15704:"According to Billboard writer Monica Herrera, the clip is opposite to the music video for Bionic lead single 'Not Myself Tonight'". These and many others are sentences that need to be rewritten to sound better and pass the first featured article criterion, which I quote asks for prose that is "engaging, even brilliant, and of a professional standard". From here on, I'd recommend that you work with an experienced editor, possibly someone who commonly works with pop music topics, and ask them to run an eye and help you tidy things up. And while this next suggestion is no obligation, I highly recommend you take this article to GAN after the copy editing is finished. This is a stepping stone to seeing how far your article has come. If you ping me on my talk page, I may be able to review this if it
18818:, "I wonder if this might be an instance of comprehensiveness trumping reliability... However, this is a specialized and obscure topic, and there may not be the kind of sources you request available. IOW, they may be the most reliable sources out there. I've come to the conclusion that resorting to using industry webpages is necessary for some articles in order to maintain comprehensiveness, even in FAs--as long as the prose is high-quality." She made a very good point about comprehensiveness trumping reliability. I'm not trying to be a pain, I've just followed this article from day one. I wrote this article with all the sources available and I don't see the issue in the few YouTube or PointBuzz links that are used.--
16974:"Overseas operations often flourished while ignoring or even defying orders from Louisville headquarters: management attempted to force KFC Japan to switch from corn and cottonseed oil to cheaper palm or soybean, but local management refused to compromise the quality of their product with a lesser quality oil". I'm worried that a POV has been 'swallowed' by the source and then reproduced here. what evidence is there that the cheaper oil was lower quality? It was used in other countries without any problems? Perhaps "local management stated that they would not compromise the quality of their product with a lesser quality oil" at least attributes the argument to managers without elevating it to objective fact.
16319:). A reader who has not seen the film will not learn much from "Relatives: The King (father); The Queen (mother); Mother Gothel (adoptive mother)". Since there are no articles on her royal parents, what does it add to include the king and queen (and I think most readers will be sufficiently familiar with biology to know the king is her father and the queen is her mother). Since "Mother Gothel" kidnaps Rapunzel and holds her captive, I think calling her an "adoptive mother" is very problematic (since adoption is a legal process and kidnapping is not). I am not against an infobox here in general, but the current box detracts from the article it should add to (if included).
15473:. Tone and style issues are pervasive; many sections are simply not written to an encyclopedic standard, much less the brilliant prose expected of FAC. There are a number of problems with linking as well, from massive overlinking (I lost count of how many times Palermo is linked) to at least one self-referential link (violent succession). There are referencing issues as well, including a bare URL link to Youtube as Reference 125, but given the state of the article, I didn't do a comprehensive reference review. To meet the FAC standards, this article would require a sufficiently thorough rewrite that I would then oppose on the stability criterion.
7982:"Owing to the scale of the atrocities, Archer Blood, the US Consul General in Dhaka, sent what became known as the Blood telegram, in which the signatories denounced American "complicity in Genocide"". This requires some unpacking - first, a concul would normally send his/her own telegrams, so the idea that it had multiple signatories seems strange. Second, I don't understand the relevance / meaning, in this particular sentence, of "Owing to the scale of the atrocities". Is this meant to explain the actions of Blood, or the fact that there were all the signatories... i just don't follow the argument here.
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7307:? In that case, you are still left with the problem of not having explained why you are first citing that outside estimate that is so exorbitantly higher. Has that estimate some special authority that would justify us giving it pride of place? Why then have the authors of the other estimates ignored it? – As for the "lebensborn" thing, I'm not going to discuss that with you further, having experienced your inaccessibility to logical argument too many times. It's absurd and has to go, and the article will not be featured while it's there.
6331:; he states as much in his prose. Of course many other papers and books – including that by Scarboro and Luck, which you cite – discuss the religion of Wicca (from historical, anthropological, and sociological angles), but none discuss the word's etymology. In fact I think that the Scarboro and Luck article would be of very little use here, because it does not focus on the etymology or terminology, instead offering a sociological analysis of a Wiccan coven in Atlanta, Georgia. Interesting stuff, but not particularly pertinent here.
16943:"Whereas KFC management had previously allowed franchisees to serve any soft drink they wished, PepsiCo stated that it hoped it would be able to convince franchisees to stock Pepsi products". The sentence seeks to contrast two things, but they are actually the same: previous management had "allowed" franchisees to serve anything, while Pepsi said "it hoped it would be able to convince franchisees" to do something - implying that it remained a choice - they weren't changing the franchise contracts. So why "whereas"?
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for various types of hollow metal tube also being 'waveguide') and that this article will only deal with filters of one type. I think a better approach would be to start with a very general definition of a waveguide filter that is always true, then mention the caveat and say that the rest of this article will only deal with the case of filters in hollow metal tubes. I think the best approach would be to rename this article or make this article cover other types as well (eg
Coplanar waveguide filters).
16308:- if all someone saw was the infbox (as can happen on some smart phones), it would not tell them this article is about a Disney character (as opposed to the fairy tale or even the version in Shrek films), and it makes it appear that the general character of Rapunzel first appeared in the world in 2010, sprung full-formed from the mind of Glen Keane. For an example of an FA infobox that does a much better job of making clear this is a character in a specific fictional universe, see
7435:
Australian doctor felt while working with them, and nobody cares about what that doctor mistakenly thought the rapes in
Bangladesh were comparable with. The only reason to have this bit (and in a literal block quote, no less) is to gain the extra emotional power of having that comparison with the nazis; why would we throw that comparison at the reader when we are forced in the next moment to retract it and explain to them that these two things weren't comparable after all?
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1501:"Blown away" are words used in the article. It may not be encyclopedic, but a quote is a quote and must be maintained. Ms. Ogryzlo also mentioned in the source that she felt the reputation of the fries as "the best" had merit. So, there is a source already there about the quality of the fries. Also, if I remove the Chadwick quote, you don't then get to say in the future "what is the relevance of chip trucks? Why is this included? They're not notable."
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to a burger - which one would hope was boneless! So it cannot be being rolled out for the first time at any rate. Third, the
Sanburn quote is classic 'nothing text': is describes the innovation as "modest" and then says it "may not" (and therefore by implication "may") be the latest in a long line blah blah. It is of no consequence and shouldn't be included. Then we have this concept store - a single store in a chain that has nearly 10000. See
6338:, a relatively influential journal in the British Pagan scene, albeit one that is not peer-reviewed or academic. Seims herself subsequently uploaded the article online so that it could gain a wider readership, but originally it did appear in print, and therefore fits with Knowledge's reliable source policy. If its of any relevance here, Doyle White actually quotes Seims's arguments in his academic paper, in order to support or critique them.
12479:"His brother was in California the night Bruce died and yet Roderick knew from a dream exactly how it happened. The night of the drowning Roderick awoke screaming and rushed to tell his grandmother about his nightmare." Maybe "His brother, Roderick, was in California the night Bruce died, yet claimed to know from a dream exactly what had happened. Roderick awoke screaming and rushed to tell his grandmother about his nightmare."
850:
Port Huron, Michigan." This sentence needs rewording to make it more clear. As it stands, it doesn't follow logically, but I know what you are trying to say. Maybe something like "Sarnia is located on the eastern bank of the junction between the Upper and Lower Great Lakes where Lake Huron flows into the St. Clair River, which forms the Canada-United States border, directly across from Port Huron, Michigan". Is that more clear?
6802:
ref=harv parameter needs to be added for proper working of the style. I have illustrated a few examples in the article. However, for cite web templates, and in some other instances where author name is not available, there are some other methods of parameter. Please see an article that uses the style to understand that. Yes it does need some work, but the end result is aesthetically more soothing. Regards.--
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8986:. The NYT article uses the term: Western. Southwest is an imperfect substitute; however, Western U.S. is already used in this same sentence. It would be redundant to state this same geographical reference again, so deleting from the Southwest seems like the best option. I've checked again and I don't see other issues, but point out anything you believe we may have missed. Thanks.
9999:", in 1893, Burnham took his family to southern Africa where his background proved useful" This is awkwardly worded and I don't think the last bit really adds anything (we say in the next paragraph he was useful). Perhaps make clear why he went. Maybe something like "Feeling the Old West was becoming too tame, Burnham took his family to southern Africa in 1893, perceiving
16330:; the lead is supposed to be a summary of the content of the article. My rule of thumb is to include each section / subsection in the lead in some way (even if it is just a sentence or phrase). The current lead does not mention the following sections (as far as I can see): Hair and technology, Walt Disney Parks and Resorts, Accolades and recognition (at least no awards).
1219:
were relocated, mostly to the North End, to make way for expansion of the chemical industry. The village was demolished, and all that remains now is an historical marker at the corner of Vidal Street and Huron Avenue. This neighbourhood was largely forgotten until historian
Lorraine Williams penned two books about it and was instrumental in the dedication of the plaque. "
6660:"After the conflict the victims went through a second ordeal: widespread sexual infections and feelings of intense shame and humiliation." Unnecessary use of a colon, simply "Many of the victims suffered from sexual infections and feelings of intense shame and humiliation, and a number were ostracised by their families and communities or committed suicide." will do.
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waterfront). Are there more sources on the fries actually being notable? For example I could find a food blogger that likes fries anywhere. Some reference that states the Sarnia fries are special in some way would be perfect. Then there is a long quotation which does not have to do with Sarnia, just chip trucks in general, which I believe is rather out of place.
8069:"Abul Kalam Azad was the first person to be sentenced for crimes during the war." Slightly confusing, since we have already been told of the first person to be indicted and also sentenced (I realise there is a difference) but also, we have no context as to why we are being told about Azad, since we know nothing of what the crimes, or the sentence, were.
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criticisms together -- namely the battery life, the arrangement of the buttons, the lack of battery or storage flexibility, and the camera software features. I would also talk about the bloatware in this particular paragraph. At the moment "Reception" is just a collection of reviews sourced from different publications without any seamless integration.
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document included within Chalk. The second citation is highly problematic. Bisvasa 2005 appears not to be a scholarly secondary source, but publication of primary documents from the
Mujibnagar Government for reference purposes. If I have understood that correctly, then it is not a sufficient source for the claim, because we need a high-quality
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a few more weeks in the spotlight. Compared with Walt
Mossberg's review, the one written by Pogue has got a lot of coverage. You need to cut a lot of the wording and synthesize the praise into several paragraphs, and maybe bring the criticisms under one. At the moment there is a lot of duplication. You could also get rid of the review scores.
6869:
seesm incorrect. Moreover, it is not available online, so not able to cross-check. Either give actual details of teh full citation (such as, page number, actual authors), or replace that. Also, the bibliographic entry Mannan, Abdul (December 2009). "People in people's war". Daily Star. has not been used as a reference. So, it can be removed.
4791:"On April 23, 2007, during a formal session of the Fairfax County Board of Supervisors, Juskalian was recognized for his heroism and honorable service to the United States" vs "The Fairfax County Board of Supervisors recognized Juskalian for his heroism and honorable service to the United States during a formal session on April 23, 2007"
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of software and sales, and could benefit from a third-party copy-edit, with a particular focus on "Reception", which I think could be synthesized to remove simply superfluous statements and duplication. For now my job here has come to an end. I would be happy to participate in a future FAC if this article is renominated. Regards, --
7194:
from 25,000 to the
Bangladeshi government's figure of 70,000". These two statements are blatantly contradictory (the estimate cited in the previous sentence is almost three times higher than even the highest estimate cited in the next). These statements need to be put into proper context and related to each other, or be left out.
3644:"The film received an April 2013 release and grossed $ 15 million on its first weekend, making it the lowest-grossing opening weekend for a film in the franchise; it also became a critical failure." → "The film was released in April 2013 and grossed US$ 15 million on its first weekend, making it the lowest-grossing weekend for a
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present because, in the case of this book, Biśvāsa is assembling primary documents, not writing a scholarly analysis. Regarding the first claim, (Khan saying 'I will reduce this majority to a minority') can we get a second source supporting this (or alternatively, a source indicating that Khan does not dispute that he said it)?
5250:
It is problematic to determine who did exactly what as nothing was published during the war. Fano & Lawson published the technical results of the work after the war, but I don't know if they throw any light on who did what either. I would be cool with removing the statement if you think it does not add to the article.
9850:"known for his service to the British Army in colonial Africa" He was initially in the service of the British South Africa Company, not the British Army. The two are not the same thing. My understanding is that he only actually joined the British Army in 1900, when Roberts took him on and gave him the formal rank of captain.
12864:; there are no red links but I see some terms that should have them, i.e. Northern Territories (BSA) Exploration Company, Wa Syndicate or Mlimo. Please consider adding more to encourage creation of new articles. 4) "Assassination of Mlimo" section mentions a sacred cave and a village, can we add their respective names? --
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Burnham and Harris
Hammond were included on the board, and Fred Burnham served as president. Roderick Burnham was by profession a geologist and an executive at Union Oil at the time the Burnham Exploration Company was incorporated; however, this relationship is probably too detailed and unnecessary for the lead.
10349:"Once the Sioux had been driven away the mother returned to find the house burned down. Her young son was safe, fast asleep in the basket and protected only by the corn husks." I think we can merge these two sentences; "... burned down, but her young son was safe, fast asleep in the basket with the corn husks."
6663:"The list included members of the Bangladesh Nationalist Party, a political group founded in 1978." Seems unusual for you to mention just one party, and one which formed 7 years after the ordeal. I'd feel more comfortable if you mentioned some of the other alleged perpetrators (groups) for neutrality purposes.
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1942, Juskalian boarded the RMS Queen Mary, and along with the other 15,000 soldiers of the 1st
Infantry Division, was shipped to Europe" where the source says "In August, the whole division — some 20,000 soldiers — boarded the Queen Mary and headed overseas." I agree that thorough checks are needed here.
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needed, for background, so the readers get an idea of what caused this. Your point on the number of pregnancies shows you know little of the subject matter, 25000 is the number of estimate war babies, which I shall now make clear. Given your personal dislike of me you should not even be commenting here.
16360:
honestly say Keane "created" the character. Finally, the
Brothers Grimm collected the fairy tales and edited them, but were not strictly speaking the authors of them (though they did make editorial changes and chose which version(s) to print). So perhaps this sentence would be better as something like
14359:- caption could be trimmed, especially for an infobox image: "Colonel Robert Madgwick as Director of Army Education, Melbourne, 1944" contains all necessary information (Toorak is not mentioned in the article, the exact day of year makes no difference for the image, Australia is clear from the intro).
1461:"Fries Under the Bridge" is not a specific store. There are generally five fry establishments under the Bridge at any one time. One of them is a brick-and-mortar location, and the other four are chip trucks. The trucks and the regular location have been part of Sarnia's cultural identity for 57 years.
1309:"Otherwise, as also shown by the National Climate Data and Information Archive, Sarnia has very little regular snowfall;" This needs reworking. Possibly include the national climate data as a citation for the statement "Sarnia has very little regular snowfall"? No need to include it in the text itself.
18782:
reliable sources". Inherent in that difference is evaluating the reputation of the publisher, not just the interview subject. You've used four videos on YouTube as sources, one of which produced by Cedar Point and three not. The reputation, quality and reliability of those other three creators are at
16359:
First off, no one person does all the animation on a modern feature-length animated film. Second, since much of the character's story is taken from the fairy tale (long hair, held in a tower, falls in love with a man who climbs her hair into the tower, even being naïve), I am not sure the article can
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is referring to, since the subject (Aguilera) is missing from the previous sentence. In that case I suggest you rephrase "On June 22, 2010, "You Lost Me" was announced to be released as the third single in the" to "On June 22, 2010, Aguilera announced that "You Lost Me" would be released as the third
15233:
The sentence about how a Navy fleet was called to service the day before the game seems to me like it might work a bit better as a clause separated by semi-colon from the previous sentence. This would join the cause-and-effect that the two sentences produce, and would solve the small problem that the
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paragraph: "The band elected not to utilize the considerable marketing tools that a major label act has at their disposal early on." Says who? Not all bands signed to a major label have "considerable marketing tools" etc. This is more conjecture, and another thing which isn't supported by a citation.
13023:
This article has not been adequately prepared for the FAC process. While the article has been expanded, the references cleaned up, and the prose improved, there exist several issues that I believe cannot be adequately addressed in a reasonable amount of time. The article still lacks coverage in terms
8701:
A list of sources is useful to the reader, so I've added a new ref for Britt to the article even though it is a bit redundant. I've moved Montgomery to its alpha location, and I've spelled out the states. I've been through the hyphens several times, as have other editors, but I can't locate any new
8233:
I presented this source "A consensus has formed among scholars that genocides in the 20th century encompassed (although were not limited to) the following cases: Herero in 1904–1907, the Armenian genocide in the Ottoman Empire in 1915–1923, the Holodomor in the former Soviet Ukraine in 1932–1933, the
7974:
The paragraph that begins "Between the middle of May and September 1971,..." needs some work. It appears to me that most of this para is intended to present an argument, that there was a racist motive behind rape as a tactic of war. If so, the first sentence is irrelevant and should be deleted. Then,
7265:
Overall structure of the prose: much of the presentation is repetitive and poorly structured, with statements being stacked onto each other seemingly more with a view towards maximising the rhetorical effect of the repeated accusatory statements than with a view to their precise logical relationships
7096:
Hmm, couple of points. First, the text as it stands is heavily ungrammatical, including bits that are presumably literal quotes. I can't find the "classical a pose..." bit in either of the two cited sources, and there seems to be a closing quotation mark missing; can you check that again? Second, are
5249:
Don't really know the answer to that. My principle source for the history is Levy & Cohn and those are the names they mention in this connection (ie right in amongst the discussion of Rad Lab's development of microwave cavity filters). However, the only specific work mentioned is that of Bethe.
4870:
After a cursory check I noticed this close paraphrasing: "constructed from British biscuit cans and their handles made from the wooden slats of their beds" vs. "fashioned out of British biscuit cans with handles created from their wooden bed slats". And this inconsistency with the source, " In August
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Most of the first paragraph is out of scope for Sarnia, the city (and would better fit into the Guernsey-article). The relevant etymology for the city name is only: "It was derived from an island with the same name". Guernsey is linked, all additional info about Guernsey and the island's etymology is
1434:
This is a very long quotation that has nothing to do with Sarnia, and I do not know why it is there: "There is one single, unifying element that defines our Canadian culture in absolute terms, a skein that runs through the warp and weft of the Canadian psyche. It's not our language, not our universal
849:
Going through the lead again, it looks much better now, but still the prose is far from polished. For example "Sarnia rests on the eastern bank of the junction between the Upper and Lower Great Lakes where Lake Huron flows into the St. Clair River and is across the Canada-United States border east of
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But Sarnia was simply the venue of these bands, it did not generate an "artistic presence". For example, you wrote (in the lead mind you) that a country band called Rascal Flats, from Ohio, once went to Sarnia to play an hour long concert. How does this make Sarnia an artistic presence? Did this band
17067:
Suggest deleting the whole para that begins "In April 2013, KFC announced the roll out of boneless Original Recipe across all of its United States outlets". First, the article should not be a platform for every single product announcement from KFC. Second, the first reference to "Original Recipe" is
16205:
Although I agree with you, I will wait until the actual review process begins to further discuss the "title"/"occupation" infobox issue. And no, Rapunzel is NOT German; she is from a fictional kingdom from Corona. I have removed it from the infobox several times. However, an anonymous user (as in
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A completely ignorant question, but is Rapunzel really depicted as "German" in the Disney franchise? Or is she merely a fantasy princess in a fairy-tale country? "Nationality" as infobox parameter looks strange here, it would be far more useful to note, that her "Origin" is Germany and the character
14967:
I wouldn't relist this at the guild. If you want this to pass FAC, it will probably take too long for an interested editor to finish work, and you don't know if the copy-editing will be up to par. If you know a talented writer, I'd recommend asking them directly for copy-editing help. If no one else
13848:
I think the reviews are quite lengthy. For example, "considered the HTC One to be a device that would "give HTC at least a few more weeks in the spotlight" in relation to the company's past success and recent struggles" is not significant, since any high-end phone like the One would give any company
10034:
The completed sentence is: "Burnham distinguished himself in several battles in Rhodesia and South Africa and became Chief of Scouts". I don't see where this sentence limits the use of his Chief of Scouts title to the Boer War, but I do agree that becoming Chief of Scouts under Roberts was a bigger
9860:
You have it right and I've updated accordingly. It gets a little more complicated because The Bulawayo Field Force militia reported to Gen. Carrington / Maj. Baden-Powell once the regular army arrived in Rhodesia in 1896, but technically Burnham was never in the British army until he joined Robert's
9281:
Hello Ctatkinson. The problem with this review is that you address the specific examples I point out very promptly, but have not addressed the issues they exemplify. I can return time and again to give you more examples, but "The article has X problem as shown by Y instance" is not adequately solved
8347:
Further query re aftermath. It refers at one point to some figures "...before the state programme had even started". Re-reading the paragraph, i am not sure what the term "state programme" is referring to, as Davis's program appears to be international organisation, not Bangladeshi. Can you clarify?
