11090:FN19, 38: page formatting
10053:"To exploit this ability"
8129:Done with this section.
5715:Thanks again, Montanabw.
5512:: All issued addressed.
4761:00:01, 30 July 2013 (UTC)
4743:00:01, 30 July 2013 (UTC)
4725:Frederick Russell Burnham
4447:World Health Organization
3039:Update: disappointingly,
2947:Future Perfect at Sunrise
2134:I have added the link to
17200:Please do not modify it.
16946:Please do not modify it.
16927:Please do not modify it.
15594:Crain's Detroit Business
15539:Crain's Detroit Business
15499:Crain's Detroit Business
15352:Please do not modify it.
15333:Please do not modify it.
15017:—standards can't comment
14945:company also reneged on
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11003:File:Robert_Madgwick.jpg
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8933:All for now, more later
8339:Done with this section.
7927:I modified the sentence.
6849:Real Soldiers of Fortune
5205:Real Soldiers of Fortune
4694:Please do not modify it.
4675:Please do not modify it.
2539:is worth a 1000 words.♦
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1186:until I added it today.
936:characteristic impedance
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16238:PointBuzz, see above.--
15423:and was GA reviewed by
13542:this needs a reference.
13440:Characters of Carnivàle
12175:Project Fillmore County
12077:Game_summary#First_half
11911:Project Fillmore County
11783:Project Fillmore County
11568:Project Fillmore County
11289:Project Fillmore County
11248:Project Fillmore County
11080:- spotchecks not done.
10342:File:HTC J One back.jpg
9023:Ok the imagemap is in!
8954:Film and stage accounts
8152:Maybe just "Later life"
6502:answer this question.
5855:Resolved comments from
4037:weight than any others.
2498:Comments by Dr. Blofeld
15108:I've changed this now.
15045:—the verb is two words
14051:in pretty decent shape
13527:is abducted at infancy
11672:Changed to "The kick".
11389:Footnote 11: like the
11358:The Detroit Free Press
9611:File:HTC One black.png
9592:File:HTC One black.png
7406:Lower case is better.
6748:, including Texas and
5826:Review from Cliftonian
3242:and a host of others.
16301:User:Figureskatingfan
15425:User:The Rambling Man
14953:own operations there.
8862:Modern Mine Valuation
7424:"cut-off" → "cut off"
6845:Richard Harding Davis
6636:Why not wikilink Iowa
6315:Boy Scouts of America
4170:I fixed this myself.
3021:Comments by Fut.Perf.
2618:on the image page. -
1612:Promotion and release
727:Electromagnetic modes
708:Electromagnetic Modes
14288:from Hamiltonstone.
11985:most valuable player
11476:Added PDF parameter.
11436:to series parameter.
10348:, reformatted images
9455:Recommend withdrawal
9431:Samsung Galaxy S III
8887:Don't wl Switzerland
6121:HQ in the Boer War.
4073:range being correct.
3486:User:Darkness Shines
3041:User:Darkness Shines
1897:section of an FA(C).
662:comments from JMiall
22:Archived nominations
15688:The Morning Journal
15421:User:Baffle gab1978
15226:Edited for clarity.
15136:Edited for clarity.
14996:Edited for clarity.
14730:Edited for clarity.
14702:Edited for clarity.
13825:Squeamish Ossifrage
12387:Squeamish Ossifrage
12130:Statistical_summary
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11989:Statistical summary
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11093:FN82: which Spaull?
10022:over-the-air update
9613:is very similar to
6762:Yes, that's better.
6663:Why not wikilink LA
5966:Pleasant Valley War
4908:Scouting in Arizona
3674:Stranded Pakistanis
2178:Squeamish Ossifrage
2097:Squeamish Ossifrage
2066:Squeamish Ossifrage
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10843:Suggest withdrawal
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6750:Oklahoma Territory
6746:American Southwest
6186:Nice improvement.
5323:suggest withdrawal
5209:soldier of fortune
4455:Dr. Geoffrey Davis
3664:Comments by Faizan
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2251:Sporting Chronicle
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15416:
15391:Nominator(s):
15385:
15380:
15379:
15362:
15361:
15341:
15339:
15338:
15326:
15325:
15313:goes through.
15271:
15270:
15269:
15268:
15267:
15266:
15249:
15248:
15241:
15240:
15239:
15238:
15221:
15220:
15213:
15212:
15211:
15210:
15193:
15192:
15185:
15184:
15183:
15182:
15165:
15164:
15158:
15151:
15150:
15149:
15148:
15131:
15130:
15123:
15122:
15121:
15120:
15103:
15102:
15095:
15094:
15093:
15092:
15075:
15074:
15067:
15066:
15065:
15064:
15047:
15046:
15039:
15038:
15037:
15036:
15019:
15018:
15011:
15010:
15009:
15008:
14991:
14990:
14983:
14982:
14981:
14980:
14963:
14962:
14956:
14938:
14937:
14936:
14935:
14918:
14917:
14910:
14909:
14908:
14907:
14890:
14889:
14882:
14881:
14880:
14879:
14878:
14877:
14876:
14875:
14861:
14800:
14799:
14798:
14781:
14780:
14773:
14772:
14771:
14770:
14753:
14752:
14745:
14744:
14743:
14742:
14725:
14724:
14717:
14716:
14715:
14714:
14697:
14696:
14692:
14691:
14690:
14689:
14672:
14671:
14667:
14666:
14665:
14664:
14647:
14646:
14645:pressure-fried
14642:
14641:
14640:
14639:
14622:
14621:
14614:
14613:
14612:
14611:
14594:
14593:
14589:
14588:
14587:
14586:
14569:
14568:
14564:
14563:
14562:
14561:
14544:
14543:
14539:
14538:
14537:
14536:
14519:
14518:
14490:
14489:
14460:
14459:
14458:
14457:
14456:
14455:
14436:
14435:
14413:
14412:
14411:
14410:
14409:
14408:
14389:
14388:
14382:
14381:
14380:
14379:
14378:
14377:
14358:
14357:
14351:
14350:
14349:
14348:
14347:
14346:
14327:
14326:
14320:
14319:
14318:
14317:
14316:
14315:
14296:
14295:
14283:
14282:
14281:
14280:
14279:
14278:
14259:
14258:
14229:
14228:
14214:Nominator(s):
14208:
14203:
14202:
14185:
14184:
14164:
14162:
14161:
14149:
14148:
14136:goes through.
14108:
14107:
14085:
14084:
14047:
14046:
14036:
14032:
14031:
14030:
14029:
14026:
14019:
14013:
14012:
14009:
14002:
14001:
14000:
13999:
13992:
13989:
13986:
13980:
13979:
13976:
13951:
13950:
13936:Nominator(s):
13930:
13928:Sourav Ganguly
13925:
13924:
13907:
13906:
13886:
13884:
13883:
13848:. Please read
13780:
13779:
13759:Nominator(s):
13753:
13748:
13747:
13732:
13731:
13711:
13709:
13708:
13696:
13695:
13683:goes through.
13655:
13654:
13653:
13652:
13635:
13634:
13633:
13632:
13620:
13600:
13591:
13587:
13586:
13585:
13579:
13569:
13543:
13533:
13518:
13506:
13484:
13473:
13466:
13463:Jabba the Hutt
13455:
13427:
13426:
13425:
13424:
13407:
13406:
13392:
13391:
13390:
13389:
13388:
13387:
13362:
13361:
13343:
13342:
13328:
13313:
13301:
13300:
13299:
13298:
13297:
13296:
13295:
13294:
13293:
13292:
13246:Parity of zero
13217:
13216:
13207:
13206:
13190:
13189:
13188:
13187:
13117:
13116:
13102:Nominator(s):
13096:
13091:
13090:
13073:
13072:
13052:
13050:
13049:
13037:
13036:
13024:goes through.
12996:
12995:
12918:
12917:
12903:Nominator(s):
12897:
12892:
12891:
12874:
12873:
12853:
12851:
12850:
12838:
12837:
12825:goes through.
12789:
12774:Jivesh boodhun
12765:
12764:
12756:
12739:
12732:
12729:
12719:
12718:
12717:
12716:
12715:
12714:
12696:
12686:
12685:
12684:
12683:
12682:
12681:
12626:
12620:
12619:
12616:
12613:
12610:
12607:
12604:
12601:
12598:
12585:
12584:
12583:
12582:
12565:
12564:
12527:
12526:
12504:Nominator(s):
12498:
12493:
12492:
12475:
12474:
12454:
12452:
12451:
12439:
12438:
12426:goes through.
