Knowledge:Featured article candidates/Archived nominations/September 2013

13854:"According to Billboard writer Monica Herrera, the clip is opposite to the music video for Bionic lead single 'Not Myself Tonight'". These and many others are sentences that need to be rewritten to sound better and pass the first featured article criterion, which I quote asks for prose that is "engaging, even brilliant, and of a professional standard". From here on, I'd recommend that you work with an experienced editor, possibly someone who commonly works with pop music topics, and ask them to run an eye and help you tidy things up. And while this next suggestion is no obligation, I highly recommend you take this article to GAN after the copy editing is finished. This is a stepping stone to seeing how far your article has come. If you ping me on my talk page, I may be able to review this if it 16968:, "I wonder if this might be an instance of comprehensiveness trumping reliability... However, this is a specialized and obscure topic, and there may not be the kind of sources you request available. IOW, they may be the most reliable sources out there. I've come to the conclusion that resorting to using industry webpages is necessary for some articles in order to maintain comprehensiveness, even in FAs--as long as the prose is high-quality." She made a very good point about comprehensiveness trumping reliability. I'm not trying to be a pain, I've just followed this article from day one. I wrote this article with all the sources available and I don't see the issue in the few YouTube or PointBuzz links that are used.-- 15124:"Overseas operations often flourished while ignoring or even defying orders from Louisville headquarters: management attempted to force KFC Japan to switch from corn and cottonseed oil to cheaper palm or soybean, but local management refused to compromise the quality of their product with a lesser quality oil". I'm worried that a POV has been 'swallowed' by the source and then reproduced here. what evidence is there that the cheaper oil was lower quality? It was used in other countries without any problems? Perhaps "local management stated that they would not compromise the quality of their product with a lesser quality oil" at least attributes the argument to managers without elevating it to objective fact. 14469:). A reader who has not seen the film will not learn much from "Relatives: The King (father); The Queen (mother); Mother Gothel (adoptive mother)". Since there are no articles on her royal parents, what does it add to include the king and queen (and I think most readers will be sufficiently familiar with biology to know the king is her father and the queen is her mother). Since "Mother Gothel" kidnaps Rapunzel and holds her captive, I think calling her an "adoptive mother" is very problematic (since adoption is a legal process and kidnapping is not). I am not against an infobox here in general, but the current box detracts from the article it should add to (if included). 13623:. Tone and style issues are pervasive; many sections are simply not written to an encyclopedic standard, much less the brilliant prose expected of FAC. There are a number of problems with linking as well, from massive overlinking (I lost count of how many times Palermo is linked) to at least one self-referential link (violent succession). There are referencing issues as well, including a bare URL link to Youtube as Reference 125, but given the state of the article, I didn't do a comprehensive reference review. To meet the FAC standards, this article would require a sufficiently thorough rewrite that I would then oppose on the stability criterion. 6132:"Owing to the scale of the atrocities, Archer Blood, the US Consul General in Dhaka, sent what became known as the Blood telegram, in which the signatories denounced American "complicity in Genocide"". This requires some unpacking - first, a concul would normally send his/her own telegrams, so the idea that it had multiple signatories seems strange. Second, I don't understand the relevance / meaning, in this particular sentence, of "Owing to the scale of the atrocities". Is this meant to explain the actions of Blood, or the fact that there were all the signatories... i just don't follow the argument here. 12736: 5457:? In that case, you are still left with the problem of not having explained why you are first citing that outside estimate that is so exorbitantly higher. Has that estimate some special authority that would justify us giving it pride of place? Why then have the authors of the other estimates ignored it? – As for the "lebensborn" thing, I'm not going to discuss that with you further, having experienced your inaccessibility to logical argument too many times. It's absurd and has to go, and the article will not be featured while it's there. 4481:; he states as much in his prose. Of course many other papers and books – including that by Scarboro and Luck, which you cite – discuss the religion of Wicca (from historical, anthropological, and sociological angles), but none discuss the word's etymology. In fact I think that the Scarboro and Luck article would be of very little use here, because it does not focus on the etymology or terminology, instead offering a sociological analysis of a Wiccan coven in Atlanta, Georgia. Interesting stuff, but not particularly pertinent here. 15093:"Whereas KFC management had previously allowed franchisees to serve any soft drink they wished, PepsiCo stated that it hoped it would be able to convince franchisees to stock Pepsi products". The sentence seeks to contrast two things, but they are actually the same: previous management had "allowed" franchisees to serve anything, while Pepsi said "it hoped it would be able to convince franchisees" to do something - implying that it remained a choice - they weren't changing the franchise contracts. So why "whereas"? 3188:

for various types of hollow metal tube also being 'waveguide') and that this article will only deal with filters of one type. I think a better approach would be to start with a very general definition of a waveguide filter that is always true, then mention the caveat and say that the rest of this article will only deal with the case of filters in hollow metal tubes. I think the best approach would be to rename this article or make this article cover other types as well (eg Coplanar waveguide filters).

14458:- if all someone saw was the infbox (as can happen on some smart phones), it would not tell them this article is about a Disney character (as opposed to the fairy tale or even the version in Shrek films), and it makes it appear that the general character of Rapunzel first appeared in the world in 2010, sprung full-formed from the mind of Glen Keane. For an example of an FA infobox that does a much better job of making clear this is a character in a specific fictional universe, see 5585:

Australian doctor felt while working with them, and nobody cares about what that doctor mistakenly thought the rapes in Bangladesh were comparable with. The only reason to have this bit (and in a literal block quote, no less) is to gain the extra emotional power of having that comparison with the nazis; why would we throw that comparison at the reader when we are forced in the next moment to retract it and explain to them that these two things weren't comparable after all?

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to a burger - which one would hope was boneless! So it cannot be being rolled out for the first time at any rate. Third, the Sanburn quote is classic 'nothing text': is describes the innovation as "modest" and then says it "may not" (and therefore by implication "may") be the latest in a long line blah blah. It is of no consequence and shouldn't be included. Then we have this concept store - a single store in a chain that has nearly 10000. See

4488:, a relatively influential journal in the British Pagan scene, albeit one that is not peer-reviewed or academic. Seims herself subsequently uploaded the article online so that it could gain a wider readership, but originally it did appear in print, and therefore fits with Knowledge's reliable source policy. If its of any relevance here, Doyle White actually quotes Seims's arguments in his academic paper, in order to support or critique them. 10629:"His brother was in California the night Bruce died and yet Roderick knew from a dream exactly how it happened. The night of the drowning Roderick awoke screaming and rushed to tell his grandmother about his nightmare." Maybe "His brother, Roderick, was in California the night Bruce died, yet claimed to know from a dream exactly what had happened. Roderick awoke screaming and rushed to tell his grandmother about his nightmare." 4952:

ref=harv parameter needs to be added for proper working of the style. I have illustrated a few examples in the article. However, for cite web templates, and in some other instances where author name is not available, there are some other methods of parameter. Please see an article that uses the style to understand that. Yes it does need some work, but the end result is aesthetically more soothing. Regards.--

4877: 7136:. The NYT article uses the term: Western. Southwest is an imperfect substitute; however, Western U.S. is already used in this same sentence. It would be redundant to state this same geographical reference again, so deleting from the Southwest seems like the best option. I've checked again and I don't see other issues, but point out anything you believe we may have missed. Thanks. 8149:", in 1893, Burnham took his family to southern Africa where his background proved useful" This is awkwardly worded and I don't think the last bit really adds anything (we say in the next paragraph he was useful). Perhaps make clear why he went. Maybe something like "Feeling the Old West was becoming too tame, Burnham took his family to southern Africa in 1893, perceiving 14480:; the lead is supposed to be a summary of the content of the article. My rule of thumb is to include each section / subsection in the lead in some way (even if it is just a sentence or phrase). The current lead does not mention the following sections (as far as I can see): Hair and technology, Walt Disney Parks and Resorts, Accolades and recognition (at least no awards). 4810:"After the conflict the victims went through a second ordeal: widespread sexual infections and feelings of intense shame and humiliation." Unnecessary use of a colon, simply "Many of the victims suffered from sexual infections and feelings of intense shame and humiliation, and a number were ostracised by their families and communities or committed suicide." will do. 6219:"Abul Kalam Azad was the first person to be sentenced for crimes during the war." Slightly confusing, since we have already been told of the first person to be indicted and also sentenced (I realise there is a difference) but also, we have no context as to why we are being told about Azad, since we know nothing of what the crimes, or the sentence, were. 12005:

criticisms together -- namely the battery life, the arrangement of the buttons, the lack of battery or storage flexibility, and the camera software features. I would also talk about the bloatware in this particular paragraph. At the moment "Reception" is just a collection of reviews sourced from different publications without any seamless integration.

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document included within Chalk. The second citation is highly problematic. Bisvasa 2005 appears not to be a scholarly secondary source, but publication of primary documents from the Mujibnagar Government for reference purposes. If I have understood that correctly, then it is not a sufficient source for the claim, because we need a high-quality

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a few more weeks in the spotlight. Compared with Walt Mossberg's review, the one written by Pogue has got a lot of coverage. You need to cut a lot of the wording and synthesize the praise into several paragraphs, and maybe bring the criticisms under one. At the moment there is a lot of duplication. You could also get rid of the review scores.

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seesm incorrect. Moreover, it is not available online, so not able to cross-check. Either give actual details of teh full citation (such as, page number, actual authors), or replace that. Also, the bibliographic entry Mannan, Abdul (December 2009). "People in people's war". Daily Star. has not been used as a reference. So, it can be removed.

2941:"On April 23, 2007, during a formal session of the Fairfax County Board of Supervisors, Juskalian was recognized for his heroism and honorable service to the United States" vs "The Fairfax County Board of Supervisors recognized Juskalian for his heroism and honorable service to the United States during a formal session on April 23, 2007" 3654: 3650: 11174:

of software and sales, and could benefit from a third-party copy-edit, with a particular focus on "Reception", which I think could be synthesized to remove simply superfluous statements and duplication. For now my job here has come to an end. I would be happy to participate in a future FAC if this article is renominated. Regards, --

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from 25,000 to the Bangladeshi government's figure of 70,000". These two statements are blatantly contradictory (the estimate cited in the previous sentence is almost three times higher than even the highest estimate cited in the next). These statements need to be put into proper context and related to each other, or be left out.

1794:"The film received an April 2013 release and grossed $ 15 million on its first weekend, making it the lowest-grossing opening weekend for a film in the franchise; it also became a critical failure." → "The film was released in April 2013 and grossed US$ 15 million on its first weekend, making it the lowest-grossing weekend for a 6629:

present because, in the case of this book, Biśvāsa is assembling primary documents, not writing a scholarly analysis. Regarding the first claim, (Khan saying 'I will reduce this majority to a minority') can we get a second source supporting this (or alternatively, a source indicating that Khan does not dispute that he said it)?

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It is problematic to determine who did exactly what as nothing was published during the war. Fano & Lawson published the technical results of the work after the war, but I don't know if they throw any light on who did what either. I would be cool with removing the statement if you think it does not add to the article.

8000:"known for his service to the British Army in colonial Africa" He was initially in the service of the British South Africa Company, not the British Army. The two are not the same thing. My understanding is that he only actually joined the British Army in 1900, when Roberts took him on and gave him the formal rank of captain. 11014:; there are no red links but I see some terms that should have them, i.e. Northern Territories (BSA) Exploration Company, Wa Syndicate or Mlimo. Please consider adding more to encourage creation of new articles. 4) "Assassination of Mlimo" section mentions a sacred cave and a village, can we add their respective names? -- 8244:

Burnham and Harris Hammond were included on the board, and Fred Burnham served as president. Roderick Burnham was by profession a geologist and an executive at Union Oil at the time the Burnham Exploration Company was incorporated; however, this relationship is probably too detailed and unnecessary for the lead.

8499:"Once the Sioux had been driven away the mother returned to find the house burned down. Her young son was safe, fast asleep in the basket and protected only by the corn husks." I think we can merge these two sentences; "... burned down, but her young son was safe, fast asleep in the basket with the corn husks." 4813:"The list included members of the Bangladesh Nationalist Party, a political group founded in 1978." Seems unusual for you to mention just one party, and one which formed 7 years after the ordeal. I'd feel more comfortable if you mentioned some of the other alleged perpetrators (groups) for neutrality purposes. 3021:

1942, Juskalian boarded the RMS Queen Mary, and along with the other 15,000 soldiers of the 1st Infantry Division, was shipped to Europe" where the source says "In August, the whole division — some 20,000 soldiers — boarded the Queen Mary and headed overseas." I agree that thorough checks are needed here.