8112:
If 2010a is the first of the two in the reference list, then my reading of it suggests it is not strong enough to substantiate the text "...but human rights advocates are of the opinion that the mass rapes and killings of women may not be addressed". The article quotes only two lawyers, one hopeful,
7581:
Bose id a joke, her book does not mention the rape victims so is of no use to us, I looked at one of the sources given on the talk page, Bose estimates a few thousand rapes in it. She also says there were only 30,000 Pakistani troops in theatre, it was 90,000, she is not just fringe, she is both way
6670:
It would be good if you could find a photograph from 1971 of women in captivity or soldiers. I'd accept the upload of a fair use image from 1971 to illustrate something important in the article and I think you could claim it for encyclopedic purposes. Obviously a photo of an actual rape if it exists
5786:
I have a question - you've put a citation needed on the claim that HTTT is Radiohead's longest album. I'm never sure how to go about citing this sort of thing. I presume it isn't enough to just state it as a self-evident truth that readers can verify by comparing running times? Is there such a thing
4138:
Assuming that "iTunes Store" is the work, why is it not italicized while other website names are? A standard I've used in articles I've written is to only italicize the titles of books, magazines and newspapers. For references that are exclusively online, the names are unitalicized, as they would be
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My opinion doesn't matter much. I do wonder, has it changed her career? Affected how she chose to perform? Anything significant? Or just a lot of fuss at the time? If reliable sources still talk about it as a major thing in her career then it's worth including... you have to look at how important it
3948:
This man stalked her and has threatened to kill both Tisdale and boyfriend - I don't know, I thought this was relevant to her personal life because it was a fact that received a lot of media coverage. Do you still think it's irrelevant to her personal life? If so, I may remove that paragraph without
1627:
I'm sorry, there are simply too many prose issues in this article at the moment. I've been trying to catch them but I'm maybe 10% through the article, and even then it could use more than a cursory glance. Also I've not had a chance to review the "bigger picture". I don't think this will pass in the
1218:
This sentence seems out of place for the geography section: "The village of Blue Water was built to house workers and their families in Chemical Valley during the construction of Polymer Corporation and at one point had nearly 3,000 residents, many of them French-Canadian. In 1961, all the residents
15267:
In fact, throughout this section, every construction describing the number of yards in a play uses an en-dash, though it should be a hyphen. Note, of course, this does not apply to the score by the end of the half, which should be an en-dash as it currently is. Also, "23–yards" should not include a
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branch or whomever. Second always capitalize Native American. "big N" Native is acceptable; sometimes "small n" native is viewed as condescending by some Native people today (no uniformity on this, but the ones who care are the ones who will comment, the ones who don't care won't get upset either
7987:
Estimates of numbers of people raped should not be in "aftermath", they go to the core of the article's subject, and should be included there. The estimates should be discussed in a bit more detail, and notwithstanding the fact that Davis was 'on the ground', his particular views are given far more
6868:
Ok, I have tried to go over the technical aspect of the citations, and corrected quite a lot. Most of them appear ok to me now. Exception: Hadden 1971 citation, which ideally should have connected to Hadden, Briton; Henry Robinson Luce (1971). "Time Volume 98". Time. However, that detailed citation
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Rising from the Ashes women's narratives of 1971 The first translation to English of the oral testimonies given by women who were not just abused, but women such as Taramon Bibi who fought in the war and was awarded the Bir Protik(Symbol of Valour)." Please rewrite this with appropriate punctuation
6511:
I think it would have to be a copyright-free image uploaded to Commons. I don't think fair use comes into play unless we are using a copyrighted full illustrated book cover associated with a specific book, and such an image would normally only be used in an article about that book. Single words and
5456:
I tend to agree with that, but articles of this sort have repeatedly been requested at peer review and FA that the history section be moved nearer the front. The thinking seems to be that the history is easier to understand and may be of more interest to the general reader than technical details.
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Article scope: I'm not really happy with how you've approached this, first of all you say that waveguides are hollow metal tubes but then later have to clarify this and say that actually the term is used more broadly (personally I regard the broader definition as being correct with the common term
1651:
I do think the article is looking better, and thanks for considering my changes, but as you can see there were a lot, and that was only a section or two. I alone cannot go over the whole article in two weeks. It really needs other eyes. I'll keep trying to improve prose as much as I can in the mean
515:
You are fixing a specific criticism without looking at the bigger picture. The writing needs work and unfortunately I do not have time to go over every sentence (although I do want to see this article at FA level!). For example "Because of the petrochemical industry, and Sarnia's resulting economic
18948:
I don't think I have much further to add here. We're going to have to agree to disagree on the reliability or suitability of videos and let the delegates make that final determination. FAs have to use "high quality reliable sources", but personally, I can't support some of the sources used here as
13452:
Perhaps you could merge the third paragraph under "Release delays" into the first ie "Sprint and AT&T (who had exclusive selling rights to the 64 GB version) released the One in the United States on April 19, 2013; Verizon Wireless was the last major US carrier to offer the One, having finally
10093:
I've modified the sentence by removing Roderick, but to answer your question, John Hammond Sr. considered Fred Burnham to be a member of his family (he says as much in personal correspondence). Burnham Exploration Company was a joint venture between the Burnham and Hammond families, sons Roderick
9171:
We have addressed the far more challenging issues you raised in the earlier FAR, and I think it would be most unfortunate to withdraw this outstanding former FA based on the few examples you have raised in this FAC. With little delay and only minor edits I speedily addressed the concerns you have
8381:
Thanks for clarifying. The change you made however doesn't really help, and "abortion programme" sounds nightmarish - like a form of genocide. I suggest you revert those words to "state program", and split the second sentence of the para in two, to read: "In the year following the war, there was a
7678:
With chapters in edited volumes, you cite the chapter names, not just the chapter numbers. You should also provide the page numbers (the one in the inline harvard ref is just the page reference to the specific passage you're citing; in the bibliography you give the first and last page of the whole
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I see a comment from an editor up above who does not have an axe to grind saying the article is pretty damn good, and that quote was there when he looked it over. You do not get to decide that one quote stops an article from being FA. No other estimates are ignored, they are all there. I am citing
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Also in the "Aftermath" section, there is a statement saying "A doctor at the rehabilitation center in Dhaka reported 170,000 abortions of pregnancies caused by the rapes, and the births of 30,000 war babies". However, the very next paragraph says that "Estimates of the number of pregnancies range
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File:Woman_raped_and_killed_in_the_Bangladesh_Liberation_War.jpg: can we be more expansive with the "not replaceable" rationale? Any more details on original photographer or publication? What steps have been taken to attempt to identify the original photographer? Have to be really careful with the
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scholarly sources. I would be very happy if the article were able to include another academic source or two that support a large portion of the article. Of course, I expect that Doyle White's "The Meaning of "Wicca"" will stay (by far) the leading source for this article. As Midnightblueowl, there
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available there - it's not necessary (and confusing for the average reader) to duplicate that info here and follow an inherited name completely back to its original roots (especially when that info is apparently disputed among different sources). The entire first paragraph should be replaced with "
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Later: I have copyedited the sections following "Demographics", the best I can do. I have not tried to rewrite the article, though I have made a few rearrangements of the content that seemed necessary, and I have "lost" the bus picture, which wasn't particularly interesting and tended to overcrowd
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This sentence needs rewording: "Despite this high percentage of clay, the soil is remarkably rich for growing and planting because prior to the Ice Age, when glaciers covered most of the area as can be seen not only by the existence of the Great Lakes themselves but also of alluvial sand deposits,
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I'm a little bothered that the non-free image of the track layout says the purpose of use is "To show what the GateKeeper roller coaster at Cedar Point will look like once it is completed for 2013" when it is no longer uncompleted. Since it has been completed, other pictures could be taken, which
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I have seen that video, but like the source above, it's about the reputation of the publisher. Do they have a history of accuracy in their publications? Are they known for providing editorial oversight of the items they publish? We're naturally quite skeptical of videos published on YouTube for a
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Just as publication locations are normally listed for newspapers that omit their location in the title, we normally would list the publication location for a TV station. Please add the missing locations, which allows others to help judge the reliability of the sources. (The location for a student
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Sorry, Simon, but this article needs work from top to bottom. English is indeed a difficult language, but nothing's unachievable. I have highlighted some examples from the lede, but there are issues elsewhere, like "Prior to the release two days, a sneak peek of the music video was revealed," and
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Thank you for your excellent input, Piotrus. I've now addressed items 2 & 3. For item 4, although none of my sources provide names for the sacred cave or the nearby village, I did come across some additional information on the location -- not many miles from the Mangwe district. I've added
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I have a couple of issues with the first para under that heading, regarding Tikka Khan. My view is that exceptional claims require exceptional sources, and we don't have this at present. The Chalk source for the first sentence is OK, provided that the WP article is not relying on a primary source
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As has yours, I mentioned above the issues between FPaS and myself, you said what about that exactly? So archive it and be done, so long as that guy is allowed to stalk and harass me then this article will never get to FA anyway, he will not have that cos he detests me, so ya, you have given them
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Looks much better! One extra thought - is "He Said She Said" the single of hers that has sold best overall? If so, it might be easier to just say that in the lead (or just as "her most successful single"), and relegate the details to the article body, because "her best charting solo single in the
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There's a lot of POV and conjecture in this article - original research technically. For example, one sentence says "Instead, they opted to use quiet web updates on their website while they worked on the record." Where does the source itself say Manson used "quiet" updates? Another from the same
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Since lot of the reviews praise the industrial design, display and camera features (Zoe), I would merge them in one paragraph. In another paragraph I would talk about the quality of the speakers, the benchmark tests, and one or two other praise-worthy features. In the third I would bring all the
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lived in southern Minnesota; however, I'm not sure if it is correct to say that either or both of these tribes are Sioux. Unfortunately, I don't yet know the exact location of Tivoli, Minnesota (a pioneer town, long gone), the 1860 reservation boundaries, or modern the tribal names adequately to
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that Khan said something. But we cannot rely on them for that claim as they are neither neutral, nor a historian assessing the validity of the claim. We need a scholarly assessment by a neutral source that, having weighed up the evidence, accepts that Khan said this thing. We do not have that at
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I further edited a proposed revision, to reduce the emphasis on the Pakistani government figure (as it is not an independent source and lies so far outside other estimates. I also reorganised the paras to cluster together all the quantitative data, which strengthens the case for the 200K to 400K
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Question about your last point (regarding the last paragraph of Promotion and release): it seems to me that Com Lag, the b-sides collection, should at least be mentioned. Are you saying because there's nothing more to really expand on, other than to say it exists, it should be deleted? 08:53, 25
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References are occasionally incomplete and/or inconsistently formatted. There's a bare URL and I also see "NME, 3 May 2003, p.27." and "Q Magazine, June 2003" (author and article names?). I also see author's inconsistently listed as "Chuck Klosterman" and "Edwards, Gavin". I recommend a thorough
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is a tolerably precise definition, but "kids" in such a context could variously mean only people younger than tweens, only people older than tweens, or all people between age 8-or-so and (potentially) age 25-or-so who don't fit into the "tweens" category. Either way, something is either wrong or
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I consider the readers of this page when gauging notability. What is more likely: 1. A user wondering during an election time, if Sarnia is a traditional Tory stronghold or 2. A user wondering the name of the lady that sold the land to the city in 1933 creating one of the 100 parks. I think most
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There is quite a bit of trivia that is not really appropriate for a city page IMO. For example, it's not notable that the name of one of the 100 parks "was chosen by Mrs. W. J. Hanna, who in 1932 helped to purchase the land." All three paragraphs on parks could probably be neatly summarized in 1
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I understand being skeptical of items published on YouTube but this is an interview with Rob Decker. The information is coming straight from him. If you have an issue with that particular video, we can remove it because he says the same thing in another video that is used in the article. As for
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in those cases, yet you're attributing them as if they were involved in creating the content. I don't advise that people list Google Books when using convenience links to books hosted on that website; in this case, these are convenience links to a website hosting content originally published by
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The Mason's are a club and I've seen his 32-degree certificate in the archives at Yale, but I didn't make a copy and I don't have the date it was issued. Each mason is joins and is promoted at a particular lodge; however, his lodge is probably not important to the article, so I've removed this
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Not sure what you are responding to with this comment. Assuming it is my comment in the last group - i am not trying to open up a debate about whether or not this was genocide, I am simply saying that, when a WP article says something is "widely viewed" as having a certain nature (in this case,
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Do you have a long history of disagreements with these editors? It is a very sensitive topic, and it doesn't surprise me it is disputed on here but if there are valid concerns with neutrality and prose then they need to be addressed respectfully.. And I haven't done anything Darkness, if Ian or
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Nope, the background is necessary to give readers a full understanding of what led up to this, and this has been discussed before and FPaS was wrong then just as he is wrong now, we cannot expect people to have to go read another article to try and figure out what happened when they are halfway
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Regarding background, then do you suggest to remove (or, maybe summarize in two sentences) the initial two paragraphs? And essentially start from December 1970? I had a feeling that background is probably long, but was not sure where to start really. I would suggest Darkness Shines to hear what
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The quote box that begins "Burnham is the sufficient and heroic figure, model and living example, who inspired and gave..." is "sandwiching" text between it and the topographic map on my browser. That's also a wiki-MOS "crime" you now need to fix. Maybe you don't need two quote boxes in that
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I am getting rather tired of your vendetta against me. I have restored the quote you removed, as it is very relevant to the article, what your personal beliefs on what the author knew is irrelevant, he most likely meant it in manner of the common belief of Lebensborn. The background section is
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Yes I have talked to members of the A1 Class review. They provided positive feedback. Only one user had a concerns of reliability with a source (#8 and #15) which I personally believe is not an issue. The source is paraphrased in accordance to first hand accounts of Juskalian and can easily be
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File:Sarnia_From_Space.jpg: there is no way this meets the "unique historic image" rationale. You might consider contacting Hadfield about releasing his photos for use, or check to see whether any of the NASA-published photos feature Sarnia. Similarly, File:Sarnia_at_Night_from_Space.jpg - try
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New issue introduced: I wouldn't link the locations in the footnotes. Judicious linking in footnotes steers readers to two things: the source itself (or an online convenience copy) or a wikipedia article to allow them to judge the credibility of the source. Linking to the name of a publisher,
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deal than the use of this title in the Matabele Wars -- the Boer War was Burnham's first regular army gig and the number of troops and planning involved was significantly greater. I'm open to further ideas, but to try and keep this simple for the reader I've left this sentence "as is" for now.
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Hehe. Fancy comment by Faizan. Give me a break! Yes, of course for the sake of neutrality, rapes committed by Mukti Bahini need to be mentioned, and those are mentioned, both in the lead and the body of the article. Indeed I was surprised to see the mention in the lead, because the atrocities
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Not worth it. It would be a sensible solution if the quotation was otherwise of some encyclopedic value, but it isn't. Such a discussion would only unnecessarily divert the reader's attention away from the main point, which is that people were raped in Bangladesh. Nobody cares about what some
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there is currently a technical problem. Wen you converted refs to use sfn style, the conversion was incorrectly done. First, you don't need to mention page numbers within the complete bibliography, since you are indicating page numbers in individual citations. Second, for cite book templates,
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Again, that quotation is not about the five fry establishments under the Bridge. It's about how French Fries and chip stands form part of the Canadian identity. I'm not sure why this specific (random?) quotation was chosen. Is there no references to the importance to the chip trucks in Sarnia
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I've read the sources, and they the cancellation is due to years of low attendance and that the festival in its current form is essentially done. Could not find any firm plans for return in 2014 as stated in the text. In light of the cancellation I'm sticking with my recommendation to remove,
9300:: If you see continued problems, please keep listing the specific examples so they can be fixed. Either you'll run out of them and the article will be good, or they will remain not fixed and will be a valid reason to oppose. Just talking about generalities is not very helpful, I am afraid. --
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I think the second claim will have to be removed. I probably did not explain myself very well. The issue is not Biśvāsa himself. The issue is that the book is a compilation of primary source documents from the post-independence government, which was (understandably) hostile to Pakistan. That
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The other thing is, why are we discussing this image here? Right now, the text still seems a bit as if tacked on to the article as an afterthought – more like the text being there in order to deliver a pretext for showing the image, than the image being there in order to illustrate the text.
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This chip section is really strange. You mention how a food writer was "blown away" by the Sarnia waterfront. "Blown away" is not encyclopaedic, and I'm not sure why the waterfront is mentioned in a paragraph on chip trucks (or the importance of a food blogger in determining the quality of a
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the footnotes/bibliography have duplications with the "Works/Biographies" sections. The layout is also a bit atypical. My recommendation is that the works actually WRITTEN by Burnham be moved above the references into the article text and specifically identified as such. All remaining
9082:. Furthermore, this was only an example of neutrality/tone issues - others, if it would help, include "he struck it rich" and "it was said that he could read the face of nature as easily as most could read their morning newspaper" (the latter could be made a direct quote if applicable).
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For the rewording of the Ultrapixel sensor: there's a big difference here - the rewording makes the sentence inaccurate as it implies that the sensors are 1.4 to 1.0 µm, when it's the pixels that are that size. And "the One's competition" is unnecessarily vague and an awkward choice of
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I guess I don't understand why it matters who creates the videos. How can a video of something happening or a higher executive saying something not be reliable? It happened or it didn't. He said it or he didn't. I don't get why it matters who posted it. The information is there, it is
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Since Drik is a commercial agency, this unfortunately puts it in the same class as images owned by other commercial agencies such as Reuters or AP: unuseable unless the image is itself the object (not just a vehicle) of encyclopedic coverage; otherwise subject to speedy deletion under
5880:"a years-long process of recording and editing drummer Phil Selway described as 'manufacturing music in the studio' " Funky wording here. Perhaps insert "which" after "editing", or change "drummer Phil Selway described" to "described by drummer Phil Selway", unless I'm misreading this.
5492:'The first use of these in a filter was by S. B. Cohn in 1965 using titanium dioxide as the dielectric material' - citation for this? There was widespread use dielectrics in coaxial cables and capacitors before this so it doesn't seem much of a stretch to put dielectric in a waveguide.
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Absolutely. It is an integral part of the development of both Sarnia and Chemical Valley. I removed the part about French-Canadian because it's not in the source. The Mayor's Honor List Source has all the information about Blue Water, so there is no need to list the same source twice.
13230:"high-end Android smartphone produced by the Taiwanese company" Please define "produce". My understanding is that HTC, like Apple (through Foxconn), outsources the main manufacturing job to another company. If HTC is the designer and manufacturer of the One, please say so in the lead.
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True, but it is significant to the history. Waveguide filters started off as, and still frequently are, direct equivalents of lumped-element designs. It is unlikely that waveguide filter history would have taken the path it did without the precursor of lumped-element filter design.
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Is it possible to include a little on the history of the elected political parties. Is it a traditionally held Tory riding? Or has it wavered in the recent past? Maybe just a sentence or two on this I think would add a bit of encyclopaedic balance instead of just the current mp and
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on this one. Sources generally refer to hollow-metal waveguide simply as waveguide. It is the common name, ergo that should be the title of the article. It would usually only be specified to be "hollow-metal" where disambiguation is needed. Knowledge can do the same and create
4713:). So I decided to bring it directly to FAC. I can expand on the lede a little bit. I agree, the second paragraph needs expansion. The sections I personally believe are suffice since he didn't spend much time in some of those places. I can always combine them with other sections.
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Not done. Further examples include: no citations to Britt; References section is misordered (it's mostly alphabetical, but then I see Montgomery before Hough?); inconsistent in whether states are spelled out or abbreviated; some hyphens rather than endashes in page ranges; etc.
1162:" In 2011, 89.31% of Sarnians counted English as their mother tongue, 2.46% listed French, 0.87% counted both of those languages, and 7.37% counted another language as their mother tongue" I count "counted" 3 times in that one sentence. Maybe synonyms would make it less jarring?
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In this article, PointBuzz doesn't really cite any content. Most of the PB footnotes are used to cite posters or pictures. Also, one of them is a Press Release. That is not written by PointBuzz, it is released by Cedar Fair/Cedar Point. PointBuzz is just the one that published
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and recommend withdrawal. This has not been adequately prepared. There are basic grammatical issues in the lead, and it appears that there is at least one other major contributor to the article that has not been consulted. That editor should possibly be a co-nominator as well.