12398:
12397:
12343:
12342:
12328:Nominator(s):
12322:
12320:Sicilian Mafia
12317:
12316:
12299:
12298:
12278:
12276:
12275:
12263:
12262:
12250:goes through.
12205:
12204:
12203:
12202:
12146:
12145:
12144:
12143:
12137:
12136:
12132:
12131:
12127:
12126:
12125:
12124:
12118:
12117:
12113:
12112:
12108:
12107:
12106:
12105:
12099:
12098:
12093:
12092:
12091:
12090:
12084:
12083:
12079:
12078:
12074:
12073:
12072:
12071:
12065:
12064:
12059:
12058:
12054:
12053:
12052:
12051:
12045:
12044:
12040:
12039:
12035:
12034:
12033:
12032:
12026:
12025:
12021:
12020:
12019:
12018:
12012:
12011:
12007:
12006:
12002:
12001:
12000:
11999:
11993:
11992:
11980:
11979:
11978:
11977:
11971:
11970:
11966:
11965:
11964:
11963:
11957:
11956:
11948:
11947:
11946:
11945:
11939:
11938:
11934:
11933:
11923:
11922:
11921:
11920:
11919:
11918:
11917:
11916:
11898:
11897:
11876:
11875:
11874:
11873:
11872:
11871:
11850:
11849:
11843:
11842:
11838:
11837:
11836:
11835:
11829:
11828:
11822:
11821:
11820:
11819:
11813:
11812:
11745:
11744:
11743:
11742:
11736:
11735:
11729:
11728:
11727:
11726:
11720:
11719:
11715:noun plus -ing
11709:
11708:
11707:
11706:
11700:
11699:
11692:
11691:
11690:
11689:
11683:
11682:
11676:
11675:
11674:
11673:
11667:
11666:
11660:
11659:
11658:
11657:
11651:
11650:
11644:
11643:
11642:
11641:
11635:
11634:
11628:
11627:
11626:
11625:
11619:
11618:
11612:
11611:
11610:
11609:
11603:
11602:
11596:
11595:
11594:
11593:
11587:
11586:
11574:
11573:
11542:
11530:
11529:
11526:
11522:
11521:
11520:
11519:
11509:
11508:
11505:
11498:
11497:
11496:
11495:
11489:
11488:
11480:
11479:
11478:
11477:
11471:
11470:
11462:
11461:
11460:
11459:
11449:
11448:
11440:
11439:
11438:
11437:
11427:
11426:
11418:
11417:
11416:
11415:
11409:
11408:
11404:
11403:
11402:
11401:
11395:
11394:
11386:
11385:
11384:
11383:
11377:
11376:
11364:
11363:
11362:
11361:
11347:
11346:
11338:
11337:
11336:
11335:
11329:
11328:
11323:
11322:
11321:
11320:
11319:
11318:
11310:
11309:
11308:
11307:
11268:Baffle gab1978
11256:
11255:
11240:Nominator(s):
11234:
11232:1924 Rose Bowl
11229:
11228:
11211:
11210:
11190:
11188:
11187:
11175:
11174:
11162:goes through.
11117:
11116:
11102:
11099:
11094:
11091:
11088:
11085:
11037:
11036:
11035:
11034:
10979:
10978:
10964:Nominator(s):
10958:
10953:
10952:
10935:
10934:
10914:
10912:
10911:
10899:
10898:
10886:goes through.
10858:
10857:
10826:
10825:
10794:
10793:
10779:Nominator(s):
10773:
10768:
10767:
10750:
10749:
10729:
10727:
10726:
10714:
10713:
10701:goes through.
10643:
10598:
10588:
10587:
10586:
10585:
10556:
10555:
10522:
10521:
10507:Nominator(s):
10501:
10496:
10495:
10478:
10477:
10457:
10455:
10454:
10442:
10441:
10429:goes through.
10401:
10400:
10378:
10377:
10376:
10375:
10360:
10359:
10355:
10352:
10349:
10327:
10319:
10318:
10307:sales forecast
10303:
10295:
10291:
10290:
10285:
10284:
10279:
10278:
10277:
10276:
10257:
10256:
10248:
10235:
10234:
10226:
10225:
10224:
10223:
10215:
10202:
10201:
10194:
10193:
10192:
10181:
10180:
10179:
10178:
10170:
10157:
10156:
10145:
10141:
10140:
10139:
10138:
10130:
10117:
10116:
10108:
10107:
10106:
10105:
10097:
10084:
10083:
10079:
10078:
10077:
10076:
10068:
10055:
10054:
10049:
10048:
10047:
10046:
10038:
10025:
10024:
10017:
10016:
10015:
10014:
10006:
9993:
9992:
9987:
9986:
9985:
9984:
9976:
9963:
9962:
9957:
9956:
9955:
9954:
9953:
9952:
9944:
9931:
9930:
9919:
9918:
9913:
9912:
9911:
9910:
9902:
9889:
9888:
9884:
9879:
9878:
9877:
9876:
9868:
9855:
9854:
9850:
9847:
9842:
9841:
9840:
9839:
9831:
9818:
9817:
9813:
9812:
9811:
9810:
9802:
9789:
9788:
9783:
9782:
9781:
9780:
9772:
9759:
9758:
9750:
9749:
9748:
9747:
9739:
9726:
9725:
9720:
9719:
9718:
9717:
9716:
9715:
9707:
9694:
9693:
9685:
9666:
9665:
9661:
9660:
9659:
9658:
9657:
9656:
9648:
9635:
9634:
9626:
9600:
9599:
9583:
9582:
9581:
9580:
9572:
9559:
9558:
9554:
9553:
9552:
9551:
9543:
9530:
9529:
9525:
9524:
9523:
9522:
9514:
9501:
9500:
9496:
9495:
9494:
9493:
9492:
9491:
9490:
9489:
9472:
9471:
9463:
9439:
9398:
9397:
9379:Nominator(s):
9373:
9368:
9367:
9350:
9349:
9329:
9327:
9326:
9314:
9313:
9266:
9265:
9264:
9263:
9249:
9231:
9230:
9216:
9204:
9202:
9201:
9200:
9199:
9198:
9197:
9175:
9174:
9157:
9156:
9138:
9117:
9113:
9112:
9111:
9110:
9109:
9108:
9086:
9085:
9055:
9054:
9040:
8982:
8981:
8964:
8963:
8960:
8956:
8955:
8951:
8950:
8930:
8929:
8912:
8911:
8907:
8906:
8889:
8888:
8884:
8883:
8866:
8865:
8857:
8856:
8839:
8838:
8834:
8833:
8816:
8815:
8807:
8806:
8789:
8788:
8784:
8783:
8766:
8765:
8761:
8760:
8743:
8742:
8738:
8737:
8720:
8719:
8715:
8714:
8697:
8696:
8689:
8685:
8684:
8667:
8666:
8662:
8661:
8644:
8643:
8639:
8638:
8621:
8620:
8616:
8615:
8598:
8597:
8593:
8592:
8575:
8574:
8570:
8569:
8565:
8564:
8563:
8562:
8542:
8541:
8538:
8535:
8531:
8530:
8513:
8512:
8508:
8507:
8503:
8502:
8501:
8500:
8499:
8498:
8497:
8496:
8495:
8494:
8458:
8457:
8439:
8438:
8414:
8413:
8412:
8411:
8394:
8393:
8354:
8353:
8352:
8351:
8334:
8333:
8332:
8331:
8312:
8311:
8307:
8306:
8305:
8304:
8285:
8284:
8281:
8265:
8261:
8260:
8259:
8258:
8239:
8238:
8234:
8233:
8232:
8231:
8212:
8211:
8203:
8202:
8201:
8200:
8181:
8180:
8176:
8175:
8174:
8173:
8154:
8153:
8149:
8148:
8144:
8143:
8142:
8141:
8124:
8123:
8122:
8121:
8102:
8101:
8097:
8096:
8095:
8094:
8075:
8074:
8070:
8069:
8068:
8067:
8048:
8047:
8043:
8042:
8041:
8040:
8021:
8020:
8016:
8015:
8014:
8013:
7993:
7992:
7988:
7987:
7986:
7985:
7976:
7975:
7971:
7970:
7969:
7968:
7948:
7947:
7931:
7930:
7929:
7928:
7919:
7918:
7914:
7913:
7912:
7911:
7891:
7890:
7882:
7881:
7880:
7879:
7860:
7859:
7855:
7854:
7853:
7852:
7833:
7832:
7828:
7827:
7826:
7825:
7806:
7805:
7801:
7800:
7799:
7798:
7797:
7796:
7773:
7772:
7752:
7751:
7747:
7746:
7745:
7744:
7725:
7724:
7716:
7715:
7714:
7713:
7694:
7693:
7689:
7688:
7687:
7686:
7667:
7666:
7658:
7657:
7652:
7650:
7649:
7648:
7647:
7627:
7626:
7619:
7618:
7617:
7616:
7607:
7606:
7602:
7601:
7600:
7599:
7580:
7579:
7575:
7574:
7573:
7572:
7553:
7552:
7548:
7547:
7546:
7545:
7525:
7524:
7520:
7519:
7518:
7517:
7497:
7496:
7492:
7491:
7490:
7489:
7470:
7469:
7465:
7464:
7463:
7462:
7443:
7442:
7438:
7437:
7436:
7435:
7426:
7425:
7421:
7420:
7419:
7418:
7398:
7397:
7393:
7392:
7391:
7390:
7371:
7370:
7366:
7365:
7364:
7363:
7344:
7343:
7339:
7338:
7337:
7336:
7317:
7316:
7312:
7311:
7310:
7309:
7290:
7289:
7285:
7284:
7283:
7282:
7263:
7262:
7258:
7257:
7256:
7255:
7236:
7235:
7231:
7230:
7229:
7228:
7209:
7208:
7204:
7203:
7202:
7201:
7181:
7180:
7176:
7175:
7174:
7173:
7154:
7153:
7149:
7148:
7147:
7146:
7126:
7125:
7121:
7120:
7119:
7118:
7099:
7098:
7094:
7093:
7092:
7091:
7072:
7071:
7067:
7066:
7065:
7064:
7044:
7043:
7039:
7038:
7037:
7036:
7016:
7015:
7011:
7010:
7009:
7008:
6999:
6998:
6994:
6993:
6992:
6991:
6971:
6970:
6966:
6965:
6964:
6963:
6943:
6942:
6938:
6937:
6936:
6935:
6915:
6914:
6910:
6909:
6908:
6907:
6888:
6887:
6883:
6882:
6878:
6877:
6876:
6875:
6858:
6857:
6856:
6855:
6839:
6838:
6834:
6833:
6832:
6831:
6810:
6809:
6805:
6804:
6803:
6802:
6782:
6781:
6777:
6776:
6775:
6774:
6754:
6753:
6741:
6740:
6739:
6738:
6719:
6718:
6714:
6713:
6712:
6711:
6692:
6691:
6687:
6686:
6685:
6684:
6665:
6664:
6660:
6659:
6658:
6657:
6638:
6637:
6633:
6632:
6614:
6613:
6609:
6608:
6607:
6606:
6586:
6585:
6581:
6580:
6579:
6578:
6558:
6557:
6553:
6552:
6551:
6550:
6530:
6529:
6521:
6520:
6519:
6518:
6485:
6484:
6480:
6479:
6478:
6477:
6457:
6456:
6452:
6451:
6450:
6449:
6430:
6429:
6425:
6424:
6419:
6417:
6416:
6415:
6414:
6397:
6396:
6395:
6394:
6374:
6373:
6369:
6368:
6367:
6366:
6345:
6344:
6340:
6339:
6338:
6337:
6318:
6317:
6310:
6309:
6308:
6307:
6286:
6285:
6281:
6280:
6279:
6278:
6269:
6268:
6256:
6255:
6254:
6253:
6233:
6232:
6228:
6227:
6226:
6225:
6206:
6205:
6201:
6200:
6199:
6198:
6178:
6177:
6173:
6172:
6171:
6170:
6141:
6140:
6136:
6135:
6134:
6133:
6112:
6111:
6107:
6106:
6105:
6104:
6084:
6083:
6075:
6074:
6073:
6072:
6053:
6052:
6048:
6047:
6046:
6045:
6026:
6025:
6021:
6020:
6019:
6018:
5998:
5997:
5993:
5992:
5991:
5990:
5970:
5969:
5961:
5960:
5959:
5958:
5938:
5937:
5933:
5932:
5931:
5930:
5910:
5909:
5905:
5904:
5903:
5902:
5883:
5882:
5878:
5877:
5870:
5869:
5827:
5824:
5823:
5822:
5821:
5820:
5819:
5818:
5787:
5786:
5785:
5784:
5770:
5767:
5764:
5750:
5732:
5730:
5729:
5728:
5727:
5710:
5709:
5697:
5696:
5681:
5680:
5679:
5678:
5661:
5660:
5640:
5639:
5629:
5615:
5601:
5587:
5573:
5559:
5544:
5508:
5506:
5505:
5504:
5503:
5489:
5451:
5450:
5449:
5448:
5447:
5446:
5445:
5444:
5427:
5426:
5410:
5409:
5408:
5407:
5390:
5389:
5372:
5371:
5357:
5317:
5316:
5315:
5314:
5294:
5293:
5292:
5273:
5272:
5263:
5262:
5261:
5260:
5259:
5258:
5257:
5256:
5255:
5254:
5253:
5252:
5246:
5245:
5224:
5223:
5198:
5197:
5191:
5190:
5176:
5175:
5160:
5159:
5158:
5157:
5156:
5155:
5154:
5153:
5152:
5151:
5150:
5149:
5129:
5128:
5107:
5106:
5097:
5096:
5086:
5085:
5068:
5067:
5058:
5057:
5056:
5055:
5054:
5053:
5036:
5035:
5034:
5017:
5016:
5010:
5009:
4992:
4991:
4987:
4986:
4985:
4984:
4983:
4982:
4981:
4980:
4979:
4978:
4977:
4976:
4959:
4958:
4933:
4932:
4912:
4911:
4901:
4900:
4883:
4882:
4874:
4873:
4872:
4871:
4870:
4869:
4868:
4867:
4866:
4865:
4819:
4818:
4817:
4799:
4798:
4792:
4791:
4774:
4773:
4748:
4747:
4733:Nominator(s):
4727:
4722:
4721:
4704:
4703:
4683:
4681:
4680:
4668:
4667:
4655:goes through.
4609:
4608:
4607:
4606:
4605:
4604:
4603:
4602:
4601:
4532:
4531:
4523:
4513:
4490:
4489:
4488:
4487:
4486:
4485:
4484:
4483:
4425:
4424:
4406:
4405:
4404:
4403:
4402:
4401:
4400:
4399:
4398:
4397:
4363:
4341:
4273:
4272:
4271:
4270:
4269:
4268:
4251:
4250:
4245:
4240:
4234:
4233:
4232:
4231:
4204:
4203:
4198:
4190:
4189:
4185:
4184:
4183:
4182:
4165:
4164:
4158:
4152:
4151:
4150:
4149:
4121:
4120:
4114:
4113:
4112:
4111:
4095:
4094:
4088:
4087:
4086:
4085:
4067:
4066:
4060:
4059:
4058:
4057:
4040:
4039:
4033:
4026:
4020:
4015:
4003:
4000:
3984:
3981:
3980:
3979:
3978:
3977:
3976:
3975:
3957:
3921:
3920:
3883:
3882:
3881:
3880:
3879:
3878:
3877:
3876:
3875:
3874:
3835:
3834:
3833:
3832:
3831:
3830:
3764:
3763:
3762:
3761:
3760:
3759:
3758:
3757:
3665:
3662:
3661:
3660:
3659:
3658:
3657:
3656:
3655:
3654:
3596:
3595:
3563:
3562:
3558:
3557:
3556:
3555:
3554:
3553:
3552:
3551:
3478:
3477:
3451:
3450:
3449:
3448:
3447:
3446:
3445:
3444:
3443:
3442:
3441:
3440:
3439:
3438:
3437:
3436:
3435:
3434:
3433:
3432:
3431:
3430:
3429:
3428:
3427:
3426:
3425:
3424:
3423:
3422:
3421:
3420:
3419:
3418:
3160:
3159:
3143:
3125:
3124:
3119:
3118:
3117:
3116:
3115:
3114:
3094:
3093:
3092:
3091:
3068:
3064:
3060:
3059:
3058:
3022:
3019:
3018:
3017:
3016:
3015:
3014:
3013:
3012:
3011:
3010:
3009:
3008:
3007:
3006:
3005:
3004:
3003:
3002:
3001:
3000:
2999:
2971:
2942:
2843:
2819:
2818:
2797:
2796:
2795:
2794:
2793:
2792:
2791:
2790:
2763:
2734:
2708:
2694:
2679:
2678:
2659:
2658:
2657:
2656:
2655:
2654:
2653:
2652:
2651:
2650:
2649:
2648:
2630:
2629:
2551:
2550:
2532:
2531:and structure.