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needed, for background, so the readers get an idea of what caused this. Your point on the number of pregnancies shows you know little of the subject matter, 25000 is the number of estimate war babies, which I shall now make clear. Given your personal dislike of me you should not even be commenting here.

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honestly say Keane "created" the character. Finally, the Brothers Grimm collected the fairy tales and edited them, but were not strictly speaking the authors of them (though they did make editorial changes and chose which version(s) to print). So perhaps this sentence would be better as something like

12509:- caption could be trimmed, especially for an infobox image: "Colonel Robert Madgwick as Director of Army Education, Melbourne, 1944" contains all necessary information (Toorak is not mentioned in the article, the exact day of year makes no difference for the image, Australia is clear from the intro). 16932:

reliable sources". Inherent in that difference is evaluating the reputation of the publisher, not just the interview subject. You've used four videos on YouTube as sources, one of which produced by Cedar Point and three not. The reputation, quality and reliability of those other three creators are at

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First off, no one person does all the animation on a modern feature-length animated film. Second, since much of the character's story is taken from the fairy tale (long hair, held in a tower, falls in love with a man who climbs her hair into the tower, even being naïve), I am not sure the article can

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is referring to, since the subject (Aguilera) is missing from the previous sentence. In that case I suggest you rephrase "On June 22, 2010, "You Lost Me" was announced to be released as the third single in the" to "On June 22, 2010, Aguilera announced that "You Lost Me" would be released as the third

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The sentence about how a Navy fleet was called to service the day before the game seems to me like it might work a bit better as a clause separated by semi-colon from the previous sentence. This would join the cause-and-effect that the two sentences produce, and would solve the small problem that the

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paragraph: "The band elected not to utilize the considerable marketing tools that a major label act has at their disposal early on." Says who? Not all bands signed to a major label have "considerable marketing tools" etc. This is more conjecture, and another thing which isn't supported by a citation.

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This article has not been adequately prepared for the FAC process. While the article has been expanded, the references cleaned up, and the prose improved, there exist several issues that I believe cannot be adequately addressed in a reasonable amount of time. The article still lacks coverage in terms

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A list of sources is useful to the reader, so I've added a new ref for Britt to the article even though it is a bit redundant. I've moved Montgomery to its alpha location, and I've spelled out the states. I've been through the hyphens several times, as have other editors, but I can't locate any new

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I presented this source "A consensus has formed among scholars that genocides in the 20th century encompassed (although were not limited to) the following cases: Herero in 1904–1907, the Armenian genocide in the Ottoman Empire in 1915–1923, the Holodomor in the former Soviet Ukraine in 1932–1933, the

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The paragraph that begins "Between the middle of May and September 1971,..." needs some work. It appears to me that most of this para is intended to present an argument, that there was a racist motive behind rape as a tactic of war. If so, the first sentence is irrelevant and should be deleted. Then,

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Overall structure of the prose: much of the presentation is repetitive and poorly structured, with statements being stacked onto each other seemingly more with a view towards maximising the rhetorical effect of the repeated accusatory statements than with a view to their precise logical relationships

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Hmm, couple of points. First, the text as it stands is heavily ungrammatical, including bits that are presumably literal quotes. I can't find the "classical a pose..." bit in either of the two cited sources, and there seems to be a closing quotation mark missing; can you check that again? Second, are

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Don't really know the answer to that. My principle source for the history is Levy & Cohn and those are the names they mention in this connection (ie right in amongst the discussion of Rad Lab's development of microwave cavity filters). However, the only specific work mentioned is that of Bethe.

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After a cursory check I noticed this close paraphrasing: "constructed from British biscuit cans and their handles made from the wooden slats of their beds" vs. "fashioned out of British biscuit cans with handles created from their wooden bed slats". And this inconsistency with the source, " In August

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Suggest deleting the whole para that begins "In April 2013, KFC announced the roll out of boneless Original Recipe across all of its United States outlets". First, the article should not be a platform for every single product announcement from KFC. Second, the first reference to "Original Recipe" is

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Although I agree with you, I will wait until the actual review process begins to further discuss the "title"/"occupation" infobox issue. And no, Rapunzel is NOT German; she is from a fictional kingdom from Corona. I have removed it from the infobox several times. However, an anonymous user (as in

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A completely ignorant question, but is Rapunzel really depicted as "German" in the Disney franchise? Or is she merely a fantasy princess in a fairy-tale country? "Nationality" as infobox parameter looks strange here, it would be far more useful to note, that her "Origin" is Germany and the character

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I wouldn't relist this at the guild. If you want this to pass FAC, it will probably take too long for an interested editor to finish work, and you don't know if the copy-editing will be up to par. If you know a talented writer, I'd recommend asking them directly for copy-editing help. If no one else

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I think the reviews are quite lengthy. For example, "considered the HTC One to be a device that would "give HTC at least a few more weeks in the spotlight" in relation to the company's past success and recent struggles" is not significant, since any high-end phone like the One would give any company

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The completed sentence is: "Burnham distinguished himself in several battles in Rhodesia and South Africa and became Chief of Scouts". I don't see where this sentence limits the use of his Chief of Scouts title to the Boer War, but I do agree that becoming Chief of Scouts under Roberts was a bigger

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You have it right and I've updated accordingly. It gets a little more complicated because The Bulawayo Field Force militia reported to Gen. Carrington / Maj. Baden-Powell once the regular army arrived in Rhodesia in 1896, but technically Burnham was never in the British army until he joined Robert's

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Hello Ctatkinson. The problem with this review is that you address the specific examples I point out very promptly, but have not addressed the issues they exemplify. I can return time and again to give you more examples, but "The article has X problem as shown by Y instance" is not adequately solved

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Further query re aftermath. It refers at one point to some figures "...before the state programme had even started". Re-reading the paragraph, i am not sure what the term "state programme" is referring to, as Davis's program appears to be international organisation, not Bangladeshi. Can you clarify?

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If 2010a is the first of the two in the reference list, then my reading of it suggests it is not strong enough to substantiate the text "...but human rights advocates are of the opinion that the mass rapes and killings of women may not be addressed". The article quotes only two lawyers, one hopeful,

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Bose id a joke, her book does not mention the rape victims so is of no use to us, I looked at one of the sources given on the talk page, Bose estimates a few thousand rapes in it. She also says there were only 30,000 Pakistani troops in theatre, it was 90,000, she is not just fringe, she is both way

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It would be good if you could find a photograph from 1971 of women in captivity or soldiers. I'd accept the upload of a fair use image from 1971 to illustrate something important in the article and I think you could claim it for encyclopedic purposes. Obviously a photo of an actual rape if it exists

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I have a question - you've put a citation needed on the claim that HTTT is Radiohead's longest album. I'm never sure how to go about citing this sort of thing. I presume it isn't enough to just state it as a self-evident truth that readers can verify by comparing running times? Is there such a thing

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Assuming that "iTunes Store" is the work, why is it not italicized while other website names are? A standard I've used in articles I've written is to only italicize the titles of books, magazines and newspapers. For references that are exclusively online, the names are unitalicized, as they would be

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My opinion doesn't matter much. I do wonder, has it changed her career? Affected how she chose to perform? Anything significant? Or just a lot of fuss at the time? If reliable sources still talk about it as a major thing in her career then it's worth including... you have to look at how important it

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This man stalked her and has threatened to kill both Tisdale and boyfriend - I don't know, I thought this was relevant to her personal life because it was a fact that received a lot of media coverage. Do you still think it's irrelevant to her personal life? If so, I may remove that paragraph without

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In fact, throughout this section, every construction describing the number of yards in a play uses an en-dash, though it should be a hyphen. Note, of course, this does not apply to the score by the end of the half, which should be an en-dash as it currently is. Also, "23–yards" should not include a

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branch or whomever. Second always capitalize Native American. "big N" Native is acceptable; sometimes "small n" native is viewed as condescending by some Native people today (no uniformity on this, but the ones who care are the ones who will comment, the ones who don't care won't get upset either

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Estimates of numbers of people raped should not be in "aftermath", they go to the core of the article's subject, and should be included there. The estimates should be discussed in a bit more detail, and notwithstanding the fact that Davis was 'on the ground', his particular views are given far more

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Ok, I have tried to go over the technical aspect of the citations, and corrected quite a lot. Most of them appear ok to me now. Exception: Hadden 1971 citation, which ideally should have connected to Hadden, Briton; Henry Robinson Luce (1971). "Time Volume 98". Time. However, that detailed citation

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Rising from the Ashes women's narratives of 1971 The first translation to English of the oral testimonies given by women who were not just abused, but women such as Taramon Bibi who fought in the war and was awarded the Bir Protik(Symbol of Valour)." Please rewrite this with appropriate punctuation

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I think it would have to be a copyright-free image uploaded to Commons. I don't think fair use comes into play unless we are using a copyrighted full illustrated book cover associated with a specific book, and such an image would normally only be used in an article about that book. Single words and

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I tend to agree with that, but articles of this sort have repeatedly been requested at peer review and FA that the history section be moved nearer the front. The thinking seems to be that the history is easier to understand and may be of more interest to the general reader than technical details.

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Article scope: I'm not really happy with how you've approached this, first of all you say that waveguides are hollow metal tubes but then later have to clarify this and say that actually the term is used more broadly (personally I regard the broader definition as being correct with the common term

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I don't think I have much further to add here. We're going to have to agree to disagree on the reliability or suitability of videos and let the delegates make that final determination. FAs have to use "high quality reliable sources", but personally, I can't support some of the sources used here as

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Perhaps you could merge the third paragraph under "Release delays" into the first ie "Sprint and AT&T (who had exclusive selling rights to the 64 GB version) released the One in the United States on April 19, 2013; Verizon Wireless was the last major US carrier to offer the One, having finally

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I've modified the sentence by removing Roderick, but to answer your question, John Hammond Sr. considered Fred Burnham to be a member of his family (he says as much in personal correspondence). Burnham Exploration Company was a joint venture between the Burnham and Hammond families, sons Roderick

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We have addressed the far more challenging issues you raised in the earlier FAR, and I think it would be most unfortunate to withdraw this outstanding former FA based on the few examples you have raised in this FAC. With little delay and only minor edits I speedily addressed the concerns you have

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Thanks for clarifying. The change you made however doesn't really help, and "abortion programme" sounds nightmarish - like a form of genocide. I suggest you revert those words to "state program", and split the second sentence of the para in two, to read: "In the year following the war, there was a

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With chapters in edited volumes, you cite the chapter names, not just the chapter numbers. You should also provide the page numbers (the one in the inline harvard ref is just the page reference to the specific passage you're citing; in the bibliography you give the first and last page of the whole

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I see a comment from an editor up above who does not have an axe to grind saying the article is pretty damn good, and that quote was there when he looked it over. You do not get to decide that one quote stops an article from being FA. No other estimates are ignored, they are all there. I am citing

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Also in the "Aftermath" section, there is a statement saying "A doctor at the rehabilitation center in Dhaka reported 170,000 abortions of pregnancies caused by the rapes, and the births of 30,000 war babies". However, the very next paragraph says that "Estimates of the number of pregnancies range

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File:Woman_raped_and_killed_in_the_Bangladesh_Liberation_War.jpg: can we be more expansive with the "not replaceable" rationale? Any more details on original photographer or publication? What steps have been taken to attempt to identify the original photographer? Have to be really careful with the

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scholarly sources. I would be very happy if the article were able to include another academic source or two that support a large portion of the article. Of course, I expect that Doyle White's "The Meaning of "Wicca"" will stay (by far) the leading source for this article. As Midnightblueowl, there

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I'm a little bothered that the non-free image of the track layout says the purpose of use is "To show what the GateKeeper roller coaster at Cedar Point will look like once it is completed for 2013" when it is no longer uncompleted. Since it has been completed, other pictures could be taken, which

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I have seen that video, but like the source above, it's about the reputation of the publisher. Do they have a history of accuracy in their publications? Are they known for providing editorial oversight of the items they publish? We're naturally quite skeptical of videos published on YouTube for a

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Just as publication locations are normally listed for newspapers that omit their location in the title, we normally would list the publication location for a TV station. Please add the missing locations, which allows others to help judge the reliability of the sources. (The location for a student

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Sorry, Simon, but this article needs work from top to bottom. English is indeed a difficult language, but nothing's unachievable. I have highlighted some examples from the lede, but there are issues elsewhere, like "Prior to the release two days, a sneak peek of the music video was revealed," and

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Thank you for your excellent input, Piotrus. I've now addressed items 2 & 3. For item 4, although none of my sources provide names for the sacred cave or the nearby village, I did come across some additional information on the location -- not many miles from the Mangwe district. I've added