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Reference formalities: chapter titles in edited collections are frequently missing, e.g. in Mohsin 2005, Khondker 2006 etc. If you are going to cite an individually authored chapter in a collection, then the title of the chapter needs to be cited together with the name of the
8043:"...by John Tulloch to be as "classical a pose as any Madonna and Child, however the image is that of a woman, it is not possible to determine age who had been raped repeatedly" Something wrong here - there is no close quotation mark and it does not appear to be a sentence.
7682:, but there are certainly more.) Another (harmless but cosmetic) issue: capitalization in titles is not consistent yet. Use either title casing or normal text casing throughout (or, for a fancy option, use title casing for book titles and normal text casing for chapters).
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Not offended in the least, so don't worry about that. If you had limited your observations to fictional characters in the first place, I wouldn't have felt the need to comment. Anyway, on with the FAC and good luck. I'll hat this to avoid disturbing the FAC further.
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Well, you were obviously offended by my previous comment which, by the way, was not my intention. What I meant to say was that I have yet to come across a well-written FICTIONAL CHARACTER article that does not use a FICTIONAL CHARACTER infobox. Please note that there
12575:"Howard went to Africa and became a mining engineer in the gold mines of Johannesburg, South Africa and later wrote a text book on Modern Mine Valuation." → "Howard moved to Africa, became a mining engineer in the Johannesburg gold mines, and later wrote a text book on
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Now, another big task. The bibliographic entries should be sorted alphabetically. For determining alphabetic order, consider first author's (last) name. If no author present, you can use the title of the work (title of the book, or title of news report) for alphabetic
7164:" programme. The author of the quote clearly had no idea what the Lebensborn actually was. I'm irritated to find that the main author of the article recently clandestinely reintroduced this passage, after agreeing during a discussion last year that it was misleading
764:"The Channel Islands lie between Southern England and Northern France, as indicated by Selden.". You've already mentioned the Channel Islands, what purpose does this sentence serve? Why is it important that Selden knows where the Chanel Islands are, isn't it assumed?
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Another FA criterion is that the article be complete - could a comparison between the Grimm fairy tale version of the character and this one be made? The fair tale character becomes pregnant by her suitor, her hair is not magical, but she does have magical healing
7160:, for two reasons: first, it is quite off-topic, talking about some author's personal feelings in dealing with the atrocities. Secondly, it quite unnecessarily diverts attention from the main topic through a rather misleading and confusing comparison with the Nazi "
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I'd like to see the lede bulked out a little more; it's a bit light. His military service is quite extensive and probably needs a better summary in the lead, WP:MOS wants a lead to not be too long, but I think three to four more solid paragraphs is easily doable
3616:"She played Jody, a late-'20s dancer, the leading role in the film, which also starred Lindsay Lohan and Charlie Sheen." → "Starring alongside Lindsay Lohan and Charlie Sheen, Tisdale portrayed Jody, the leading character of the film who is dancer in her late-20s."
1555:"all classes are conducted in French". This can't be true. French immersion means that there are some classes in French and some in English (I've attended one). At the very least, english classes won't be taught in French. Suggest cutting this part of the sentence.
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Frankly, I don't know why details of history of the parks is considered "trivia," yet a history of which political party was in power over the years is considered necessary. In any event, I removed the sentence, even though it's directly stated in the reference.
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dependence on it, the city has the highest level of particulates air pollution of any Canadian city." This is a passive sentence, consider starting with "The city has the highest level of particulates... because...". I'll see if I have time to catch more later.
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social programs. ... It's not even the animosity we hold each other in — the bipolarization of English versus French, east versus west, everyone versus Ontario. No, — it's the chip wagon. Yes, the glue of our national identity is the grease of the french fry."
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others. (And that re-publishing may or may not be a copyright violation.) If you are citing posters, cite the poster, not the website. For the others, you still have the issue of whether or not Point Buzz meets our requirements for sourcing at the FA level.
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The "team named desire" nickname should be explained somewhere, preferably in the body of the article. I just looked down there and saw nothing indicating why Navy was called that. I can imagine non-college football fans feeling completely lost right about
9240:
I've withdrawn my suggestion for withdrawal, but I'm still finding more issues with this article. I haven't rechecked paraphrasing issues, but while reviewing I also found some prose issues, for example "always careful to keep a rifle within arms length".
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I have moved the list of performers out of the lead and put it into the Culture section. One question, however ... if the bands had played at the Hollywood Bowl instead of Sarnia Bayfest, would that not have been significant in the history of that venue?
7896:
Your issues were addressed previously, the consensus is that the atrocities carried out by Pakistan and the militias far outweigh the revenge attacks, the weight was given accordingly. If you wish to suggest an addition please use the article talk page.
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About the same citation: I can't check the source online, but did the Dhaka doctor really "report" these figures, or did he just estimate? "Reporting" entails that he had the means of accurately counting based on direct observation. This would be quite
12226:"an old friend from Africa"; while most would realise what you are actually saying, some could misunderstand and think Hammond was actually from SA/Rhodesia, which of course he wasn't. maybe reword to "an old friend from his time in Africa", or similar
1797:"unique historic image" requires a stronger rationale than other fair-use tags, and this particular image was first published by the press (according to the image description). I suggest that a broader discussion about the image's inclusion is needed.
8189:"Pakistani General Amir Abdullah Khan Niazi claimed that thousands of men and women had been killed or raped in Chittagong". Only use of the word "claim/ed" in the article - can you explain why this is the only place it is appropriate that it be used?
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15469:, and urge withdrawal. Referencing is really not adequate, including the presence of tags in several places. The lead isn't an adequate summary of the article, and the several citations and large quote included there aren't really in the spirit of
12860:. 1) "Film and stage accounts" and "Tributes" are in an unnecessary and MoS-unrecommended bullet point list. Please rewrite to prose. 2) Add Queen's South Africa Medal and British South Africa Company Medal to infobox. 3) The article should respect
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I included it because it always comes up in discussion of the album's criticisms, particularly from the band and Godrich - "it's too long", "not enough editing" etc. With that in mind, it might make sense to move it to that area, or just delete it.
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I'm not sure if you need "when he had horses and men pull his 45-tonne barque "Le Griffon" up the almost four-knot current" in the lead. Lead is a summary of the text. It's not really about Sarnia itself, but I suppose fits as trivia in the history
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9436:: First off, when possible to use tribal affiliation, that is nearly always preferable to just saying "Indian" or "Native American." In the examples above, if "Sioux" is as good as you have, then use it, even if you can't narrow it down to the
7342:, that is); it also, by failing to correct or hedge this presupposition, carries the implication that it is indeed true. This is historically misleading – and quite unnecessarily so, because the whole comparison is extraneous to the topic anyway.
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U.S." is not only longer, but, more importantly, seems to be trying to put across a lengthy series of qualifiers in order to make the statement true, which makes it very difficult to read to my somewhat worldwide-music-industry-ignorant brain. --
10481:"He traveled in northern Mexico and the American Southwest, including Texas and Oklahoma Territory, earning a living as a buffalo hunter, cowboy, and prospector, and he continued working as a scout" Maybe "He traveled in northern Mexico and the
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Yes, but it would have to be sourced discussion of the image itself, i.e. as a notable photographic work (the history of how it was taken, its aesthetics, its impact on public opinion etc.), not just a discussion of the things the image shows.
5901:: This paragraph is very short, and discusses two ideas which are completely unrelated to one another, and neither is fully developed. If these snippets can't be expanded upon, I believe they should be deleted. Catch-all paragraphs are no good.
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I would suggest finding a picture of the most recent store design. I swapped out the KFC/Taco Bell pic for one showing the most modern store design, but if you can find a pic of a recent-build standalone KFC to complement it, that'd be nice.
8199:"Sheikh Mujibur Rahman called the victims birangona ("heroine"), but this only underscored the fact..." The expression "this only underscored the fact" in this context appears to me unencyclopedic and designed to emphasise the view expressed.
11359:"Returning from the Boer War on the RMS Dunottar Castle, July 1900." Dunottar Castle should be italicised. The image caption here is intrusive and large; if you like I can try to make something similar to what we have on the directors image
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Nikkimaria, when I posted the first photo by Chris Hadfield (the daylight shot), there was a big discussion about it. The caption that I put on the photo was the result of that discussion. Check the talk page of the photo, and you'll see.
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Also, there is a vast inconsistency between listing TV stations as "WKYC", but "WWJ-TV". Either they all are listed with the "-TV", or other appropriate, suffix, or they aren't. Honestly, they should have the appropriate suffix applied.
8446:
Leaving aside the sourcing issues, both sentences need to specify who is claiming that Khan said these things. First sentence: "He reportedly said... " (ie. who reported?). Second sentence: "Khan is also reported to..." (ie. reported by
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the 25,000–70,000 estimate was only the estimate of births (comparable to the doctor's figure of 50,000, which would be within a logical range), but then you changed it again claiming it was "other estimates" of the total of pregnancies
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song, the Music section is too long and stubby-looking. Also when you have a lyrics section, what is the point of discussing it again? I suggest scrapping the songwise sectioning, and moving the best info to augment the music and lyrics
2046:"the 2006 soundtrack became the top-selling album in the United States that year" - can probably be left out of the lead, which already mentions the soundtrack albums; Tisdale was not a main singer on most of the singles from this album.
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and some instances of close paraphrasing (ex "His expeditions in Rhodesia were so important that the Royal Geographical Society elected him a Fellow" vs "His expedition was so important that the Royal Geographic Society elected him a
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as a periodical title, and had assumed incorrectly about that material's origins. I don't suppose there's any chance of a page number there, either? I do still have some questions about that Fields source, though. For starters, what
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in layout. I am not inclined to change it now that a format has been established by precedent - if I did it will end up being changed back and forth on every reviewers whim. If the community establishes a preferred layout, through a
1031:
OK, so the demographics section is out of date and needs to be updated. Stats Can released the national household survey which should update much of the statistics relating to language, religion, etc. for Sarnia. It can be found here:
7447:
Again your thoughts on what the doctor thoughts being mistaken have no place here, it is obvious he meant it in the common perception of the word. I am happy removing the block quote and paraphrasing it if that would suit you better?
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Uhh, don't sort stuff when you're in a state of insomnia. That list was still a complete mess. I fixed it some now, but I don't guarantee it's completely correct yet. Also, please don't forget those chapter titles I mentioned below.
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I have removed the species, gender and title from the infobox. However, I must disagree with your idea to remove the infobox completely because I have yet to come across a well-written (FA, GA or B-class) article that does not use
15661:"It was successful on the Hot Dance Club Play chart, where it reached number one."—why not just get to the point and say "It reached number one on the Hot Dance Club Play chart". From that, we can infer that it was successful there.
4661:
Just some very quick comments: lede is awfully short for an article of this length, paragraphs are somewhat choppy (many are quite short too, as are sections). May need some extensive polishing. Have you tried the MilHist project's
8015:"Estimates of those raped vary from 200,000 to 400,000" - except that later, the article states that the 1974 commission supplementary report estimated "hundreds" - which should presumably therefore form the lower end of the range?
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While it is clear that a lot of work has been put into this article, I am leaning to a reluctant oppose as it does not meet the FA criteria and it seems as if too much work may be required to get it to FA standards while at FAC.
14880:"For his performance in the game, Navy quarterback Ira McKee was named the game's most valuable player." The double use of "game" is a prose redundancy, and I can't see any need to have two of them. It should be easy to chop one.
12288:"Burnham died when he was 86 on September 1, 1947 of heart failure at his home in Santa Barbara, California." maybe "Burnham died of heart failure at the age of 86, on September 1, 1947 at his home in Santa, Barbara, California."
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Other material is not supported by the cited source. For example, "Burnham and Armstrong waited until Mlimo entered the cave and started his dance of immunity, at which point Burnham shot Mlimo just below the heart" is cited to
8653:
Someone ran a bot on the article a couple of days ago and I see it introduced a few small errors in the references. Carr was one of those, and I've just fixed it. I'll have this corrected this weekend. Thanks for letting me
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Not sure the year is needed in "The auction ended on May 6, 2013." Based on the previous sentence, it's obvious to the reader that the auction had to end in 2013. I feel the same way about the year of the media day in the next
13556:"While most high-end smartphones used 8- or 13-megapixel cameras at the time of the One's release, the size of the pixels in their sensors have ranged from 1.4 to 1.0 µm, both of which are considerably smaller in size." --: -->
10944:"he left within the hour" Why not "he left immediately" or "he left within minutes"? Also, why "Although"? Considering the vast distance involved and the urgency of the appointment, one would surely expect him to leave quickly.
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scholarship. As such it contains much historically erroneous information. Placing it in "Further reading" might imply that it is a good source for readers to gain further, accurate information, but quite simply it isn't. Best,
12406:"Nada (May 1894 – May 19, 1896), Burnham's daughter who was the first white child born in Bulawayo, died of fever and starvation during the Siege of Bulawayo" Maybe "Nada (May 1894 – May 19, 1896), Burnham's daughter, was the
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I've added alt tags to all of the images. I think that does it for all of your comments, except for the tribal affiliations. Thank you for your insights on how we should address Native American issues. I work on this next.
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How does one go about getting permission? If I mail them to ask if they would be OK with a single usage for this article and they retain copyright, is there someone on Wiki they need to mail? Or a special form they need fill?
3588:"Her involvement in Dimension Films' Scary Movie 5 was announced in June 2012, by The Weinstein Company" → "In June 2012, The Weinstein Company announced her involvement in Dimension Films' Scary Movie 5" Remove passive voice.
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You mean besides Roman Catholicism? Still very strange to combine two arbitrarily like that, would suggest giving each their individual percentage. That shouldn't clutter the sentence up too much and be much more informative.
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works/biographies not used in the footnotes/bibliography should be consolidated into (in my opinion) a "further reading" section, though if you wish to break out the biographies from the scholarly papers, that would be fine.
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all estimates per NPOV, which kinda says we have to. Why not go and pick on someone else and leave this for uninvolved editors to review. And if you will not discuss the quote you can remove the pointy tag you added, cheers.
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Sorry, I have to stand firm on this one. Sarnia Bayfest is the one of the biggest music festivals in Southern Ontario, and the fact that such big names have played here is important to the artistic presence mentioned above.
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issue, which might need further discussion. Thanks for the source and ref formatting check (although, just for the record, you forgot to include the book by John Charles Hibner in the overview part above). Thanks again, -
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The prose in the demographics section is now much better, and up to date. I only have one last comment for this section: why are United Church and Anglican combined in the statistics? Aren't they fairly distinct religions?
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It's not hard to imagine that EMI will keep reissuing the album every five years until the end of time, with new "deluxe/bonus/exclusive" material. IMO there's no need to list all that here. Only the original tracklist is
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Thanks for the comments! All helpful. I definitely agree with both of you, now, that the Music section should't be divided by song; I only did that because I'd seen it on other FAs, but clearly it isn't justified in this
4455:"Disney Channel's three-time Emmy Award winner animated series Phineas & Ferb as Candace Flynn..."—"winner" should be "winning" and there should be a hyphen after "Award". "Series" is also used twice in this sentence.
1288:"A 2010 Windsor Star article" (actually I'm not sure about the relevance of this source to a geographic phenomenon) is this even needed? Could you just cite this article as justification for Sarnia being in the snow-belt?
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article which is not focussed on etymology. The ref and associated content was removed from the main text as a result of a recent peer review but the ref details were accidentally left in the bibliography (now removed).
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one who does not use an account) insists on re-adding it to the infobox despite the fact that I have explained to him/her why the information is incorrect several times. I will remove the information once again.--
14864:"before attempting a game-winning field goal. The field goal missed...". Try not to begin a sentence with something that appears in the conclusion of the prior sentence. Here you can use "The kick" as a substitute.
8394:, a physician who participated in the programme, estimated that the commonly cited figures were probably "very conservative" compared with the real numbers". Would that accurately reflect the sources in your view?
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Get real, this was discussed before, and there is noway in hell that both communities were "equally affected" That is so wrong it actually defies belief. The MB atrocities are mentioned in the lede per due weight.
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Same image, two different names given. The text is tacked on. I wanted to know how much needs be added so we can use the image. I choose this image as it is discussed in two academic sources and is notable for it.
12788:- as most images in this article come from the same source via OTRS ticket #2013061810006694, those should be OK. However, could you get them tagged with OTRS-tags aswell (or alternatively add a publication date)?
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The man's name is wikilinked to an article on an unrelated person. And, while we now have text on what his crimes were, which is good, we don't have text on who he was. A commander? A regular soldier? A general?
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12311:"At a private ceremony he was buried at Three Rivers, California, near his old cattle ranch, La Cuesta." → "He was buried at a private ceremony at Three Rivers, California, near his old cattle ranch, La Cuesta."
12403:"and the Montana cowboy "Pete" Ingram who survived the Shangani Patrol massacre along with Burnham" Maybe "and "Pete" Ingram, the Montana cowboy who had survived the Shangani Patrol massacre along with Burnham"
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article, but not for this one. For this article, the war itself is only the background; its ultimate political causes (i.e. the background of the background) do not need to be rehashed here at such length.
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History: "The memo also said the new coaster will have a 'Front Gate Statement'". Since the construction of the roller coaster is no longer a future event as "will" implies, that should be "would" instead.
17005:"KFC also began a back to basics makeover of the brand image..." That phrase 'back to basics' is marketing magazine colloquialism that has no particular meaning. Edit it out and just describe the changes.
10321:"Rebecca (Elizabeth) Russell Burnham" Was Elizabeth a nickname? If so it should be in quotation marks: Rebecca "Elizabeth" Russell Burnham. Also her name should be given above where she is first mentioned.
2070:" the captain of a cheerleader team" - this much detail probably not needed in the lead of a short article (the character name is useful because people look at the lead wondering why they've heard of her).
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Originally planned to have been voiced by actresses Kristin Chenoweth and Reese Witherspoon prior to Moore's involvement, Rapunzel's personality was inspired by those of actresses Natalie Portman and Amy
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I used that with the upload wizard, so if the image is discussed in the article it is a definite keeper? Cos I am sure I saw this image in a book, I will have to trawl through my e-books and hard copies.
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The newspaper citation do not jump to the bibliography as no page numbers, do I did an experiment, and added for one p=BBC, (p-can be publisher?) and it works, is that OK? If so I can get the rest done.
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Oh, I wasn't proposing you take it out, I quite liked it and just pointing it out in passing. I wouldn't worry about its "family friendliness" as kids wouldn't get the joke; it should stay in, I think.
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I thin I have gotten a fair few of the issues you have raised, however I am wondering where you think the estimates of those raped ought to actually go? I cannot see any other section they ought to be?
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I feel bad about all that; English is not my first language so it's challenging to work in this kind of article. However, I'm doing the best I can and I'm happy that you're here helping me out. Thanks.
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13290:"on February 19, 2013, in New York City as HTC's 2013 flagship smartphone, and is the successor to the company's 2012 flagship model," Repetition. Make sure that all dates are followed by commas.
12433:"She was buried three days later in the Pioneer Cemetery, plot No. 144, in Bulawayo, Rhodesia (now Zimbabwe)" Maybe "She was buried three days later in the town's Pioneer Cemetary, plot No. 144."
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The quote has now been closed, but the following phrase makes no sense: "...however the image is that of a woman, it is not possible to determine age who had been raped repeatedly."
16224:"German" is in there again. Have you tried directly talking to the IPer, talk page-style? If you have, and they refuse to discuss the issue, it may be worth contacting an admin. –
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and suggest speedy closure/withdrawal. This is nowhere ready, as the grammatic horror that is the third paragraph and structural horror of the numerous tiny sections make clear. —
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does not seem to support "Burnham was put in charge of both the general organization and recruitment from the Southwest". At this point, a thorough check of the article is needed.
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I posted on your talk page, let this get archived as it is obvious so long as those who have an axe to grind will quite simply not let it pass, I am sorry to have wasted you time.
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the history section would really benefit from being nearer the end of the article so that readers aren't confronted with terms that aren't explained until much later in the article
15655:"The track is a pop ballad which talks about a cheating man, who has left Aguilera's world 'infected'."—misuse of "which". Also, "cheating man" is too unencyclopedic and informal.
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All books now include locations. FN109, The Days of My Life Volume II, is at Project Gutenberg Australia in text-only format without page numbers, so I've referenced the chapter.
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783:"Berry elucidated the difference by stating "... and thus applying Sarnia to Guernsey ..."" Elucidate means to make clear, how is that short quotation making the difference clear?
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You have some numbers here over 10 written in long form ("eighteen", etc), which should be just as 18, 19 etc (unless they are at the start of a sentence). Look through for these
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Prose definitely needs a good copyedit. For example, first sentence: "The name "Sarnia" is Latin for Guernsey, which is Channel Island", do you mean "which is a Channel Island?".
