490:, I was going to ping Jakob to take a look at ALT2, but instead I think there needs to be work done on the Kythira Strait article; in the Earthquakes and tsunami section, the final sentence is problematic, and "upto" is not a word. I will say that contrary to Jakob's statement, DYK rules do not mandate that each hook fact is mentioned in all of the articles of a multi-article hook, so I don't think that particular earthquake needs to be included in the Kythira article, where it would probably be considered "undue".
554:, the new edits help a great deal. I've made a couple of very minor additional changes and added a "citation needed" template for the list of ships in the intro, which will need to be resolved. (Any chance of there being more ancient ships known to have been wrecked there?) For that second intro paragraph, "several" is far too weak for a strait that has been the location of shipwrecks since Classical Antiquity; I'd say "many" at a minimum, and your sourcing will likely allow for an even stronger word or phrase.
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