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I have a couple of issues with the first para under that heading, regarding Tikka Khan. My view is that exceptional claims require exceptional sources, and we don't have this at present. The Chalk source for the first sentence is OK, provided that the WP article is not relying on a primary source

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As has yours, I mentioned above the issues between FPaS and myself, you said what about that exactly? So archive it and be done, so long as that guy is allowed to stalk and harass me then this article will never get to FA anyway, he will not have that cos he detests me, so ya, you have given them

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Looks much better! One extra thought - is "He Said She Said" the single of hers that has sold best overall? If so, it might be easier to just say that in the lead (or just as "her most successful single"), and relegate the details to the article body, because "her best charting solo single in the

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There's a lot of POV and conjecture in this article - original research technically. For example, one sentence says "Instead, they opted to use quiet web updates on their website while they worked on the record." Where does the source itself say Manson used "quiet" updates? Another from the same

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Since lot of the reviews praise the industrial design, display and camera features (Zoe), I would merge them in one paragraph. In another paragraph I would talk about the quality of the speakers, the benchmark tests, and one or two other praise-worthy features. In the third I would bring all the

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lived in southern Minnesota; however, I'm not sure if it is correct to say that either or both of these tribes are Sioux. Unfortunately, I don't yet know the exact location of Tivoli, Minnesota (a pioneer town, long gone), the 1860 reservation boundaries, or modern the tribal names adequately to

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that Khan said something. But we cannot rely on them for that claim as they are neither neutral, nor a historian assessing the validity of the claim. We need a scholarly assessment by a neutral source that, having weighed up the evidence, accepts that Khan said this thing. We do not have that at

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I further edited a proposed revision, to reduce the emphasis on the Pakistani government figure (as it is not an independent source and lies so far outside other estimates. I also reorganised the paras to cluster together all the quantitative data, which strengthens the case for the 200K to 400K

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Question about your last point (regarding the last paragraph of Promotion and release): it seems to me that Com Lag, the b-sides collection, should at least be mentioned. Are you saying because there's nothing more to really expand on, other than to say it exists, it should be deleted? 08:53, 25

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References are occasionally incomplete and/or inconsistently formatted. There's a bare URL and I also see "NME, 3 May 2003, p.27." and "Q Magazine, June 2003" (author and article names?). I also see author's inconsistently listed as "Chuck Klosterman" and "Edwards, Gavin". I recommend a thorough

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is a tolerably precise definition, but "kids" in such a context could variously mean only people younger than tweens, only people older than tweens, or all people between age 8-or-so and (potentially) age 25-or-so who don't fit into the "tweens" category. Either way, something is either wrong or

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I understand being skeptical of items published on YouTube but this is an interview with Rob Decker. The information is coming straight from him. If you have an issue with that particular video, we can remove it because he says the same thing in another video that is used in the article. As for

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in those cases, yet you're attributing them as if they were involved in creating the content. I don't advise that people list Google Books when using convenience links to books hosted on that website; in this case, these are convenience links to a website hosting content originally published by

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The Mason's are a club and I've seen his 32-degree certificate in the archives at Yale, but I didn't make a copy and I don't have the date it was issued. Each mason is joins and is promoted at a particular lodge; however, his lodge is probably not important to the article, so I've removed this

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Not sure what you are responding to with this comment. Assuming it is my comment in the last group - i am not trying to open up a debate about whether or not this was genocide, I am simply saying that, when a WP article says something is "widely viewed" as having a certain nature (in this case,

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Do you have a long history of disagreements with these editors? It is a very sensitive topic, and it doesn't surprise me it is disputed on here but if there are valid concerns with neutrality and prose then they need to be addressed respectfully.. And I haven't done anything Darkness, if Ian or

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Nope, the background is necessary to give readers a full understanding of what led up to this, and this has been discussed before and FPaS was wrong then just as he is wrong now, we cannot expect people to have to go read another article to try and figure out what happened when they are halfway

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Regarding background, then do you suggest to remove (or, maybe summarize in two sentences) the initial two paragraphs? And essentially start from December 1970? I had a feeling that background is probably long, but was not sure where to start really. I would suggest Darkness Shines to hear what

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The quote box that begins "Burnham is the sufficient and heroic figure, model and living example, who inspired and gave..." is "sandwiching" text between it and the topographic map on my browser. That's also a wiki-MOS "crime" you now need to fix. Maybe you don't need two quote boxes in that

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I am getting rather tired of your vendetta against me. I have restored the quote you removed, as it is very relevant to the article, what your personal beliefs on what the author knew is irrelevant, he most likely meant it in manner of the common belief of Lebensborn. The background section is

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Yes I have talked to members of the A1 Class review. They provided positive feedback. Only one user had a concerns of reliability with a source (#8 and #15) which I personally believe is not an issue. The source is paraphrased in accordance to first hand accounts of Juskalian and can easily be

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New issue introduced: I wouldn't link the locations in the footnotes. Judicious linking in footnotes steers readers to two things: the source itself (or an online convenience copy) or a wikipedia article to allow them to judge the credibility of the source. Linking to the name of a publisher,

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deal than the use of this title in the Matabele Wars -- the Boer War was Burnham's first regular army gig and the number of troops and planning involved was significantly greater. I'm open to further ideas, but to try and keep this simple for the reader I've left this sentence "as is" for now.

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Hehe. Fancy comment by Faizan. Give me a break! Yes, of course for the sake of neutrality, rapes committed by Mukti Bahini need to be mentioned, and those are mentioned, both in the lead and the body of the article. Indeed I was surprised to see the mention in the lead, because the atrocities

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Not worth it. It would be a sensible solution if the quotation was otherwise of some encyclopedic value, but it isn't. Such a discussion would only unnecessarily divert the reader's attention away from the main point, which is that people were raped in Bangladesh. Nobody cares about what some

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there is currently a technical problem. Wen you converted refs to use sfn style, the conversion was incorrectly done. First, you don't need to mention page numbers within the complete bibliography, since you are indicating page numbers in individual citations. Second, for cite book templates,

7450:: If you see continued problems, please keep listing the specific examples so they can be fixed. Either you'll run out of them and the article will be good, or they will remain not fixed and will be a valid reason to oppose. Just talking about generalities is not very helpful, I am afraid. -- 6623:

I think the second claim will have to be removed. I probably did not explain myself very well. The issue is not Biśvāsa himself. The issue is that the book is a compilation of primary source documents from the post-independence government, which was (understandably) hostile to Pakistan. That

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The other thing is, why are we discussing this image here? Right now, the text still seems a bit as if tacked on to the article as an afterthought – more like the text being there in order to deliver a pretext for showing the image, than the image being there in order to illustrate the text.

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the footnotes/bibliography have duplications with the "Works/Biographies" sections. The layout is also a bit atypical. My recommendation is that the works actually WRITTEN by Burnham be moved above the references into the article text and specifically identified as such. All remaining

7232:. Furthermore, this was only an example of neutrality/tone issues - others, if it would help, include "he struck it rich" and "it was said that he could read the face of nature as easily as most could read their morning newspaper" (the latter could be made a direct quote if applicable). 12057:

For the rewording of the Ultrapixel sensor: there's a big difference here - the rewording makes the sentence inaccurate as it implies that the sensors are 1.4 to 1.0 µm, when it's the pixels that are that size. And "the One's competition" is unnecessarily vague and an awkward choice of

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I guess I don't understand why it matters who creates the videos. How can a video of something happening or a higher executive saying something not be reliable? It happened or it didn't. He said it or he didn't. I don't get why it matters who posted it. The information is there, it is

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Since Drik is a commercial agency, this unfortunately puts it in the same class as images owned by other commercial agencies such as Reuters or AP: unuseable unless the image is itself the object (not just a vehicle) of encyclopedic coverage; otherwise subject to speedy deletion under

4030:"a years-long process of recording and editing drummer Phil Selway described as 'manufacturing music in the studio' " Funky wording here. Perhaps insert "which" after "editing", or change "drummer Phil Selway described" to "described by drummer Phil Selway", unless I'm misreading this. 3642:'The first use of these in a filter was by S. B. Cohn in 1965 using titanium dioxide as the dielectric material' - citation for this? There was widespread use dielectrics in coaxial cables and capacitors before this so it doesn't seem much of a stretch to put dielectric in a waveguide. 11380:"high-end Android smartphone produced by the Taiwanese company" Please define "produce". My understanding is that HTC, like Apple (through Foxconn), outsources the main manufacturing job to another company. If HTC is the designer and manufacturer of the One, please say so in the lead. 3308:

True, but it is significant to the history. Waveguide filters started off as, and still frequently are, direct equivalents of lumped-element designs. It is unlikely that waveguide filter history would have taken the path it did without the precursor of lumped-element filter design.

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on this one. Sources generally refer to hollow-metal waveguide simply as waveguide. It is the common name, ergo that should be the title of the article. It would usually only be specified to be "hollow-metal" where disambiguation is needed. Knowledge can do the same and create

2863:). So I decided to bring it directly to FAC. I can expand on the lede a little bit. I agree, the second paragraph needs expansion. The sections I personally believe are suffice since he didn't spend much time in some of those places. I can always combine them with other sections. 6836:

Not done. Further examples include: no citations to Britt; References section is misordered (it's mostly alphabetical, but then I see Montgomery before Hough?); inconsistent in whether states are spelled out or abbreviated; some hyphens rather than endashes in page ranges; etc.

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In this article, PointBuzz doesn't really cite any content. Most of the PB footnotes are used to cite posters or pictures. Also, one of them is a Press Release. That is not written by PointBuzz, it is released by Cedar Fair/Cedar Point. PointBuzz is just the one that published

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and recommend withdrawal. This has not been adequately prepared. There are basic grammatical issues in the lead, and it appears that there is at least one other major contributor to the article that has not been consulted. That editor should possibly be a co-nominator as well.

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Reference formalities: chapter titles in edited collections are frequently missing, e.g. in Mohsin 2005, Khondker 2006 etc. If you are going to cite an individually authored chapter in a collection, then the title of the chapter needs to be cited together with the name of the

6193:"...by John Tulloch to be as "classical a pose as any Madonna and Child, however the image is that of a woman, it is not possible to determine age who had been raped repeatedly" Something wrong here - there is no close quotation mark and it does not appear to be a sentence. 5832:, but there are certainly more.) Another (harmless but cosmetic) issue: capitalization in titles is not consistent yet. Use either title casing or normal text casing throughout (or, for a fancy option, use title casing for book titles and normal text casing for chapters). 14293:

Not offended in the least, so don't worry about that. If you had limited your observations to fictional characters in the first place, I wouldn't have felt the need to comment. Anyway, on with the FAC and good luck. I'll hat this to avoid disturbing the FAC further.

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Well, you were obviously offended by my previous comment which, by the way, was not my intention. What I meant to say was that I have yet to come across a well-written FICTIONAL CHARACTER article that does not use a FICTIONAL CHARACTER infobox. Please note that there

10725:"Howard went to Africa and became a mining engineer in the gold mines of Johannesburg, South Africa and later wrote a text book on Modern Mine Valuation." → "Howard moved to Africa, became a mining engineer in the Johannesburg gold mines, and later wrote a text book on 5022:

Now, another big task. The bibliographic entries should be sorted alphabetically. For determining alphabetic order, consider first author's (last) name. If no author present, you can use the title of the work (title of the book, or title of news report) for alphabetic

5314:" programme. The author of the quote clearly had no idea what the Lebensborn actually was. I'm irritated to find that the main author of the article recently clandestinely reintroduced this passage, after agreeing during a discussion last year that it was misleading 14586:

Another FA criterion is that the article be complete - could a comparison between the Grimm fairy tale version of the character and this one be made? The fair tale character becomes pregnant by her suitor, her hair is not magical, but she does have magical healing

5310:, for two reasons: first, it is quite off-topic, talking about some author's personal feelings in dealing with the atrocities. Secondly, it quite unnecessarily diverts attention from the main topic through a rather misleading and confusing comparison with the Nazi " 7487:

I'd like to see the lede bulked out a little more; it's a bit light. His military service is quite extensive and probably needs a better summary in the lead, WP:MOS wants a lead to not be too long, but I think three to four more solid paragraphs is easily doable

1766:"She played Jody, a late-'20s dancer, the leading role in the film, which also starred Lindsay Lohan and Charlie Sheen." → "Starring alongside Lindsay Lohan and Charlie Sheen, Tisdale portrayed Jody, the leading character of the film who is dancer in her late-20s." 16813:

others. (And that re-publishing may or may not be a copyright violation.) If you are citing posters, cite the poster, not the website. For the others, you still have the issue of whether or not Point Buzz meets our requirements for sourcing at the FA level.