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1440:"Fries Under the Bridge" are part of Sarnia's city identity. The quote is there to support that association. Between 50 and 100 thousand people visit the fry trucks every year.
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Kill all use of "whilst." It's just annoying. "While" is more modern use. (JMO, I suppose if we are talking UK English, it's more OK than in US English, but he is an American)
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The article makes it clear that all three women were actually cast as the voice of the character (though the caption of the three actresses' photos confusingly says they were
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TL;DR – There are issues throughout. I suggest this be withdrawn and be looked at by an experienced writer. Then take this to GAN, where I can assist you. I hope this helps. —
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based in London, but it moved in 1872). Perhaps put "one of England's most famous public schools", wikilinking public school as this means something very different in the U.S.
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Darkness Shines, this is important. You need to be absolutely precise and correct about citation. It matters who actually wrote/spoke. So, please take care of this urgently.--
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Except the Doc is not wrong is he, you are. The links I gave you prove that. And if you are not willing to compromise then the lot can stay and I will remove your pointy tag.
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and others). It is correct to say that he learned the ways of the Sioux, but I thought it might be somewhat more accurate and easier for the reader to say Native Americans.
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hostile attitude shown here which is completely unacceptable here, whatever your history with these editors is. If you can't understand this then perhaps FAC isn't for you.♦
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would be inappropriate, but something along the lines of women in captivity or some event from the period being depicted would really help the article I think.Something like
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Added back two other citations that another reviewer suggested I remove during the peer review stage. On reflection, they are important, so I added them back to the article.
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15652:"It was written by Aguilera, Sia Furler and Samuel Dixon, while its production was done by the latter."—"latter" refers to the second of only two items on a list, not three.
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I would keep the reference to AnandTech's award and merge it with the other awards to form a paragraph and move that paragraph to the end of "Reception", just above "Sales".
9971:"Sensing the Old West was becoming too tame" "Sensing" implies that he was definitely correct, which I don't think is what we mean to say; perhaps "Feeling the Old West ..."
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Added quotes and ref to fix the soldier of fortune issue. Substituted "struck it rick" with "found great affluence". Deleted to the unnecessary analogy about the newspaper.
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It is when putting anything like that in wartime radars would cause them to catch fire! The citation is in Nalwa, cited at the end of the paragraph. He references Cohn at
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terminal moraines, and rich oil reserves, the entire area was submerged and plant and animal matter formed many layers of sediment as they settled after the waters receded."
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45-tonne barque "Le Griffon" is mentioned in the lead but not in the history section. Lead should summarize history, maybe this part is needed *only* in the history section?
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John, many thanks for the detailed and helpful comments and the generous investment of your time in reviewing this article. I'll get to work on your questions right away.
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One of the quote boxes overlaps the article text on my computer. I noted the location in hidden text within the article. It's the only one that does this, not sure why.
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a new first sentence should state this argument in general, then allowing the following material to lay out the evidence and the points made by those who put this argument.
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But that article is not about that particular store. It's about how French Fries and chip stands form part of the Canadian identity. Nothing to do with Sarnia specifically.
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See the next point below for the crux of this issue; the second FAC didn't address the reliability issue, and the first FAC didn't quite answer the questions posed below.
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genocide), we need multiple sources for the claim, thus assuring us that the view is indeed widely held, and not just the view held by the author of the one source cited.
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Period after "Not even a Jumbo Jet soars like this!" is overpunctuation because of the exclamation point in the quote. That takes care of the end-of-sentence punctuation.
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Footnote 5: what makes this a reliable source? (Also note, if the source is retained, it shouldn't normally be re-listed in the "External links" section of the article.)
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The source actually uses those terms "kids and tweens". I'm confident they meant younger than tweens though. Perhaps we can remove the "kids" and keep only the "tweens"?
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It's clear because he also states that Guernsey is Sarnia, spelled with an "n" instead of Sarmia, "spelled with an "m," which is an older name of the nearby island Sark.
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Layout: "the first element of the coaster which similar to the dive drops on The Swarm at Thorpe Park and X-Flight at Six Flags Great America." Needs "is" after "which".
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13415:" networks (however" remove brackets and replace the opening bracket with a semi-colon. "LTE networks; however, it does not support T-Mobile's AWS-based HSPA+ services."
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I'm not sure if the two-week limit for FAC is enough to fix the writing. I've only scratched the surface of this article so far and found many issues. What do you think?
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newspaper or a TV station does this second function, but a link to the location of publication doesn't. It's still valuable information to include, just not to link.
16733:"delivering messages, were beneath his social status. Ganguly purportedly refused to do such tasks as he considered it beneath his social status": why the repetition?
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sentence structure, and is something that should be used infrequently in good prose. You could try the semi-colon plus "the Huskies won three of the games" as a fix.
8152:"In what has been described as a deliberate attempt to destroy an entire ethnic group..." the use of "entire" here is redundant and carries a POV; described by whom?
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article (I wouldn't consider a handwritten date on a newspaper clipping the pinnacle of reliability), but so long as others are willing to accept that these satisfy
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From a comprehensiveness standpoint, have you considered the following scholarly sources, which appear on cursory examination to have something to say on the topic:
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The paragraph about his grandson Russell is cited. I'll check the article elsewhere to see if I can uncover what you mean, or please provide more detail if you can.
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Personally I'd be a little hesitant about putting that particular book in "Further reading"; the work is by a Wiccan practitioner rather than an academic active in
945:"adopted the title "The Imperial City" on 7 May 1914". This needs clarification. What is meant by title? Did they rename the town? If so when was it renamed Sarnia?
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I guess I'll assume you didn't watch the video. The information that is cited in the video came directly from Rob Decker, the park's VP of Planning & Design.--
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Fine, but I think none of the in-universe stuff (i.e. under the "Information" header) should be here. It overemphasises fictional aspects, which is discouraged by
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Please fill out all your references. There are numerous references that are missing the author names and the dates of publication. Please stick to one date format.
12044:"He was one of the original members of the first California State Parks Commission serving from 1927 to 1934" Shouldn't "serving from 1927 to 1934" be in brackets?
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I am certainly open to the replacement of the image in question, however I am unsure as to whether images of text would be deemed fair use under Knowledge policy.
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that reported Tisdale had signed on to co-star on her first major broadcast series role as Savannah Monroe, the peppy and fiercely intense captain of the Hellcats.
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Footnote 24: this appears to be to be photos from a roller coaster fan posted online, which doesn't support the information in the article about the arrival date.
14832:"which had first been played in 1902 but was replaced until 1916." As far as I know, it wasn't replaced by any other game; it just wasn't held during those years.
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committed by Pak Army far outweighs those by Mukti Bahini. Anyway, if you really want to sound rational, Faizan, come up with some neutrally sourced statistics.--
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You state there was a vote to rename the village, but who voted? Does this number matter? Does it even matter what a few settlers wanted the village to be called?
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15649:'You Lost Me' is a song by American recording artist Christina Aguilera for her sixth studio album, Bionic (2010)."—not sure about "for"... maybe "from" instead?
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9916:"Burnham had little formal education, attending high school but never graduating" Why not just say he "had little formal education, never finishing high school"?
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I have two sources which discuss in detail a specific photo taken, I will add the text tomorrow and then, if you think it enough I can upload the image, thanks.
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The very last sentence of this section seems like an add-on. I wonder if it can be incorporated into the first sentence of that paragraph? (This is not critical)
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16693:"Ganguly's place in the team was assured after successful performances in series against Sri Lanka, Pakistan and Australia, winning the Man of the Match awards"
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Which is fine for that instance, but that was again only an example. A quick check finds another, "Also buried at Three Rivers cemetery...", unsupported by the
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2458:. Removed the word "international". Nobody knows what role she portrayed in that production. Every single reliable source that I find about that says "a role".
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Be consistent in how you punctuate single footnotes to multiple sources (compare for example FNs 12 and 13) and footnotes that include an explanation (4 vs 27)
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Never going to happen, anyone who gets the number of troops on the ground wrong gets zero weight, anyone who says the rapes were only a few thousand, come on.
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In the infobox, note A 1 is causing Washington's record to not fully appear. I don't know if anyone else is having the same issue, but it is a problem for me.
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Same goes for "A section of the coaster will go over the front entrance...". Not sure that "would" works here, but I'm sure another alternative can be found.
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Surely there's more about his childhood and family than the short section here? Also "Born into an affluent Brahmin family" is not repeated in the body (per
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There are no firm plans for permanent cancellation either. If and when such plans surface, or plans to continue, then I'll modify the article appropriately.
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number of reasons as well. As for PointBuzz, it's not quite enough to state they're quoted in other media; an assertion like that comes with a tag for me.
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Thank you, but there are still inconsistencies: for example, whether page ranges are abbreviated, some missing info (ex date for Carr in Bibliography), etc
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I didn't give anybody what they want. If editors are concerned about neutrality I'd take that very seriously. Your behaviour here has really let you down.♦
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I have tracked down who took the photo, it was Naib Uddin Ahmed. He died December 14 2009. I am now trying to find out who now has the copyright ownership.
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on calling out Doyle White, which is very clearly already employed by the article. I'll also concede reliability on the Seims article; I had not recognized
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Footnote 4: what makes PointBuzz a reliable source? This looks like a fansite/blog to me. The suitability of this source will impact many other footnotes.
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7492:. Further attempts at rational discussion with D.S. are evidently hopeless at this point. D.S., continue edit-warring about this and you'll go straight to
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through reading this one. The current background section was discussed before and consensus was that it was fine, and I have since then trimmed it myself.
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You reference some books by OCLC rather than ISBN, even when ISBNs are available. The Farrar source is 978-0432045701, and Janus-Mithras is 978-1881532026.
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The publisher names aren't needed in those cases though... You didn't list publishers for other notable publications, so there's no need to list them for
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There is some language which seems to me to sound too much like a news feature article or editorial and not enough like an encyclopedia article. Examples:
5711:"But personally it's probably my least favourite of all the albums"—most such in the quotes are unnecessary. The quotes are understandable without them.
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Is it notable to list the number of log houses, brick houses, frame houses in the section on the name of the city? Population would suffice I would think.
18882:, and it appears to be a wiki. Can we replace this with a better source for trademark data, perhaps something from the U.S. Patent and Trademark Office?
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Sorry about the delay, but I read through your changes and compared with the live article, and all of my concerns are now addressed. Great work. I would
5391:'but it was some time before Kuroda's Japanese work became widely known' - anywhere or outside of Japan? Had other parts of his work become widely known?
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reliable source. The site gives no information on the qualifications of the writer/publishers nor does it discuss editorial oversight and fact-checking.
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Footnote 12: the publisher is linked here, but it's not the first mention of that publisher. If it's going to be linked, it should on the first mention.
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Get the article fixed, especially for neutrality. It needs restructuring. Issues cited by me stand unaddressed. Or I can aid with edits on the article.
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Then in that case, you have a bigger problem. I had looked at the first footnote to them that was an article published on their site. The posters, etc
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I've added brief reference to this in his early life. I could add more depth, but Geronimo was not a particularly significant part of Burnham's life.
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381:"Sarnia is a city in Southern (Southwestern) Ontario, Canada" - I would say choose either southern, or southwestern. Having both is a little redundant.
15667:"...who sees it as a return for Aguilera from the video for Bionic's lead single 'Not Myself Tonight' (2010)."—this is an odd construction in general.
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Not at all, as most people when they hear Lebensborn think "breeding camp" as that is what the term has come to be associated with, as can be seen in
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Fair enough, Nikkimaria. Is there a way to change the tag to something else? Or, should I delete the photo and upload it again under a different tag?
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I'd just like to say thanks for the comments so far. They've been really helpful, and I really appreciate you going through an article of this size!
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Others may disagree, but the "title" parameter, or maybe better the "occupation" parameter, is useful here to summarize the character's general role.
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5887:: Quotes are cool here, but unfortunately Yorke doesn't do a good job of actually explaining what the arguments were about. Any clues in the sources?
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What does this mean? "Colborne also named "Moore" " Is Moore another village nearby? There is no link, or any mention of this before. Very confusing.
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As directors, Greno and Howard aimed to ensure that Rapunzel resembled a less "passive" heroine than how she is depicted in the original fairy tale.
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I never even knew why people added this Net Worth thing. I assumed it was a new Knowledge standard so that's why I kept it - it's been removed now.
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The claim that there are no FAs on fictional characters without an infobox is pretty easily disproved. I looked at the first 12 articles listed at
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I know what the term means, but the description outside of direct quotes is not a neutral one - although not specifically mentioned there, compare
7741:, only the significant parts of the article must be summarized in the lead and the actions of Mukti Bahini doesn't really seem to be significant.--
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It's "or" because atheists don't believe in any religion. "No religious preference" means they're religious, but don't really care which religion.
9879:"Born on an Indian reservation in Minnesota, Burnham learned the ways of Native Americans as a boy" They were Sioux, weren't they? Why not say so?
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is mentioned in the infobox and lead but is referred to as the Tonto Basin Feud in the body. Perhaps we should make clear these are the same thing
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I was yes, I have copyedited it and added the academic consensus to the article. I have also gotten to a few of the other points you have raised.
3457:"and Mike Tisdale, the manager of a construction company and her elder sister, is also an actress" Sounds awkward. The sentence needs to be split.
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We mention the BSA, but we don't make clear what this is. (This is particularly confusing because to some eyes "BSA" is more associated with the
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Thank you for your comments, I will get on all of that ASAP, but RE the genocide, this was resolved a while ago at a RM on the genocide article,
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I think "...were eligible to be selected." could simply be "were eligible." considering the word "selected" was already used in this sentence.
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Is a semi-colon the proper punctuation to place after "Washington Huskies" in the first sentence? I would typically think to use a comma here.
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Fixed. Sorry about this one, when I first added the footnotes, current ref 12 was the first occurrence. I forgot to fix this after it changed.
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layout guideline for instance, then it would be time to change it, and all the others that previously gone through FA - all at the same time.
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You are most welcome. Just a quick note: refrain from bold "done"s in FACs. This excessive bolding is distracting to reviewers and delegates.
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Although based on the heroine of the Grimm fairy tale, Rapunzel was developed into a less "passive" character for the Disney film adaptation.
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I stuck some hidden text into the article where I found some issues or had specific questions. Feel free to remove when fixed or addressed.
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identified. If you have new issues, I would be glad to take a look at those as well and I will continue to comment / address without delay.
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Jewish Holocaust in 1938–1945, Bangladesh in 1971, Cambodia in 1975–1979, East Timor in 1975–1999, Bosnia in 1991–1995, and Rwanda in 1994."
8169:"entire" has been removed, but we still have the passive "has been described", which still needs a subject (ie. who describes it this way?)
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The tag on the "Lebensborn" passage stays. In its present state, the article not only reports Davies' statement, which presupposes that the
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I have used a different cite template for the posters. What if we used Cite Interview for the videos with Rob Decker then didn't link it?--
13289:"on February 19, 2013 in New York City, as HTC's 2013 flagship smartphone, and is the successor to HTC's 2012 flagship smartphone," --: -->
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wrong and fringe. Her "work" has no place in an article on Knowledge. She has got to be the most minority view of minority views anywhere.
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The second paragraph of History is about the history of lumped element filters which you've just said are outside the scope of this article
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I was working here on the principle that the lede should, in as far as possible, be understandable by an anyone and not be too technical.
1073:"28.38% professed no religious preference or were atheists." Aren't atheists individuals who profess no religious preference? Why the "or"?
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That would mean a double citation, one for where those things are mentioned in the text, and one for the infobox. Is that not over-citing?
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That it with this section for now. I'll keep working on your comments about the other sections later today. Thanks again for your help.
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It may well be that it could be added to that article, but a summary of waveguide development is helpful background in this article also.
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I thought it would be better if I just remove it. That image was uploaded three years ago so there is no way to track those informations.
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Shouldn't matter since the sentence should be deleted, but in Canadian English is it not preferred to write cancelled instead of canceled?
13382:"pushed as far back as April" The way it's written tells me it's not really a significant delay. Say "late April" or something like that.
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Mattximus, after implementing all your suggested changes, I've run the whole article through readability.com. It's at grade level 11-12.
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Bold links are discouraged by the Manual of Style. For the link in the intro, it will need to be moved to later in the first paragraph.
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I haven't forgotten about this, don't worry, I will get back to it either later today or tomorrow. Well done on all the replies above!
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Nikkimaria doesn't seem to be checking here, so I've left another message on her talk page. Did you have any comments on the article?
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I've resolved the issues you've listed. If there are any more, I'd like if you address them so I can fix them. Thanks for your review!
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films and television series including the ABC Family television film Picture This and the Bravo's 2012 unscripted series Miss Advised."
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Thanks for your review. I've solved your comments and I hope the article is better now. I'll try to reword some sentences later today.
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14608:. This goes for the sources that credit the Associated Press (footnotes 13, 15 & 19). Also, footnote 10 should include a location.
13419:"AT&T (who had exclusive selling rights to the 64 GB version) and Sprint released the One in the United States on April 19, 2013."
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In the source, they were the two largest groups, so it made sense to combine them. The other groups were too small to list separately.
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Footnote 1: normal practice is that for newspapers that don't include their locations in their titles that the location is provided.
13418:"The One was released by AT&T (with exclusivity on the 64 GB version) and Sprint in the United States on April 19, 2013." --: -->
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There you have, but that was only an example - the paragraph about Russell, for example, is still unsourced. Please check thoroughly.
7969:"The methodical planning behind the genocide drew comparisons with the Nazi Holocaust" - plural "comparisons", but only one citation.
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OK, I figured out how to do it and changed the type from historic image to newspaper image. The fair-use rationale remains the same.
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that part. It's now up to other editors to decide if the prose has been polished up to FAC standards. I don't believe I can do more.
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I popped in "Citation needed" tags where I saw something clearly unsourced. Hope that's more helpful than "stuff needs sourcing."
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References: Culturally, Sarnia is a large part of the artistic presence in Southern Ontario. Where in the reference is this stated?
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Animator Glen Keane based the film's version of Rapunzel on the title character of the German fairy tale from the Brothers Grimm.
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is how he describes Burnham. The term is synonymous with mercenary. Does this now make sense, or can you clarify your concern?
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17036:"In December 2012, the chain was struck in China when it was discovered ..." I don't understand this use of the word "struck".
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I am not going to comment on everything else in detail, but I do have some other pretty major concerns. FAs have to follow the
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I am an admin, if you want I can semi-protect the article so IPs cannot edit it. Please ask here or on my talk page if desired.
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Elizabeth was her middle name, but she dropped it when she married Burnham. I've removed Elizabeth to avoid further confusion.
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It is not a misperception, it is what the term has come to mean. I think you may have to learn to live with that. BTW, 2013
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If the character is not depicted as "German", the "Fictional German people" category should also be removed or changed.
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Either mention the major carriers or simplify the sentence to "The HTC One was released in Australia on April 23, 2013."
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Thank you for your helpful review, Montanabw. I have worked on the issues you raised and I believe all are now done.
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5272:'Rad Lab developed waveguide cavity filters.' - very short sentence that has nearly been said already in the paragraph
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18288:. The name was changed in 1960. (Yes, they use toledoblade.com as their website address, but the paper is still just
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You haven't talked about the fact that the One is the first HTCpro Enterprise Certified device in the United States.
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Yes, indeed. I'm also disappointed by the brevity of his WP page. I'll need to correct this oversight at some point.
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Thank you for your insights, Coemgenus. I have worked on the issues you raised and I believe they are now addressed.
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Structure and scope: the "Background" section is far too long. This would be a suitable "background" section for the
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Another thought - what does the original source say, that the lead currently paraphrases as "among kids and tweens"?
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Fixed this by combining the two sentences. Also, the name section is not too long. I've already shortened it by 40%.
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is heavily discouraged unless the subject is not present. "Aguilera described the song as "the heart of the album"."
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No, I don't agree. But in the interests of compromise, as stated, I removed the extra sentence about Canatara Park.
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A company called Drik picture library seem to hold the copyright, at least that is what I have figured out so far.
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Just because that misperception is common is not an excuse for spreading it further, as the article is now doing.
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Actually no. I've tried to find out what her career is but I couldn't find anything. Apparently she's a homestay.
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I quoted the text used on the original 2006 Census, which used all the "counteds." Changed them this time around.
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I'd ask User:Jmabel if you could claim use of a fair use image. I think either image would really improve this.♦
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Delink Nazi before Lebensborn and Nazi Germany wiki link it initially next to Holocaust further up as requested.
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What makes Celebrity Net Worth, Cliff.com, TV By The Numbers and The Futon Critic high quality reliable sources?