2528:
2525:
2522:
2519:
2516:
2513:
2510:
2507:
2499:
2496:
2481:
2480:
2466:Nominator(s):
2460:
2455:
2454:
2437:
2436:
2416:
2414:
2413:
2401:
2400:
2388:goes through.
2346:
2345:
2344:
2343:
2279:
2276:
2275:
2274:
2273:
2272:
2271:
2270:
2269:
2268:
2238:Daily Dispatch
2220:Daily Dispatch
2211:
2210:
2209:
2164:is that? The
2162:Daily Dispatch
2132:
2125:
2118:
2108:
2107:
2089:Daily Dispatch
2055:
2054:
2041:
2040:
2039:
2038:
2023:
2014:
2000:
1987:
1984:
1974:
1971:
1970:
1969:
1968:
1967:
1966:
1965:
1964:
1963:
1962:
1961:
1960:
1959:
1958:
1957:
1956:
1955:
1954:
1953:
1952:
1951:
1772:
1771:
1757:Nominator(s):
1751:
1746:
1745:
1728:
1727:
1707:
1705:
1704:
1692:
1691:
1679:goes through.
1651:
1650:
1649:
1648:
1641:
1640:
1639:
1638:
1616:
1615:
1608:
1601:
1594:
1591:
1577:
1576:
1575:
1574:
1573:
1572:
1571:
1570:
1569:
1568:
1567:
1566:
1528:
1527:
1526:
1525:
1524:
1523:
1522:
1521:
1486:
1485:
1484:
1483:
1482:
1481:
1462:
1461:
1460:
1459:
1437:
1436:
1432:
1431:
1430:
1429:
1425:
1419:
1416:
1412:
1406:
1405:
1397:
1396:
1378:
1377:
1363:Nominator(s):
1357:
1352:
1351:
1334:
1333:
1313:
1311:
1310:
1298:
1297:
1285:goes through.
1257:
1256:
1255:
1254:
1225:
1224:
1210:
1207:
1180:
1179:
1178:
1177:
1127:
1126:
1122:
1121:
1120:
1119:
1084:
1083:
1079:
1078:
1077:
1076:
1055:
1054:
1050:
1049:
1048:
1047:
1026:
1025:
1021:
1020:
1019:
1018:
997:
996:
992:
991:
990:
989:
968:
967:
963:
962:
961:
960:
939:
938:
931:
930:
929:
928:
907:
906:
902:
901:
900:
899:
877:
876:
872:
871:
870:
869:
848:
847:
843:
842:
841:
840:
819:
818:
811:
810:
809:
808:
786:
785:
781:
780:
779:
778:
757:
756:
748:
747:
746:
745:
712:
711:
691:
690:
689:
688:
673:
672:
633:
632:
614:Nominator(s):
608:
603:
602:
585:
584:
564:
562:
561:
549:
548:
536:goes through.
508:
507:
492:
491:
473:
472:
471:
470:
469:
468:
467:
466:
436:
435:
418:
417:
396:
395:
375:
372:
365:DYK nomination
343:
342:
328:
325:
322:
313:
312:
311:
310:
309:
308:
293:
292:
232:
231:
196:
195:
181:Nominator(s):
175:
170:
169:
152:
151:
131:
78:
64:permanent link
37:
26:
25:
15:
9:
6:
4:
3:
2:
17216:
17204:
17201:
17195:
17194:
17191:
17187:
17183:
17179:
17172:
17165:
17161:
17157:
17154:
17153:
17152:
17151:
17147:
17143:
17139:
17133:
17129:
17125:
17121:
17117:
17116:Brief comment
17114:
17113:
17110:
17107:
17106:
17104:
17103:
17100:
17097:
17094:
17088:
17084:
17081:
17080:
17079:
17078:
17074:
17070:
17063:
17059:
17055:
17051:
17050:
17049:
17045:
17041:
17039:
17033:
17031:
17023:
17020:
17019:
17018:
17017:
17013:
17009:
17005:
16997:
16996:
16992:
16988:
16982:
16981:
16978:
16972:
16970:
16968:
16965:
16961:
16954:
16952:
16947:
16942:
16937:
16936:
16931:
16928:
16922:
16921:
16918:
16914:
16910:
16906:
16899:
16892:
16888:
16884:
16881:
16880:
16879:
16878:
16874:
16870:
16866:
16858:
16853:
16847:
16846:
16835:
16834:
16833:
16832:
16829:
16825:
16819:
16814:
16811:
16807:
16802:
16796:
16795:
16784:
16783:
16782:
16779:
16775:
16770:
16764:
16763:
16752:
16751:
16750:
16746:
16742:
16737:
16731:
16730:
16719:
16718:
16717:
16714:
16710:
16705:
16699:
16698:
16687:
16686:
16685:
16682:
16678:
16673:
16667:
16666:
16655:
16654:
16653:
16649:
16645:
16640:
16634:
16633:
16622:
16621:
16620:
16617:
16613:
16608:
16602:
16601:
16590:
16589:
16588:
16585:
16581:
16576:
16570:
16569:
16558:
16557:
16556:
16553:
16549:
16544:
16538:
16537:
16526:
16525:
16524:
16522:
16521:with ... -ing
16517:
16516:
16515:
16513:
16507:
16503:
16502:
16495:
16486:
16485:
16484:
16483:
16478:
16472:
16471:
16458:
16447:
16442:
16436:
16435:
16424:
16423:
16422:
16421:
16420:
16419:
16415:
16414:
16407:
16396:
16392:
16387:
16381:
16380:
16369:
16368:
16366:
16362:
16350:
16345:
16339:
16338:
16327:
16325:
16320:
16314:
16313:
16302:
16298:
16294:
16289:
16288:
16287:
16283:
16282:
16275:
16266:
16262:
16261:
16260:
16255:
16249:
16248:
16236:
16235:
16234:
16230:
16229:
16222:
16213:
16212:
16211:
16206:
16200:
16199:
16188:
16187:
16185:
16173:
16168:
16162:
16161:
16150:
16149:
16148:
16147:
16143:
16142:
16135:
16123:
16119:
16115:
16114:
16113:
16108:
16102:
16101:
16089:
16088:
16087:
16083:
16082:
16075:
16067:
16066:
16065:
16060:
16054:
16053:
16042:
16038:
16034:
16033:
16031:
16030:
16029:
16022:
16017:
16011:
16010:
15999:
15998:
15997:
15993:
15992:
15985:
15976:
15968:
15963:
15957:
15956:
15945:
15944:
15942:
15941:
15940:
15935:
15929:
15928:
15917:
15916:
15913:
15909:
15904:
15898:
15897:
15886:
15885:
15883:
15879:
15874:
15868:
15867:
15856:
15855:
15853:
15849:
15845:
15840:
15834:
15833:
15822:
15821:
15819:
15815:
15811:
15806:
15800:
15799:
15788:
15787:
15780:
15776:
15771:
15765:
15764:
15753:
15752:
15750:
15746:
15742:
15734:
15729:
15723:
15722:
15711:
15710:
15709:
15705:
15704:
15697:
15689:
15685:
15684:
15683:
15678:
15672:
15671:
15660:
15659:
15656:
15644:
15639:
15633:
15632:
15621:
15620:
15619:
15615:
15614:
15607:
15599:
15595:
15591:
15587:
15586:
15585:
15580:
15574:
15573:
15562:
15561:
15560:
15556:
15555:
15548:
15540:
15536:
15532:
15531:
15530:
15525:
15519:
15518:
15507:
15506:
15504:
15500:
15496:
15492:
15487:
15481:
15480:
15469:
15468:
15466:
15462:
15461:
15460:
15458:
15454:
15453:
15448:
15442:
15441:
15430:
15426:
15422:
15414:
15413:
15408:
15402:
15401:
15388:
15387:
15384:
15378:
15376:
15374:
15371:
15367:
15360:
15358:
15353:
15348:
15343:
15342:
15337:
15334:
15328:
15327:
15324:
15320:
15316:
15312:
15305:
15298:
15294:
15290:
15287:
15286:
15285:
15283:
15279:
15275:
15265:
15261:
15257:
15253:
15252:
15251:
15250:
15246:
15243:
15242:
15237:
15233:
15229:
15225:
15224:
15223:
15222:
15218:
15215:
15214:
15209:
15205:
15201:
15197:
15196:
15195:
15194:
15190:
15187:
15186:
15181:
15177:
15173:
15169:
15168:
15167:
15166:
15162:
15159:
15156:
15153:
15152:
15147:
15143:
15139:
15135:
15134:
15133:
15132:
15128:
15125:
15124:
15119:
15115:
15111:
15107:
15106:
15105:
15104:
15100:
15097:
15096:
15091:
15087:
15083:
15079:
15078:
15077:
15076:
15072:
15069:
15068:
15063:
15059:
15055:
15051:
15050:
15049:
15048:
15044:
15041:
15040:
15035:
15031:
15027:
15023:
15022:
15021:
15020:
15016:
15013:
15012:
15007:
15003:
14999:
14995:
14994:
14993:
14992:
14988:
14985:
14984:
14979:
14975:
14971:
14967:
14966:
14965:
14964:
14960:
14957:
14954:
14952:
14948:
14944:
14940:
14939:
14934:
14930:
14926:
14922:
14921:
14920:
14919:
14915:
14912:
14911:
14906:
14902:
14898:
14894:
14893:
14892:
14891:
14887:
14884:
14883:
14874:
14870:
14866:
14862:
14860:
14857:
14852:
14850:
14843:
14842:
14841:
14837:
14833:
14829:
14828:
14827:
14823:
14815:
14813:
14804:
14803:
14802:More to come
14801:
14797:
14793:
14789:
14785:
14784:
14783:
14782:
14778:
14775:
14774:
14769:
14765:
14761:
14757:
14756:
14755:
14754:
14750:
14747:
14746:
14741:
14737:
14733:
14729:
14728:
14727:
14726:
14722:
14719:
14718:
14713:
14709:
14705:
14701:
14700:
14699:
14698:
14694:
14693:
14688:
14684:
14680:
14676:
14675:
14674:
14673:
14669:
14668:
14663:
14659:
14655:
14651:
14650:
14649:
14648:
14644:
14643:
14638:
14634:
14630:
14626:
14625:
14624:
14623:
14619:
14616:
14615:
14610:
14606:
14602:
14598:
14597:
14596:
14595:
14591:
14590:
14585:
14581:
14577:
14573:
14572:
14571:
14570:
14566:
14565:
14560:
14556:
14552:
14548:
14547:
14546:
14545:
14541:
14540:
14535:
14531:
14527:
14523:
14522:
14521:
14520:
14516:
14515:
14514:
14513:
14512:
14511:
14508:
14503:
14501:
14494:
14488:
14484:
14480:
14479:hamiltonstone
14476:
14475:
14474:
14473:
14469:
14465:
14454:
14450:
14446:
14442:
14441:
14440:
14439:
14438:
14437:
14434:
14433:
14429:
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4418:
4414:
4413:hamiltonstone
4408:
4407:
4396:
4395:
4391:
4385:
4384:
4383:
4379:
4375:
4369:
4368:Hamiltonstone
4364:
4362:
4358:
4354:
4347:
4346:Hamiltonstone
4342:
4340:
4336:
4332:
4328:
4327:
4326:
4322:
4318:
4317:hamiltonstone
4313:
4312:
4311:
4307:
4303:
4299:
4295:
4291:
4290:
4289:
4288:
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4286:
4282:
4278:
4277:hamiltonstone
4267:
4263:
4259:
4258:hamiltonstone
4255:
4254:
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4252:
4249:
4246:
4244:
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4230:
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4225:
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4220:hamiltonstone
4216:
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4213:
4212:
4210:
4209:
4207:
4206:
4202:
4199:
4197:
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4187:
4186:
4181:
4177:
4173:
4172:hamiltonstone
4169:
4168:
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4159:
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4148:
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4143:
4139:
4138:hamiltonstone
4133:
4132:
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4127:
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4123:
4119:
4116:
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4110:
4107:
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4101:
4100:
4098:
4097:
4093:
4090:
4089:
4084:
4080:
4076:
4075:hamiltonstone
4071:
4070:
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4065:
4062:
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4056:
4052:
4048:
4047:hamiltonstone
4044:
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4038:
4034:
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4025:
4021:
4019:
4016:
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4011:
4010:
4009:
4008:
3999:
3998:
3994:
3990:
3974:
3970:
3965:
3958:
3956:
3952:
3947:
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3934:
3930:
3925:
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3900:
3897:
3895:
3888:
3873:
3869:
3865:
3861:
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3856:
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3825:
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3809:
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3797:
3793:
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3781:
3774:
3769:
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3567:Samuel Totten
3560:
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3405:
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3307:
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3299:
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2526:
2523:
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2505:
2504:
2503:
2502:Some points:
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2494:
2490:
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2285:
2267:
2264:
2259:
2253:
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2239:
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2225:
2221:
2216:
2212:
2208:
2204:
2193:
2189:
2188:
2187:
2183:
2179:
2175:
2171:
2167:
2163:
2158:
2154:
2151:
2150:
2149:
2145:
2141:
2137:
2133:
2130:
2126:
2123:
2119:
2116:
2112:
2111:
2110:
2109:
2106:
2102:
2098:
2094:
2090:
2086:
2082:
2078:
2077:
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2067:
2063:
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2053:
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2024:
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2020:
2015:
2013:
2011:
2010:
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1931:
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1926:
1921:
1912:
1911:
1910:
1906:
1896:
1892:
1891:
1890:
1886:
1882:
1877:
1876:Pagan studies
1873:
1872:
1871:
1868:
1863:
1854:
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1848:
1844:
1840:
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1838:
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1830:
1824:
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1810:
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1791:
1790:
1789:
1788:
1787:
1786:
1782:
1778:
1769:
1768:
1764:
1760:
1754:
1753:
1750:
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1737:
1733:
1726:
1724:
1719:
1714:
1709:
1708:
1703:
1700:
1694:
1693:
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1686:
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1678:
1671:
1664:
1660:
1656:
1653:
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1635:
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1633:
1632:
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1627:
1626:
1622:
1613:
1609:
1606:
1602:
1599:
1595:
1592:
1589:
1585:
1584:
1583:
1581:
1565:
1561:
1557:
1553:
1552:
1551:
1547:
1543:
1538:
1537:
1536:
1535:
1534:
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1531:
1530:
1529:
1520:
1516:
1512:
1507:
1506:
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1497:
1492:
1491:
1490:
1489:
1488:
1487:
1480:
1476:
1472:
1468:
1467:
1466:
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1463:
1458:
1454:
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1445:
1441:
1440:
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1438:
1434:
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1426:
1423:
1420:
1417:
1413:
1410:
1409:
1408:
1407:
1403:
1402:
1401:
1394:
1393:
1392:
1391:
1387:
1383:
1375:
1374:
1370:
1366:
1360:
1359:
1356:
1350:
1348:
1346:
1343:
1339:
1332:
1330:
1325:
1320:
1315:
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1309:
1306:
1300:
1299:
1296:
1292:
1288:
1284:
1277:
1270:
1266:
1262:
1259:
1258:
1253:
1250:
1249:
1244:
1237:
1233:
1229:
1228:
1227:
1226:
1223:
1219:
1215:
1211:
1208:
1205:
1204:
1203:
1202:
1198:
1197:
1193:
1189:
1185:
1176:
1173:
1172:
1167:
1160:
1156:
1152:
1148:
1147:
1146:
1145:
1144:
1143:
1139:
1134:
1124:
1123:
1118:
1115:
1114:
1109:
1102:
1097:
1093:
1088:
1087:
1086:
1085:
1081:
1080:
1075:
1072:
1071:
1066:
1059:
1058:
1057:
1056:
1052:
1051:
1046:
1043:
1042:
1037:
1030:
1029:
1028:
1027:
1023:
1022:
1017:
1014:
1013:
1008:
1001:
1000:
999:
998:
994:
993:
988:
985:
984:
979:
972:
971:
970:
969:
965:
964:
959:
956:
955:
950:
943:
942:
941:
940:
937:
933:
932:
927:
924:
923:
918:
911:
910:
909:
908:
904:
903:
898:
895:
894:
889:
881:
880:
879:
878:
874:
873:
868:
865:
864:
859:
852:
851:
850:
849:
845:
844:
839:
836:
835:
830:
823:
822:
821:
820:
817:
816:Balanced pair
813:
812:
807:
804:
803:
798:
790:
789:
788:
787:
783:
782:
777:
774:
773:
768:
761:
760:
759:
758:
754:
750:
749:
744:
741:
740:
735:
728:
724:
720:
716:
715:
714:
713:
709:
705:
701:
697:
693:
692:
686:
681:
680:WP:COMMONNAME
677:
676:
675:
674:
669:
668:
667:
664:
663:
659:
658:
655:
654:
649:
642:
638:
630:
629:
626:
625:
620:
611:
610:
607:
601:
599:
597:
594:
590:
583:
581:
576:
571:
566:
565:
560:
557:
551:
550:
547:
543:
539:
535:
528:
521:
517:
513:
510:
509:
506:
502:
498:
497:Proudbolsahye
494:
493:
490:
486:
482:
478:
475:
474:
465:
461:
457:
452:
451:
450:
446:
442:
441:Proudbolsahye
438:
437:
434:
430:
426:
422:
421:
420:
419:
416:
412:
408:
407:Proudbolsahye
404:
400:
399:
398:
397:
394:
390:
386:
383:
381:
376:
373:
370:
369:
368:
366:
362:
358:
357:
353:
349:
348:Proudbolsahye
341:
337:
333:
329:
326:
323:
320:
319:
318:
317:
307:
303:
299:
298:Proudbolsahye
295:
294:
291:
287:
283:
279:
278:
277:
273:
269:
268:Proudbolsahye
265:
262:
259:
255:
251:
248:
245:
241:
236:
235:
234:
233:
230:
226:
222:
218:
213:
212:
211:
210:
206:
202:
201:Proudbolsahye
193:
192:
188:
184:
183:Proudbolsahye
178:
177:
174:
168:
166:
164:
161:
157:
150:
148:
143:
138:
133:
132:
122:
118:
114:
110:
106:
102:
90:
86:
81:
79:Graham Beards
74:
73:
70:
65:
49:
45:
40:
38:Graham Beards
33:
23:
19:
17199:
17196:
17156:Closing note
17155:
17137:
17136:
17124:Brianboulton
17115:
17101:
17098:
17095:
17092:
17090:
17082:
17066:
17046:
17042:
17029:
17026:
17021:
17001:
16984:
16960:not promoted
16959:
16957:
16945:
16938:
16926:
16923:
16883:Closing note
16882:
16864:
16863:
16838:
16812:
16787:
16780:
16755:
16747:
16722:
16715:
16690:
16683:
16658:
16650:
16625:
16618:
16593:
16586:
16561:
16554:
16529:
16518:
16511:
16510:
16490:
16463:
16452:
16427:
16402:
16400:
16372:
16364:
16330:
16305:
16296:
16292:
16270:
16265:high quality
16264:
16240:
16217:
16191:
16153:
16130:
16126:
16122:re-publisher
16121:
16117:
16093:
16070:
16045:
16027:
16002:
15980:
15948:
15920:
15889:
15859:
15851:
15825:
15791:
15756:
15748:
15744:
15714:
15692:
15687:
15663:
15624:
15602:
15597:
15593:
15589:
15565:
15543:
15538:
15534:
15510:
15502:
15498:
15472:
15464:
15456:
15455:
15433:
15418:
15393:
15390:
15366:not promoted
15365:
15363:
15351:
15344:
15332:
15329:
15289:Closing note
15288:
15273:
15272:
15244:
15216:
15188:
15160:
15154:
15126:
15098:
15070:
15042:
15014:
14986:
14958:
14950:
14946:
14942:
14941:
14913:
14885:
14845:
14808:
14776:
14748:
14720:
14617:
14496:
14492:
14491:
14461:
14416:
14385:
14354:
14323:
14292:
14285:
14284:
14250:
14230:
14213:
14189:not promoted
14188:
14186:
14174:
14167:
14155:
14152:
14112:Closing note
14111:
14088:
14048:
13968:
13967:
13952:
13935:
13911:not promoted
13910:
13908:
13896:
13889:
13877:
13874:
13856:
13837:
13836:
13820:
13819:
13803:
13802:
13794:talk with me
13785:
13781:
13770:talk with me
13761:
13758:
13740:User:Maralia
13736:not promoted
13735:
13733:
13721:
13714:
13702:
13699:
13659:Closing note
13658:
13618:
13598:
13582:
13576:
13572:
13567:
13566:actresses...
13563:
13559:
13555:
13551:
13546:
13535:
13530:
13526:
13521:
13514:
13509:
13500:
13498:
13491:
13448:Flood (Halo)
13398:
13394:
13393:
13368:
13305:
13304:
13286:
13263:
13253:
13212:
13200:
13134:
13133:
13118:
13101:
13077:not promoted
13076:
13074:
13062:
13055:
13043:
13040:
13000:Closing note
12999:
12980:
12961:
12960:
12934:
12933:
12919:
12902:
12878:not promoted
12877:
12875:
12863:
12856:
12844:
12841:
12801:Closing note
12800:
12791:ontributions
12766:
12759:
12752:
12749:
12748:with Furler
12745:
12742:
12721:
12720:
12708:
12702:
12697:
12677:
12638:
12632:
12627:
12621:
12587:
12586:
12551:
12544:
12528:
12503:
12479:not promoted
12478:
12476:
12464:
12457:
12445:
12442:
12402:Closing note
12401:
12378:
12359:
12358:
12344:
12327:
12303:not promoted
12302:
12300:
12288:
12281:
12269:
12266:
12226:Closing note
12225:
12207:
12206:
12183:
12168:
12147:
11998:Capitalized.
11988:
11932:Introduction
11925:
11924:
11904:
11879:
11825:
11809:
11776:
11746:
11732:
11712:
11695:
11679:
11663:
11647:
11631:
11615:
11599:
11577:
11576:
11575:
11561:
11556:
11534:
11531:
11499:
11455:
11444:
11433:
11390:
11357:
11342:
11296:
11295:
11282:
11280:
11276:
11257:
11241:
11239:
11215:not promoted
11214:
11212:
11200:
11193:
11181:
11178:
11138:Closing note
11137:
11119:
11118:
11077:
11076:
11061:WP:HONORIFIC
11056:
11055:
11046:
11038:
10995:
10994:
10980:
10963:
10939:not promoted
10938:
10936:
10924:
10917:
10905:
10902:
10862:Closing note
10861:
10842:
10833:
10827:
10795:
10778:
10754:not promoted
10753:
10751:
10739:
10732:
10720:
10717:
10677:Closing note
10676:
10657:
10653:
10652:
10634:
10633:
10625:
10624:
10613:Brianboulton
10608:
10607:
10600:ontributions
10590:
10589:
10540:
10523:
10506:
10482:not promoted
10481:
10479:
10467:
10460:
10448:
10445:
10405:Closing note
10404:
10381:
10329:ontributions
10320:
10313:, yet still
10250:ontributions
10217:ontributions
10172:ontributions
10132:ontributions
10112:
10099:ontributions
10070:ontributions
10040:ontributions
10008:ontributions
9978:ontributions
9946:ontributions
9924:
9904:ontributions
9870:ontributions
9833:ontributions
9804:ontributions
9774:ontributions
9754:
9741:ontributions
9709:ontributions
9687:ontributions
9677:
9671:
9650:ontributions
9628:ontributions
9605:
9574:ontributions
9545:ontributions
9516:ontributions
9465:ontributions
9454:
9441:ontributions
9426:
9423:
9422:
9401:
9399:
9378:
9354:not promoted
9353:
9351:
9339:
9332:
9320:
9317:
9288:Closing note
9287:
9268:
9267:
9208:
9203:
9141:
9128:
9122:
9118:
9116:
9100:
9095:
9092:
9056:
9032:
9027:
9024:
9012:
9007:
9004:
9002:
8993:
8988:
8985:
8983:
8967:
8942:
8937:
8934:
8915:
8892:
8869:
8861:
8842:
8819:
8811:
8792:
8769:
8746:
8723:
8700:
8670:
8647:
8624:
8601:
8578:
8547:
8516:
8486:
8481:
8478:
8471:
8430:
8425:
8422:
8385:
8380:
8377:
8365:
8360:
8357:
8355:
8317:
8290:
8267:
8244:
8217:
8210:Upper Volta?
8207:
8186:
8159:
8107:
8080:
8053:
8026:
7998:
7981:
7953:
7943:
7939:
7935:
7924:
7896:
7886:
7865:
7838:
7811:
7788:
7783:
7780:
7757:
7730:
7720:
7699:
7672:
7662:
7651:
7632:
7612:
7585:
7558:
7530:
7502:
7475:
7448:
7431:
7403:
7376:
7349:
7322:
7295:
7268:
7241:
7214:
7186:
7159:
7131:
7104:
7077:
7049:
7021:
7004:
6976:
6948:
6920:
6893:
6848:
6815:
6787:
6759:
6724:
6697:
6670:
6643:
6617:
6591:
6563:
6535:
6525:
6490:
6462:
6435:
6418:
6379:
6350:
6323:
6291:
6274:
6261:Cecil Rhodes
6238:
6211:
6183:
6146:
6117:
6089:
6079:
6058:
6031:
6003:
5975:
5943:
5915:
5888:
5862:
5857:
5842:
5837:
5834:
5830:
5829:
5752:
5751:
5749:
5733:
5731:
5643:
5632:
5631:
5617:
5603:
5589:
5575:
5561:
5546:
5531:
5522:
5521:
5509:
5507:
5452:
5322:
5320:
5318:
5300:
5296:
5208:
5204:
5134:
5102:
5093:cited source
5038:
4917:
4877:Significant
4821:
4765:
4764:
4749:
4732:
4708:not promoted
4707:
4705:
4693:
4686:
4674:
4671:
4631:Closing note
4630:
4612:
4610:
4571:
4533:
4527:
4524:
4518:
4515:
4506:
4505:
4491:
4409:
4386:
4274:
4247:
4242:
4237:
4217:
4214:
4211:
4208:
4205:
4200:
4195:
4160:
4155:
4134:
4131:
4128:
4125:
4122:
4117:
4108:
4105:
4102:
4099:
4096:
4091:
4063:
4035:
4030:
4027:
4022:
4017:
4012:
4006:
4005:
3986:
3893:
3886:
3884:
3852:
3846:
3807:
3779:
3772:
3767:
3765:
3732:
3731:
3667:
3597:
3564:
3491:
3482:Sarmila Bose
3479:
3452:
3404:this version
3269:
3215:
3126:
3067:astonishing.