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The "team named desire" nickname should be explained somewhere, preferably in the body of the article. I just looked down there and saw nothing indicating why Navy was called that. I can imagine non-college football fans feeling completely lost right about

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I've withdrawn my suggestion for withdrawal, but I'm still finding more issues with this article. I haven't rechecked paraphrasing issues, but while reviewing I also found some prose issues, for example "always careful to keep a rifle within arms length".

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Your issues were addressed previously, the consensus is that the atrocities carried out by Pakistan and the militias far outweigh the revenge attacks, the weight was given accordingly. If you wish to suggest an addition please use the article talk page.

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About the same citation: I can't check the source online, but did the Dhaka doctor really "report" these figures, or did he just estimate? "Reporting" entails that he had the means of accurately counting based on direct observation. This would be quite

10376:"an old friend from Africa"; while most would realise what you are actually saying, some could misunderstand and think Hammond was actually from SA/Rhodesia, which of course he wasn't. maybe reword to "an old friend from his time in Africa", or similar 69: 57: 6339:"Pakistani General Amir Abdullah Khan Niazi claimed that thousands of men and women had been killed or raped in Chittagong". Only use of the word "claim/ed" in the article - can you explain why this is the only place it is appropriate that it be used? 13619:, and urge withdrawal. Referencing is really not adequate, including the presence of tags in several places. The lead isn't an adequate summary of the article, and the several citations and large quote included there aren't really in the spirit of 11010:. 1) "Film and stage accounts" and "Tributes" are in an unnecessary and MoS-unrecommended bullet point list. Please rewrite to prose. 2) Add Queen's South Africa Medal and British South Africa Company Medal to infobox. 3) The article should respect 3982:

I included it because it always comes up in discussion of the album's criticisms, particularly from the band and Godrich - "it's too long", "not enough editing" etc. With that in mind, it might make sense to move it to that area, or just delete it.

7586:: First off, when possible to use tribal affiliation, that is nearly always preferable to just saying "Indian" or "Native American." In the examples above, if "Sioux" is as good as you have, then use it, even if you can't narrow it down to the 5492:, that is); it also, by failing to correct or hedge this presupposition, carries the implication that it is indeed true. This is historically misleading – and quite unnecessarily so, because the whole comparison is extraneous to the topic anyway. 73: 53: 273:

U.S." is not only longer, but, more importantly, seems to be trying to put across a lengthy series of qualifiers in order to make the statement true, which makes it very difficult to read to my somewhat worldwide-music-industry-ignorant brain. --

65: 8631:"He traveled in northern Mexico and the American Southwest, including Texas and Oklahoma Territory, earning a living as a buffalo hunter, cowboy, and prospector, and he continued working as a scout" Maybe "He traveled in northern Mexico and the 5198:

Yes, but it would have to be sourced discussion of the image itself, i.e. as a notable photographic work (the history of how it was taken, its aesthetics, its impact on public opinion etc.), not just a discussion of the things the image shows.

4051:: This paragraph is very short, and discusses two ideas which are completely unrelated to one another, and neither is fully developed. If these snippets can't be expanded upon, I believe they should be deleted. Catch-all paragraphs are no good. 15053:

I would suggest finding a picture of the most recent store design. I swapped out the KFC/Taco Bell pic for one showing the most modern store design, but if you can find a pic of a recent-build standalone KFC to complement it, that'd be nice.

6349:"Sheikh Mujibur Rahman called the victims birangona ("heroine"), but this only underscored the fact..." The expression "this only underscored the fact" in this context appears to me unencyclopedic and designed to emphasise the view expressed. 9509:"Returning from the Boer War on the RMS Dunottar Castle, July 1900." Dunottar Castle should be italicised. The image caption here is intrusive and large; if you like I can try to make something similar to what we have on the directors image 16605:

Also, there is a vast inconsistency between listing TV stations as "WKYC", but "WWJ-TV". Either they all are listed with the "-TV", or other appropriate, suffix, or they aren't. Honestly, they should have the appropriate suffix applied.

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Leaving aside the sourcing issues, both sentences need to specify who is claiming that Khan said these things. First sentence: "He reportedly said... " (ie. who reported?). Second sentence: "Khan is also reported to..." (ie. reported by

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the 25,000–70,000 estimate was only the estimate of births (comparable to the doctor's figure of 50,000, which would be within a logical range), but then you changed it again claiming it was "other estimates" of the total of pregnancies

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song, the Music section is too long and stubby-looking. Also when you have a lyrics section, what is the point of discussing it again? I suggest scrapping the songwise sectioning, and moving the best info to augment the music and lyrics

196:"the 2006 soundtrack became the top-selling album in the United States that year" - can probably be left out of the lead, which already mentions the soundtrack albums; Tisdale was not a main singer on most of the singles from this album. 7269:

and some instances of close paraphrasing (ex "His expeditions in Rhodesia were so important that the Royal Geographical Society elected him a Fellow" vs "His expedition was so important that the Royal Geographic Society elected him a

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as a periodical title, and had assumed incorrectly about that material's origins. I don't suppose there's any chance of a page number there, either? I do still have some questions about that Fields source, though. For starters, what

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in layout. I am not inclined to change it now that a format has been established by precedent - if I did it will end up being changed back and forth on every reviewers whim. If the community establishes a preferred layout, through a

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Again your thoughts on what the doctor thoughts being mistaken have no place here, it is obvious he meant it in the common perception of the word. I am happy removing the block quote and paraphrasing it if that would suit you better?

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Uhh, don't sort stuff when you're in a state of insomnia. That list was still a complete mess. I fixed it some now, but I don't guarantee it's completely correct yet. Also, please don't forget those chapter titles I mentioned below.

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I have removed the species, gender and title from the infobox. However, I must disagree with your idea to remove the infobox completely because I have yet to come across a well-written (FA, GA or B-class) article that does not use

13811:"It was successful on the Hot Dance Club Play chart, where it reached number one."—why not just get to the point and say "It reached number one on the Hot Dance Club Play chart". From that, we can infer that it was successful there. 2811:

Just some very quick comments: lede is awfully short for an article of this length, paragraphs are somewhat choppy (many are quite short too, as are sections). May need some extensive polishing. Have you tried the MilHist project's

6165:"Estimates of those raped vary from 200,000 to 400,000" - except that later, the article states that the 1974 commission supplementary report estimated "hundreds" - which should presumably therefore form the lower end of the range? 14590:

While it is clear that a lot of work has been put into this article, I am leaning to a reluctant oppose as it does not meet the FA criteria and it seems as if too much work may be required to get it to FA standards while at FAC.

13030:"For his performance in the game, Navy quarterback Ira McKee was named the game's most valuable player." The double use of "game" is a prose redundancy, and I can't see any need to have two of them. It should be easy to chop one. 10438:"Burnham died when he was 86 on September 1, 1947 of heart failure at his home in Santa Barbara, California." maybe "Burnham died of heart failure at the age of 86, on September 1, 1947 at his home in Santa, Barbara, California." 7060:

Other material is not supported by the cited source. For example, "Burnham and Armstrong waited until Mlimo entered the cave and started his dance of immunity, at which point Burnham shot Mlimo just below the heart" is cited to

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Someone ran a bot on the article a couple of days ago and I see it introduced a few small errors in the references. Carr was one of those, and I've just fixed it. I'll have this corrected this weekend. Thanks for letting me

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Not sure the year is needed in "The auction ended on May 6, 2013." Based on the previous sentence, it's obvious to the reader that the auction had to end in 2013. I feel the same way about the year of the media day in the next

11706:"While most high-end smartphones used 8- or 13-megapixel cameras at the time of the One's release, the size of the pixels in their sensors have ranged from 1.4 to 1.0 µm, both of which are considerably smaller in size." --: --> 9094:"he left within the hour" Why not "he left immediately" or "he left within minutes"? Also, why "Although"? Considering the vast distance involved and the urgency of the appointment, one would surely expect him to leave quickly. 4269:

scholarship. As such it contains much historically erroneous information. Placing it in "Further reading" might imply that it is a good source for readers to gain further, accurate information, but quite simply it isn't. Best,

10556:"Nada (May 1894 – May 19, 1896), Burnham's daughter who was the first white child born in Bulawayo, died of fever and starvation during the Siege of Bulawayo" Maybe "Nada (May 1894 – May 19, 1896), Burnham's daughter, was the 10309:

I've added alt tags to all of the images. I think that does it for all of your comments, except for the tribal affiliations. Thank you for your insights on how we should address Native American issues. I work on this next.

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How does one go about getting permission? If I mail them to ask if they would be OK with a single usage for this article and they retain copyright, is there someone on Wiki they need to mail? Or a special form they need fill?

1738:"Her involvement in Dimension Films' Scary Movie 5 was announced in June 2012, by The Weinstein Company" → "In June 2012, The Weinstein Company announced her involvement in Dimension Films' Scary Movie 5" Remove passive voice. 7473:

works/biographies not used in the footnotes/bibliography should be consolidated into (in my opinion) a "further reading" section, though if you wish to break out the biographies from the scholarly papers, that would be fine.

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all estimates per NPOV, which kinda says we have to. Why not go and pick on someone else and leave this for uninvolved editors to review. And if you will not discuss the quote you can remove the pointy tag you added, cheers.

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issue, which might need further discussion. Thanks for the source and ref formatting check (although, just for the record, you forgot to include the book by John Charles Hibner in the overview part above). Thanks again, -

4451:; despite my belief to the contrary, this does appear to be a comprehensive literature review. I wish we had access to the original publication of the Seims content and to more complete bibliographical information for the 12830:? It appears that the print edition (linked from the OCLC) never used the city in its name, but the electronic edition (linked from the ISSN) did. At the worst, you have conflicting identification numbers in your citation. 12709:

Footnote 2 is apparently using "96 Years" as a location, yet that isn't a location reference in the linked webpage. Also, the website appears to be named "College Football at Sports-Reference.com", not what it is credited

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It's not hard to imagine that EMI will keep reissuing the album every five years until the end of time, with new "deluxe/bonus/exclusive" material. IMO there's no need to list all that here. Only the original tracklist is

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In the Disney film adaptation, Rapunzel, a princess born with long, magical golden hair, is abducted at infancy and raised by a vain woman named Mother Gothel, who exploits her hair's healing abilities in order to remain

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Thanks for the comments! All helpful. I definitely agree with both of you, now, that the Music section should't be divided by song; I only did that because I'd seen it on other FAs, but clearly it isn't justified in this

2605:"Disney Channel's three-time Emmy Award winner animated series Phineas & Ferb as Candace Flynn..."—"winner" should be "winning" and there should be a hyphen after "Award". "Series" is also used twice in this sentence. 4327:

article which is not focussed on etymology. The ref and associated content was removed from the main text as a result of a recent peer review but the ref details were accidentally left in the bibliography (now removed).

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Going to have to think about this more - i think it may reflect a broader structural issue in the article, but not sure. Regardless, the text is much improved. If I don't come back to you by Monday, ping me again. ]

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one who does not use an account) insists on re-adding it to the infobox despite the fact that I have explained to him/her why the information is incorrect several times. I will remove the information once again.--

13014:"before attempting a game-winning field goal. The field goal missed...". Try not to begin a sentence with something that appears in the conclusion of the prior sentence. Here you can use "The kick" as a substitute. 6544:, a physician who participated in the programme, estimated that the commonly cited figures were probably "very conservative" compared with the real numbers". Would that accurately reflect the sources in your view? 5857:

Get real, this was discussed before, and there is noway in hell that both communities were "equally affected" That is so wrong it actually defies belief. The MB atrocities are mentioned in the lede per due weight.

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Same image, two different names given. The text is tacked on. I wanted to know how much needs be added so we can use the image. I choose this image as it is discussed in two academic sources and is notable for it.

10938:- as most images in this article come from the same source via OTRS ticket #2013061810006694, those should be OK. However, could you get them tagged with OTRS-tags aswell (or alternatively add a publication date)? 6236:

The man's name is wikilinked to an article on an unrelated person. And, while we now have text on what his crimes were, which is good, we don't have text on who he was. A commander? A regular soldier? A general?

5676:, which does NOT have the quote by the doctor, reads good enough. For now, Darkness Shines, I think it is pretty ok to not have the quote, and move along. There are other things to take care of in this article.-- 5247:

the two passages really talking about the same image? The one source seems to be talking about an image titled "Brave Woman", the other about one called "Shamed Woman". Are they the same? I assume one of them is

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Fair enough. I'd say its length is self-evident, maybe even that it's the longest. But, if no other reliable source discusses this fact, how do you know that it is important enough (i.e. it's not just trivia) to

2577:"Two years later, Tisdale began to cultivate an adult image and mainstream pop sound and released her second studio album Guilty Pleasure (2009)." —you say "two years later", so the "2009" notation is not needed. 2034:

File:Maxim_May_2013_cover.jpg: the given purpose of use is inconsistent with the image's actual use in the article. The FUR in general needs work, as a stronger case is needed for the use of this non-free image.