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Thanks for reviewing, I've fixed everything you've said and I'd be happy if you please continue your review! :)
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at the time. I messed up inputting the footnote. But it's fixed now, and Montreal is now added as the location.
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Footnote 16: the link to Images of America redirects to the publisher, and that name should be included in the
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Thanks for the extra help, Brianboulton! I think we've done everything we can do. Let's just see what happens!
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I included history, arts, weather, Chemical Valley, and the discovery of oil. To me, that seems well-balanced.
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Trains: Semi-colon before "a first for a roller coaster at Cedar Point" should be a regular old comma instead.
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I wouldn't use iFixit as a source for the article. It is a niche website aimed a selected group of repairers.
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In quoteboxes you don't need to put a full stop (period) at the end of the attribution as it's not a sentence.
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a difference between "there are no", which I did not say, and "I have yet to come across", which I did say.--
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That it with this section for now. I'll keep working on your comments about the other sections later today.
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Some of the phrasing used is not neutral or has an inappropriate tone - ex. "Ever the soldier of fortune..."
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It's very important because Sarnia Bayfest did not happen this year, thus affecting the economy of the area.
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is also the name of a publication that is published by Bonnier Corporation. Please audit and correct these.
15658:"However, it failed to gain impact on charts worldwide"—I've never heard this before; can you "gain impact"?
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Why is the wikilink to "Cape Town, South Africa" rather than just Cape Town? People know where Cape Town is.
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A lot of places throughout the article we use abbreviations ("Gen.", "Maj.", "Co."); try to get rid of these
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Work on cleaning up the deadlinks, the WayBack machine can sometimes unearth an archived version of a page.
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Put it in Further reading, makes it easier to find if you need it again and gives readers more to look up.
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I've added the wikilinks in this section. The lead already has a wikilink from DSO (after Burnham's name).
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OK, I can do that tomorrow, I am off to bed it a little bit. And thank you BTW, you are teaching me a lot.
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Oh, then the "or" makes sense. Are you sure "no religious preference" means religious but don't care which?
15670:"The song has been covered on numerous occasions."—I wouldn't say "numerous"; the article body lists five.
15214:"Washington were selected..." again seems like British English, and should be "Washington was selected..."
14235:- That's 18 days now without the nominator active on-Wiki, suggesting that any review will go to waste. —
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has been withdrawn by the nominator, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see
3538:"At the age of twelve, Tisdale sang at the White House for President Bill Clinton." What was the occasion?
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Section is pretty good, please consider my changes above. I'm not yet done with the last paragraph though!
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Why isn't "Distinguished Service Order" linked? This is also not linked in the image caption or the lead.
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I've addressed all of the issues noted above. If you have still have any concerns, let me know. Thanks.
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2448:- First of all, what role did she land? And if it was international, how was it in Korea? Based in Korea?
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Some footnotes list items as the publisher when they should be the "work". Take footnote 6 for example.
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Please archive all the references using the WayBack Machine, or Archive.is, to protect the article from
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2819:- Surely there must be more information on how she got the part. I cannot believe this is comprehensive.
17715:—your two subjects for "both" are a restaurant chain and a burger, which don't sit comfortably together
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It says actually "...on why he cast Tisdale". I can remove that if it's irrelevant for the article.
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images from the Burnham family have either an OTRS-ticket or additional publication details - OK.
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Shame on you! I liked the racy quote, but I've modified the sentence to be more family friendly.
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Hi, Here are my thoughts on the article. I enjoyed reading it and hope the comments below help.
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issues. Is there a tool you use to check hyphens, or can you show any examples in the article?
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15181:"Navy were selected..." sounds like British English; shouldn't this be "Navy was selected..."?
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Way cool! It is much better than the long caption I had to include previously. Nicely done.
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Do as you will, if you will not compromise then this conversation ain't going anywhere is it?
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Why is the meaning of the quote under "2010–12: Return to broadcast television and producing"?
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as a self-evident truth on Knowledge? What would be sufficient as a source for this claim?
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Maybe it's just a pet peeve of mine, but I think you could combine footnotes 60 & 61.
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I can add that without a problem but I'm just wondering if that is that really relevant?
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and Billboard claimed the album "doesn't give the singer room to comfortably let loose".
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Why does the "organizers canceled the event because of money troubles" have 5 references?
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17234:—Is there another Kentucky not in the US? Why does the town specialise in fried chicken?
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I'm not sure what "median cost of a home in Sarnia" is doing in the demographics section
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not play 100 other cities that year? This may sound sarcastic, but I mean it sincerely.
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Statistical summary: One word too many in "but missed the his only field goal attempt."
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Do we know where his mother came from in England? We do not need to say she immigrated
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I've added additional background to this piece and renamed the section: World War One.
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I added the archived link to the minernews article metadata, and simplified the text:
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Same here. Every reliable source doesn't give much detail. That's everything we know.
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The series was also nominated for eight Primetime Emmy Awards, having won two of them.
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would say the first is important, and the second is on the trivial side. Do you agree?
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yet that's not equivalent to the other publishers listed here which are companies...
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Thanks for addressing those. I will come by later and see how things are progressing.
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Alright, I think that does it. Unless you see something else, I believe we are done.
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If a non free image is discussed extensively in the article, then could one be kept?
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Just in the lead, the first two sentences could be combined, tightening the prose:
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I believe I have now addressed the issues you raised. Thanks again for your help.
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Perhaps change the semicolon between the last two snippets to a full stop (period).
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Bad oversight. His full name and wikilink are in the lead, but should be here too.
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Sadly yes, per the previous consensus, as it stands I believe due weight is given.
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I tried to give a short explanation of the nickname down in the aftermath section.
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Shit man, I spent about three hours faffing about with that ( Will go fix it now.
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Looking ahead to Washington: I see "Rose bowl", which is improper capitalization.
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Thanks for looking at the images, GermanJoe. I'll review the two you mentioned.
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Combining would be better, particularly to keep the TOC a bit more manageable. —
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a huge amount of content copied wholesale from other websites by the nominator,—
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Charterhouse should have a wikilink. It is also not in London but in Surrey (it
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Why don't we give Carrington's full name? Why don't we wikilink him in the body?
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Native American issues fixed. I believe all the issues have now been addressed.
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After this expedition he was elected a fellow of the Royal Geographical Society.
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one "skeptical": certainly not something that substantiates the text as written.
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I also defend the reliability of the Seims article. This was first published in
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Fair enough this is fine, I had to go searching a bit but I found the reference.
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I've addressed all. I'm still fixing it. Please wait for me until it's done. —
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Have you pinged Nikki lately to see how she feels about the nom? Cheers,
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The URL to minernews went dead during the FAC. I'll need to substitute.
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But thanks to the wonderful world of echo we shall still ask as expert.
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The clarification is there in the sentence. Connaught visited the city.
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Louisville, Kentucky, United States, which specializes in fried chicken
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I have replaced the old style KFC in the UK section to a new style one.
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Footnote 19: can you verify if the title of the paper at that time was
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Either include the publishers in all the references or, leave them out.
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oil man? Why not just oil man? American spy should probably be U.S. spy
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So that ought to resopve that issue. Should I add that to the article?
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and added the missing ISBNs. Thank you for your constructive comments!
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If that's true then it shouldn't have been a ref at one point either.
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Writing to The New York Times a group of women -add comma after Times.
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in a selective number of countries that did not include North America.
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14593:" for its masthead, so I'm going to refrain from changing it for now.
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one is kinda brutal, but a good depiction of what they went through.
5333:'to be taken "as is" and transformed directly' - what does this mean?
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A median income that differs by 20% is considered "roughly the same"?
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13754:, which is much more detailed and, in my opinion, more professional
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Please italicise the names of technology publications, where needed.
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11753:"Mount Baden-Powell in California," put a comma after "Baden-Powell"
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has also pursued a career as a film and television producer, working
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boyfriend," By the way, what was the man's reasoning for the threat?
3513:"She began her theatrical career by appearing in" What was her role?
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There is no mention of Valencia High School, to which Tisdale went.
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Tisdale's debut as an executive producer and also in a leading role,
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Redid the demographics section with the most recent available data.
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Yes, Moore is a nearby village, and it is sourced in the reference.
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18581:. In both cases, the decision was made that they were acceptable.--
17833:—in BE, it would be "innings" both times, is your version OK in AE?
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12525:"went to Africa" is Americocentric. To African readers he would be
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Big goof on my part. I've added wikilinks and a bit of background.
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I supported earlier, so just reiterating that I support this FAC.
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5507:(1968). Nalwa is not the only source this claim can be found in.
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Fixed issues. Also, the quote is on the second page of the article
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The soundtrack, in which Tisdale lent her vocals for several songs,
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Since it no longer exists, should it belong in the history section?
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17743:—in BE it would be "protesting against", is your version OK in AE?
15122:
Would it make sense to say, upon first reference to the stadium, "
14913:"with the Huskies winning three of the games." This is known as a
10706:
Why not give Baden-Powell's full name? We don't even wikilink him?
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cleanup needed in the article: hyphens/dashes, repeated links, etc
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Yes, your suggestion is accurate so I have done the edit, thanks.
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It would not surprise me if this topic had also been addressed in
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based on critical reviews, in both Rotten Tomatoes and Metacritic.
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specifically? If not, I would venture to say they are not notable.
17337:—is hailing not informal in the US, and applied mostly to people?
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information; the cited section is right up top on the cited link.
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The directors image is a great piece of work. How did you do it?
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section is a bit a of a cliffhanger. What worked and what didn't?
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gives a nice overview of vibrational modes and their numbering.
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It actually is! Thanks for the note, I'll rewrite that sentence.
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I have removed it, I'll find a new image when I get some time.--
17831:"We're in the first inning of a nine-inning ball game in China".
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Same issue with en-dashes where hyphens should be is found here.
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Records in the infobox should have en dashes instead of hyphens.
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Just for clarification for anyone else doing source checks: Per
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You shouldn't wikilink the names of modern countries like Kenya:
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Why is woodcraft italicised? Perhaps quotation marks are better.
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mielies, not mealies. perhaps "mealies" (i.e. mielies, or maize)
10112:"With the help of the BSA" Perhaps "With the support of the BSA"
3704:"In May 2013, TMZ reported that a man named Nicholas Fiore, who
2489:. Replaced with "as a model for Ford Model" to avoid confusion.
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I believe it is written "enrolment" in Canada, not "enrollment".
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Construction: "an United States Senator from Ohio". "an" → "a".
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I have a lot of problems with the current infobox. It does not
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is from the edition that the article cited is in, and it uses "
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If I were you, I would replace AnandTech's review with that of
11565:" so during their joint scouting missions," you don't need "so"
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First off, avoid the passive voice where possible, so perhaps
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You don't need commas after each name in the relatives section
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On another look, finding more problems, including a dead link
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without success, and don't think I'll have any better luck in
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All things which became important in waveguide filter design.
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I think the first paragraph of History belongs in the article
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It might need more drastic cuts or restructuring, not sure. --
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Be consistent in how information is presented. The lead says
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I'm concerned what makes a couple of these sources reliable,
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after develop? You've used it everywhere else in the article.
2479:- Is this a common term (Ford Model)? I've never heard of it.
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Paragraphs shouldn't have just one sentence. Suggest merging?
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list them as the publisher because they are not. They are a
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From the age of seven, his mother taught—she was very young!
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is linked thrice in the lead and five more times in Records.
15780:"via her official website." It is not immediately clear who
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That is understood. It was initially copied across from the
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She lent vocals for several tracks in the film's soundtrack
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During this time, she simultaneously worked as a Ford Model.
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out of Lorain, Ohio, yet you've forgotten to include that.
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the top three actresses considered for the role of Rapunzel
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British military intervention in the Sierra Leone Civil War
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the phone's outstripped sales of that of HTC's 2012 devices
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The Pomegranate: The International Journal of Pagan Studies
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Thank you for picking up on that; it has not been removed.
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Tisdale's return into broadcast television occurred in 2010
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Actually, it was "or" and "Jewish," and I added the space.
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Hollywood Bowl perhaps, but not in the Los Angeles article.
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I don't know how to fix this. It's displaying fine for me.
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Poor prose, MoS inconsistencies and grammatical mistakes:
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I withdraw myself from this FAC and request it be closed.
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Aftermath: Period needed at the end of the photo caption.
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Do we know why Wilson didn't want Roosevelt's volunteers?
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I've referenced and added her birth and immigration data.
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and others), and later with native americans in Arizona (
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Pleasant Valley War is the modern name for the conflict.
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Sure. Any section. The most blatant is Personal Life. —
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Pleasant Valley War and Apache Wars should be wikilinked
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An elegant solution, thank you, FPaS, you OK with that?
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She had vocal roles in several TV cartoons, during 2010,
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17687:—the adverbial clause should follow its subject, the US
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Changed the en-dashes to hyphens for all similar cases.
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11133:"British March on Pretoria" why is "March" capitalised?
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Nice editing and application of your subject expertise.
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Sounds good, will continue to review when time permits!
17805:—"one of" or "the only"? Doesn't make sense as written
16690:"he currently hosts a Bengali show Dadagiri Unlimited"
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Originally planned to have been voiced by actresses...
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Changed to "times; the Huskies won three of the games"
11205:"he had all but gotten away" → "he had almost escaped"
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We don't need the semicolon after "The King of Scouts"
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I've substituted with: she always kept a rifle nearby.
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would probably be the defunct UK newspaper founded by
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Alexandrian, in Definitions, probably needs a link to
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is desperately short of active reviewers at present.
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Manufacturer: Space before the em dash needs removal.
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See above for an idea about the Youtube interviews.--
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I changed the sentence, and tried to explain it more.
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Can you please tell me which section you are meanin?
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Again, "developed" is ambiguous. Is HTC the designer
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I've also added more background and a couple of refs.
11288:"March to Pretoria" again why is "March" capitalised?
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Doesn't fix the problem, and isn't the only instance.
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should it ever be needed. 18:33, 18 August 2013 (UTC)
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in article prose. Choose a style, but be consistent.
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That image has been removed. Thanks for your review!
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confusing here. I can't seem to access the source. --
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Honestly, I don't think the publisher is needed for
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Zantigo stores were closed or converted to Taco Bell
16281:. About 41% (5/12) of these do not have an infobox:
11807:"and fought in World War I France" word missing here
11315:"Lovat Scouts" shouldn't this be "the Lovat Scouts"?
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book titles are generally not subject to copyright.
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Withdrawing my objections here. I've looked through
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s it received low scores, based on critical reviews,
2971:- Is this still true? If not it should be clarified.
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which became the biggest opening for a musical film.
17603:—in BE it would be Bells, is your version OK in AE?
16461:I semi-protected the article. Sorry about the FAC.
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I fixed the wikilink. 01:06, 8 September 2013 (UTC)
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Why not give Frederick Courteney Selous' full name?
8493:Removed and added another ref for the first claim.
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Even though a joke, she probably needs a mention.--
6404:Squeamish Ossifrage, thank you for bringing up the
16716:Lack of comprehensiveness and flow of information:
16348:. The character subsequently appears in the film's
10861:"paid him a great tribute in his book" Which book?
10427:I don't think we need to wikilink bandit to outlaw
10083:Was Hammond his son's business partner or his own?
7157:I removed this passage in the "Aftermath" section
3708:sent more than 18,000 tweet messages to Tisdale's
3191:to create, develop and executive produce a series.
3038:- Tisdale returned to broadcast television in 2010
2325:- Why is this last part "the fourth..." necessary?
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14755:Footnote 16 is a book from a reputable publisher.
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11484:"he fondly told people he "sucked him dry" Oh my.
11342:Maybe mention that he commanded the Lovat Scouts.
11178:"He had been scouting alone" → "He scouted alone"
11052:Say when the Battle of Paardeberg was (Feb 1900).
10590:http://archive.org/details/realsoldiersoffo00davi
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1066:Prose issues in the demographics section include:
17771:—hyphenate all (not done consistently at present
17444:I was waiting for you to complete your copyedit.
16350:animated short sequel Tangled Ever After (2012).
16293:(which has a navbox in the upper right corner),
14189:Holy Wood (In the Shadow of the Valley of Death)
11651:"thusly" Is this a word? Shouldn't it be "thus"?
7996:I revised the article to reflect my point here.
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14888:Removed the latter occurrence in the sentence.
14763:I have addressed all concerns above, save the
10220:I presume this was a Sioux Indian reservation?
8961:Okay, again, only an example. Another is that
7778:Then you gave them what they want, well done.
7496:for the topic-ban that has been long overdue.
7174:is now edit-warring to reinsert this passage.
6735:if you have a moment could you advice please?
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14698:Footnotes 20 & 25: these should include
13826:Actually, we fixed just about all of those.
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13183:-- I would remove the former, and reinstate
10192:Do we know what denomination his family was?
9030:Have revised it to: As a soldier of fortune.
8922:Added more detailed reference from van wyk.
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12380:You don't need to say again who Roderick is
12252:"refused to make use of" → "refused to use"
9764:Maybe we should put years next to each wife
8388:International Planned Parenthood Federation
3098:The series had its script based on the book
1628:2 week limit. Suggest a thorough copy-edit.
971:1857, which is also stated in the article.
966:When did it go from Port Sarnia, to Sarnia?
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9568:Great, changed to support. Good luck! --
9052:Davis wrote a bio on Burnham for his book
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2788:- during its premiere, not premiere night.
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18919:I have completely removed the sentence.--
18133:, which is a pretty well-known magazine.
15032:I still don't see any punctuation there.
14987:Navy: En dash needed in "Army-Navy Game".
13482:"Android 4.2.2 in select regions" --: -->
11718:I broke up the quotes into two sentences.
10584:did a biography of Burnham for his book,
8759:is linked twice in as many sentences, etc
8737:Inconsistencies have now been addressed.
7266:(see for instance the tweak I tried here
7210:Fut.Perfect has to say in this regard. --
6611:Rape during the Bangladesh Liberation War
6309:as they stand, I'll not press the point.
5096:would be a useful addition to Knowledge.
4912:I'll withdraw this and work on it later.
4340:Also to avoid in ref titles are ALL CAPS.
3751:"he has threatened to shoot both her and
882:Well, I'm going to give it my best shot!
16407:and I think this could be tightened too
14394:Combine identical cites like FNs 6 and 7
12625:"His first cousin" Whose? Fred's, right?
12502:"As a teen" → "During his teenage years"
12456:"1897–Oct 3, 1905" space the endash here
12091:Note most of the pictures lack alt text
11971:"In 1902–1904" → "Between 1902 and 1904"
11913:Wasn't Ghana then called the Gold Coast?
8459:. I suppose we shall have to remove it.
2273:. Removed that word to avoid confusion.
17156:two capitalisations of Kentucky colonel
16409:Rapunzel's personality was inspired by
16089:Geography and ecology of the Everglades
13495:"have been released in select regions."
11735:Someone got to this before me. Thanks!
9832:I too was bemused when I re-read this.
8791:, spaced emdashes and other issues wrt
5398:added "in the English speaking world."
2687:Solo music career and continued success
2666:. I tried to rewrite it, is it better?
749:"graced the stage" is not encyclopedic.
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18395:) and the publisher (CNBC) backwards.
14734:All of the newspaper sources are good.
13883:to revive HTC's overall sales numbers.
6901:Insomnia kicked in again so I did it.
6224:The Field source needs page number(s).
6134:Agreed. That shouldn't be placed in a
2304:. It was about the viewers. Fixed it.
807:Yes, that is what I mean. Fixed this.
17859:three executives, that latter of whom
12867:Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus
12178:That below wasn't my comment. It was
9303:Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus
7833:Graham archive this is is because of
6723:Well I uploaded and added it already
5067:Waveguide_(electromagnetism)#Analysis
4763:Oflag caption shouldn't end in period
4371:returned results for three dead URLs.
3723:shown up at her home in Los Angeles."
3520:I couldn't find anything about that.
2847:- and as an actress in a leading role
18:Knowledge:Featured article candidates
17741:have been protesting KFC's treatment
12529:to Africa! Perhaps "moved to Africa"
10165:Why not say what day he was born on?
7911:Then not going to proceed this way.
6724:
3131:- why the commas around during 2010?
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18878:Footnote 17: the website is called
17391:restaurants East of the Mississippi
16740:What does " ICC sport critic" mean?
16337:for most articles to achieve is 1a
16105:Premiership of John Edward Brownlee
13483:"Android 4.2.2 in selected regions"
11780:Why isn't Mount Burnham wikilinked?
8787:Not done. Further examples include
7390:A Social History of The Third Reich
5762:Thanks very much for the feedback!
1343:Added historical election results.
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17803:China is one of the only countries
16364:Not perfect, but you get the idea.
14550:Location added and OCLC corrected.