2800:Image review
2799:
2798:
2662:
2577:
2542:
2501:
2482:
2465:
2441:not promoted
2440:
2438:
2426:
2419:
2407:
2404:
2364:Closing note
2363:
2347:
2294:
2290:
2286:
2283:
2281:
2249:
2237:
2219:
2215:The Cauldron
2214:
2191:
2174:Nova Religio
2173:
2161:
2157:The Cauldron
2156:
2152:
2122:The Cauldron
2121:
2114:
2088:
2084:
2081:Nova Religio
2080:
2059:
2057:
2056:
2047:
2042:
2032:
2028:Nova Religio
2026:
2017:
2007:
2005:
1991:
1989:
1981:
1976:
1894:
1773:
1756:
1732:not promoted
1731:
1729:
1717:
1710:
1698:
1695:
1655:Closing note
1654:
1619:
1617:
1611:
1604:
1597:
1587:
1579:
1578:
1443:
1398:
1379:
1362:
1338:not promoted
1337:
1335:
1323:
1316:
1304:
1301:
1261:Closing note
1260:
1239:
1201:Image review
1200:
1199:
1181:
1162:
1128:
1104:
1061:
1032:
1003:
974:
945:
913:
884:
854:
825:
793:
763:
730:
665:
661:
660:
644:
634:
615:
613:
589:not promoted
588:
586:
574:
567:
555:
552:
512:Closing note
511:
476:
377:
360:
359:
344:
315:
314:
260:
254:Anotherclown
246:
197:
180:
156:not promoted
155:
153:
141:
134:
32:old revision
29:
28:
17087:peer review
17030:Laser brain
17004:WP:COPYEDIT
16493:Imzadi 1979
16405:Imzadi 1979
16365:Trademarkia
16273:Imzadi 1979
16220:Imzadi 1979
16133:Imzadi 1979
16128:publisher.
16073:Imzadi 1979
15983:Imzadi 1979
15818:MOS:ALLCAPS
15783:|deadurl=no
15695:Imzadi 1979
15605:Imzadi 1979
15546:Imzadi 1979
14855:talk to me?
14821:talk to me?
14758:Copyedited.
14506:talk to me?
14068:Note: I've
13540:WP:MOSQUOTE
13488:FA criteria
13308:- infobox:
13283:Bencherlite
13250:Bencherlite
13197:Bencherlite
13173:WP:WAF-INFO
12905:Plantsurfer
12755:the album."
12552:Laser brain
12496:You Lost Me
12142:Fixed both.
11773:WP:GOCE/REQ
11537:Imzadi 1979
11467:|format=PDF
11456:The Gazette
11445:The Gazette
11400:Fixed both.
11371:instead of
11260:peer review
11047:Dr. Blofeld
11041:Nostradamus
10996:Image check
10847:Crisco 1492
10830:Bencherlite
10799:Red marquis
10781:Red marquis
10575:Crisco 1492
10545:Crisco 1492
10186:TechRadar's
10153:David Pogue
10149:this review
9274:Graham Colm
9119:Image check
6504:Little Crow
6495:Mdewakanton
5633:More stuff:
5114:this source
5064:this source
4940:MOS:ITALICS
4657:Graham Colm
4553:Review here
3894:Dr. Blofeld
3853:Dr. Blofeld
3808:Dr. Blofeld
3780:Dr. Blofeld
2578:Dr. Blofeld
2543:Dr. Blofeld
2390:Graham Colm
2170:East London
1681:Graham Colm
1621:Cryptic C62
1603:Why is the
1542:Popcornduff
1496:Popcornduff
1471:Popcornduff
1382:Popcornduff
1365:Popcornduff
1287:Graham Colm
1153:(1965) and
719:Normal mode
696:Normal mode
538:Graham Colm
481:Crisco 1492
456:Graham Colm
380:this source
282:Crisco 1492
221:Crisco 1492
94:(added one)
59:(added one)
30:This is an
16817:Giants2008
16457:Imzadi1979
16118:should not
14094:Giants2008
14039:WP:COPYVIO
13525:First off
13452:Hardy Boys
12786:Sp33dyphil
12770:Nikkimaria
12031:Shortened.
11884:Giants2008
11858:Giants2008
11794:Giants2008
11755:Giants2008
11281:Thanks, -
11106:Nikkimaria
10595:Sp33dyphil
10324:Sp33dyphil
10245:Sp33dyphil
10241:Addressed.
10231:WP:LINKROT
10212:Sp33dyphil
10167:Sp33dyphil
10163:Addressed.
10127:Sp33dyphil
10123:Addressed.
10094:Sp33dyphil
10090:Addressed.
10065:Sp33dyphil
10035:Sp33dyphil
10031:Addressed.
10003:Sp33dyphil
9973:Sp33dyphil
9941:Sp33dyphil
9899:Sp33dyphil
9865:Sp33dyphil
9828:Sp33dyphil
9824:Addressed.
9799:Sp33dyphil
9795:Addressed.
9769:Sp33dyphil
9765:Addressed.
9736:Sp33dyphil
9732:Addressed.
9704:Sp33dyphil
9682:Sp33dyphil
9645:Sp33dyphil
9623:Sp33dyphil
9569:Sp33dyphil
9540:Sp33dyphil
9536:Addressed.
9511:Sp33dyphil
9507:Addressed.
9460:Sp33dyphil
9436:Sp33dyphil
9358:GrahamColm
9253:Ctatkinson
9239:Ctatkinson
9223:reply here
9164:Ctatkinson
9096:Cliftonian
9075:Ctatkinson
9060:Ctatkinson
9044:Ctatkinson
9028:Cliftonian
9008:Cliftonian
8989:Cliftonian
8971:Ctatkinson
8938:Cliftonian
8919:Ctatkinson
8896:Ctatkinson
8873:Ctatkinson
8846:Ctatkinson
8823:Ctatkinson
8796:Ctatkinson
8773:Ctatkinson
8750:Ctatkinson
8727:Ctatkinson
8704:Ctatkinson
8674:Ctatkinson
8651:Ctatkinson
8628:Ctatkinson
8605:Ctatkinson
8582:Ctatkinson
8552:Ctatkinson
8520:Ctatkinson
8506:Later life
8482:Cliftonian
8447:Ctatkinson
8426:Cliftonian
8401:Ctatkinson
8381:Cliftonian
8361:Cliftonian
8341:Ctatkinson
8321:Ctatkinson
8294:Ctatkinson
8271:Ctatkinson
8248:Ctatkinson
8221:Ctatkinson
8190:Ctatkinson
8163:Ctatkinson
8131:Ctatkinson
8111:Ctatkinson
8084:Ctatkinson
8057:Ctatkinson
8030:Ctatkinson
8003:Ctatkinson
7958:Ctatkinson
7901:Ctatkinson
7869:Ctatkinson
7842:Ctatkinson
7815:Ctatkinson
7784:Cliftonian
7762:Ctatkinson
7734:Ctatkinson
7703:Ctatkinson
7676:Ctatkinson
7637:Ctatkinson
7589:Ctatkinson
7562:Ctatkinson
7535:Ctatkinson
7507:Ctatkinson
7479:Ctatkinson
7452:Ctatkinson
7408:Ctatkinson
7380:Ctatkinson
7353:Ctatkinson
7326:Ctatkinson
7299:Ctatkinson
7272:Ctatkinson
7245:Ctatkinson
7218:Ctatkinson
7191:Ctatkinson
7163:Ctatkinson
7136:Ctatkinson
7108:Ctatkinson
7081:Ctatkinson
7054:Ctatkinson
7026:Ctatkinson
6981:Ctatkinson
6953:Ctatkinson
6925:Ctatkinson
6897:Ctatkinson
6865:Ctatkinson
6821:Ctatkinson
6819:reference.