10461:"At a private ceremony he was buried at Three Rivers, California, near his old cattle ranch, La Cuesta." → "He was buried at a private ceremony at Three Rivers, California, near his old cattle ranch, La Cuesta." 10553:"and the Montana cowboy "Pete" Ingram who survived the Shangani Patrol massacre along with Burnham" Maybe "and "Pete" Ingram, the Montana cowboy who had survived the Shangani Patrol massacre along with Burnham" 13312:

below. Perhaps this is a generic mention of the type of recognition, and the one further into the article is a specific reference to the award. I don't know what's best here, but figured it was worth flagging.

10342:) (who forgot to sign his post; I've moved it up to prevent further confusion). Good work so far, I will have some spare time later today so I will have another look through and comment on the later sections. 8039:

I've left this "as is" for now, but I'm open to further discussion. The Sioux Nation was composed of various tribes, and Burnham spent part of his pre-teen youth with different native americans in California

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I have done some restructuring to attempt to group all text that related to description of actual events under the "Pakistani Army actions" heading, including the key line about estimates of number of rapes.

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article, but not for this one. For this article, the war itself is only the background; its ultimate political causes (i.e. the background of the background) do not need to be rehashed here at such length.

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in which Seims' article appeared, so have relied purely on the online version. In this instance, I don't think it would be possible to ascertain the page numbers. I will get back to you on the issue of the

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History: "The memo also said the new coaster will have a 'Front Gate Statement'". Since the construction of the roller coaster is no longer a future event as "will" implies, that should be "would" instead.

15155:"KFC also began a back to basics makeover of the brand image..." That phrase 'back to basics' is marketing magazine colloquialism that has no particular meaning. Edit it out and just describe the changes. 8471:"Rebecca (Elizabeth) Russell Burnham" Was Elizabeth a nickname? If so it should be in quotation marks: Rebecca "Elizabeth" Russell Burnham. Also her name should be given above where she is first mentioned. 220:" the captain of a cheerleader team" - this much detail probably not needed in the lead of a short article (the character name is useful because people look at the lead wondering why they've heard of her). 14544:

Originally planned to have been voiced by actresses Kristin Chenoweth and Reese Witherspoon prior to Moore's involvement, Rapunzel's personality was inspired by those of actresses Natalie Portman and Amy

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I used that with the upload wizard, so if the image is discussed in the article it is a definite keeper? Cos I am sure I saw this image in a book, I will have to trawl through my e-books and hard copies.

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Apparently Ahmed published quite a number of images touching on the topic, so why would we want to make this particular one a subject of discussion at that point in the article? Not quite convinced yet.

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The newspaper citation do not jump to the bibliography as no page numbers, do I did an experiment, and added for one p=BBC, (p-can be publisher?) and it works, is that OK? If so I can get the rest done.

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Some would argue that fair use would require making some sort of commentary on the photo itself, but in this case I think minimal commentary indicating what it illustrates would suffice. Remember to use

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to the citation templates so that we aren't sending people to the archived copies. (I would also advise that you continue to pre-emptively archive as many of the rest of the news articles as possible.)

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Oh, I wasn't proposing you take it out, I quite liked it and just pointing it out in passing. I wouldn't worry about its "family friendliness" as kids wouldn't get the joke; it should stay in, I think.

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I thin I have gotten a fair few of the issues you have raised, however I am wondering where you think the estimates of those raped ought to actually go? I cannot see any other section they ought to be?

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I feel bad about all that; English is not my first language so it's challenging to work in this kind of article. However, I'm doing the best I can and I'm happy that you're here helping me out. Thanks.

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With Sourav as the host, can cricket be far behind? Thus, the quiz rounds are named Selection, Toss, Power Play, Cover Drive, Googly, Slog Over and Bapi Bari Jaa (Ganguly's war cry after hitting a six)

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No, because I still don't see why that part of the doctor's opinions and feelings is even relevant, even independently of the fact that they also happen to be factually wrong on that extraneous issue.

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The remainder are from various college- or Rose Bowl-related websites that also pass muster. It would be better to directly cite the book that is excerpted by the website in footnote 26, if possible.

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With all due respect, I disagree with the assertion that this article might not be comprehensive. Doyle White's paper is the only academic article ever published devoted to the etymology of the word

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Also in 2007, Tisdale was given the voice role of Candace Flynn, the series' secondary antagonist, in Phineas and Ferb, which became television's most-watched animated series among kids and tweens,

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Some material in the article is unsourced - for example, "he and Blanche settled down to tend to an orange grove in Pasadena, California, but within a year he was back prospecting and scouting"

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In "Father of Scouting", you call Burnham "low-key". Really? His exploits sound fairly dramatic to me. It makes sense once you read the "Personal life" section, but seems out of place here.

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Her physical appearance and personality have caused much comparison to be drawn between her and preceding Disney Princess Ariel from The Little Mermaid (1989), by whom she was also inspired.

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through the growing El Pollo Loco restaurant chain, and also with the introduction of Burger King's BK Broiler, a grilled chicken burger, both of which were poaching sales from the company.

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chapter.) Also, please don't forget there's still the issue of numerous entries that have both editor and author names but lack chapter titles (I've fixed a few of them to show what I mean

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in South Africa. If that's the source, we should make that more clear. Meanwhile, I'll try to take a closer look at Scarboro and Luck to see if its applicable, and check the back issues of

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This is the review of a candidate for Feature Article status; part of that is not just ensuring that articles use "reliable sources", as Knowledge uses that term, but that they are using "

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To make this less confusing, I've spelled out BSA a couple more times and added a couple of wikilinks. I've also avoided the use of BSAC for British South Africa Company in this article.

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attacked New Ulm in the Dakota War of 1862, but I don't believe he lived on the same reservation as the Burnhams, or at least it's not clear. I've left this as Indian reservation for now.

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by "I have fixed Y instance", because it misses instances ABCDE et al of X. So there are still problems with references, there are still issues with tone, etc, and my oppose still stands.

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Unfortunately, I have to admit that you are right; there is far too much work to be done in order for Rapunzel to reach FA status. Please feel free to close/end the nomination process.--

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I have attempted to address the concerns you had above. I'm going to look back through the article and try to make additional copy-edits. I'm debating on whether or not to relist this at

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Update: similar misattribution in the case of "Totten 2009", falsely cited like an authored monograph but in reality also an edited collection. Same for "Totten 2004". And "Schulz 2007".

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I'll offer my constructive criticism of articles wherever and whenever I choose, thank you very much. Your "fix" to the pregancies estimates doesn't solve the problem. You first claimed

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That won't work, unfortunately, because our policy is an all-or-nothing thing: either a fully free release under a free license such ass cc-by-sa, or the full weight of the NFC critera.

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I've tried before looking for more details about Tisdale's casting in that particular role. However, I will try to do that again later and see if there is anything I could add to that.

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The lead has already said she is based on a Grimm fairy tale, why does this need to be repeated? Also, why does passive need to be in quotes? If it is a direct quote, then I think by

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The "Oil wealth" paragraph is kind of short. Do you think it could be lengthened or, if not, combined with another section? Not a deal-breaker, but it does stand out, to my eye. --

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The quote has now been closed, but the following phrase makes no sense: "...however the image is that of a woman, it is not possible to determine age who had been raped repeatedly."

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and suggest speedy closure/withdrawal. This is nowhere ready, as the grammatic horror that is the third paragraph and structural horror of the numerous tiny sections make clear. —

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does not seem to support "Burnham was put in charge of both the general organization and recruitment from the Southwest". At this point, a thorough check of the article is needed.

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I posted on your talk page, let this get archived as it is obvious so long as those who have an axe to grind will quite simply not let it pass, I am sorry to have wasted you time.

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the history section would really benefit from being nearer the end of the article so that readers aren't confronted with terms that aren't explained until much later in the article

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All books now include locations. FN109, The Days of My Life Volume II, is at Project Gutenberg Australia in text-only format without page numbers, so I've referenced the chapter.

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You have some numbers here over 10 written in long form ("eighteen", etc), which should be just as 18, 19 etc (unless they are at the start of a sentence). Look through for these

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Kill all use of "whilst." It's just annoying. "While" is more modern use. (JMO, I suppose if we are talking UK English, it's more OK than in US English, but he is an American)

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The article makes it clear that all three women were actually cast as the voice of the character (though the caption of the three actresses' photos confusingly says they were

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TL;DR – There are issues throughout. I suggest this be withdrawn and be looked at by an experienced writer. Then take this to GAN, where I can assist you. I hope this helps. —

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based in London, but it moved in 1872). Perhaps put "one of England's most famous public schools", wikilinking public school as this means something very different in the U.S.

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Darkness Shines, this is important. You need to be absolutely precise and correct about citation. It matters who actually wrote/spoke. So, please take care of this urgently.--

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Except the Doc is not wrong is he, you are. The links I gave you prove that. And if you are not willing to compromise then the lot can stay and I will remove your pointy tag.

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and others). It is correct to say that he learned the ways of the Sioux, but I thought it might be somewhat more accurate and easier for the reader to say Native Americans.

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hostile attitude shown here which is completely unacceptable here, whatever your history with these editors is. If you can't understand this then perhaps FAC isn't for you.♦

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would be inappropriate, but something along the lines of women in captivity or some event from the period being depicted would really help the article I think.Something like

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I would keep the reference to AnandTech's award and merge it with the other awards to form a paragraph and move that paragraph to the end of "Reception", just above "Sales".

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Added quotes and ref to fix the soldier of fortune issue. Substituted "struck it rick" with "found great affluence". Deleted to the unnecessary analogy about the newspaper.

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It is when putting anything like that in wartime radars would cause them to catch fire! The citation is in Nalwa, cited at the end of the paragraph. He references Cohn at

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John, many thanks for the detailed and helpful comments and the generous investment of your time in reviewing this article. I'll get to work on your questions right away.

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One of the quote boxes overlaps the article text on my computer. I noted the location in hidden text within the article. It's the only one that does this, not sure why.

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a new first sentence should state this argument in general, then allowing the following material to lay out the evidence and the points made by those who put this argument.

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See the next point below for the crux of this issue; the second FAC didn't address the reliability issue, and the first FAC didn't quite answer the questions posed below.

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genocide), we need multiple sources for the claim, thus assuring us that the view is indeed widely held, and not just the view held by the author of the one source cited.

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Period after "Not even a Jumbo Jet soars like this!" is overpunctuation because of the exclamation point in the quote. That takes care of the end-of-sentence punctuation.

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Footnote 5: what makes this a reliable source? (Also note, if the source is retained, it shouldn't normally be re-listed in the "External links" section of the article.)

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The source actually uses those terms "kids and tweens". I'm confident they meant younger than tweens though. Perhaps we can remove the "kids" and keep only the "tweens"?

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Layout: "the first element of the coaster which similar to the dive drops on The Swarm at Thorpe Park and X-Flight at Six Flags Great America." Needs "is" after "which".

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Image captions appear to be written as for a textbook, which isn't entirely appropriate for Knowledge articles - for example, we don't typically use the "figure" label

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The references need to be standardized. For example, there are references that have the both publication and publisher names, while others lack both (FN 90 and FN 94).

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newspaper or a TV station does this second function, but a link to the location of publication doesn't. It's still valuable information to include, just not to link.

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Critics have compared her physical appearance and personality to the Disney Princess Ariel from The Little Mermaid (1989), whom the filmmakers cite as an inspiration.

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If you think that there are no FAs without infoboxes, you can think again (and perhaps ought to read the TFA more often, plug plug!) From August TFAs alone, we have

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sentence structure, and is something that should be used infrequently in good prose. You could try the semi-colon plus "the Huskies won three of the games" as a fix.

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article (I wouldn't consider a handwritten date on a newspaper clipping the pinnacle of reliability), but so long as others are willing to accept that these satisfy

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From a comprehensiveness standpoint, have you considered the following scholarly sources, which appear on cursory examination to have something to say on the topic:

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The paragraph about his grandson Russell is cited. I'll check the article elsewhere to see if I can uncover what you mean, or please provide more detail if you can.