13896:File:HTC One on Apple keyboard.jpg
13352:"80 regions and countries" --: -->
10454:why not wikilink Arizona Territory
5213:'during the war years'- which war?
2907:captured 4.3 million total viewers
2876:in which she played Mandy Gilbert,
2361:- Do you know her mother's career?
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13648:Please put "" around award names.
13131:Agreed to keep the infobox as is.
12674:Have copyedited a bit here myself
9434:Comment on Native American issues
5052:Waveguide filter (disambiguation)
4266:. I hope I didn't miss anything.
3648:film; it was a critical failure."
3160:desireble and high-priced escort.
2736:. Yes, that's what it was meant.
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17694:I think I've addressed this one.
16291:Characters of Final Fantasy VIII
13453:released it on August 22, 2013."
7664:I think I got the last of them.
6725:
6642:Can you wikilink Nazi Holocaust?
6390:in case anything's been missed.
6257:Journal of Contemporary Religion
5883:Regarding the last paragraph of
4192:publishers The Huffington Post,
2909:- captured is not the right word
2263:- What does "intense" mean here?
17868:think I've sorted this one out.
15763:"Aguilera wanted to collaborate
13890:Replaced black front shot with
13160:as the infobox photo, and move
10998:Why don't we link British Army?
10303:I've added clarifying language.
6832:Right, I think I got them all.
6752:Template:Non-free use rationale
6214:Comments by Squeamish Ossifrage
5065:but would be better linking to
4840:I had missed that, now struck.
4799:, which includes no such quote.
698:This should be made more clear.
18949:meeting that standard, sorry.
18227:Footnotes 44 and 46 come from
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14716:Footnote 21: I would omit the
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3335:she joined Got Milk? campaign.
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2786:viewers on its premiere night.
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16306:provide context to the reader
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3100:- The series based its script
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18814:person. Here's a quote from
18104:Well which ones need them?--
17131:two spellings of travel(l)er
14658:parameter and not the title.
11619:When did Baden-Powell write
10688:I've expanded on this a bit.
8207:Tweaked this further myself.
5120:Waveguide (electromagnetism)
5073:or even to a new article on
2427:. Replaced it with "child".
1265:"and bring with them" -: -->
1250:"means it is mild by" -: -->
908:Dunno. Removed the italics.
32:Browse history interactively
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19240:I assume you meant after?--
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13875:for the One, the fact that
13319:" its next flagship device
13246:manufacturer of the One? --
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12934:featured article candidates
10834:Wikilink Theodore Roosevelt
10202:Added background plus ref.
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17775:research & development
17573:until his qualms were met.
16953:Edited to improve clarity.
16912:03:47, 9 August 2013 (UTC)
16895:14:46, 8 August 2013 (UTC)
16418:Another problem sentence:
16333:The most difficult of the
15275:Corrected all cases I saw.
15241:Combined with a semicolon.
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13353:"80 countries and regions"
10789:I think I got all of them.
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7632:False/misleading citations
7340:known historical falsehood
6343:at the article's prior FAC
5873:The last paragraph of the
5563:Distributed element filter
5468:WP:WikiProject Electronics
5463:distributed element filter
4487:as executive producer on
4188:Incorrect publishers (eg.
2726:- comprising music videos?
2564:teenage candy-counter girl
654:especially from the lead.
17657:takeover weak franchises,
17563:contract with Sanders...
16750:". Probably more as well.
16367:Another problem sentence
16101:Social history of viruses
15209:Team_selection#Washington
14400:FN19, 38: page formatting
13619:"To exploit this ability"
11863:Done with this section.
9505:Thanks again, Montanabw.
8613:00:01, 30 July 2013 (UTC)
8595:Frederick Russell Burnham
8384:World Health Organization
7170:Update: disappointingly,
7078:Future Perfect at Sunrise
6348:I have added the link to
2232:- winning, not having won
1404:Added electoral history.
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18135:Crain's Detroit Business
18080:Crain's Detroit Business
18040:Crain's Detroit Business
17952:Please do not modify it.
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17559:company also reneged on
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12648:All for now, more later
12073:Done with this section.
11661:I modified the sentence.
10586:Real Soldiers of Fortune
9054:Real Soldiers of Fortune
8580:Please do not modify it.
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2625:- to which; which songs?
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568:Pages 7-12. Fixed this.
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18753:PointBuzz, see above.--
16389:this needs a reference.
16287:Characters of Carnivàle
15328:Project Fillmore County
15248:Game_summary#First_half
15088:Project Fillmore County
14960:Project Fillmore County
14776:Project Fillmore County
14525:Project Fillmore County
13892:File:HTC J One back.jpg
12700:Ok the imagemap is in!
12669:Film and stage accounts
11886:Maybe just "Later life"
10239:answer this question.
9595:Resolved comments from
7988:weight than any others.
6637:Comments by Dr. Blofeld
2417:- As a kid is informal.
1986:Comments from Ceranthor
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17722:I've changed this now.
17659:—the verb is two words
16374:is abducted at infancy
14872:Changed to "The kick".
14622:Footnote 11: like the
14591:The Detroit Free Press
13177:File:HTC One black.png
13158:File:HTC One black.png
11143:Lower case is better.
10485:, including Texas and
9588:Review from Cliftonian
7362:and a host of others.
4029:I am unconvinced that
3676:"she is inspired" Was.
3270:- Four years after ...
2566:- What does this mean?
1059:Looks much better now!
18816:User:Figureskatingfan
17567:own operations there.
12577:Modern Mine Valuation
11161:"cut-off" → "cut off"
10582:Richard Harding Davis
10373:Why not wikilink Iowa
10055:Boy Scouts of America
8121:I fixed this myself.
7152:Comments by Fut.Perf.
6754:on the image page. -
5899:Promotion and release
5094:Electromagnetic modes
5075:Electromagnetic Modes
4483:Redundancy: "Tisdale
15156:most valuable player
14709:Added PDF parameter.
14669:to series parameter.
13898:, reformatted images
13021:Recommend withdrawal
12602:Don't wl Switzerland
9861:HQ in the Boer War.
8024:range being correct.
7172:User:Darkness Shines
6138:section of an FA(C).
4198:Entertainment Weekly
2510:- What did she play?
1293:Added as reference.
1266:"bringing with them"
712:Fixed the spelling.
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18229:The Morning Journal
17840:Edited for clarity.
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15475:Squeamish Ossifrage
15301:Statistical_summary
15176:Team_selection#Navy
15160:Statistical summary
15115:Changed to a comma.
14403:FN82: which Spaull?
13588:over-the-air update
13179:is very similar to
10499:Yes, that's better.
10400:Why not wikilink LA
9706:Pleasant Valley War
8757:Scouting in Arizona
6392:Squeamish Ossifrage
6311:Squeamish Ossifrage
5045:I'm going to plead
3069:- Separate sentence
19399:Ain't No Other Man
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14765:Detroit Free Press
14687:Corrected. It was
14624:Detroit Free Press
14576:Detroit Free Press
14233:Suggest withdrawal
11390:Father of Scouting
10487:Oklahoma Territory
10483:American Southwest
9926:Nice improvement.
9058:soldier of fortune
8392:Dr. Geoffrey Davis
7702:Comments by Faizan
7488:Classical case of
6465:Sporting Chronicle
6250:, 12 (2): 185-207.
6234:the parent website
6082:Oops! Yes indeed.
6005:Etymology of Wicca
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4284:Ref 23: language?
4031:TV By The Numbers
4013:TV by the Numbers
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15988:
15987:
15967:
15965:
15964:
15952:
15951:
15939:goes through.
15911:
15910:
15892:
15891:
15877:Nominator(s):
15871:
15866:
15865:
15864:
15863:
15843:
15841:
15840:
15828:
15827:
15815:goes through.
15787:
15786:
15778:
15761:
15754:
15751:
15747:
15746:
15745:
15744:
15743:
15742:
15724:
15714:
15713:
15712:
15711:
15710:
15709:
15672:
15671:
15668:
15665:
15662:
15659:
15656:
15653:
15650:
15643:
15642:
15641:
15640:
15623:
15622:
15599:
15598:
15576:Nominator(s):
15570:
15565:
15564:
15563:
15562:
15542:
15540:
15539:
15527:
15526:
15514:goes through.
15486:
15485:
15463:
15462:
15448:Nominator(s):
15442:
15440:Sicilian Mafia
15437:
15436:
15435:
15434:
15414:
15412:
15411:
15399:
15398:
15386:goes through.
15358:
15357:
15356:
15355:
15317:
15316:
15315:
15314:
15308:
15307:
15303:
15302:
15298:
15297:
15296:
15295:
15289:
15288:
15284:
15283:
15279:
15278:
15277:
15276:
15270:
15269:
15264:
15263:
15262:
15261:
15255:
15254:
15250:
15249:
15245:
15244:
15243:
15242:
15236:
15235:
15230:
15229:
15225:
15224:
15223:
15222:
15216:
15215:
15211:
15210:
15206:
15205:
15204:
15203:
15197:
15196:
15192:
15191:
15190:
15189:
15183:
15182:
15178:
15177:
15173:
15172:
15171:
15170:
15164:
15163:
15151:
15150:
15149:
15148:
15142:
15141:
15137:
15136:
15135:
15134:
15128:
15127:
15119:
15118:
15117:
15116:
15110:
15109:
15105:
15104:
15100:
15099:
15098:
15097:
15096:
15095:
15094:
15093:
15075:
15074:
15053:
15052:
15051:
15050:
15049:
15048:
15027:
15026:
15020:
15019:
15015:
15014:
15013:
15012:
15006:
15005:
14999:
14998:
14997:
14996:
14990:
14989:
14945:
14944:
14943:
14942:
14936:
14935:
14929:
14928:
14927:
14926:
14920:
14919:
14915:noun plus -ing
14909:
14908:
14907:
14906:
14900:
14899:
14892:
14891:
14890:
14889:
14883:
14882:
14876:
14875:
14874:
14873:
14867:
14866:
14860:
14859:
14858:
14857:
14851:
14850:
14844:
14843:
14842:
14841:
14835:
14834:
14828:
14827:
14826:
14825:
14819:
14818:
14812:
14811:
14810:
14809:
14803:
14802:
14796:
14795:
14794:
14793:
14787:
14786:
14782:
14781:
14760:
14759:
14756:
14752:
14751:
14750:
14749:
14739:
14738:
14735:
14731:
14730:
14729:
14728:
14722:
14721:
14713:
14712:
14711:
14710:
14704:
14703:
14695:
14694:
14693:
14692:
14682:
14681:
14673:
14672:
14671:
14670:
14660:
14659:
14651:
14650:
14649:
14648:
14642:
14641:
14637:
14636:
14635:
14634:
14628:
14627:
14619:
14618:
14617:
14616:
14610:
14609:
14597:
14596:
14595:
14594:
14580:
14579:
14571:
14570:
14569:
14568:
14562:
14561:
14556:
14555:
14554:
14553:
14552:
14551:
14543:
14542:
14541:
14540:
14533:
14532:
14517:Nominator(s):
14511:
14509:1924 Rose Bowl
14506:
14505:
14504:
14503:
14483:
14481:
14480:
14468:
14467:
14455:goes through.
14427:
14426:
14412:
14409:
14404:
14401:
14398:
14395:
14391:
14390:
14389:
14388:
14353:
14352:
14338:Nominator(s):
14332:
14327:
14326:
14325:
14324:
14304:
14302:
14301:
14289:
14288:
14276:goes through.
14248:
14247:
14229:
14228:
14212:
14211:
14197:Nominator(s):
14191:
14186:
14185:
14184:
14183:
14163:
14161:
14160:
14148:
14147:
14135:goes through.
14107:
14106:
14105:
14104:
14075:
14074:
14056:
14055:
14041:Nominator(s):
14035:
14030:
14029:
14028:
14027:
14007:
14005:
14004:
13992:
13991:
13979:goes through.
13951:
13950:
13928:
13927:
13926:
13925:
13910:
13909:
13905:
13902:
13899:
13885:
13884:
13873:sales forecast
13869:
13861:
13857:
13856:
13851:
13850:
13845:
13844:
13843:
13842:
13823:
13822:
13814:
13801:
13800:
13792:
13791:
13790:
13789:
13781:
13768:
13767:
13760:
13759:
13758:
13747:
13746:
13745:
13744:
13736:
13723:
13722:
13711:
13707:
13706:
13705:
13704:
13696:
13683:
13682:
13674:
13673:
13672:
13671:
13663:
13650:
13649:
13645:
13644:
13643:
13642:
13634:
13621:
13620:
13615:
13614:
13613:
13612:
13604:
13591:
13590:
13583:
13582:
13581:
13580:
13572:
13559:
13558:
13553:
13552:
13551:
13550:
13542:
13529:
13528:
13523:
13522:
13521:
13520:
13519:
13518:
13510:
13497:
13496:
13485:
13484:
13479:
13478:
13477:
13476:
13468:
13455:
13454:
13450:
13445:
13444:
13443:
13442:
13434:
13421:
13420:
13416:
13413:
13408:
13407:
13406:
13405:
13397:
13384:
13383:
13379:
13378:
13377:
13376:
13368:
13355:
13354:
13349:
13348:
13347:
13346:
13338:
13325:
13324:
13316:
13315:
13314:
13313:
13305:
13292:
13291:
13286:
13285:
13284:
13283:
13282:
13281:
13273:
13260:
13259:
13251:
13232:
13231:
13227:
13226:
13225:
13224:
13223:
13222:
13214:
13201:
13200:
13192:
13166:
13165:
13149:
13148:
13147:
13146:
13138:
13125:
13124:
13120:
13119:
13118:
13117:
13109:
13096:
13095:
13091:
13090:
13089:
13088:
13080:
13067:
13066:
13062:
13061:
13060:
13059:
13058:
13057:
13056:
13055:
13038:
13037:
13029:
13013:
13012:
12994:Nominator(s):
12988:
12983:
12982:
12981:
12980:
12960:
12958:
12957:
12945:
12944:
12915:
12914:
12913:
12912:
12898:
12880:
12879:
12865:
12854:
12853:
12852:
12851:
12850:
12849:
12827:
12826:
12809:
12808:
12790:
12775:
12774:
12773:
12772:
12771:
12770:
12748:
12747:
12732:
12731:
12717:
12697:
12696:
12679:
12678:
12675:
12671:
12670:
12666:
12665:
12645:
12644:
12627:
12626:
12622:
12621:
12604:
12603:
12599:
12598:
12581:
12580:
12572:
12571:
12554:
12553:
12549:
12548:
12531:
12530:
12522:
12521:
12504:
12503:
12499:
12498:
12481:
12480:
12476:
12475:
12458:
12457:
12453:
12452:
12435:
12434:
12430:
12429:
12412:
12411:
12404:
12400:
12399:
12382:
12381:
12377:
12376:
12359:
12358:
12354:
12353:
12336:
12335:
12331:
12330:
12313:
12312:
12308:
12307:
12290:
12289:
12285:
12284:
12280:
12279:
12278:
12277:
12257:
12256:
12253:
12250:
12246:
12245:
12228:
12227:
12223:
12222:
12218:
12217:
12216:
12215:
12214:
12213:
12212:
12211:
12210:
12209:
12173:
12172:
12154:
12153:
12129:
12128:
12127:
12126:
12109:
12108:
12088:
12087:
12086:
12085:
12068:
12067:
12066:
12065:
12046:
12045:
12041:
12040:
12039:
12038:
12019:
12018:
12015:
11999:
11995:
11994:
11993:
11992:
11973:
11972:
11968:
11967:
11966:
11965:
11946:
11945:
11937:
11936:
11935:
11934:
11915:
11914:
11910:
11909:
11908:
11907:
11888:
11887:
11883:
11882:
11878:
11877:
11876:
11875:
11858:
11857:
11856:
11855:
11836:
11835:
11831:
11830:
11829:
11828:
11809:
11808:
11804:
11803:
11802:
11801:
11782:
11781:
11777:
11776:
11775:
11774:
11755:
11754:
11750:
11749:
11748:
11747:
11727:
11726:
11722:
11721:
11720:
11719:
11710:
11709:
11705:
11704:
11703:
11702:
11682:
11681:
11665:
11664:
11663:
11662:
11653:
11652:
11648:
11647:
11646:
11645:
11625:
11624:
11616:
11615:
11614:
11613:
11594:
11593:
11589:
11588:
11587:
11586:
11567:
11566:
11562:
11561:
11560:
11559:
11540:
11539:
11535:
11534:
11533:
11532:
11531:
11530:
11507:
11506:
11486:
11485:
11481:
11480:
11479:
11478:
11459:
11458:
11450:
11449:
11448:
11447:
11428:
11427:
11423:
11422:
11421:
11420:
11401:
11400:
11392:
11391:
11387:
11386:
11385:
11384:
11364:
11363:
11356:
11355:
11354:
11353:
11344:
11343:
11339:
11338:
11337:
11336:
11317:
11316:
11312:
11311:
11310:
11309:
11290:
11289:
11285:
11284:
11283:
11282:
11262:
11261:
11257:
11256:
11255:
11254:
11234:
11233:
11229:
11228:
11227:
11226:
11207:
11206:
11202:
11201:
11200:
11199:
11180:
11179:
11175:
11174:
11173:
11172:
11163:
11162:
11158:
11157:
11156:
11155:
11135:
11134:
11130:
11129:
11128:
11127:
11108:
11107:
11103:
11102:
11101:
11100:
11081:
11080:
11076:
11075:
11074:
11073:
11054:
11053:
11049:
11048:
11047:
11046:
11027:
11026:
11022:
11021:
11020:
11019:
11000:
10999:
10995:
10994:
10993:
10992:
10973:
10972:
10968:
10967:
10966:
10965:
10946:
10945:
10941:
10940:
10939:
10938:
10918:
10917:
10913:
10912:
10911:
10910:
10891:
10890:
10886:
10885:
10884:
10883:
10863:
10862:
10858:
10857:
10856:
10855:
10836:
10835:
10831:
10830:
10829:
10828:
10809:
10808:
10804:
10803:
10802:
10801:
10781:
10780:
10776:
10775:
10774:
10773:
10753:
10752:
10748:
10747:
10746:
10745:
10736:
10735:
10731:
10730:
10729:
10728:
10708:
10707:
10703:
10702:
10701:
10700:
10680:
10679:
10675:
10674:
10673:
10672:
10652:
10651:
10647:
10646:
10645:
10644:
10625:
10624:
10620:
10619:
10615:
10614:
10613:
10612:
10595:
10594:
10593:
10592:
10576:
10575:
10571:
10570:
10569:
10568:
10547:
10546:
10542:
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10539:
10519:
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10514:
10513:
10512:
10511:
10491:
10490:
10478:
10477:
10476:
10475:
10456:
10455:
10451:
10450:
10449:
10448:
10429:
10428:
10424:
10423:
10422:
10421:
10402:
10401:
10397:
10396:
10395:
10394:
10375:
10374:
10370:
10369:
10351:
10350:
10346:
10345:
10344:
10343:
10323:
10322:
10318:
10317:
10316:
10315:
10295:
10294:
10290:
10289:
10288:
10287:
10267:
10266:
10258:
10257:
10256:
10255:
10222:
10221:
10217:
10216:
10215:
10214:
10194:
10193:
10189:
10188:
10187:
10186:
10167:
10166:
10162:
10161:
10157:
10156:
10155:
10154:
10137:
10136:
10135:
10134:
10114:
10113:
10109:
10108:
10107:
10106:
10085:
10084:
10080:
10079:
10078:
10077:
10058:
10057:
10050:
10049:
10048:
10047:
10026:
10025:
10021:
10020:
10019:
10018:
10009:
10008:
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9973:
9972:
9968:
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9946:
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9910:
9881:
9880:
9876:
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9852:
9851:
9847:
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9845:
9844:
9824:
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9815:
9814:
9813:
9812:
9793:
9792:
9788:
9787:
9786:
9785:
9766:
9765:
9761:
9760:
9759:
9758:
9738:
9737:
9733:
9732:
9731:
9730:
9710:
9709:
9701:
9700:
9699:
9698:
9678:
9677:
9673:
9672:
9671:
9670:
9650:
9649:
9645:
9644:
9643:
9642:
9623:
9622:
9618:
9617:
9610:
9609:
9589:
9586:
9585:
9584:
9583:
9582:
9581:
9580:
9549:
9548:
9547:
9546:
9532:
9529:
9526:
9520:
9519:
9518:
9517:
9500:
9499:
9487:
9486:
9471:
9470:
9469:
9468:
9451:
9450:
9430:
9429:
9419:
9405:
9391:
9377:
9363:
9349:
9334:
9318:
9317:
9316:
9315:
9301:
9278:
9277:
9276:
9275:
9274:
9273:
9272:
9271:
9254:
9253:
9237:
9236:
9235:
9234:
9217:
9216:
9199:
9198:
9184:
9166:
9165:
9164:
9163:
9143:
9142:
9141:
9122:
9121:
9112:
9111:
9110:
9109:
9108:
9107:
9106:
9105:
9104:
9103:
9102:
9101:
9095:
9094:
9073:
9072:
9047:
9046:
9040:
9039:
9025:
9024:
9009:
9008:
9007:
9006:
9005:
9004:
9003:
9002:
9001:
9000:
8999:
8998:
8978:
8977:
8956:
8955:
8946:
8945:
8935:
8934:
8917:
8916:
8907:
8906:
8905:
8904:
8903:
8902:
8885:
8884:
8883:
8866:
8865:
8859:
8858:
8841:
8840:
8836:
8835:
8834:
8833:
8832:
8831:
8830:
8829:
8828:
8827:
8826:
8825:
8808:
8807:
8782:
8781:
8761:
8760:
8750:
8749:
8732:
8731:
8723:
8722:
8721:
8720:
8719:
8718:
8717:
8716:
8715:
8714:
8668:
8667:
8666:
8648:
8647:
8641:
8640:
8623:
8622:
8618:
8617:
8603:Nominator(s):
8597:
8592:
8591:
8590:
8589:
8569:
8567:
8566:
8554:
8553:
8541:goes through.