6792:Ctatkinson
6764:Ctatkinson
6728:Ctatkinson
6701:Ctatkinson
6674:Ctatkinson
6647:Ctatkinson
6622:Ctatkinson
6596:Ctatkinson
6568:Ctatkinson
6540:Ctatkinson
6526:to America
6508:Ctatkinson
6467:Ctatkinson
6439:Ctatkinson
6423:Early life
6404:Ctatkinson
6384:Ctatkinson
6356:Ctatkinson
6327:Ctatkinson
6297:Ctatkinson
6243:Ctatkinson
6215:Ctatkinson
6188:Ctatkinson
6160:Ctatkinson
6123:Ctatkinson
6094:Ctatkinson
6062:Ctatkinson
6035:Ctatkinson
6008:Ctatkinson
5980:Ctatkinson
5948:Ctatkinson
5920:Ctatkinson
5892:Ctatkinson
5858:Cliftonian
5838:Cliftonian
5794:Ctatkinson
5717:Ctatkinson
5686:Ctatkinson
5668:Ctatkinson
5496:reply here
5472:Nikkimaria
5456:Ctatkinson
5434:Ctatkinson
5416:Nikkimaria
5397:Ctatkinson
5361:Ctatkinson
5347:Ctatkinson
5329:Nikkimaria
5304:Ctatkinson
5282:Ctatkinson
5235:Nikkimaria
5213:Ctatkinson
5183:Ctatkinson
5165:Nikkimaria
5139:Ctatkinson
5118:Nikkimaria
5075:Ctatkinson
5043:Ctatkinson
5024:Ctatkinson
4999:Ctatkinson
4966:Ctatkinson
4948:Nikkimaria
4922:Ctatkinson
4920:. Thanks.
4890:Ctatkinson
4855:Ctatkinson
4840:Nikkimaria
4825:Ctatkinson
4807:Ctatkinson
4781:Ctatkinson
4753:Ctatkinson
4735:Ctatkinson
4712:GrahamColm
3216:Lebensborn
3031:Lebensborn
2862:WP:CSD#F7b
2827:Nikkimaria
2808:Nikkimaria
2737:sorting.--
2713:Dwaipayanc
2445:GrahamColm
2278:Lead image
1992:especially
1736:GrahamColm
1588:Background
1447:sections.—
1428:important.
1422:Dead links
1342:GrahamColm
1214:Nikkimaria
593:GrahamColm
425:Nikkimaria
385:Nikkimaria
332:Nikkimaria
160:GrahamColm
17164:WP:FAC/ar
17160:candidate
17089:editing.
17069:EddieHugh
16891:WP:FAC/ar
16887:candidate
16652:sentence.
15852:Mad Money
15749:The Blade
15745:The Blade
15297:WP:FAC/ar
15293:candidate
14848:Jimfbleak
14811:Jimfbleak
14779:—why cap?
14751:—informal
14499:Jimfbleak
14120:WP:FAC/ar
14116:candidate
13667:WP:FAC/ar
13663:candidate
13622:<: -->
13616:Ruhrfisch
13602:<: -->
13596:Ruhrfisch
13523:youthful.
13332:GermanJoe
13318:GermanJoe
13008:WP:FAC/ar
13004:candidate
12981:Withdraw'
12809:WP:FAC/ar
12805:candidate
12410:WP:FAC/ar
12406:candidate
12234:WP:FAC/ar
12230:candidate
12170:Awardgive
11953:Rose Bowl
11906:Awardgive
11778:Awardgive
11563:Awardgive
11432:Switched
11284:Awardgive
11243:Awardgive
11146:WP:FAC/ar
11142:candidate
11097:404 error
11007:GermanJoe
10870:WP:FAC/ar
10866:candidate
10685:WP:FAC/ar
10681:candidate
10413:WP:FAC/ar
10409:candidate
10382:Withdrawn
10365:M0rphzone
10322:stance.--
10208:Reworded.
10061:Reworded.
9999:Not done.
9969:Reworded.
9926:Not done.
9895:Reworded.
9861:Reworded.
9673:Not done.
9479:M0rphzone
9296:WP:FAC/ar
9292:candidate
9146:GermanJoe
8465:Montanabw
6816:Comments.
6618:*Comment.
6313:Wikilink
5808:Coemgenus
5774:Coemgenus
5703:Montanabw
5654:Montanabw
5638:DONE !!!!
5623:Montanabw
5607:Montanabw
5593:Montanabw
5579:Montanabw
5565:Montanabw
5553:Montanabw
5538:Montanabw
5523:Reviewing
5515:Montanabw
5271:Fellow").
4639:WP:FAC/ar
4635:candidate
4519:secondary
3714:Dwaipayan
3646:Fut.Perf.
3617:Dwaipayan
3587:Fut.Perf.
3574:Fut.Perf.
3527:Dwaipayan
3497:Fut.Perf.
3492:bona fide
3457:Dwaipayan
3408:Dwaipayan
3378:Fut.Perf.
3344:Fut.Perf.
3317:Fut.Perf.
3288:Dwaipayan
3258:Fut.Perf.
3224:Fut.Perf.
3189:Fut.Perf.
3151:Fut.Perf.
3128:Fut.Perf.
3081:Dwaipayan
3050:Fut.Perf.
2976:Fut.Perf.
2920:Fut.Perf.
2893:Fut.Perf.
2866:Fut.Perf.
2782:Fut.Perf.
2739:Dwaipayan
2668:Dwaipayan
2372:WP:FAC/ar
2368:candidate
2153:Mea culpa
1663:WP:FAC/ar
1659:candidate
1598:Recording
1509:include?—
1269:WP:FAC/ar
1265:candidate
520:WP:FAC/ar
516:candidate
17182:Ian Rose
17158:: This
17142:Ian Rose
16964:Ian Rose
16909:Ian Rose
16885:: This
16869:Ian Rose
16836:Fixed.--
16688:Fixed.--
16623:Fixed.--
16591:Fixed.--
16559:Fixed.--
16527:Fixed.--
16512:Comments
16297:reliable
16000:Fixed.--
15887:Fixed.--
15857:Fixed.--
15823:Fixed.--
15622:Fixed.--
15457:Comments
15370:Ian Rose
15315:Ian Rose
15291:: This
15278:Ian Rose
14493:Comments
14443:removed.
14420:WP:UNDUE
14334:Changed.
14286:Comments
14193:Ian Rose
14138:Ian Rose
14114:: This
14070:reverted
13975:3 tags.
13915:Ian Rose
13751:Calculus
13685:Ian Rose
13661:: This
13564:those of
13548:Poehler.
13380:contribs
13081:Ian Rose
13026:Ian Rose
13002:: This
12966:AfadsBad
12882:Ian Rose
12827:Ian Rose
12803:: This
12483:Ian Rose
12428:Ian Rose
12404:: This
12383:MOS:LEAD
12307:Ian Rose
12252:Ian Rose
12228:: This
12212:Ian Rose
11926:Comments
11423:|series=
11373:|author=
11369:|agency=
11297:Comments
11219:Ian Rose
11164:Ian Rose
11140:: This
11124:Ian Rose
11065:Kablammo
10943:Ian Rose
10888:Ian Rose
10864:: This
10758:Ian Rose
10703:Ian Rose
10679:: This
10663:Ian Rose
10645:my edits
10486:Ian Rose
10431:Ian Rose
10407:: This
10344:, added
10115:favored"
10113:publicly
9757:to make"
9755:in order
9607:Not yet.
9290:: This
8548:Comment.
8475:contribs
7954:Comment.
7897:Comment.
7633:Comment.
7132:Comment.
6499:Ho-Chunk
6497:and the
6491:Comment.
6382:Better.
6351:Comment.
6292:Comment.
6241:Better.
6152:Cahuilla
6147:Comment.
5753:Comments
5379:Ian Rose
5321:I would
4944:MOS:DASH
4633:: This
4611:Thanks.
2366:: This
2058:Leaning
2037:as well.
1657:: This
1580:Comments
1263:: This
1242:Spinning
1165:Spinning
1107:Spinning
1064:Spinning
1035:Spinning
1006:Spinning
977:Spinning
948:Spinning
916:Spinning
887:Spinning
857:Spinning
828:Spinning
796:Spinning
766:Spinning
733:Spinning
647:Spinning
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13861:Maralia
13838:Closing
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13764:Benison
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