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Personally I'd be a little hesitant about putting that particular book in "Further reading"; the work is by a Wiccan practitioner rather than an academic active in

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I guess I'll assume you didn't watch the video. The information that is cited in the video came directly from Rob Decker, the park's VP of Planning & Design.--

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Fine, but I think none of the in-universe stuff (i.e. under the "Information" header) should be here. It overemphasises fictional aspects, which is discouraged by

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Please fill out all your references. There are numerous references that are missing the author names and the dates of publication. Please stick to one date format.

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I am certainly open to the replacement of the image in question, however I am unsure as to whether images of text would be deemed fair use under Knowledge policy.

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that reported Tisdale had signed on to co-star on her first major broadcast series role as Savannah Monroe, the peppy and fiercely intense captain of the Hellcats.

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Footnote 24: this appears to be to be photos from a roller coaster fan posted online, which doesn't support the information in the article about the arrival date.

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committed by Pak Army far outweighs those by Mukti Bahini. Anyway, if you really want to sound rational, Faizan, come up with some neutrally sourced statistics.--

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I have two sources which discuss in detail a specific photo taken, I will add the text tomorrow and then, if you think it enough I can upload the image, thanks.

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Which is fine for that instance, but that was again only an example. A quick check finds another, "Also buried at Three Rivers cemetery...", unsupported by the

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Be consistent in how you punctuate single footnotes to multiple sources (compare for example FNs 12 and 13) and footnotes that include an explanation (4 vs 27)

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Multiple formatting errors/inconsistencies in both short cites and bibliography: FN109 is missing page numbers, some books include locations while others don't

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Never going to happen, anyone who gets the number of troops on the ground wrong gets zero weight, anyone who says the rapes were only a few thousand, come on.

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In the infobox, note A 1 is causing Washington's record to not fully appear. I don't know if anyone else is having the same issue, but it is a problem for me.

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Same goes for "A section of the coaster will go over the front entrance...". Not sure that "would" works here, but I'm sure another alternative can be found.

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number of reasons as well. As for PointBuzz, it's not quite enough to state they're quoted in other media; an assertion like that comes with a tag for me.

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Thank you, but there are still inconsistencies: for example, whether page ranges are abbreviated, some missing info (ex date for Carr in Bibliography), etc

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I didn't give anybody what they want. If editors are concerned about neutrality I'd take that very seriously. Your behaviour here has really let you down.♦

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I have tracked down who took the photo, it was Naib Uddin Ahmed. He died December 14 2009. I am now trying to find out who now has the copyright ownership.

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on calling out Doyle White, which is very clearly already employed by the article. I'll also concede reliability on the Seims article; I had not recognized

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Footnote 4: what makes PointBuzz a reliable source? This looks like a fansite/blog to me. The suitability of this source will impact many other footnotes.

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through reading this one. The current background section was discussed before and consensus was that it was fine, and I have since then trimmed it myself.

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You reference some books by OCLC rather than ISBN, even when ISBNs are available. The Farrar source is 978-0432045701, and Janus-Mithras is 978-1881532026.

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The publisher names aren't needed in those cases though... You didn't list publishers for other notable publications, so there's no need to list them for

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Sorry about the delay, but I read through your changes and compared with the live article, and all of my concerns are now addressed. Great work. I would

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reliable source. The site gives no information on the qualifications of the writer/publishers nor does it discuss editorial oversight and fact-checking.

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Footnote 12: the publisher is linked here, but it's not the first mention of that publisher. If it's going to be linked, it should on the first mention.

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Get the article fixed, especially for neutrality. It needs restructuring. Issues cited by me stand unaddressed. Or I can aid with edits on the article.

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Then in that case, you have a bigger problem. I had looked at the first footnote to them that was an article published on their site. The posters, etc

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I've added brief reference to this in his early life. I could add more depth, but Geronimo was not a particularly significant part of Burnham's life.

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Not at all, as most people when they hear Lebensborn think "breeding camp" as that is what the term has come to be associated with, as can be seen in

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I'd just like to say thanks for the comments so far. They've been really helpful, and I really appreciate you going through an article of this size!

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Others may disagree, but the "title" parameter, or maybe better the "occupation" parameter, is useful here to summarize the character's general role.

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section subdivided by song? There's not nearly enough material on each song for separate subsections, so it does little more than clutter up the TOC.

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As directors, Greno and Howard aimed to ensure that Rapunzel resembled a less "passive" heroine than how she is depicted in the original fairy tale.

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I never even knew why people added this Net Worth thing. I assumed it was a new Knowledge standard so that's why I kept it - it's been removed now.

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I know what the term means, but the description outside of direct quotes is not a neutral one - although not specifically mentioned there, compare

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is mentioned in the infobox and lead but is referred to as the Tonto Basin Feud in the body. Perhaps we should make clear these are the same thing

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I was yes, I have copyedited it and added the academic consensus to the article. I have also gotten to a few of the other points you have raised.

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We mention the BSA, but we don't make clear what this is. (This is particularly confusing because to some eyes "BSA" is more associated with the

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Thank you for your comments, I will get on all of that ASAP, but RE the genocide, this was resolved a while ago at a RM on the genocide article,

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I think "...were eligible to be selected." could simply be "were eligible." considering the word "selected" was already used in this sentence.

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Is a semi-colon the proper punctuation to place after "Washington Huskies" in the first sentence? I would typically think to use a comma here.

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Fixed. Sorry about this one, when I first added the footnotes, current ref 12 was the first occurrence. I forgot to fix this after it changed.

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layout guideline for instance, then it would be time to change it, and all the others that previously gone through FA - all at the same time.

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You are most welcome. Just a quick note: refrain from bold "done"s in FACs. This excessive bolding is distracting to reviewers and delegates.

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Although based on the heroine of the Grimm fairy tale, Rapunzel was developed into a less "passive" character for the Disney film adaptation.

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I stuck some hidden text into the article where I found some issues or had specific questions. Feel free to remove when fixed or addressed.

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Avoid "Inc", "Ltd" and "LLC" in publisher fields unless it is there to avoid confusion. (eg. Viacom International Inc. can be simply Viacom).

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identified. If you have new issues, I would be glad to take a look at those as well and I will continue to comment / address without delay.

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Jewish Holocaust in 1938–1945, Bangladesh in 1971, Cambodia in 1975–1979, East Timor in 1975–1999, Bosnia in 1991–1995, and Rwanda in 1994."

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The tag on the "Lebensborn" passage stays. In its present state, the article not only reports Davies' statement, which presupposes that the

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I have used a different cite template for the posters. What if we used Cite Interview for the videos with Rob Decker then didn't link it?--

11439:"on February 19, 2013 in New York City, as HTC's 2013 flagship smartphone, and is the successor to HTC's 2012 flagship smartphone," --: --> 5732:

wrong and fringe. Her "work" has no place in an article on Knowledge. She has got to be the most minority view of minority views anywhere.

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The second paragraph of History is about the history of lumped element filters which you've just said are outside the scope of this article

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I was working here on the principle that the lede should, in as far as possible, be understandable by an anyone and not be too technical.

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is not grammatically correct (infancy is not a single point or place). This whole sentence could be tightened too. Perhaps something like

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That it with this section for now. I'll keep working on your comments about the other sections later today. Thanks again for your help.

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It may well be that it could be added to that article, but a summary of waveguide development is helpful background in this article also.

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I thought it would be better if I just remove it. That image was uploaded three years ago so there is no way to track those informations.

1343:- Just produce... not executive, even if that is the case. If you want, you could mention serve as executive producer. Also, where is the 11532:"pushed as far back as April" The way it's written tells me it's not really a significant delay. Say "late April" or something like that. 7737: 6537: 1129: 2068:

Nominated the image as orphaned for deletion (in 7 days). Please update the image summary, if you plan to use it for some other article.

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is based on the Brothers Grimms' fairy tales. If i understand the infobox docu correctly, lbl1-3 may be used for such information (?).

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Bold links are discouraged by the Manual of Style. For the link in the intro, it will need to be moved to later in the first paragraph.

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The Sports-Reference citations, I will assume are ok. I will defer to others if necessary on the quality and reputation of the website.

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I haven't forgotten about this, don't worry, I will get back to it either later today or tomorrow. Well done on all the replies above!

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Nikkimaria doesn't seem to be checking here, so I've left another message on her talk page. Did you have any comments on the article?

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I've resolved the issues you've listed. If there are any more, I'd like if you address them so I can fix them. Thanks for your review!

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films and television series including the ABC Family television film Picture This and the Bravo's 2012 unscripted series Miss Advised."

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Thanks for your review. I've solved your comments and I hope the article is better now. I'll try to reword some sentences later today.

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Footnote 61 as the TV station listed as a work, when the work would be a TV program they produce. The station itself is a publisher.

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Footnote 1: normal practice is that for newspapers that don't include their locations in their titles that the location is provided.

11568:"The One was released by AT&T (with exclusivity on the 64 GB version) and Sprint in the United States on April 19, 2013." --: --> 7014:

There you have, but that was only an example - the paragraph about Russell, for example, is still unsourced. Please check thoroughly.

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She later won her first award at the UK Nickelodeon Kids' Choice Awards for "Best TV Actress", due to her performance as Fitzpatrick.

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I popped in "Citation needed" tags where I saw something clearly unsourced. Hope that's more helpful than "stuff needs sourcing."

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Animator Glen Keane based the film's version of Rapunzel on the title character of the German fairy tale from the Brothers Grimm.

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Can you look at what I added in my last two edits and let me know if I need to expand on the text so we can use an image please.

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In ref titles, double hyphens ("--") and hyphens used as dashes (eg. ref 76) should be replaced with en dashes preceded by nbsps.

11677:"camera module that contains a custom UltraPixel image sensor, which is composed of pixels that are 2.0 µm in size." Repetition. 7210:

is how he describes Burnham. The term is synonymous with mercenary. Does this now make sense, or can you clarify your concern?

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He sent her to numerous auditions for commercials, resulting in her placement in more than 100 national network TV ads as a kid.

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sentence structures that are often found to be 1a issues. Since this is in the lead, I'd recommend a minor rewrite to fix this.

15186:"In December 2012, the chain was struck in China when it was discovered ..." I don't understand this use of the word "struck". 14472:

I am not going to comment on everything else in detail, but I do have some other pretty major concerns. FAs have to follow the

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I am an admin, if you want I can semi-protect the article so IPs cannot edit it. Please ask here or on my talk page if desired.

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Elizabeth was her middle name, but she dropped it when she married Burnham. I've removed Elizabeth to avoid further confusion.

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Inconsistency in date formatting with two/four hundred thousand and 5,000 and 30,000 below, I'd rather you wrote it in digits.

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Tisdale toured for two years on Les Misérables before landing a role in an international touring production of Annie in Korea.

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could just be something like "Actresses Kristin Chenoweth and Reese Witherspoon were briefly cast in the role before Moore...

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En dash in "two-yard" should be a simple hyphen instead. A couple of other stray dashes need similar fixes in that paragraph.

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We mention New Ulm, MN being attacked during the Dakota War but we have not made clear how this place is relevant to Burnham.

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Created and animated by Glen Keane, Rapunzel is based on the title character of the German fairy tale by the Brothers Grimm.

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It is not a misperception, it is what the term has come to mean. I think you may have to learn to live with that. BTW, 2013

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The information for both images has now been fixed. The image caption scheme is following that used in the previous FAs of

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For her role in Boston Public, she received a 2000 Young Artist Award nomination for "Best Guest Performance In a TV drama".

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I may reduce it a little bit but I am not sure about what can I remove, for me there's only relevant information in there.

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The OCLC doesn't match up. The one provided is for a newspaper in Providence, Rhode Island, not the newspaper in San Diego.

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to indicate the format, as was done with footnote 14. Not all web browser can or will display the PDF icon with the links.

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Wikilinking of works and publishers needs to be checked. Link only on first occurrence, all occurrences or no occurrences.

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Yes, you have a point. It was really just a lot of fuss at the time, not anything major in her career. It's been removed.

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comments in the next couple of days, I'll put more comments up, but I don't want to find a bunch of issues at that time.

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As a "soldier of fortune,"—is this a phrase Burnham used to describe himself, or an appellation applied by somebody else?

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It means lumped-element designs can be used without further modification other than running through Kuroda's transforms.

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is a reliable source actually. I've also replaced Futon Critic and Cliff.com for ABC and Los Angeles Times respectively.

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If the character is not depicted as "German", the "Fictional German people" category should also be removed or changed.

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Either mention the major carriers or simplify the sentence to "The HTC One was released in Australia on April 23, 2013."

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You guys may want to add a footnote describing what Lebensborn is, about the misperception, or, the usage of the word.--

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that suggests editorial control; the article being cited appears to be a personal opinion piece of the website's author.

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You need to double check... you should be citing these stations by their call letters consistently... and you aren't.