8513:
8512:
8511:
8510:
8509:
8508:
8507:
8506:
8505:
8450:
8449:
8441:
8431:
8427:
8426:
8425:
8424:
8423:
8422:
8421:
8420:
8362:
8361:
8343:
8342:
8341:
8340:
8339:
8338:
8337:
8336:
8335:
8334:
8300:
8278:
8224:
8223:
8222:
8221:
8220:
8219:
8202:
8201:
8196:
8191:
8185:
8184:
8183:
8182:
8155:
8154:
8149:
8141:
8140:
8136:
8135:
8134:
8133:
8116:
8115:
8109:
8103:
8102:
8101:
8100:
8072:
8071:
8065:
8064:
8063:
8062:
8046:
8045:
8039:
8038:
8037:
8036:
8018:
8017:
8011:
8010:
8009:
8008:
7991:
7990:
7984:
7977:
7971:
7966:
7959:
7956:
7954:
7951:
7950:
7949:
7948:
7947:
7946:
7945:
7927:
7891:
7890:
7871:
7870:
7869:
7868:
7867:
7866:
7865:
7864:
7863:
7862:
7823:
7822:
7821:
7820:
7819:
7818:
7775:
7774:
7773:
7772:
7771:
7770:
7769:
7768:
7703:
7700:
7699:
7698:
7697:
7696:
7695:
7694:
7693:
7692:
7648:
7647:
7634:
7633:
7629:
7628:
7627:
7626:
7625:
7624:
7623:
7622:
7576:
7575:
7571:
7570:
7569:
7568:
7567:
7566:
7565:
7564:
7563:
7562:
7561:
7560:
7559:
7558:
7557:
7556:
7555:
7554:
7553:
7552:
7551:
7550:
7549:
7548:
7547:
7546:
7545:
7544:
7543:
7542:
7541:
7540:
7539:
7538:
7280:
7279:
7263:
7256:
7255:
7250:
7249:
7248:
7247:
7246:
7245:
7225:
7224:
7223:
7222:
7199:
7195:
7191:
7190:
7189:
7153:
7150:
7149:
7148:
7147:
7146:
7145:
7144:
7143:
7142:
7141:
7140:
7139:
7138:
7137:
7136:
7135:
7134:
7133:
7132:
7131:
7130:
7102:
7073:
6974:
6950:
6949:
6933:
6932:
6931:
6930:
6929:
6928:
6927:
6926:
6899:
6870:
6844:
6830:
6815:
6814:
6795:
6794:
6793:
6792:
6791:
6790:
6789:
6788:
6787:
6786:
6785:
6784:
6766:
6765:
6687:
6686:
6668:
6667:and structure.
6664:
6661:
6658:
6655:
6652:
6649:
6646:
6643:
6638:
6635:
6634:
6633:
6619:Nominator(s):
6613:
6608:
6607:
6606:
6605:
6585:
6583:
6582:
6570:
6569:
6557:goes through.
6529:
6528:
6527:
6526:
6493:
6490:
6489:
6488:
6487:
6486:
6485:
6484:
6483:
6482:
6452:Daily Dispatch
6434:Daily Dispatch
6425:
6424:
6423:
6378:is that? The
6376:Daily Dispatch
6346:
6339:
6332:
6322:
6321:
6303:Daily Dispatch
6290:
6289:
6279:
6278:
6277:
6276:
6261:
6252:
6238:
6225:
6222:
6215:
6212:
6211:
6210:
6209:
6208:
6207:
6206:
6205:
6204:
6203:
6202:
6201:
6200:
6199:
6198:
6197:
6196:
6195:
6194:
6193:
6192:
6028:
6027:
6013:Nominator(s):
6007:
6002:
6001:
6000:
5999:
5979:
5977:
5976:
5964:
5963:
5951:goes through.
5923:
5922:
5921:
5920:
5913:
5912:
5911:
5910:
5903:
5902:
5895:
5888:
5881:
5878:
5870:
5869:
5868:
5867:
5866:
5865:
5864:
5863:
5862:
5861:
5860:
5859:
5821:
5820:
5819:
5818:
5817:
5816:
5815:
5814:
5779:
5778:
5777:
5776:
5775:
5774:
5755:
5754:
5753:
5752:
5730:
5729:
5725:
5724:
5723:
5722:
5718:
5712:
5709:
5705:
5699:
5698:
5694:
5693:
5689:
5688:
5674:Nominator(s):
5668:
5663:
5662:
5661:
5660:
5640:
5638:
5637:
5625:
5624:
5612:goes through.
5584:
5583:
5582:
5581:
5552:
5551:
5537:
5534:
5530:
5529:
5528:
5527:
5494:
5493:
5489:
5488:
5487:
5486:
5451:
5450:
5446:
5445:
5444:
5443:
5422:
5421:
5417:
5416:
5415:
5414:
5393:
5392:
5388:
5387:
5386:
5385:
5364:
5363:
5359:
5358:
5357:
5356:
5335:
5334:
5330:
5329:
5328:
5327:
5306:
5305:
5298:
5297:
5296:
5295:
5274:
5273:
5269:
5268:
5267:
5266:
5244:
5243:
5239:
5238:
5237:
5236:
5215:
5214:
5210:
5209:
5208:
5207:
5186:
5185:
5178:
5177:
5176:
5175:
5153:
5152:
5148:
5147:
5146:
5145:
5124:
5123:
5115:
5114:
5113:
5112:
5079:
5078:
5058:
5057:
5056:
5055:
5040:
5039:
5034:
5033:
5015:Nominator(s):
5009:
5004:
5003:
5002:
5001:
4981:
4979:
4978:
4966:
4965:
4953:goes through.
4925:
4924:
4909:
4908:
4890:
4889:
4888:
4887:
4886:
4885:
4884:
4883:
4853:
4852:
4835:
4834:
4813:
4812:
4792:
4789:
4785:
4784:
4770:
4767:
4764:
4760:
4759:
4758:
4757:
4756:
4755:
4740:
4739:
4679:
4678:
4658:
4657:
4643:Nominator(s):
4637:
4632:
4631:
4630:
4629:
4609:
4607:
4606:
4594:
4593:
4581:goes through.
4553:
4552:
4551:
4550:
4549:
4548:
4516:
4515:
4514:
4513:
4493:
4492:
4480:
4479:
4478:
4477:
4457:
4456:
4452:
4451:
4450:
4449:
4429:
4428:
4424:
4423:
4422:
4421:
4401:
4400:
4396:
4395:
4394:
4393:
4373:
4372:
4365:
4364:
4363:
4362:
4342:
4341:
4337:
4336:
4335:
4334:
4314:
4313:
4309:
4308:
4307:
4306:
4286:
4285:
4281:
4280:
4279:
4278:
4258:
4257:
4253:
4252:
4251:
4250:
4230:
4229:
4225:
4224:
4223:
4222:
4202:
4201:
4185:
4184:
4183:
4182:
4162:
4161:
4157:
4156:
4155:
4154:
4153:
4152:
4116:
4115:
4111:
4110:
4109:
4108:
4088:
4087:
4083:
4082:
4081:
4080:
4060:
4059:
4055:
4054:
4053:
4052:
4051:
4050:
4006:
4005:
4001:
4000:
3999:
3998:
3997:
3996:
3995:
3994:
3943:
3942:
3936:
3935:
3934:
3933:
3932:
3931:
3898:
3897:
3881:
3880:
3879:
3878:
3861:
3860:
3856:
3855:
3854:
3853:
3833:
3832:
3828:
3827:
3826:
3825:
3808:
3807:
3806:
3805:
3785:
3784:
3780:
3779:
3778:
3777:
3757:
3756:
3748:
3747:
3746:
3745:
3725:
3724:
3714:dating back to
3701:
3700:
3699:
3698:
3678:
3677:
3673:
3672:
3671:
3670:
3650:
3649:
3641:
3640:
3639:
3638:
3618:
3617:
3613:
3612:
3611:
3610:
3590:
3589:
3585:
3584:
3583:
3582:
3565:
3564:
3560:
3559:
3558:
3557:
3540:
3539:
3535:
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3533:
3532:
3515:
3514:
3510:
3509:
3508:
3507:
3487:
3486:
3482:
3481:
3480:
3479:
3459:
3458:
3454:
3453:
3452:
3451:
3434:
3433:
3427:
3426:
3425:
3424:
3406:
3405:
3404:
3403:
3383:
3382:
3375:
3374:
3370:
3369:
3362:
3361:
3360:
3359:
3339:
3338:
3331:
3330:
3329:
3328:
3316:. Removed it.
3308:
3307:
3300:
3299:
3295:
3294:
3293:
3292:
3272:
3271:
3264:
3263:
3262:
3261:
3241:
3240:
3234:
3227:
3226:
3222:
3221:
3220:
3219:
3199:
3198:
3187:
3186:
3185:
3184:
3164:
3163:
3156:
3155:
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3133:
3132:
3125:
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3102:
3101:
3094:
3093:
3092:
3091:
3071:
3070:
3063:
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3027:
3026:
3025:
3024:
3004:
3003:
2996:
2995:
2994:
2993:
2973:
2972:
2965:
2964:
2963:
2962:
2942:
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2911:
2910:
2903:
2902:
2901:
2900:
2880:
2879:
2872:
2871:
2870:
2869:
2849:
2848:
2841:
2840:
2839:
2838:
2821:
2820:
2813:
2812:
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2810:
2790:
2789:
2782:
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2759:
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2751:
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2748:
2728:
2727:
2720:
2719:
2718:
2717:
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2680:
2679:
2678:
2658:
2657:
2650:
2649:
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2647:
2627:
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2619:
2618:
2617:
2616:
2596:
2595:
2588:
2587:
2586:
2585:
2568:
2567:
2560:
2559:
2555:
2554:
2553:
2552:
2535:
2534:
2533:
2532:
2512:
2511:
2504:
2503:
2502:
2501:
2481:
2480:
2473:
2472:
2471:
2470:
2450:
2449:
2442:
2441:
2440:
2439:
2419:
2418:
2411:
2410:
2409:
2408:
2388:
2387:
2383:
2382:
2381:
2380:
2363:
2362:
2355:
2354:
2350:
2349:
2348:
2347:
2327:
2326:
2319:
2318:
2317:
2316:
2296:
2295:
2288:
2287:
2286:
2285:
2265:
2264:
2257:
2256:
2255:
2254:
2234:
2233:
2226:
2225:
2221:
2220:
2219:
2218:
2217:
2216:
2215:
2214:
2213:
2212:
2211:
2210:
2209:
2208:
2207:
2206:
2160:
2159:
2158:
2157:
2156:
2155:
2154:
2153:
2152:
2151:
2150:
2149:
2092:
2091:
2090:
2072:
2071:
2067:
2066:
2048:
2047:
2043:
2042:
2024:
2023:
2019:
2018:
1996:
1995:
1991:
1990:
1987:
1983:
1982:
1968:Nominator(s):
1962:
1960:Ashley Tisdale
1957:
1956:
1955:
1954:
1934:
1932:
1931:
1919:
1918:
1889:
1888:
1873:
1872:
1858:Channel Island
1844:
1843:
1842:
1841:
1840:
1839:
1838:
1837:
1823:
1777:
1776:
1761:
1757:
1756:
1755:
1754:
1753:
1752:
1751:
1750:
1749:
1748:
1690:
1660:
1659:
1658:
1657:
1656:
1655:
1654:
1653:
1630:
1629:
1624:
1623:
1608:
1607:
1603:
1602:
1601:
1600:
1599:
1598:
1578:
1577:
1573:
1572:
1557:
1556:
1552:
1551:
1550:
1549:
1533:
1532:
1526:
1525:
1524:
1523:
1522:
1521:
1520:
1519:
1518:
1517:
1516:
1515:
1514:
1513:
1480:
1479:
1458:
1457:
1437:
1436:
1431:
1430:
1426:
1425:
1421:
1420:
1419:
1418:
1417:
1416:
1402:
1387:
1386:
1364:
1363:
1358:
1357:
1356:
1355:
1338:
1337:
1332:
1331:
1327:
1326:
1311:
1310:
1306:
1305:
1290:
1289:
1284:
1283:
1268:
1267:
1263:
1251:"is mild by".
1247:
1246:
1245:
1244:
1228:
1227:
1221:
1220:
1215:
1214:
1213:
1212:
1197:
1196:
1190:
1189:
1184:
1183:
1182:
1181:
1180:
1179:
1164:
1163:
1159:
1158:
1143:
1142:
1138:
1137:
1122:
1121:
1117:
1116:
1101:
1100:
1096:
1095:
1094:
1093:
1075:
1074:
1068:
1067:
1063:
1062:
1061:
1060:
1040:
1039:
1028:
1027:
1026:
1025:
1010:
1009:
1005:
1004:
989:
988:
984:
983:
968:
967:
963:
962:
947:
946:
942:
941:
926:
925:
921:
920:
905:
904:
900:
899:
898:
897:
877:
876:
872:
871:
870:
869:
852:
851:
846:
845:
844:
843:
825:
824:
820:
819:
805:
804:
803:
786:
785:
784:
767:
766:
765:
759:
758:
754:
753:
750:
746:
745:
730:
729:
725:
724:
709:
708:
704:
703:
702:
701:
700:
699:
679:
678:
674:
673:
672:
671:
670:
669:
636:
635:
631:
630:
629:
628:
627:
626:
625:
624:
586:
585:
581:
580:
565:
564:
560:
559:
544:
543:
538:
537:
536:
535:
534:
533:
518:
517:
496:
495:
491:
490:
489:
488:
470:
469:
465:
464:
441:
440:
436:
435:
434:
433:
425:
424:
420:
419:
404:
403:
399:
398:
383:
382:
378:
377:
376:
375:
374:
373:
338:
337:
323:Nominator(s):
317:
312:
311:
310:
309:
289:
287:
282:
281:
278:
276:
274:
271:
269:
266:
265:
262:
260:
258:
255:
253:
250:
249:
246:
244:
242:
239:
238:
236:{{TOClimit|2}}
235:
233:
231:
229:{{TOClimit|2}}
228:
226:
223:
222:
219:
215:
214:
201:
198:Administrators
192:
191:
176:
155:
137:
134:Administrators
128:
127:
112:
81:
75:
73:
55:
47:
41:
37:
36:
28:
15:
9:
6:
4:
3:
2:
19565:
19553:
19550:
19544:
19543:
19540:
19536:
19532:
19528:
19521:
19514:
19510:
19506:
19503:
19502:
19499:
19495:
19491:
19487:
19483:
19482:Brief comment
19480:
19479:
19476:
19473:
19472:
19470:
19469:
19466:
19463:
19460:
19454:
19450:
19447:
19446:
19443:
19439:
19435:
19431:
19430:
19427:
19424:
19423:
19419:
19418:
19414:
19410:
19404:
19403:
19400:
19392:
19390:
19385:
19380:
19375:
19374:
19369:
19366:
19360:
19359:
19356:
19352:
19348:
19344:
19337:
19330:
19326:
19322:
19319:
19318:
19313:
19308:
19302:
19301:
19290:
19289:
19288:
19287:
19284:
19280:
19274:
19269:
19266:
19262:
19257:
19251:
19250:
19239:
19238:
19237:
19234:
19230:
19225:
19219:
19218:
19207:
19206:
19205:
19201:
19197:
19192:
19186:
19185:
19174:
19173:
19172:
19169:
19165:
19160:
19154:
19153:
19142:
19141:
19140:
19137:
19133:
19128:
19122:
19121:
19110:
19109:
19108:
19104:
19100:
19095:
19089:
19088:
19077:
19076:
19075:
19072:
19068:
19063:
19057:
19056:
19045:
19044:
19043:
19040:
19036:
19031:
19025:
19024:
19013:
19012:
19011:
19008:
19004:
18999:
18993:
18992:
18981:
18980:
18979:
18977:
18976:with ... -ing
18972:
18971:
18968:
18964:
18963:
18956:
18947:
18946:
18941:
18936:
18930:
18929:
18918:
18917:
18916:
18915:
18911:
18907:
18902:
18896:
18895:
18884:
18883:
18881:
18877:
18865:
18860:
18854:
18853:
18842:
18840:
18835:
18829:
18828:
18817:
18813:
18809:
18804:
18803:
18802:
18798:
18797:
18790:
18781:
18777:
18776:
18775:
18770:
18764:
18763:
18751:
18750:
18749:
18745:
18744:
18737:
18728:
18727:
18726:
18721:
18715:
18714:
18703:
18702:
18700:
18688:
18683:
18677:
18676:
18665:
18664:
18661:
18657:
18653:
18652:
18651:
18646:
18640:
18639:
18627:
18626:
18625:
18621:
18620:
18613:
18605:
18604:
18603:
18598:
18592:
18591:
18580:
18576:
18572:
18571:
18569:
18568:
18563:
18558:
18552:
18551:
18540:
18539:
18538:
18534:
18533:
18526:
18517:
18509:
18504:
18498:
18497:
18486:
18485:
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12283:Personal life
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11881:Later in life
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10527:It's better.
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10005:Cape to Cairo
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177:Graham Beards
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130:Autopatrolled
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113:Graham Beards
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69:
62:
52:Content added
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19:
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19505:Closing note
19504:
19490:Brianboulton
19481:
19467:
19464:
19461:
19458:
19456:
19448:
19425:
19406:
19383:
19376:
19364:
19361:
19321:Closing note
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19267:
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18780:high quality
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18660:re-publisher
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17889:Closing note
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16799:Closing note
16798:
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16603:talk with me
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16549:
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16506:Closing note
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16413:actresses...
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16295:Flood (Halo)
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15915:Closing note
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15791:Closing note
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15781:
15774:
15771:
15770:with Furler
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15490:Closing note
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15405:
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15362:Closing note
15361:
15336:
15321:
15169:Capitalized.
15159:
15103:Introduction
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14431:Closing note
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14252:Closing note
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14111:Closing note
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13955:Closing note
13954:
13931:
13879:, yet still
13816:ontributions
13783:ontributions
13738:ontributions
13698:ontributions
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13665:ontributions
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13111:ontributions
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13031:ontributions
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12951:
12948:
12919:Closing note
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11944:Upper Volta?
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10001:Cecil Rhodes
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8942:cited source
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8726:Significant
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8517:Closing note
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7795:
7743:
7742:
7524:this version
7389:
7335:
7198:astonishing.
6798:
6713:
6678:
6618:
6595:
6588:
6576:
6573:
6533:Closing note
6532:
6463:
6451:
6433:
6429:The Cauldron
6428:
6405:
6388:Nova Religio
6387:
6375:
6371:The Cauldron
6370:
6366:
6336:The Cauldron
6335:
6328:
6302:
6298:
6295:Nova Religio
6294:
6282:
6270:
6266:Nova Religio
6264:
6255:
6245:
6243:
6229:
6227:
6219:
6135:
6012:
5989:
5982:
5970:
5967:
5927:Closing note
5926:
5898:
5891:
5884:
5874:
5736:
5673:
5650:
5643:
5631:
5628:
5588:Closing note
5587:
5566:
5512:
5471:
5428:
5399:
5370:
5341:
5312:
5280:
5251:
5221:
5192:
5160:
5130:
5097:
5016:
5014:
4991:
4984:
4972:
4969:
4929:Closing note
4928:
4893:
4794:
4707:
4701:Anotherclown
4693:
4642:
4619:
4612:
4600:
4597:
4557:Closing note
4556:
4498:
4488:
4484:
4462:
4434:
4406:
4378:
4347:
4319:
4291:
4263:
4235:
4207:
4197:
4167:
4121:
4093:
4065:
4035:high quality
4034:
3970:Demiurge1000
3939:
3917:
3838:
3790:
3765:. Jealousy.