11676:"camera module that contains a custom UltraPixel image sensor, which contains pixels that are 2.0 µm in size." --: --> 7624:

Thank you for your helpful review, Montanabw. I have worked on the issues you raised and I believe all are now done.

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You haven't talked about the fact that the One is the first HTCpro Enterprise Certified device in the United States.

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Yes, indeed. I'm also disappointed by the brevity of his WP page. I'll need to correct this oversight at some point.

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Thank you for your insights, Coemgenus. I have worked on the issues you raised and I believe they are now addressed.

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Structure and scope: the "Background" section is far too long. This would be a suitable "background" section for the

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Another thought - what does the original source say, that the lead currently paraphrases as "among kids and tweens"?

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is heavily discouraged unless the subject is not present. "Aguilera described the song as "the heart of the album"."

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Footnote 10: International News Service is a newswire agency; it should be included, without the abbreviation, in

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Be consistent in what is wikilinked or abbreviated in References - for example, compare the treatment of Armidale.

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A company called Drik picture library seem to hold the copyright, at least that is what I have figured out so far.

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Just because that misperception is common is not an excuse for spreading it further, as the article is now doing.

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Actually no. I've tried to find out what her career is but I couldn't find anything. Apparently she's a homestay.

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I believe that semi-protecting the article is unfortunately the best way to approach the situation. Thank you.--

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I'd ask User:Jmabel if you could claim use of a fair use image. I think either image would really improve this.♦

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while in the U.S. sales were struggling, where the chain was the weakest link in PepsiCo's restaurants division.

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Rapunzel is a fictional character who appears in Walt Disney Pictures' 50th animated feature film Tangled (2010)

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This phrase appears in several references, but in none of the sources is there a cite for the title of the book.

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discusses Lebensborn as a breeding programme. So even academic sources seem to have gone along with the masses.

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Delink Nazi before Lebensborn and Nazi Germany wiki link it initially next to Holocaust further up as requested.

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What makes Celebrity Net Worth, Cliff.com, TV By The Numbers and The Futon Critic high quality reliable sources?

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Thanks for reviewing, I've fixed everything you've said and I'd be happy if you please continue your review! :)

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at the time. I messed up inputting the footnote. But it's fixed now, and Montreal is now added as the location.

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Footnote 16: the link to Images of America redirects to the publisher, and that name should be included in the

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Not sure what this is. It was in a caption and I thought it might be a military term, but I've removed it now.

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Fixed. I was trying to avoid repeating WWII and thought the context would be taken from the previous mention.

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Trains: Semi-colon before "a first for a roller coaster at Cedar Point" should be a regular old comma instead.

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I wouldn't use iFixit as a source for the article. It is a niche website aimed a selected group of repairers.

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In quoteboxes you don't need to put a full stop (period) at the end of the attribution as it's not a sentence.

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a difference between "there are no", which I did not say, and "I have yet to come across", which I did say.--

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That it with this section for now. I'll keep working on your comments about the other sections later today.

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Some of the phrasing used is not neutral or has an inappropriate tone - ex. "Ever the soldier of fortune..."

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Footnote 57: the all caps should be reduced to match the case of the rest of the article title/headline per

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is also the name of a publication that is published by Bonnier Corporation. Please audit and correct these.

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Why is the wikilink to "Cape Town, South Africa" rather than just Cape Town? People know where Cape Town is.

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A lot of places throughout the article we use abbreviations ("Gen.", "Maj.", "Co."); try to get rid of these

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Work on cleaning up the deadlinks, the WayBack machine can sometimes unearth an archived version of a page.

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Put it in Further reading, makes it easier to find if you need it again and gives readers more to look up.

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I've added the wikilinks in this section. The lead already has a wikilink from DSO (after Burnham's name).

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OK, I can do that tomorrow, I am off to bed it a little bit. And thank you BTW, you are teaching me a lot.

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The series, however, had only one full season as it was cancelled by The CW in 2011 because of low ratings.

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has been withdrawn by the nominator, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see

1688:"At the age of twelve, Tisdale sang at the White House for President Bill Clinton." What was the occasion? 16116: 9410:

Why isn't "Distinguished Service Order" linked? This is also not linked in the image caption or the lead.

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I've addressed all of the issues noted above. If you have still have any concerns, let me know. Thanks.

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Some footnotes list items as the publisher when they should be the "work". Take footnote 6 for example.

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re-branded with a distinctive red-and-white striped color pattern, cupola roofs and the company expanded

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Please archive all the references using the WayBack Machine, or Archive.is, to protect the article from

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doesn't currently include "The" in its title. Apparently it has never used the article on its masthead.

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you can say veld, not veldt. perhaps also wikilink veld and put it in italics as it's an Afrikaans word

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http://www.boxofficemojo.com/genres/chart/?id=musical.htm&sort=opengross&order=DESC&p=.htm

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Referencing issue - footnotes refer to Roy 2010a, but can't tell which is a or b from reference list?

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Regarding the page numbers on the Field source, this was an issue that has previously been discussed

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Scarboro, A., & Luck, P. A. (1997). "The Goddess and power: witchcraft and religion in America."

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Doyle White, E. (2011). "The Meaning of "Wicca": A Study in Etymology, History, and Pagan Politics."

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with a three-song trilogy comprising music videos and a documentary about the creation of Headstrong.

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frica Company, which is also mentioned in this article). Put Boy Scouts of America, with a wikilink.

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It says actually "...on why he cast Tisdale". I can remove that if it's irrelevant for the article.

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Fixed the capitalization. I searched the page, and that was the only case of "Rose bowl" occurring.

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I think I have now gotten the lot? Other than the estimates, where did you think they ought to go?

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Change "under 100–yards" to "under 100 yards"; no hyphen is needed, and anyway this is an en-dash.

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images from the Burnham family have either an OTRS-ticket or additional publication details - OK.

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I don't think you need to give his first wife's full name again here; just "Blanche" is sufficient

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No en-dash or hyphen should appear in "175–yards", and "12–yard" should be a hyphen, not en-dash.

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Shame on you! I liked the racy quote, but I've modified the sentence to be more family friendly.

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A few references have hyphens (-) separating page numbers rather than endashes (–). Check on this

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Sukumāra Biśvāsa is a professor, the documents in his book are press releases for the most part.

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the whole 'Theoretical work...' paragraph again isn't really in the stated scope of this article.

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There is no need to repeat wikilinks in the footnotes; The first time that a footnote cites the

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Hi, Here are my thoughts on the article. I enjoyed reading it and hope the comments below help.

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issues. Is there a tool you use to check hyphens, or can you show any examples in the article?

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1.It is ... well-written: its prose is engaging, even brilliant, and of a professional standard

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I've addressed all of your concerns above. I'll be happy to fix anything else you point out. -

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to "Reception" where you could, in the caption, talk about how premium the finished product is.

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The state programme was carried out by international groups, I will reword it to clarify that.

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probably doesn't need it either. Additionally, you've included the publisher (person) for the

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seems like a much better mainstream substitute. You can keep iFixit, but keep it to a minimum.

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Way cool! It is much better than the long caption I had to include previously. Nicely done.

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Do as you will, if you will not compromise then this conversation ain't going anywhere is it?

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Why is the meaning of the quote under "2010–12: Return to broadcast television and producing"?

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first sentence alone doesn't explain why the schools' ticket-selling led to lower attendance.

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Another editor fixed these (thank you!). I think we've finally got this one out of the way.

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When did he become a Freemason? Was he one from birth? Where/what is Excelsior Lodge No. 195?

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is linked in the body of the article where modes are discussed in more detail. I agree that

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under "Reception" where it would nice complement the positive reviews about its hardware. --

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It was published in 1899. I've now added references and publication dates to the BP books.

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as a self-evident truth on Knowledge? What would be sufficient as a source for this claim?

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No responses for six days, is this nom still live? If not, no point my continuing review

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Maybe it's just a pet peeve of mine, but I think you could combine footnotes 60 & 61.

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File:Hans_Bethe.jpg is tagged as lacking author information and the source link is dead.

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I can add that without a problem but I'm just wondering if that is that really relevant?

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and Billboard claimed the album "doesn't give the singer room to comfortably let loose".

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Statistical summary: One word too many in "but missed the his only field goal attempt."

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Do we know where his mother came from in England? We do not need to say she immigrated

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After four years since the release of her second studio album Guilty Pleasure in 2009,

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Due to the popularity earned by Tisdale through her performance in High School Musical,

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Double check newspaper titles; the current name of the paper in Toledo, Ohio, is just

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I've added additional background to this piece and renamed the section: World War One.

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I added the archived link to the minernews article metadata, and simplified the text:

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Same here. Every reliable source doesn't give much detail. That's everything we know.

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The series was also nominated for eight Primetime Emmy Awards, having won two of them.

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yet that's not equivalent to the other publishers listed here which are companies...

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Thanks for addressing those. I will come by later and see how things are progressing.

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Alright, I think that does it. Unless you see something else, I believe we are done.

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The redirection needed to be fixed anyway as the page name seems to have stabilized.

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If a non free image is discussed extensively in the article, then could one be kept?

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Most sources say he lived on a Sioux reservation, but some say Winnebago. Both the

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doesn't appear to be any other article that give this subject such a full treatment.

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In December, 2012, she began dating musician Christopher French since December 2012;

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Jamaica mentioned in the lead but not in the main text it is supposed to summarise.

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Just in the lead, the first two sentences could be combined, tightening the prose:

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I believe I have now addressed the issues you raised. Thanks again for your help.

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Perhaps change the semicolon between the last two snippets to a full stop (period).

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Bad oversight. His full name and wikilink are in the lead, but should be here too.

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Sadly yes, per the previous consensus, as it stands I believe due weight is given.

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stadium" to reduce the likelihood of confusion between the event and the building?

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I tried to give a short explanation of the nickname down in the aftermath section.

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Shit man, I spent about three hours faffing about with that ( Will go fix it now.

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Not from the lead, but just too bad to not mention here under failing to meet 1a

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and the relevant policies and guidelines. However, the lead here does not follow

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Looking ahead to Washington: I see "Rose bowl", which is improper capitalization.

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Thanks for looking at the images, GermanJoe. I'll review the two you mentioned.

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The Geronimo Campaign is mentioned in the infobox but nowhere else in the article

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Do you think we can fix the weird parentheses issue on the "buried at" parameter?

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Combining would be better, particularly to keep the TOC a bit more manageable. —

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verified with other sources. All other people were willing to pass it, including

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she starred as Jody Sanders in Scary Movie 5, the fourth sequel to the 2000 film.

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calls into question whether the image is replaceable according to the rationale.

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Why did KFC initially only open locations in England and not the rest of the UK?

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a huge amount of content copied wholesale from other websites by the nominator,—

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Charterhouse should have a wikilink. It is also not in London but in Surrey (it

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Why don't we give Carrington's full name? Why don't we wikilink him in the body?

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Native American issues fixed. I believe all the issues have now been addressed.

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After this expedition he was elected a fellow of the Royal Geographical Society.

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one "skeptical": certainly not something that substantiates the text as written.

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I also defend the reliability of the Seims article. This was first published in

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The first paragraph is very choppy. Some sentences should be connected together.

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I've addressed all. I'm still fixing it. Please wait for me until it's done. —

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is the name of a publication published by Crain Communications. In footnote 2,

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this to the article and the a source reference. Tomorrow I'll work on item 1.

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Italics issues have been addressed. Question on dash posed in the above issue.

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I had an image before but it was removed, license will I need if I upload one?

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newspaper would be the university, not the city where the campus is located.)

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You don't need to say Johannesburg, South Africa, people know where Jo'burg is

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Unfortunately, I have not been able to track down a hard copy of the issue of

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The word "appearances" could be omitted from the next sentence to tighten it.

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Changed to "College Football at Sports-Reference.com", removed 96 years part.

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Please collapse the "Rear camera" and "Connectivity" features in the infobox.

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as it is clear from the context; saying she immigrated from England is enough

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Added a break after place of death. A bit of a kluge but it does the trick.

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In "Klondike Gold Rush", it's a bit confusing about how many children he has.

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to Lisa (née Morris) and Mike Tisdale, the manager of a construction company.

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His standards were high, commenting "perfection is just barely good enough",

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born in Bulawayo; she died of fever and starvation during the town's siege."

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the Seims article, on which you lean quite heavily. I don't see anything at

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Okay I combined/removed some section headers. Added a bit more to the lede.

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The current infobox also has problems from an in-universe perspective (see

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was a place of "atrocities" comparable to the Bangladesh rapes (a piece of

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Don't get why a mere two sentences would constitute an oppose vote though.

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Publisher notation is inconsistent for newspapers: brackets or no brackets?

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It means that the character is a candy seller. Is this sentence confusing?

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Misunderstanding, nothing to see, move along please ladies and gentlemen.

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Bangladeshi government-mandated victim relief programme, supported by the

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Do we really need to include the actions of Mukti Bahini in the lead? Per

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Publisher notation is inconsistent for magazines: brackets or no brackets?

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High School Musical 3 earned $ 42 million in its domestic opening weekend,

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is the only time that it needs to be linked. Ditto all other such links.

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this article for FA status as I believe it meets all requirements. Best,

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Compared to the current wording, my suggestion can shave off 13 words. --

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I've added more context here and edited the passage. I hope this helps.

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Have you pinged Nikki lately to see how she feels about the nom? Cheers,

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The URL to minernews went dead during the FAC. I'll need to substitute.

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Some have, but others have not: for example "3 year old ...12-year old",

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But thanks to the wonderful world of echo we shall still ask as expert.

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Louisville, Kentucky, United States, which specializes in fried chicken

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I have replaced the old style KFC in the UK section to a new style one.

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Footnote 19: can you verify if the title of the paper at that time was

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Either include the publishers in all the references or, leave them out.

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oil man? Why not just oil man? American spy should probably be U.S. spy

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So that ought to resopve that issue. Should I add that to the article?

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and added the missing ISBNs. Thank you for your constructive comments!

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If that's true then it shouldn't have been a ref at one point either.

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Writing to The New York Times a group of women -add comma after Times.

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in a selective number of countries that did not include North America.

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one is kinda brutal, but a good depiction of what they went through.

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Please italicise the names of technology publications, where needed.

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has also pursued a career as a film and television producer, working

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boyfriend," By the way, what was the man's reasoning for the threat?

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There is no mention of Valencia High School, to which Tisdale went.

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Big goof on my part. I've added wikilinks and a bit of background.

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I supported earlier, so just reiterating that I support this FAC.

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Fixed issues. Also, the quote is on the second page of the article

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The soundtrack, in which Tisdale lent her vocals for several songs,

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Would it make sense to say, upon first reference to the stadium, "

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Why not give Baden-Powell's full name? We don't even wikilink him?

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cleanup needed in the article: hyphens/dashes, repeated links, etc

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Yes, your suggestion is accurate so I have done the edit, thanks.

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It would not surprise me if this topic had also been addressed in

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based on critical reviews, in both Rotten Tomatoes and Metacritic.

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information; the cited section is right up top on the cited link.

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Please add the subheading "Critical reception" under "Reception".

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Thank you for your assessment and suggestions for improvement. -

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The directors image is a great piece of work. How did you do it?

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section is a bit a of a cliffhanger. What worked and what didn't?

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gives a nice overview of vibrational modes and their numbering.

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It actually is! Thanks for the note, I'll rewrite that sentence.

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I have removed it, I'll find a new image when I get some time.--

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Same issue with en-dashes where hyphens should be is found here.

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Just for clarification for anyone else doing source checks: Per

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You shouldn't wikilink the names of modern countries like Kenya:

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Why is woodcraft italicised? Perhaps quotation marks are better.

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mielies, not mealies. perhaps "mealies" (i.e. mielies, or maize)

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Construction: "an United States Senator from Ohio". "an" → "a".

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is from the edition that the article cited is in, and it uses "

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If I were you, I would replace AnandTech's review with that of

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government, or an official or department within it, might have

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First off, avoid the passive voice where possible, so perhaps

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You don't need commas after each name in the relatives section

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On another look, finding more problems, including a dead link

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without success, and don't think I'll have any better luck in

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All things which became important in waveguide filter design.

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I think the first paragraph of History belongs in the article

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It might need more drastic cuts or restructuring, not sure. --

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Be consistent in how information is presented. The lead says

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I'm concerned what makes a couple of these sources reliable,

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after develop? You've used it everywhere else in the article.

629:- Is this a common term (Ford Model)? I've never heard of it. 16808:

list them as the publisher because they are not. They are a

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From the age of seven, his mother taught—she was very young!

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is linked thrice in the lead and five more times in Records.

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As per your request a thread has also been started at talk.

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That is understood. It was initially copied across from the

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She lent vocals for several tracks in the film's soundtrack

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During this time, she simultaneously worked as a Ford Model.

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out of Lorain, Ohio, yet you've forgotten to include that.

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the top three actresses considered for the role of Rapunzel

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British military intervention in the Sierra Leone Civil War

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the phone's outstripped sales of that of HTC's 2012 devices

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The Pomegranate: The International Journal of Pagan Studies

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Thank you for picking up on that; it has not been removed.

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Tisdale's return into broadcast television occurred in 2010

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I don't know how to fix this. It's displaying fine for me.

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Poor prose, MoS inconsistencies and grammatical mistakes:

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I withdraw myself from this FAC and request it be closed.

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Aftermath: Period needed at the end of the photo caption.

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Do we know why Wilson didn't want Roosevelt's volunteers?

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I've referenced and added her birth and immigration data.

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and others), and later with native americans in Arizona (

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Pleasant Valley War is the modern name for the conflict.

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Sure. Any section. The most blatant is Personal Life. —

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Pleasant Valley War and Apache Wars should be wikilinked

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An elegant solution, thank you, FPaS, you OK with that?

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She had vocal roles in several TV cartoons, during 2010,

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Changed the en-dashes to hyphens for all similar cases.

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Knowledge:WikiProject College football/Reliable sources

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Nice editing and application of your subject expertise.

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Originally planned to have been voiced by actresses...

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Changed to "times; the Huskies won three of the games"

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We don't need the semicolon after "The King of Scouts"

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I've substituted with: she always kept a rifle nearby.

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would probably be the defunct UK newspaper founded by

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Alexandrian, in Definitions, probably needs a link to

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is desperately short of active reviewers at present.

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Manufacturer: Space before the em dash needs removal.

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See above for an idea about the Youtube interviews.--

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I changed the sentence, and tried to explain it more.

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Can you please tell me which section you are meanin?

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Again, "developed" is ambiguous. Is HTC the designer

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I've also added more background and a couple of refs.

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Doesn't fix the problem, and isn't the only instance.

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should it ever be needed. 18:33, 18 August 2013 (UTC)

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in article prose. Choose a style, but be consistent.

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That image has been removed. Thanks for your review!

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confusing here. I can't seem to access the source. --

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Honestly, I don't think the publisher is needed for

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Zantigo stores were closed or converted to Taco Bell

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book titles are generally not subject to copyright.

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Withdrawing my objections here. I've looked through

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s it received low scores, based on critical reviews,

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which became the biggest opening for a musical film.

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I fixed the wikilink. 01:06, 8 September 2013 (UTC)

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Why not give Frederick Courteney Selous' full name?

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Even though a joke, she probably needs a mention.--

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Added the role she played. 16964:person. Here's a quote from 16254:Well which ones need them?-- 15281:two spellings of travel(l)er 12808:parameter and not the title. 9769:When did Baden-Powell write 8838:I've expanded on this a bit. 6357:Tweaked this further myself. 3270:Waveguide (electromagnetism) 3223:or even to a new article on 577:. 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286: 285: 284: 280: 276: 271: 270: 269: 265: 261: 257: 256: 255: 251: 247: 243: 239: 235: 231: 227: 224: 223: 219: 218: 215: 211: 207: 203: 200: 199: 195: 194: 191: 187: 183: 179: 176: 175: 171: 170: 166: 165: 164: 163: 162: 158: 154: 150: 149: 148: 147: 143: 142: 138: 135: 134: 130: 129: 125: 121: 115: 114: 111: 103: 101: 96: 91: 86: 85: 75: 71: 67: 63: 59: 55: 43: 39: 34: 32:Graham Beards 23: 19: 17698: 17695: 17655:Closing note 17654: 17640:Brianboulton 17631: 17617: 17614: 17611: 17608: 17606: 17598: 17575: 17556: 17533: 17526: 17514: 17511: 17471:Closing note 17470: 17443: 17417: 17392: 17385: 17360: 17352: 17327: 17320: 17295: 17288: 17263: 17255: 17230: 17223: 17198: 17191: 17166: 17159: 17134: 17123: 17101: 17071: 17037: 17029: 16995: 16970: 16961: 16957: 16935: 16930:high quality 16929: 16905: 16882: 16856: 16818: 16810:re-publisher 16809: 16805: 16781: 16758: 16733: 16693: 16671: 16639: 16611: 16580: 16550: 16542: 16516: 16482: 16447: 16439: 16435: 16405: 16383: 16378: 16354: 16315: 16293: 16288: 16284: 16280: 16256: 16234: 16229: 16225: 16201: 16193: 16189: 16163: 16155: 16127: 16124: 16101: 16094: 16082: 16079: 16039:Closing note 16038: 16008: 15980: 15952: 15924: 15918: 15890: 15862: 15834: 15806: 15778: 15750: 15722: 15714: 15710: 15706: 15705: 15677: 15649: 15609: 15572: 15540: 15512: 15484: 15381: 15216: 15185: 15154: 15123: 15092: 15056: 15034: 15011: 15004: 14992: 14989: 14949:Closing note 14948: 14925: 14811: 14788: 14781: 14769: 14766: 14753:talk with me 14744: 14741: 14718: 14711: 14699: 14696: 14656:Closing note 14655: 14615: 14595: 14579: 14573: 14569: 14564: 14563:actresses... 14560: 14556: 14552: 14548: 14543: 14532: 14527: 14523: 14518: 14511: 14506: 14497: 14495: 14488: 14445:Flood (Halo) 14375: 14299: 14276: 14266: 14225: 14213: 14150: 14127: 14120: 14108: 14105: 14065:Closing note 14064: 14045: 14026: 14003: 13996: 13984: 13981: 13941:Closing note 13940: 13931: 13924: 13921: 13920:with Furler 13917: 13914: 13886: 13880: 13875: 13855: 13759: 13752: 13725: 13702: 13695: 13683: 13680: 13640:Closing note 13639: 13616: 13597: 13574: 13567: 13555: 13552: 13512:Closing note 13511: 13486: 13471: 13319:Capitalized. 13309: 13253:Introduction 13231: 13206: 13152: 13136: 13103: 13082: 13062: 13045: 13029: 13013: 12997: 12981: 12965: 12949: 12919: 12914: 12838: 12827: 12816: 12773: 12740: 12725: 12668: 12666: 12643: 12636: 12624: 12621: 12581:Closing note 12580: 12487: 12464: 12457: 12445: 12442: 12402:Closing note 12401: 12382: 12346: 12323: 12316: 12304: 12301: 12261:Closing note 12260: 12209: 12190: 12167: 12160: 12148: 12145: 12105:Closing note 12104: 12081: 12029:, yet still 11966:ontributions 11933:ontributions 11888:ontributions 11848:ontributions 11828: 11815:ontributions 11786:ontributions 11756:ontributions 11724:ontributions 11694:ontributions 11662:ontributions 11640: 11620:ontributions 11586:ontributions 11549:ontributions 11520:ontributions 11490:ontributions 11470: 11457:ontributions 11425:ontributions 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8349: 8322: 8269: 8240: 8213: 8181: 8164: 8151:Cecil Rhodes 8128: 8101: 8073: 8036: 8007: 7979: 7969: 7948: 7921: 7893: 7865: 7833: 7805: 7778: 7752: 7747: 7583: 7572: 7571: 7557: 7543: 7529: 7515: 7501: 7486: 7471: 7299: 7295: 7207: 7203: 7133: 7101: 7092:cited source 7037: 6916: 6876:Significant 6820: 6752: 6729: 6722: 6710: 6707: 6667:Closing note 6666: 6625: 6595: 6592: 6586: 6583: 6496: 6473: 6348: 6343: 6338: 6318: 6315: 6312: 6309: 6306: 6301: 6296: 6261: 6256: 6235: 6232: 6229: 6226: 6223: 6218: 6209: 6206: 6203: 6200: 6197: 6192: 6164: 6136: 6131: 6128: 6123: 6118: 6113: 5990: 5984: 5945: 5893: 5892: 5674:this version 5539: 5485: 5348:astonishing. 4948: 4863: 4828: 4768: 4745: 4738: 4726: 4723: 4683:Closing note 4682: 4613: 4601: 4583: 4579:The Cauldron 4578: 4555: 4538:Nova Religio 4537: 4525: 4521:The Cauldron 4520: 4516: 4486:The Cauldron 4485: 4478: 4452: 4448: 4445:Nova Religio 4444: 4432: 4420: 4416:Nova Religio 4414: 4405: 4395: 4393: 4379: 4377: 4369: 4285: 4162: 4139: 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