3762:
3752:
3730:
3720:
3716:
3713:
3709:
3705:
3683:
3655:
3645:
3623:
3595:
3492:
3464:
3388:
3378:
3365:
3344:
3334:
3313:
3303:
3277:
3267:
3246:
3236:
3230:
3204:
3195:serial comma
3190:
3169:
3159:
3138:
3128:
3107:
3097:
3076:
3066:
3045:
3035:
3009:
2999:
2968:
2947:
2937:
2916:
2906:
2885:
2875:
2854:
2844:
2816:
2795:
2785:
2764:
2757:- On, not in
2754:
2733:
2723:
2702:
2692:
2663:
2653:
2632:
2622:
2601:
2591:
2563:
2517:
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2486:
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2455:
2445:
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2322:
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2270:
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2239:
2229:
2182:Demiurge1000
2125:Demiurge1000
2096:Demiurge1000
2075:
2051:
2027:
1967:
1944:
1937:
1925:
1922:
1893:Closing note
1892:
1856:, a British
1849:
1666:Brianboulton
1611:Fixed this.
1200:Fixed this.
1146:Fixed this.
547:Fixed this.
499:Fixed this.
407:Fixed this.
386:Fixed this.
361:Fixed this.
344:by Chris857
341:
322:
299:
292:
19453:peer review
18954:Imzadi 1979
18880:Trademarkia
18788:Imzadi 1979
18735:Imzadi 1979
18611:Imzadi 1979
18524:Imzadi 1979
18359:MOS:ALLCAPS
18324:|deadurl=no
18236:Imzadi 1979
18146:Imzadi 1979
18087:Imzadi 1979
17469:talk to me?
17435:talk to me?
17372:Copyedited.
16755:Note: I've
16387:WP:MOSQUOTE
16335:FA criteria
16146:Bencherlite
16113:Bencherlite
16060:Bencherlite
16036:WP:WAF-INFO
15879:Plantsurfer
15777:the album."
15610:Laser brain
15568:You Lost Me
15313:Fixed both.
14950:WP:GOCE/REQ
14700:|format=PDF
14689:The Gazette
14678:The Gazette
14633:Fixed both.
14604:instead of
14237:Crisco 1492
14199:Red marquis
14094:Crisco 1492
14064:Crisco 1492
13752:TechRadar's
13719:David Pogue
13715:this review
10241:Little Crow
10232:Mdewakanton
9423:More stuff:
8963:this source
8913:this source
8789:MOS:ITALICS
8543:Graham Colm
8457:Review here
7841:Dr. Blofeld
7796:Dr. Blofeld
6714:Dr. Blofeld
6679:Dr. Blofeld
6559:Graham Colm
6384:East London
5953:Graham Colm
5890:Why is the
5835:Popcornduff
5789:Popcornduff
5764:Popcornduff
5676:Popcornduff
5614:Graham Colm
5503:(1965) and
5086:Normal mode
5063:Normal mode
4955:Graham Colm
4898:Crisco 1492
4873:Graham Colm
4797:this source
4729:Crisco 1492
4668:Crisco 1492
4583:Graham Colm
4489:a number of
4196:publishers
3949:a problem.
3646:Scary Movie
2017:Suggestions
19272:Giants2008
18656:should not
16781:Giants2008
16744:WP:COPYVIO
16372:First off
16299:Hardy Boys
15202:Shortened.
15061:Giants2008
15035:Giants2008
14971:Giants2008
14416:Nikkimaria
13811:Sp33dyphil
13807:Addressed.
13797:WP:LINKROT
13778:Sp33dyphil
13733:Sp33dyphil
13729:Addressed.
13693:Sp33dyphil
13689:Addressed.
13660:Sp33dyphil
13656:Addressed.
13631:Sp33dyphil
13601:Sp33dyphil
13597:Addressed.
13569:Sp33dyphil
13539:Sp33dyphil
13507:Sp33dyphil
13465:Sp33dyphil
13431:Sp33dyphil
13394:Sp33dyphil
13390:Addressed.
13365:Sp33dyphil
13361:Addressed.
13335:Sp33dyphil
13331:Addressed.
13302:Sp33dyphil
13298:Addressed.
13270:Sp33dyphil
13248:Sp33dyphil
13211:Sp33dyphil
13189:Sp33dyphil
13135:Sp33dyphil
13106:Sp33dyphil
13102:Addressed.
13077:Sp33dyphil
13073:Addressed.
13026:Sp33dyphil
12902:Ctatkinson
12888:Ctatkinson
12872:reply here
12816:Ctatkinson
12758:Cliftonian
12737:Ctatkinson
12721:Ctatkinson
12705:Cliftonian
12686:Ctatkinson
12653:Cliftonian
12634:Ctatkinson
12611:Ctatkinson
12588:Ctatkinson
12561:Ctatkinson
12538:Ctatkinson
12511:Ctatkinson
12488:Ctatkinson
12465:Ctatkinson
12442:Ctatkinson
12419:Ctatkinson
12389:Ctatkinson
12366:Ctatkinson
12343:Ctatkinson
12320:Ctatkinson
12297:Ctatkinson
12267:Ctatkinson
12235:Ctatkinson
12221:Later life
12197:Cliftonian
12162:Ctatkinson
12141:Cliftonian
12116:Ctatkinson
12096:Cliftonian
12075:Ctatkinson
12055:Ctatkinson
12028:Ctatkinson
12005:Ctatkinson
11982:Ctatkinson
11955:Ctatkinson
11924:Ctatkinson
11897:Ctatkinson
11865:Ctatkinson
11845:Ctatkinson
11818:Ctatkinson
11791:Ctatkinson
11764:Ctatkinson
11737:Ctatkinson
11692:Ctatkinson
11635:Ctatkinson
11603:Ctatkinson
11576:Ctatkinson
11549:Ctatkinson
11518:Cliftonian
11496:Ctatkinson
11468:Ctatkinson
11437:Ctatkinson
11410:Ctatkinson
11374:Ctatkinson
11326:Ctatkinson
11299:Ctatkinson
11272:Ctatkinson
11244:Ctatkinson
11216:Ctatkinson
11189:Ctatkinson
11145:Ctatkinson
11117:Ctatkinson
11090:Ctatkinson
11063:Ctatkinson
11036:Ctatkinson
11009:Ctatkinson
10982:Ctatkinson
10955:Ctatkinson
10928:Ctatkinson
10900:Ctatkinson
10873:Ctatkinson
10845:Ctatkinson
10818:Ctatkinson
10791:Ctatkinson
10763:Ctatkinson
10718:Ctatkinson
10690:Ctatkinson
10662:Ctatkinson
10634:Ctatkinson
10602:Ctatkinson
10558:Ctatkinson
10556:reference.
10529:Ctatkinson
10501:Ctatkinson
10465:Ctatkinson
10438:Ctatkinson
10411:Ctatkinson
10384:Ctatkinson
10359:Ctatkinson
10333:Ctatkinson
10305:Ctatkinson
10277:Ctatkinson
10263:to America
10245:Ctatkinson
10204:Ctatkinson
10176:Ctatkinson
10160:Early life
10144:Ctatkinson
10124:Ctatkinson
10096:Ctatkinson
10067:Ctatkinson
10037:Ctatkinson
9983:Ctatkinson
9955:Ctatkinson
9928:Ctatkinson
9900:Ctatkinson
9863:Ctatkinson
9834:Ctatkinson
9802:Ctatkinson
9775:Ctatkinson
9748:Ctatkinson
9720:Ctatkinson
9688:Ctatkinson
9660:Ctatkinson
9632:Ctatkinson
9598:Cliftonian
9556:Ctatkinson
9507:Ctatkinson
9476:Ctatkinson
9458:Ctatkinson
9308:reply here
9284:Nikkimaria
9261:Ctatkinson
9243:Nikkimaria
9224:Ctatkinson
9188:Ctatkinson
9174:Ctatkinson
9153:Ctatkinson
9131:Ctatkinson
9084:Nikkimaria
9062:Ctatkinson
9032:Ctatkinson
9014:Nikkimaria
8988:Ctatkinson
8967:Nikkimaria
8924:Ctatkinson
8892:Ctatkinson
8873:Ctatkinson
8848:Ctatkinson
8815:Ctatkinson
8797:Nikkimaria
8771:Ctatkinson
8769:. Thanks.
8739:Ctatkinson
8704:Ctatkinson
8689:Nikkimaria
8674:Ctatkinson
8656:Ctatkinson
8630:Ctatkinson
8605:Ctatkinson
7336:Lebensborn
7162:Lebensborn
6993:WP:CSD#F7b
6958:Nikkimaria
6939:Nikkimaria
6873:sorting.--
6849:Dwaipayanc
6492:Lead image
6230:especially
5875:Background
5740:sections.—
5721:important.
5715:Dead links
5541:Nikkimaria
4842:Nikkimaria
4802:Nikkimaria
4774:Nikkimaria
4540:Wikipedian
4369:Checklinks
4144:Wikipedian
4042:Wikipedian
3887:Nikkimaria
2353:Early life
1799:Nikkimaria
1766:Nikkimaria
1736:Fixed it.
19513:WP:FAC/ar
19509:candidate
19455:editing.
19329:WP:FAC/ar
19325:candidate
19107:sentence.
18393:Mad Money
18290:The Blade
18286:The Blade
17897:WP:FAC/ar
17893:candidate
17462:Jimfbleak
17425:Jimfbleak
17393:—why cap?
17365:—informal
16807:WP:FAC/ar
16803:candidate
16514:WP:FAC/ar
16510:candidate
16469:<: -->
16463:Ruhrfisch
16449:<: -->
16443:Ruhrfisch
16370:youthful.
16189:GermanJoe
16175:GermanJoe
15923:WP:FAC/ar
15919:candidate
15896:Withdraw'
15799:WP:FAC/ar
15795:candidate
15498:WP:FAC/ar
15494:candidate
15370:WP:FAC/ar
15366:candidate
15323:Awardgive
15124:Rose Bowl
15083:Awardgive
14955:Awardgive
14771:Awardgive
14665:Switched
14520:Awardgive
14439:WP:FAC/ar
14435:candidate
14407:404 error
14361:GermanJoe
14260:WP:FAC/ar
14256:candidate
14119:WP:FAC/ar
14115:candidate
13963:WP:FAC/ar
13959:candidate
13932:Withdrawn
13915:M0rphzone
13774:Reworded.
13627:Reworded.
13565:Not done.
13535:Reworded.
13492:Not done.
13461:Reworded.
13427:Reworded.
13239:Not done.
13045:M0rphzone
12927:WP:FAC/ar
12923:candidate
12798:GermanJoe
12180:Montanabw
10553:Comments.
10355:*Comment.
10053:Wikilink
9570:Coemgenus
9536:Coemgenus
9493:Montanabw
9444:Montanabw
9428:DONE !!!!
9413:Montanabw
9397:Montanabw
9383:Montanabw
9369:Montanabw
9355:Montanabw
9343:Montanabw
9328:Montanabw
9120:Fellow").
8525:WP:FAC/ar
8521:candidate
8437:secondary
7725:Dwaipayan
7684:Fut.Perf.
7655:Dwaipayan
7639:Fut.Perf.
7598:Dwaipayan
7528:Dwaipayan
7498:Fut.Perf.
7464:Fut.Perf.
7437:Fut.Perf.
7408:Dwaipayan
7378:Fut.Perf.
7344:Fut.Perf.
7309:Fut.Perf.
7271:Fut.Perf.
7212:Dwaipayan
7181:Fut.Perf.
7107:Fut.Perf.
7051:Fut.Perf.
7024:Fut.Perf.
6997:Fut.Perf.
6918:Fut.Perf.
6875:Dwaipayan
6804:Dwaipayan
6541:WP:FAC/ar
6537:candidate
6367:Mea culpa
5935:WP:FAC/ar
5931:candidate
5885:Recording
5802:include?—
5596:WP:FAC/ar
5592:candidate
4937:WP:FAC/ar
4933:candidate
4565:WP:FAC/ar
4561:candidate
4194:Time Inc.
3921:GermanJoe
1901:WP:FAC/ar
1897:candidate
1862:GermanJoe
1724:Mattximus
1695:Mattximus
1362:paragraph
1314:Removed.
1104:Removed.
211:added one
147:added one
19531:Ian Rose
19507:: This
19347:Ian Rose
19323:: This
19291:Fixed.--
19143:Fixed.--
19078:Fixed.--
19046:Fixed.--
19014:Fixed.--
18982:Fixed.--
18812:reliable
18541:Fixed.--
18428:Fixed.--
18398:Fixed.--
18364:Fixed.--
18163:Fixed.--
17915:Ian Rose
17891:: This
17093:removed.
17070:WP:UNDUE
16984:Changed.
16825:Ian Rose
16801:: This
16757:reverted
16680:3 tags.
16584:Calculus
16532:Ian Rose
16508:: This
16411:those of
16395:Poehler.
16237:contribs
15941:Ian Rose
15917:: This
15817:Ian Rose
15793:: This
15516:Ian Rose
15492:: This
15471:MOS:LEAD
15388:Ian Rose
15364:: This
14656:|series=
14606:|author=
14602:|agency=
14457:Ian Rose
14433:: This
14278:Ian Rose
14254:: This
14137:Ian Rose
14113:: This
13981:Ian Rose
13957:: This
13894:, added
13681:favored"
13679:publicly
13323:to make"
13321:in order
13173:Not yet.
12921:: This
12263:Comment.
12190:contribs
11688:Comment.
11631:Comment.
11370:Comment.
10869:Comment.
10236:Ho-Chunk
10234:and the
10228:Comment.
10122:Better.
10091:Comment.
10032:Comment.
9981:Better.
9892:Cahuilla
9887:Comment.
9206:Ian Rose
8793:MOS:DASH
8519:: This
6535:: This
6275:as well.
5929:: This
5590:: This
5569:Spinning
5515:Spinning
5474:Spinning
5431:Spinning
5402:Spinning
5373:Spinning
5344:Spinning
5315:Spinning
5283:Spinning
5254:Spinning
5224:Spinning
5195:Spinning
5163:Spinning
5133:Spinning
5100:Spinning
5019:Spinning
4931:: This
4711:contribs
4697:contribs
4559:: This
3712:account
1895:: This
1854:Guernsey
432:section.
349:Chris857
187:contribs
123:contribs
67:Wikitext
20: |
19449:Comment
19175:Done.--
19111:Done.--
18885:Done.--
18810:from a
18783:issue.
18487:Done.--
18459:Done.--
18330:Done.--
18295:Done.--
18253:Done.--
18202:Done.--
18049:Done.--
18011:Done.--
17812:Sorted.
17784:Sorted.
17666:Sorted.
17638:Sorted.
17582:Sorted.
17537:Sorted.
17509:sorted.
17400:Sorted.
17291:Sorted.
17241:Sorted.
17188:Sorted.
17163:Sorted.
17138:Sorted.
17046:Sorted.
16761:indopug
16728:WP:LEAD
16597:Benison
16328:WP:LEAD
16317:WP:IN-U
16040:indopug
15900:512bits
15768:further
15731:PENGUIN
15341:WWB Too
15337:support
15154:Should
14727:Removed
12986:HTC One
12858:Comment
12835:Pumpkin
11672:ritish
11455:African
10952:Agreed.
9820:wealthy
8795:, etc.
8476:claimed
7739:WP:LEAD
7522:I feel
7356:Spiegal
7254:author.
6799:Comment
6416:Sowlos
6157:Pumpkin
6145:Sowlos
6099:Pumpkin
6036:Pumpkin
5849:indopug
5804:indopug
5742:indopug
5279:Fixed.
4666:yet? —
4543:Penguin
4523:Decodet
4503:Decodet
4467:Decodet
4439:Decodet
4411:Decodet
4383:Decodet
4352:Decodet
4324:Decodet
4296:Decodet
4268:Decodet
4240:Decodet
4212:Decodet
4172:Decodet
4147:Penguin
4126:Decodet
4098:Decodet
4070:Decodet
4045:Penguin
4017:Decodet
3984:Decodet
3951:Decodet
3905:Decodet
3868:Decodet
3843:Decodet
3815:Decodet
3795:Decodet
3767:Decodet
3735:Decodet
3710:Twitter
3688:Decodet
3660:Decodet
3628:Decodet
3600:Decodet
3572:Decodet
3547:Decodet
3522:Decodet
3497:Decodet
3469:Decodet
3441:Decodet
3414:Decodet
3393:Decodet
3349:Decodet
3318:Decodet
3282:Decodet
3251:Decodet
3209:Decodet
3174:Decodet
3143:Decodet
3112:Decodet
3081:Decodet
3050:Decodet
3014:Decodet
2983:Decodet
2952:Decodet
2921:Decodet
2890:Decodet
2859:Decodet
2828:Decodet
2800:Decodet
2769:Decodet
2738:Decodet
2707:Decodet
2684:2007–09
2668:Decodet
2637:Decodet
2606:Decodet
2575:Decodet
2542:Decodet
2522:Decodet
2491:Decodet
2460:Decodet
2429:Decodet
2398:Decodet
2370:Decodet
2337:Decodet
2306:Decodet
2275:Decodet
2244:Decodet
2196:Decodet
2139:Decodet
2110:Decodet
2080:Decodet
2056:Decodet
2032:Decodet
2003:Decodet
1989:General
1970:Decodet
221:Line 1:
218:Line 1:
19426:Oppose
19296:Astros
19245:Astros
19213:Astros
19180:Astros
19148:Astros
19116:Astros
19083:Astros
19051:Astros
19019:Astros
18987:Astros
18924:Astros
18890:Astros
18848:Astros
18823:Astros
18808:coming
18758:Astros
18709:Astros
18671:Astros
18634:Astros
18586:Astros
18546:Astros
18492:Astros
18464:Astros
18433:Astros
18403:Astros
18369:Astros
18335:Astros
18300:Astros
18258:Astros
18207:Astros
18168:Astros
18109:Astros
18054:Astros
18016:Astros
17980:Astros
17870:Farrtj
17842:Farrtj
17814:Farrtj
17786:Farrtj
17752:Farrtj
17724:Farrtj
17696:Farrtj
17668:Farrtj
17640:Farrtj
17612:Farrtj
17584:Farrtj
17539:Farrtj
17511:Farrtj
17479:Farrtj
17446:Farrtj
17402:Farrtj
17374:Farrtj
17346:Farrtj
17318:Farrtj
17293:Farrtj
17268:Farrtj
17243:Farrtj
17215:Farrtj
17190:Farrtj
17165:Farrtj
17140:Farrtj
17095:Farrtj
17048:Farrtj
17017:Farrtj
16986:Farrtj
16955:Farrtj
16924:Farrtj
16887:Farrtj
16701:WP:MOS
16437:tears.
16324:WP:MOS
16297:, and
16227:Bellum
16107:, and
16020:one.--
15869:Botany
15765:d more
15616:(talk)
15603:Oppose
15586:11JORN
15584:) and
15467:Oppose
15450:Kurzon
14995:Fixed.
14808:Fixed.
14585:Well,
14060:Oppose
13908:words.
12862:WP:RED
12763:(talk)
12710:(talk)
12658:(talk)
12527:coming
12202:(talk)
12146:(talk)
12101:(talk)
11523:(talk)
9896:Apache
9603:(talk)
9441:way.)
9438:Lakota
9080:WP:W2W
9056:, and
8728:WP:MOS
8447:whom?)
7746:Zayeem
6756:Jmabel
6733:Jmabel
6520:Online
6476:Online
6186:Online
6074:Online
5708:re-do.
5692:Oppose
5509:Hunter
5369:Done.
5362:'kown'
5311:Done.
4894:Oppose
4699:) and
3162:- Typo
2177:Tweens
1850:Sarnia
315:Sarnia
203:34,922
139:34,922
78:Inline
60:Visual
19486:WP:PR
18629:it.--
17565:their
17561:their
16468:: -->
16448:: -->
15691:Simon
15677:Simon
15630:Simon
14378:Cla68
14340:Cla68
14080:RRD13
14043:RRD13
13943:Talk
13881:fails
13835:Talk
13764:Wired
13586:Link
13156:with
13003:Talk
12794:other
12683:*Done
12631:*Done
12608:*Done
12585:*Done
12558:*Done
12535:*Done
12508:*Done
12485:*Done
12462:*Done
12439:*Done
12416:*Done
12386:*Done
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